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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mehak_kapoor

Anuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu🤗Mehakoo, my sweetheart!🤗🤗🤗

Dhanyawaad update karne ke liye MAHOTARMA😆😆 You are most welcome, Mohotarma😉😆😆

Yaar wat a update *Jhoot nahi bola maine, as jhooth bolega toh crow bitega*😆 LOL...Thanks for always liking it, yaar!🤗

Yaar ur FF always make me miss sapna and her childish acts........😭......Oh SAPNA ben tere bina bhi kya jeena😆, tere bina bhi kya jeena😭 Awww...I miss her too, yaar! But this is a good way to keep her memory alive in some way, hana?

Oye angi thinks that atul cud see her through completely!!!!!!! Balle oh Balle........ kudi ne kuch taan socheya😆 LOL...haanji ji, kudi nu kuchh taan ehsaas zaroor hai😉😆😆

Angi ko ehsaas hai hoooooooo

Atul uske paas hai😳

Karan n naina..........Hmmmmmmmmmm......... new entry 😆😆 das taan de kaun play kar reha hai karan n naina da role??? 😆 LOL...I hope ppl aren't expecting something out of Karan and Naina....oh taan main aevein hi time pass layee is chapter vich paa ditte si🤣🤣...tenu ki laggiya?? Ohna di vi koi bahut badi "lowe story" hovegi??😉😆😆...lol, they were just temporary replacements to do A and R's work at the camp...haanji ji, mera dimaag is tarhan hi kam karda hai😆😆

I can imagine atul explaining to villagers abt vaccine.......doing actions with his hands n laughing in between.......... hai yaar anu hun mainu DMG de purane din yaad aa rahe ne.......... kinne maujaan wale din si😍 Sacchin yaar, kamaal di din se oh vi😍

Eh wala part padh ke taan mainu oh scene yaad aa reha hai, jado angi te armaan apna alag khana bana rahe hunde ne n baaki saare alag........ and wen angi was frustrated with ridhima coming forward to help her with stubborn villagers n tried to explain them the importance of vaccine n then ridhima ne angi ton tagadi besati karvayee si🤣 hai LOL, actually that very scene was my inspiration for this😉😆...I just twisted it and replaced R with Atul, and showed a little growth in the understanding b/w them instead😉😆😆

Koi lauta de vo pyaar pyaare din😳 Kaash yaar, kaash😳

Anddddddddddddddd finally u made armaan utter those GOLDEN WORDS ''Don't SHRIEK''🤣🤣🤣 Mazaa aaya mazaa aaya mazaa aaya👏👏 LOL...Mainu pata si ki tenu mazaa aagyega!😆😆...Main socheya vaise tan ohdi besti next week shuru hovegi, I should just get a head start right now, nahin?😉😆😆

I can picture.............her curling lips n armaan's devilish smile😆😆

OOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHH hun hovega Jungle vich MANGAL😆😆 They are lost...........LOL...bhangra paun da time!!😆😆

.Dhumkachika dhumkachika 🥳

Now i m eagerly waiting for the next part......... 😳😳 Awww...will surely try to update very very soon, Mehakoo!😳

Okay since they are in jungle now, i m gonna sing this

Luk luk badla ton olle bijle

Choran vaangu mere val jhaake soneya

Thandiyan thandiyan mast hawaawan

Apne gal vich bahaan paavan

Dil da joban kiven lukaavan

Haaniya...................Aaje ve tu maahi dilojaaniya.......

oh aaje ve aaja mahiya😳 Awwww, really nice song,Mehakoo! I've never heard it before though...

Once again thankooooooooooooooo🤗 Oye, no need to say thank you, yaar! Eh taan meri khud di addiction hai that I need to keep writing about them😆😆😆

🤗🤗🤗🤗



@Tapasya: Thank you so much😳....Will try to update sooooon!😳
Edited by nureat01 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Anu Di you totally know what I'm going to say right? I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HEEEEEEYYYY BHAGGGUUUUUU!!!!!!!!! YES YES YES!!!!!!!! Jo show pe nahi dekh paaye, woh yahaan dekh sakenge!!!!! Anu Di you make me fall deeper in love with A-A1. Woh A-R ka jungle scene aap hi ko likhna chahiye tha with A-A!!!! I'm shaking with excitement!!!! Plz plz plz Di!!! Jaldi continue karna!!!! You cannot right something like this and make me wait for so long!!! No way in hell!!!! I HAVE TO HAVE TO HAVE TO know what's going to happen!!!!! I know I have no patience, lekin I've showed plenty of patience before. This is the limit man!!! Perfect twist and it ended!!! NAHIIIIIIIII!!!! Jaldi continue karna Di!!!!!!! LOVE LOVE LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Komz
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: nureat01

Oh wow😆😆...Come on yaar...me and writing a book? This is just an indulgence of my imagination yaar!😳...I'm definitely not good at the technicalities of writing...agar maine likh bhi di, to kabhi publish nahin hogi😉😆😆...but thank you so much for giving me such a huge compliment yaar!🤗

You're not good at the technicalities of writing?? You must be kidding me, right? anyway, you're most welcome, yaar!🤗mein bas woh keh diya jo mujhe laga..

