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Posted: 17 years ago
Nice parts Bhoomi..i really feel bad to replying so late but u know naa how time is playing with me..nway, no explanations now.. sidha chalte hai story pe ... yup u r rite ...jo log Ashu jaise hote hai..unki love story bohot hi zyaada serious hote hai ...I enjoyed a loooooooooooooooooooooooot when Jeet was pulling ashu's leg with all Shart...that Rithika ne yeh kaha ..wo kaha .... awwwwwww that was too cute ....yeh Mazak karte waqt Jeet ko akhon mein ek ajeeb si masti ayi hogi na??

U know, when first time they cudnt confess ..i thought ...abhi yaha kuch gadbad hoga ..Sachi ghar jayegi aur usko yeh pata chalega ke iski shadi tey hogayi hai..n situation kuch aisa hogi ke yeh na nahi karpayegi ... my brain..lol.. it's just an affect of Balaji's serials u c....n u proved me wrong..Thank God ....

Loved Jeet's lines in english to both Sacchi n Ashu... aur 26 epi mein kya khas hai bhai? hope any shock is not waiting for us ....

Lovely Pics as usual ... have seen them bfor but anyone can still get a new feeling...fab choice dear ...
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Posted: 17 years ago
but aisa kya hua ki rishta tut gaya 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
Just when i thought jeet would propose...saachi takes off to canada..these two surely need a romantic evening sans any hiccups...hehe...nice part bhoomi...
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey bhoomi awesome is not enough to describe this part i just loved evry bit of it they found love even in that dist. the poems were just perfect to the t. it was fabulous like every time. gr8 part cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: seasplash

hey
itsssss an awesome story i simply love this one 😛
continue soon 😊

hi thanks so much for appreciatign.and am glad u r enjoying readign it😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: nisisanjh

Nice parts Bhoomi..i really feel bad to replying so late but u know naa how time is playing with me..nway, no explanations now.. sidha chalte hai story pe ... yup u r rite ...jo log Ashu jaise hote hai..unki love story bohot hi zyaada serious hote hai ...I enjoyed a loooooooooooooooooooooooot when Jeet was pulling ashu's leg with all Shart...that Rithika ne yeh kaha ..wo kaha .... awwwwwww that was too cute ....yeh Mazak karte waqt Jeet ko akhon mein ek ajeeb si masti ayi hogi na??

U know, when first time they cudnt confess ..i thought ...abhi yaha kuch gadbad hoga ..Sachi ghar jayegi aur usko yeh pata chalega ke iski shadi tey hogayi hai..n situation kuch aisa hogi ke yeh na nahi karpayegi ... my brain..lol.. it's just an affect of Balaji's serials u c....n u proved me wrong..Thank God ....

Loved Jeet's lines in english to both Sacchi n Ashu... aur 26 epi mein kya khas hai bhai? hope any shock is not waiting for us ....

Lovely Pics as usual ... have seen them bfor but anyone can still get a new feeling...fab choice dear ...

Hi Sara dear, am so happy that u r enjoyign reading this story, and its no problem if u reply after a time..atleast i kow that u r reading in one go and waitign for the next..thats enough to make me glad that the story isnt that bad...lol..

Oh haan K serials ka asar mujhpe bhi hai..but shayad thoda dominatign nahi...hahahah am glad u liked those pics..really that take s eom tiem as well..its like story poems n pics..hahahah hope all r fittign in.... but usually i have the pic of kth in mind when i write later search for it and than post the part...

Hey 26 ep am postin git today tab dekhlo kya hai....kya hota hai...

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

but aisa kya hua ki rishta tut gaya 😭

dekhona...its goging to be soon...kyun ..kya hia..baat bhai...jyada episode nahi lungi..😉

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Just when i thought jeet would propose...saachi takes off to canada..these two surely need a romantic evening sans any hiccups...hehe...nice part bhoomi...

Bini..ahahha maine bahot satayaa i feel yaar...sab ko..but story ke hisaab se jaana hai..or else u know me ek dam start to finish post karneko achaa lagta hai...lekin here its difficult and episode wise it takes a bit time..so many thign coem in mind..ehhe....

romantic evening..haiii haiiii main writer hun na rang mey bhang daalne ke liye..lol😆but lets see u like the 26th yanahi...luv u dear..tc...

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

hey bhoomi awesome is not enough to describe this part i just loved evry bit of it they found love even in that dist. the poems were just perfect to the t. it was fabulous like every time. gr8 part cont soon

hi jyothi..awww it feels wonderful to know that u liked my style of story telling and felt it as well... hope u like the next episode which i post..i feel this is a crucial one...thanks dear for all the encouragment u give me...😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Episode: 26

06-06-07

Jeet called up Saachi and her nephews were troubling her a lot. They were not letting her talk on the mobile snaching it form her everytime..So Saachi gave them to talk..tellign not his name..but JK…she kept on speaker..

Ayush: JK uncle..helooo helloo…hai ..

Jeet: Heloo heloo Ayush..

Ayush: Aap kyun phone kartey ho…(Saachi toldhim aisey nahi puchtey)

Jeet: Aapki Saachi bua se baatein karna pasand hai

(Saachi smiled with that answer)

Ayush: Saachi bua ki baatein chocolate thodi nahai..jo pasand ho..

