'Socha na tha' Updated: Chapter 23: Pg.78 - Page 25

Originally posted by: nureat01

CHAPTER 9: Camptime
*****Puts 2 fingers in mouth and whistles shrilly ***Zabardast Update......chhori😉👏👏

Anu I am just going to highlight my most most fav parts....because if I start commenting on each line then the post would be toooooooooo long and you would doze 😆😆

Ok loved the Atul Sapna beginning....God man you make me feel.....if only all this was translated on screen......***heavy Sigh****
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Loved the way Atul started making small talk....that would so be the way his character would have started...😆😆

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Please, Anjali he pleaded in his mind, Please don't close yourself off like this.
She suddenly turned her head and looked at him in surprise, "Did you just say something?"
He covered his own surprise smoothly, and said, "Why? Did you hear something?"
"I…Never mind, I was probably just hearing things." She said, and turned towards the window again.
No you weren't, Anjali, he said his mind again.
She heard him, she heard him ***jumps with joy***.....tho dil se dil se connection shuru ho gaya.....Yipeeee!!!😆😆
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Medical Camp near the outskirts of the village:


"Don't worry," he said reassuringly. "I'll explain it to them." He then turned to address the crowd in front of them. "Dekhiye…" You had me at Dekhiye Atul ***Rolls up sleeve, looks all dreamy eyed at Atul and says.......Ghused lo Suyiii😍😍"

Anjali watched him as he talked to the villagers, she thought to herself. It definitely didn't look like a sugar-coated act right now. Had she maybe misjudged him? Yes Anjali....that is our Atul....direct dil se....no put on....na uh....😳😳😳

"Anjali"


She smiled at that Oye Hoye!Ladki hassi tho Phassi😉😆😆, and turning back to him, said, "Thank you so much, Atul!"

Atul walked back to his table, marveling at how much that one smile from her created such a huge glow inside his heart. He hummed to himself, "Kitni narmi se, kitne dheere se, dil mein aati hai dabe paaon mohabbat aur phir, dhadkano mein yeh chhup ke dolti hai, rang sa zindagi mein gholti hai." He paused and looked back at her. "Aankhon aankhon mein jaise bolti hai, haule se…dheere se." He smiled once again, and continued back to his table. Anu small request, can you please put Anjie's pet name as Shal....please please pretty please...I 😍😍😍

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Later in the evening:

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"Di!!" imitated Armaan in just as high pitched of a tone. "Oh please, Basket! Spare a thought for the wildlife, if not for us! God knows how many of them you've already killed with your shrieking right now." Muahahahahah!!!😈😈😈Mogambi Khush Hui...🤣🤣🤣Loved this Anu..
Anu I henceforth pronounce you the official dialogue writer for Armaan **Bangs Hammer on YKW's head while announcing**😆😆

Angie laughed at that, and he winked at her in response.

Atul and Sapna tried to play peacemakers. "Ok, you guys…let's all calm down," said Atul. "Dr. Keerti…" Ok Atul if you say so, me won't tease😳...tumhara wish sar aankhon par😳


"Nahin Raghu," said Anjali. "Is waqt Shanti ko tumhari bahut zaroorat hai. Uska theek se khayal rakhna, ok? Hum dono ko ab raasta pata hi hai, hum pahunch jaayenge." She said, smiling at him reassuringly😍Anjie I see that smile...and I love that smile.😳. Atul looked at her in total surprise, watching her talk this nicely to a person other than her father for maybe the first time. But he chose to keep quiet about it.


"Don't say it! Oh god! Please say it's not true!" she interrupted.

"…we're lost" he finished on a sigh.

They both glanced at each other simultaneously, "Now what do we do??" Oops...**innocently**yeh kya ho gaya ? ***hehehe, mujhe sab pata hain Anu....do dil mil rahe hain, magar chupke chupke, teehee....OK I will leave these 2 lovebirds alone now😉

Originally posted by: hdalal

@Anu...once again 👏. Thank you so much, Hemangi😳

First thing...i love the way you are making Atul reach out to her, and break the walls she has built around herself. Atul is subtly, but surely finding a way into her heart 😊 He sure is! But sometimes I wonder if it is going so slowly that I'm putting everyone else reading it to sleep😕😆. I loved the bus scene so much, Atul's attempts to strike a convo with her, and she almost reading his thoughts. Thank you so much for liking that, yaar😳Anjali realizing the effect he is beginning to have on her, and withdrawing further into her shell, still trying to focus on her goal. Such a strong instinctual reaction to prevent herself from getting close to someone for the fear of getting hurt. Thank you for understanding that so astutely, yaar...yes, that is pretty much what she's doing exactly.