Now about the new chapter.. pehle lemme give you a BIIG hug 🤗

Super Ssssmmokinnn, it was!!👏 👏 👏 **wonders why she said she doesn't know the technicalities of writing**
really loved the bus scene, especially the part when Anjali reads his thoughts.. and the village scenes, of course, when he helped her, and how both of them handeled that case.

if i had to give an award for the best dialogue, i'd have given it to these two:
"a few decibels lower would really be easier on our eardrums." and "Spare a thought for the wildlife, if not for us"! 😆
Any sarcastic remark on R is music to my ears! 😆 😆 i'm sure you loved writing this part, didn't you?

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Posted: 17 years ago
anu u r great !! 👏 👏 medical camp+lost in jungle ..wow !!im luvin it. 😉 😛 wish i cud send them thr right nw 😍 Angie ,arman makin fun of R's shriekin ws too gud 😆 thnx again..im sure nxt chaptr mein to bahat maja ayega 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

Anu Di you totally know what I'm going to say right? I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HEEEEEEYYYY BHAGGGUUUUUU!!!!!!!!! YES YES YES!!!!!!!! Jo show pe nahi dekh paaye, woh yahaan dekh sakenge!!!!! Anu Di you make me fall deeper in love with A-A1. Woh A-R ka jungle scene aap hi ko likhna chahiye tha with A-A!!!! I'm shaking with excitement!!!! Plz plz plz Di!!! Jaldi continue karna!!!! You cannot right something like this and make me wait for so long!!! No way in hell!!!! I HAVE TO HAVE TO HAVE TO know what's going to happen!!!!! I know I have no patience, lekin I've showed plenty of patience before. This is the limit man!!! Perfect twist and it ended!!! NAHIIIIIIIII!!!! Jaldi continue karna Di!!!!!!! LOVE LOVE LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Komz



Thank you so much, Komal!🤗🤗🤗...Will try to continue as soon as possible😳...

p.s. Patience is a good virtue to develop😈
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ifrahnaqash

Now about the new chapter.. pehle lemme give you a BIIG hug 🤗Awwww....a HUGE hug for you as well!🤗🤗

Super Ssssmmokinnn, it was!!👏 👏 👏 Thank you so much, Iffy yaar😳😳**wonders why she said she doesn't know the technicalities of writing**
really loved the bus scene, especially the part when Anjali reads his thoughts.. and the village scenes, of course, when he helped her, and how both of them handeled that case. So glad you liked all those bits, yaar!

if i had to give an award for the best dialogue, i'd have given it to these two:
"a few decibels lower would really be easier on our eardrums." and "Spare a thought for the wildlife, if not for us"! 😆 LOL....I think the applause is more for the fact ki kisi ne SB ko kucch sunaya😉😆😆.
Any sarcastic remark on R is music to my ears! 😆 😆 i'm sure you loved writing this part, didn't you? Yep, I TOTALLY loved writing it!😈😆😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: marisa

anu u r great !! 👏 👏 medical camp+lost in jungle ..wow !!im luvin it. 😉 😛 wish i cud send them thr right nw 😍 Angie ,arman makin fun of R's shriekin ws too gud 😆 thnx again..im sure nxt chaptr mein to bahat maja ayega 😛



Aww thank you so much, Marisa😳...glad you enjoyed all those parts, yaar!!😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Oye Anu..I LOVED IT! 😃
i love the way u take parts frm the original show n add ur bit.it's like reading the untold story of Anjali-Atul.Hats Off to ur brilliance girl.
my favourite is the vibes tht Anjali's getting frm Atul.In a way it's very realistic.
*stands up n claps* 👏 👏
Plzz Continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanaya_86

Oye Anu..I LOVED IT! 😃
i love the way u take parts frm the original show n add ur bit.it's like reading the untold story of Anjali-Atul.Hats Off to ur brilliance girl.
my favourite is the vibes tht Anjali's getting frm Atul.In a way it's very realistic.
*stands up n claps* 👏 👏
Plzz Continue soon.



Thank you so much, Sanaya!😳...So glad you like my version of the untold story! will surely try to continue soon!😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey
WOWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dat was a AWSOME prt
cant wait 2 find out wats next 😊
cont super soooooooooooonnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru

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