Jeet thinking this kids r too smart: Jaise Saachi bua aapko achii lagti hai na jab kahani sunati hai..waise mujhe bhi baatein batati hai phone pe to sunana achaa lagta hai…

Ayaan: Hamaey kahani sunati hai tab achii lagti hai..lekin duuud peeneko kehti hai tab burrri lagti hai..aapko buri kab lagti hai uncle…

Jeet: Mujhe sirf achii lagti hai….buri kabhi bhi nahi…

Ayaan: Jk uncle Jk uncle…el baat to bataoo..kya aap bata sakte ho…Yeh Saachi buaa aapse baat karne ke baad mobile ko Chumti kyun hai?? Germs muh mey chalejayengey na..

Saachi was absolutely embarrsed and she cut the phone..Jeet smiled thinking Saachi gets the same feeling what he gets after talking with him…

Jeet: Meri awaaz sunn ke hi mobile chuum leti ho, Haii Kaash hum khud wahan pe hotey…

Kabhi kabhi bacchey

aisa kuch bayaan kkarte hain,

Masumiyat se

kitna kuch keh jatey hain,

Saachi ki yeh dil ki baat

warna Jeet tak pahunchti kaise,

Jeet ko Saachi ka woh sparsh

manoo ab chuaa phirsey…

12-06-07

Saachi and Jeet were getting close enough and sharing there little fantasy secrets and their thoughts about future. Saachi's mother had informed her father that Saachi has someone special in her life and as they go back to India they should meet his parents, the boy is realy nice. Saachi did tell Jeet that her mom had told about him to her dad and that even Dad was eager to meet him. Jeet felt as if as Saachi will come back may be there will be parents discussing their wedding plans even before they tell each other and propose..

24-06-07

Jeet was worried as Saachi from past few days had stopped taking his call. Even Masumi didn't knew what happened. Jeet was wondering what has happened. Nobody was picking up the phone and that made Jeet very uneasy. Jeet was gogin crazy and had started to even think he will go to Canada and find it out.

Kidhar ho tum main sochta hun,

Tumhare bigair manoo tadap raha hun,

Kya hua tumhari chinta ho rahi hai,

Meri Jaan ho tum ab dhadkane badd rahi hai…

7-07-07

As he was driving his car to the Visa office he saw Saachi coming out of her office, Jeet was so happy that he stopped his car, went running towards her though it was raining heavily and went in front smiling…

Jeet: Oh Saachi , to tum India wapas agayi..I am so happy …. Oh God…surprise dena chahti thi na…he smiled understanding why she was not taking his calls…..

Saachi looked at him and his smile and smiled back and as they walked and it was raining romance was in the air.

Saachi was looking at him, the happiness the love for her… Jeet went in front of her and sang few line…

Mere Sanam,Teri kasam,

Milke rahengey sadaaaa,

Tumse na hongey judaaa…Tumsey milkey aisaa lagaa…

And he turned Jeet immediately took her close held her waist and brought her too close and Saachi could feel his breathe… Jeet looked into her eyes , his eyes made Saachi forget where what she was …

Jeet:

Tumse Milkey pyaar hogaya…

Yeh Jeet tumhara hogaya,

Deewangi itni ki tumbin na rehsaka,

Kabse bechain tha jo yeh baat na kehsaka...

Saachi realized where she is and what she had in her mind.she tried to say something and Jeet kept his hands on her lips and with a smile touched those lips Saachi was flowing in his love and softly he said,

Jeet: Aaj kehne dooo,

Pyaar mey behnedo…

Jeet held her hand kissed her hand and Saachi just closed her eyes…

Jeet:

Tumse kitna pyaar mujhko,

Mere humdum yeh jaanlo,

Main tumhara ban gaya hun,

Bankey meri tum raho…

Meri har saanns kehti…oooooo ooo..

Meri har sans kehti ....tum sang jeena Saaki

Thoda sa pyaar hua hai…Thoda hai baaki…

Saachi went ahead and as Jeet felt she is shy and Jeet collected the rain water in his hand and threw on her, she looked more beautiful with water drops on her…he took out the ring which he always treasured and dig it in his pocket, he took it and saw at it thinking about the promises he wants to make to her giving this…Saachi looked back and said,

Saachi:

Tumsey sirf dosti hai,

Kuch aur na tum samjho,

Apne ek tarfe pyaar ko,

Ab musibat naa banalo..

Hamarey rastey alag hai..ooooo

Hamarey rastey alag hai…tum nahi mere Saaki

Thoda sa pyaar tumhe huaa tha…. Ab kuch na rakho baaki…

Ab kuch nahi baaki……

She went away walking in the rain and took a cab. Jeet was stunned, he couldn't belive his ears….he stood still and heavy rains with thunder storm also couldn't move him a bit…he stood there as though he was graved in there….he walked the whole road till his house… it was long distance but so many memories with her, so many thoughts shared, so many times he had felt the love for him, her words this time had killed him so many times, he went into his room, closed the door and screamed and just kept taking her name…Aisaa nahi kahoo SAACHII….Saachii..Pyaar mujhise karti ho tum SAachii..Saachi… Judaa nahi hum hosaktey Saachiii..Sachii…

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