'Socha na tha' Updated: Chapter 23: Pg.78 - Page 27

Originally posted by: mahi4u

hey
WOWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dat was a AWSOME prt
cant wait 2 find out wats next 😊
cont super soooooooooooonnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru

Originally posted by: xMarauderx

Very good update 😳 Thank you so much!😳

I liked the Atul-induced subtle changes in Angie 😳 😆 The telepathic connection was very cute as was Atul quietly smiling in triumph!!!

And you used the ol' people taking them for a couple trick yet it was very cute on AA LOL...yes I did...but she barely noticed😉😆😆

And even though its highly cliche, I'm looking forward to the jungle cruise of AA....it will be more interesting to watch than in the serial for sure! Esp as Angie wouldn't accept any help from Atul for anything 😆 Cliches are fun yaar! It all depends on how they're presented😉😆😆


I just loved the "shrieking" part...I could just imagine Ridz shrieking at Armaan and then spotting Angie and then throwing her hands up and shrieking "Diii" 🤣🤣 reminded me of Olive Oyl hugging Popeye....🤣🤣 ROFL! Olive Oyl??!!🤣 OMG, now that you mention it...it's PERFECT for her!!🤣

Angie's sarcasm is as good as ever 😆 😆 😆

Hope you continue soon! 👏 👏 👏 Thank you so much once again! Will try to continue as soon as possible!😳

Originally posted by: smriti81

@anu…hiiiiii! 🤗 Been a verrrrryyyy long time!Hiiiiii Smrits!🤗Yeah, it has been reaaaaaally long! Was wondering where you'd disappeared to! Caught the last two parts of ur FF and really enjoyed them! 👏 👏 I like ur style of narration anu, esp. all the conversations and banter b/w the interns…u make it very vivid! Thank you so much, yaar!😳I can almost picture the expressions on all their faces and the casual & natural exchange b/w them! Makes me relive the old DMG again!! I'm basically reliving it myself😉😆...except I'm trying to give other characters their due who got lost somewhere in the AR express.

Really liked the scene b/w Atul and Angie at the nurse station! Thank you so much! That's one of my fav. scenes b/w them too!The way he approached her tentatively, despite knowing well that he may be rebuffed, the deeper desire to reach out to her taking over!And seeing beyond her cold exterior...

Her icy, razor sharp words barely registered. There was so much pain hidden in those beautiful eyes, that he was surprised he'd never noticed it before. "Maybe that was the clarity that came with love," he mused to himself. There were bags under her eyes, and it looked she hadn't managed to catch much sleep last night. "Those eyes staring at him in asuposedly icy way right now were the eyes of a wounded animal not willing to give an inch," he realised. "She thinks I'm pitying her, and she would never take that from anyone, would she?" he mused.

That was really good…the transition in Atul's feelings for her is very well done. He is noticing things beneath that cool, aloof exterior and desperately clutching at straws to break thro' her barrier!! Loved the 'wounded animal' bit.So glad you liked that bit yaar!😳 And they are communicating thro' their eyes finally!! Aaahhhh loved that…am waiting to see how long she will be able to hold up this barrier in the face of Atul's determination to reach out to her!!

Another thing I liked was the fact that Angi's inner demons make her view her father's love in a skewed manner…more than it probably is in real life. It was pretty well brought out thro' that dream…very deep seated insecurity! And that Shashank does so want to connect with her, but does not understand her, and needs to find time with her, w/o the apple-of-his-eye walking in at the most inopportune times. Took me back to that report card scene frm their childhood! Yep! You've summed it up very accurately! That's pretty much it! Something about that teeny aspect of Angie's insecurity that they showed in the show touched me so much that I really wanted to explore it on a deeper level.

The way Atul came to her rescue during the camp visit and she finally saw him in a different light was another thing I enjoyed. With that hint of humor there as well…esp. loved that 'even folded up the sleeves of their shirts bit'!! 😃 Aww...so glad you enjoyed that bit! I can almost picture him working little miracles like that...nahin?😳😆😆

Ok am gonna celebrate ur dedication to the SB like the rest…was thinking anu koi mauka haath se jaane nahi degi! 😉 Kyunki Anu ko sudharna mushkil hi nahin....naamumkin hai😈😆😆...

And finally they are lost together in the jungle…yipeeeee!! Let's hve some jungle main mangal! Well, we know how SB (I used to quite like her then!!) reacted when lost in the jungle. Now I wanna see how ur Angie is gonna take this lost-in-the-jungle-with-Atul experience…expect smthng surprising frm u!!LOL...why yaar?? Until now, it's pretty much been cliched stuff only...and that's all I really know😆😆...please zyada expectation mat rakh baithna, yaar! Noticed that u r putting AA in the AR situations...expecting diff reactions!! Because it intrigues me big time to see what would happen when two such diverse characters as AA would be in those kind of situations...cuz characters like AR are a dime a dozen...pretty much standard in every show, and I could detail down to the last bit how a scene would run b/w those characters...but with Atul and Anjali...gives scope for something different😍...and so I'm going to try and see what spin I can put on it😉😆😆...but I reiterate..please don't expect something that great also😉 Till then…

Originally posted by: ftm_ca

Lovely update. I'm loving the small gestures between AA1, the kind that make you really fall in love with a person, observed from far. The little moment exchanged while getting on the bus was so trivial, yet if to be filmed, I can imagine just how powerful it would be, in describing such a relationship.

