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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

she said, 'nahi chalti janedo

Aww that bachii is soo sweet !!

Ye jeet bhi na....."My friend for lifelong".....Uff friend?? 😆

yaa yaa...friend for life...😆 i like men who r a bit shy...😉 apna RK to fans ko bhi sweetheart bolta hai..yeh Jeet to Sujal ki tarah hai... ek baar kaha to manoo kehtey hi jaye..shayad..😉 i want to post next part soon so that the contiuity isnt broken..so will post it..just pics uploading site thoda problem deraha hai...

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

are yeh jeet bi na srif frnd are yaar yeh toh pura ullo hai ask ashu to give him some training lovey part and i really liked the poems aswell as the part cont soon

Hi Jyothi dear.... ullu ..😆😆😆..Ashu se trainign i kow..hehheeh 😉 am glad u liked the poems...there r too many of rhymign line comign in later episode..next part willl post soon so that the contiuity stays on...just pics upload karna hai...waise ...dotn worry apna Jeet confess to karega..kab kahan ..woh main nahi bolungi..😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

Hi Jyothi dear.... ullu ..😆😆😆..Ashu se trainign i kow..hehheeh 😉 am glad u liked the poems...there r too many of rhymign line comign in later episode..next part willl post soon so that the contiuity stays on...just pics upload karna hai...waise ...dotn worry apna Jeet confess to karega..kab kahan ..woh main nahi bolungi..😊



are itni suspense achi baat nahi hai
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

haaahahaha i wish i could post at one go..tab theek hota na..😆serial ke bajaye film...short film ...heheh..waise hope jyothi tumhare sabarr ka phal meetha ho...warna main to gayii😉

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Posted: 17 years ago

Episode: 24

05-04-07

As they were cosily in each others arms, Jeet now loosen his grip around her but having the smile intact looking into her eyes and stood in front. Saachi too was smiling ..he bent on his knees, while Saachi just felt sh, she closed her lips inside feling too shy and smiled again and looked around it was indeed roadside and felt people may stare at them..Jeet didn't mind where he was standing he was just wanting to tell I LOVE U….As he was about to take her hand ..

There was a loud break sound of a car and all saw at the road.. Saachi looked there… Jeets hand was held ahead to have her hand..but Saachi was looking at the road, an accident had taken place..where a Jeep rushingly went . Jeet too looked now what had happened thinking why GOD cant let his heart to be happy and say it out… There was a accident where as the car came a small little cute puppy was roaming and the car hit it..the puppy feel on the ground bleeding and Jeep went away… the puppy was beelign and the its mother was around looking and smelling something close to the bleeding mouth..and looking around, eyes were having tears and other puppies made some sad sound, the pople were surrounding..Saachi saw and held her hand on her mouth, she herself loved dogs and was very very sad to see this… she thought in her mind here where so many hit and run cases happen , where humans lying on the road no one doesn anything who will wait for these animals who cant never tell their pain…

Bahot hi sharm Insaniyat ko, iss Yug par ati hai,

Zindagi tez raftar ki bali par, jab roz jad jati hai,

Ek baar bhi peeche nahi mudkey dekh afsokarta,

Kya rastey par chaltey, aabadi ka dosh keh chalajata,

Jahan insaan ki zindagi ka koi mol nahi rah gaya,

Wahan jaanwaro ke marne ka afsos kaun kar paya…

Saachi's heart was very heavy and her eyes had tears flowing…she wanted again to have Jeet's hands around her to take her close and tell her she has him her strength…but as she saw around.. Jeet had left..Saachi was shocked, with chokked emotions she went home where there was her stress level to double up…

After some while she called up Jeet but Jeet was not taking her call…she was worried as well as confused.. she called up Ashu, told him all that happened,

06-04-07

Ashu: Saachi he must have got very emotional may be his past memories must have come up again and hurt him…. His father died in an accident and the lane where u r talking this happened, it was indeed the same place… he gets into closure from outside world when those memories hit him hard..

Saachi: Oh, Now I can understand..just take care of him… I am tied up with more things or else I would have surely gone to his place..my mama is having high BP so I have to bewith her..

As Ashu went to meet Jeet and told him,

Ashu: Jeet yeh sab kya hai…kyun sabse durrri banata hai..

Jeet: Pata nahi Ashu, Papa…… Mujhe who din yaad ayaa.woh waqt jab mere ankhon key samne maine unhey gaddi ke niche kuchley dekha.. wahi yaadein chubbhi itni…kya kehta…main ek aur pal udhar rukk nahi payaa..