Btw...also liked Armaan and Anjie poking fun at R. As I knew you would😉😆😆 Loved the deliberate use of "shrieking" here and 😆 😆 at "a few decibels lower would really be easier on our eardrums." and "Spare a thought for the wildlife, if not for us" 👏 👏 LOL, Thanks yaar...this is my "subtle" way of taking "revenge"😉😆...but yeah, did emphasize more on the shrieking this time😆😆...couldn't help it really after the "junglee" comment😆😆

Brilliant 😊 Thanks, yaar😳

Originally posted by: Leenasmg

Atl and Angie are lost..Yayyyy!! 😆 😆
Another awesome update Anu!! 😃 ..I love reading ur FF and never miss a single update!! 😉
Will wait for the next update eagerly!! 😛

Originally posted by: DivineSelf

OK Anu.....my apologies if I sounded dumb in the above comments.Oh come on yaar, Shal! You didn't sound dumb at all! I LOVED your comments! They were so hilarious!😆😆...but I will be honest I was just enjoying myself reading your FF and just wanted to be really playful and be part of it and have fun with my Atul and your beautiful Anjie😉..As you did! and I totally enjoyed it!!😃😃.......Loved it Anu meri jaan Awww, so glad you did, Shal!😳😳 **Sigh....me in AA land now**....waiting with bated breath for the journey AA are going to have to find their way to the camp (or to find their way into each other's hearts😉)....Me is always in AA land myself these days, yaar!😍😍😍

Originally posted by: nureat01

Anuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu🤗

Dhanyawaad update karne ke liye MAHOTARMA😆😆

Yaar wat a update *Jhoot nahi bola maine, as jhooth bolega toh crow bitega*😆

Yaar ur FF always make me miss sapna and her childish acts........😭......Oh SAPNA ben tere bina bhi kya jeena😆, tere bina bhi kya jeena😭

Oye angi thinks that atul cud see her through completely!!!!!!! Balle oh Balle........ kudi ne kuch taan socheya😆

Angi ko ehsaas hai hoooooooo

Atul uske paas hai😳

Karan n naina..........Hmmmmmmmmmm......... new entry 😆😆 das taan de kaun play kar reha hai karan n naina da role??? 😆

I can imagine atul explaining to villagers abt vaccine.......doing actions with his hands n laughing in between.......... hai yaar anu hun mainu DMG de purane din yaad aa rahe ne.......... kinne maujaan wale din si😍

Eh wala part padh ke taan mainu oh scene yaad aa reha hai, jado angi te armaan apna alag khana bana rahe hunde ne n baaki saare alag........ and wen angi was frustrated with ridhima coming forward to help her with stubborn villagers n tried to explain them the importance of vaccine n then ridhima ne angi ton tagadi besati karvayee si🤣 hai

Koi lauta de vo pyaar pyaare din😳

Anddddddddddddddd finally u made armaan utter those GOLDEN WORDS ''Don't SHRIEK''🤣🤣🤣 Mazaa aaya mazaa aaya mazaa aaya👏👏

I can picture.............her curling lips n armaan's devilish smile😆😆

OOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHH hun hovega Jungle vich MANGAL😆😆 They are lost...........

.Dhumkachika dhumkachika 🥳

Now i m eagerly waiting for the next part......... 😳😳

Okay since they are in jungle now, i m gonna sing this

Luk luk badla ton olle bijle

Choran vaangu mere val jhaake soneya

Thandiyan thandiyan mast hawaawan

Apne gal vich bahaan paavan

Dil da joban kiven lukaavan

Haaniya...................Aaje ve tu maahi dilojaaniya.......

oh aaje ve aaja mahiya😳

Once again thankooooooooooooooo🤗