Sapna and Armaan, as always steal the spotlight for me. Armaan's one-liner about wildlife had me laughing, and meanwhile I wondered whether Saps would be the first to find out Atul Bear's dil-ka-haal, seeing that she has an eye for such stuff, not to mention a close friend at that.

Angie-Atul having that little exchange at the end about love was a very convincing touch. You've done a good job graphing the change in their relationship, mellowing Angie down, to the point where she suddenly says something like that, and both of them have an actual moment.

Waiting to see what happens, as Mellow and Lovestruck loose themselves in a dark jungle.

Really enjoyed reading, hope you're well 🤗 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: SRK-Kads4ever

Anu, jaan!!!

🤗 Fantabulous update yaar! Aaaah, it was simply too good! Thank you soooooooooo much, Borna yaar!🤗🤗Camptime is full of fun in the sun for everyone! 😆 As always, I love the ultimate cuteness between Atul and Sapna! The poor dear, too tired to even stand!

The bus scenes - the whole part, actually - was so amazing. If Atul's ability to look through Angie disconcerted her, it gave me goosebumps as well... 😳 Awww...so glad you liked it this much, yaar!😳I LOVE all the hulchul and the slow connections that are being made. Yeah, that's cuz I don't know any other way😆😆...but lucky me that all you guys still like it😳
Ah yes, my favorite parts of the bus scene! Atul's determination to strike up a conversation with Angie made me smile: love that determination! Way to go, Atul! 👏 The telepathic connection, with Angie feeling Atul's thoughts and feeling confused was so beautiful!!! *sigh* Another PS scene to go on my list! I'm really reading this and seeing everything so clearly in my head, and like you said, this scene would have been AMAZING to film on PS! I know yaar!! If only I was a director as well!😍😆😆...Hmmm, I wonder if there's some way I can indulge that crazy fantasy of mine as well🤔😆😆

The part where Angie resigns herself to the fact that she needs help with the villagers, and Atul silently asks her if she wants him to come over and help was too cute. It seemed as if she was trying to convince herself that winning IOTM was her reason for asking Atul to help her...Maybe I'm just being a crazy AA1 fanatic and reading into her reaction too much... 😉 LOL...No yaar, it's not that much of a stretch also to think that😉😆...Ppl try to convince themselves in so many ways, na? But yes, it's definitely wasn't only about IOTM in that moment...but she doesn't realize that yet😉...baaki keep imagining...best way to be!😉😆😆
Oh, she's having second thoughts now, eh? Yep, Anjali...You've certainly misjudged Atul...But no problem...Tit for tat! AnJALI! 😆 😆
("Jali jali, phir jali jali...AnJALI ki daal jali!" 😛 Couldn't help it! And Sunaina's "Jo bhi tha...It's dead now." LMAO!) LOVED that scene! One of my all time favs! Which is why I used AnJALI a lot in the earlier chapters😆😆

Now getting to the most popular one liners of the chapter! Both Armaan and Angie were hilarious! And I certainly don't have to rewrite those lines! 😊 Haha, Ridz probably did kill quite a few birds and squirrels with her high-pitched "Diiiii!"
(And now she's doing it again on the show! Poor Angie looked a bit exasperated, with RM on one side and AR on the other! LOL!) It's all she knows yaar!😉😆...I so wish Armaan had done it in the show once too! Maybe he really will do it one day and fulfill my sapna!😆😆

I always thought AA1 made a great team as doctors! I completely agree...the hookah case is a great example of this! I'm glad you put in a patient scene, those always seem to bring out the "team effort" in both Atul and Angie. Yeah, that scene was kinda written in a half-baked way, and I was pretty unhappy with how it turned out, but I got lazy😆😆 Atul's easy and friendly nature balances Anjali's professional nature perfectly in the hospital, but out here in the jungle, we got to see a flip side to both of them! Quite refreshing! And I can just see Atul's surprised look as Angie was talking to Raghu so nicely! More like: 😕 😊 Yep! The setting made a lot of difference...it wasn't the routine Hospital environment...and Angie's hidden softer side came out😉

Oooh, I'm so excited about the next chapter!!! 😃 😃 And stop telling us not to expect something amazing from you, Anu! Every update of yours is simply mindblowing! Yaar I'm really glad you like all of them...but I get scared also, cuz it really is just random stuff and sooner or later you'll realize that it's not all that really😕😆😆...but thank you so much for always liking it!🤗(This reminds me of the elevator/lift scene! Oho, and Angie's scared of the dark! Hmmm...)

I have a request for you, jaan...
Can you make Angie sing sometime? 😳 (I'm listening to Kitni Narmi Se right now! And it's SO beautiful!! A perfect song...I do love Sunaina's eyes...They're so beautiful!) Anyway! I'd be so endlessly happy if Angie could have a deep hidden passion for singing - she loves ghazals, I remember! 😉 There's one song that I absolutely love (Dheere Dheere from Shaurya) that would be so sweet if she sang it! Much much much later on, of course...Once she finally falls for our darling Atul... 😳
I'm all for hearing PS sing a duet now! 😳 😳 I'm very impressed with Sunaina - she sings very well! If she and Pankit sang a romantic duet, I'd be so happy! 😊

Originally posted by: nureat01