Ashu: Saachi ka phone kyun nahi liya…

Jeet: thoda sa sambhal jaun phir baat karun socha..

Ashu: Tu …bhi..Saachi ki awaaz mey kitna dard tha…teri chinta khaye jaa rahi thi..Uskee mama ko high BP hai isliye who tere pass yehan nahi chali ayii warna…

Jeet now felt really bad… he hit his hand on the wall…

Ashu was taken by surprised…

Ashu: Kya pagalpan hai..Jeet..

Jeet: Nahi Ashu..main bhi kaisa hun..kya koi bhi pyaar karne wala mere jaisa hoga…U know she has so many problems in her family, her bhabhi is seriously ill, father with her brother in Canada taking careof the kids, her mom not well, work pressure and in that I was her only support to make her relax and what I did made her have more dose of stress and pain… how selfish I became…

Tumsey pyaar karta hun bahot harpal,

Tumsey dard batun kaisey socha kal,

Bhul gaya jab tumhara dard mera hai

Mera har dard bhi to tab tumhara hai,

Dard baatey humsang yeh pyaar hai,

hamarey jeeney ka yehi ek sahara hai…

He called up Saachi immediately…

Jeet: Saachi sorry…I just have no words to say how selfish of me to think let me bear my pain and not realizing how much more pain I put upon u… I am sorry Saachi..

Saachi: Jeet… don't say sorry..u called up , u felt my pain..what more I want..i just want u to share ur pain if it makes u feel little better ..

Jeet: I am fine now…it was just momentary…

Saachi: Jeet… I can feel what u r gogin through..we r not two…but one in each others pain..

Jeet was just silent…Feeling those words had healed everything. Saachi knew those words said something which for a lifetime she wants to keep saying to him… Both felt the love and the intensity, depth their love had, feeling has their love had certainly grown with these incidents…

Jeet:

We remain true friends its known,

Our friendship has certainly grown,

It takes a lifetime to find the dearest one,

With u in life I feel the happiest one…

Saachi smiled with his lines.. and it surely made her day a bit more comfortable and she knew in all her pains she had the shoulders of Jeet to hold her whenevr she needs him.

After Jeet kept the phone down, Ashu hit him hard on his back saying,

Ashu: Oyeee uski dsoti pe poem likhta hai…aur meri dosti ka badla Rithika kii jhuti sharte bata kar kart hai….

Jeet: Achaa ..le teri ichaa puri karta hun…

We are best friends from childhood,

Against life's all odds united we Stood,

But when u start ur pranks on me,

To face my reply, ready u better be…

Ashu laughed and said, 'Mere Jeetey…teri to…' and both were running after each other to hit…

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Posted: 17 years ago
Just read all the parts that i missed out..n enjoyed reading each one of them...all those lines are awsum..n have to hand it to u..the pics that u've posted are too gud...luk prefect as per the parts...

hope our hero finally says those 3 words to the lady asap... 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

hey lovely part cont soon

thanks jyothi ..ya will post next episode soon..😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: binidoshi

Just read all the parts that i missed out..n enjoyed reading each one of them...all those lines are awsum..n have to hand it to u..the pics that u've posted are too gud...luk prefect as per the parts...

hope our hero finally says those 3 words to the lady asap... 😆

Hi Bini,

So read alll the episode in one go whcih u had missed hope u didnt fell asleep..😆..glad that u liked the lines.😊..hey thanks for appreciating the pics..ya i have very few but tryign harsd that they fit am changign little bit edittin ght epic as well....jaanu..keep smilign..hope u enjoy the rest..and ya 26th episode ka intezaar karna..😉

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Posted: 17 years ago

Episode: 25

16-04-07

Jeet thought that this time he will be prepared before proposing this time. So he went to a shop bought a beautiful ring for Saachi…

Jeet decided to meet her soon and propose with all his love and give this ring as his tocken of love for her. He knew confidently that she will not say No…it was not the fear of No but the excitement of making this special and most beautiful which made him very excited and also nervous that he will get any words to say or just keep looking at her as she looks with love and as she blushes he almost looses his balance and just want to keep looking at her.

Darr isbatka nahi ki tum Naa kardogi,

Lavz na miley itni chahat bhardogi,

Haan kaha to khushi ko kaisa sambhalunga,

Dil to ujhlega tumhe bahon mey uthalunga…

Jeet called up and they had fixed to meet at a restaurant and Jeet made all preparations for a grand special dinner with floating candles around, lily rose flowers in decoration and bouquets of Orchid flowers. His excitmetn knew no bond…

Aa ishq kaisa bawaraa deewana kardiya,

Aisa dilbar milaa dil mohobaat se bhardiya,

Aaj to samaa kitna bhi khusbsurat banu,

Lagey tumhare agey sitaro kobhi le aun…

17-04-07

Jeet went to the restaurant and was waiting for Saachi to come, Saachi called him up that she will reach there in 10 minutes. She too was very excited and felt now everything will be fine, her bhabhi was discharged from the hospital and she wanted to meet Jeet and this time if not Jeet She was gogin to tell him she wants to live with him for the rest of her life. She dressed up taking hours as she wanted to see herself from Jeet's eyes and felt everytime may be this will not look good or that..and that made her reach late for the dinner date. As Saachi reached the restaurant ,the fragrance of her fav perfume was all over and she felt Jeet had thought over something and she smiled touching the flowers at the entracne and felt this will be a special day for her…

Aaj to sare dil ke meethe sapne pure hongey,

Aaj to humbhi jhijhak jhod sabkuch kehdengey,

Tumhari baho mey sari umra bitadun main,

Pyar ke rang ko sochu kab mang mey sajalun main…

She was about to go inside that she got a call from her mom…Which made her rush back….She had tears and the guard at the restaurant also saw this..Jeet came at the entrance and waas shocked to see Saachi gogin back with tears in her eyes.. Jeet ran after her and asked,

Jeet: what happen, why r u crying…

Saachi: Mom informed just now… Bhabhi expired…Jeet…she cried and Jeet consoled her..

Saachi: I don't know why God can't see little bit of our happiness ever, My nephew loosing their mother at this tender age, they r just 5year old.. She was fine and when we thought everything was getting back to normal this had to happen… Jeet took her to her home, her mom was also crying and both were out of control, when relatives came in Jeet helped Saachi to look after everyone and gave her immense support. Saachi cried in front of Jeet but controlled her emotions when mama or any relatives arrived.

Ek pal mey jeevan ka rukh hi badal gaya,

Sapney sach hote dikhey the aj khalipan reh gaya,

Kyun kismet aisey hamey nachaa rahi hai,

Ashaa Nirashaa ki talwar se channi kar rahi hai…

After a while Atish and Masumi came. Saachi had composed herself though she was very worried for her bhaiya and nephews. The day passed by and later at midnight Saachi's dad told her to take flight to Canada and reach soon. Saachi and her mother booked the tickets. Saachi called up Jeet and informed, Jeet was feeling very sad she will go so far but he knew it's her duty to be there. Jeet was also not in a position to come with her to Canada. At the departure Saachi had her grief but the feelgin of gogin so far away from Jeet also made her weak..she went inside but came back and said,'I will miss u a lot Jeet, tumse milkey …ab..duuuurrr (she cried)' She hugged Jeet and Jeet with love kissed her on her forhead and told her to be strong, he too will miss her lot he said, 'Saachi hum miley ,hum miltey rahengey …aaj waqt kuch dino hamey ek dusre ko dekhne ka mauka nahi dega..lekin dil mey chehra iss kader hai ki ehsaas iss waqt ko jald baha lega…hum miley jaldii.." he again kissed her and smiled , in his heart he had pain but he wanted her to be strong at this point of time.… As Saachi went , Jeet stood outside looking at what destiny has stored for them…

Tum wahan ho main yehan hun,

Sab kuch wahan jahan ho tum,

Dil dimaag sab yehi sochtey hain,

Tumbin hum yehan kaise jitney hain…

20-05-07

For about a month Jeet and Saachi spoke on phone and chatted for long hours. Saachi would take care of her nephews Ayush and Ayaan. They r twins. Saachi told him that at her office her boss has got a replacement in palce of her and she may join it again when she is back. Jeet told her it would be better that she joins his company, that wil be the compensation for this distance between them, Saachi would smile and say I will think when I back about it. Saachi and Jeet their distance had made love to feel more, to miss each other more, and anxiety to get back to talking soon, get back her in India soon. Jeet would sing songs for her whenever she took his call. Startignwith two lines.. 'Tumse Milkey..' and Saachi would smile hearing it and the conversation would start.

Tumse doori meri jaan hi lejati hai,

Tumse baatein hoti to jaan mey jaan ati hai,

Mobile ko tham tumhe choo leta hun,

Awaaz ko sunn Dil mey tasvir bana leta hun…

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey
itsssss an awesome story i simply love this one 😛
continue soon 😊

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