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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#301

It was such a sweet romantic part. Luved Raj n Naina's cute romance. Gud to hav this tension free part.

PLS CONTINUE SOON.

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springsign29

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Posted: 16 years ago

#302

the update made me blush so much........ur a fab writer , continue ur work

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sea_nyx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#303

omg, gazal talk of raising the temperature....I was reading the part in the middle of a thunderstorm (it being the middle of the rains here) but long before I reached the end of the update I felt as though I was sitting in a sauna...lol. The romance was so beautiful, Raj is like the perfect mix of naughtiness and passion...it should have been more than enough to satisfy us lekin kya kare....yeah dil maange more!!!

thanx soo much for the pm!

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sanjana25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#304

it was really gud plz contd soon waitin 4 d action hope nuin happens 2 raj waitin 4 parents reaction

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#305

Originally posted by: sanjana25
it was really gud plz contd soon waitin 4 d action hope nuin happens 2 raj waitin 4 parents reaction

dont worry

RN will be safe

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gazal

@gazal_sameer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#306

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
It was such a sweet romantic part. Luved Raj n Naina's cute romance. Gud to hav this tension free part.

PLS CONTINUE SOON.

thanks for comment

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gazal

@gazal_sameer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#307

Originally posted by: springsign29
the update made me blush so much........ur a fab writer , continue ur work

ya dipika is fabulous

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gazal

@gazal_sameer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#308

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

omg, gazal talk of raising the temperature....I was reading the part in the middle of a thunderstorm (it being the middle of the rains here) but long before I reached the end of the update I felt as though I was sitting in a sauna...lol. The romance was so beautiful, Raj is like the perfect mix of naughtiness and passion...it should have been more than enough to satisfy us lekin kya kare....yeah dil maange more!!!

thanx soo much for the pm!

i m glad u like it

u r most welcome

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gazal

@gazal_sameer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#309

Dil Ke Raaste Mein ...
Kaisi Thokar Maine Khaayi...

Toote Khwaab Saare ..Ek Mayusi Hai Chhayi...
Har Khushi So Gayi.. Zindagi Kho Gayi...
Tumko Jo Pyaar Kiya Maine To Saza Maine Paayi..
Tanhayee Tanhayee..
Milo Hai Faili Huvi Tanhayee..

aalekh was lying down on the bed...

tears rolling down his eyes...

tears of frustration..
of grief...

he was aware of the fact...
that the one he loved..
lay in the next room..
in the arms of her husband...

he visualised them together...
and his heart contracted...

all through the night...

he had imagined hearing their whispers....
her moans...

and had figured...
that if she hadn't married raj..
he would probably be dead today....

no matter how much he consoled himself...
fought with his emotions....

told himself that she was really happy...

he couldn't come to terms with the ache
in his heart....

tumse alag hona meri sabse badi bhool thi....
agar us din...apne careers ke liye..
humaare raaste alag naa hote..
to shaayad aaj tum meri hoti....

main tumhe kyon jaane diya??
nahi...tumne..tumne mujhe india aane diya..
main army join karna chaahta tha...
aur kya se kya bn gaya.....

thoughts were running wild in his heart...
as he reread the letter he'd finished writing
probably the 100th time.....

Khwaab Mein Dekha Tha ...
Ek Aanchal Maine Apne Haatho Mein...

Ab Toote Sapno Ke Shishe ...
Chubte Hai In Aankhon Mein...

Kal Koyi Tha Yahin ...Ab Koyi Bhi Nahin ...
Ban Ke Naagin Jaise Hai... Saason Mein Lehrayi
Tanhayee Tanhayee...
Palko Pe Kitne Aansoon Hai Laayi...

images of raj & naina flashed in his mind
again...as the sun rose...and he sighed...

"aaj...bas aaj ki baat hai...
phir sab khatam ho jaayega...

sabki khushi..sabka dard...
aankhon ki nami..dil ki kami...
raaton ka chain...sab...."

it was time for destruction....!
.........................................

her head lay on his chest....
eyes closed....hair falling all
over him....

his arm enveloping her....

their legs were entwined...

& his brushed along hers slowly...
deliberately...arousing her inspite of
the fact that she was too tired now....

"raaaaj...sone do..."
she murmured....eyes drooping...

"sone ke liye saari zindagi padi hai..."
he whispered....

"to phir aur kya karoon?"
she answered..sleepy...

& felt his smile....
as his chest expanded a bit....

"oh god!...saari raat ke baat bhi tum....
is dat all you think about?"

her eyes had opened..as she rested her chin on
the muscular planes of his chest....

"2 din...bas!
..shaadi ko humaari do hi
din hue hain madam..

officially one!...
wat else do you expect me to
think about?...

sleep!..food!..scenery!?..
yaan phir...building a snow-man!!!"
he answered...a bit sarcastic...

"are..are we...about to..
have our first official
miya-biwi fight?"
she was smiling....

he shook his head...
amazed at her..
"tumse ek second naaraaz
nahi reh sakta main!"

"pata hai...
you're such a hen-pecked hubby na..!
tumhe main kitni aasaani se apni..
ungliyon par nacha sakti hoon.."

she giggled at his expression...
his eye-brows had shot-up....

"really?"

"hmmmm..."
she planted a kiss on his chest..
right above his heart...

as the satin sheet that covered her
uptil her shoulders slipped down..
revealing her beautiful assets....

"you know wat jaan?...
there's only one way jab
tum mujhe apni
ungliyon par nacha paaogi.."

"kab..?"

"wen you're as dressed
as you're right now!"

and then the inevitable happened...

THEY MADE LOVE AGAIN...
THIS TIME EARLY IN THE MORNING...
their bodies glowing..basking in the light sun-rays
that entered the room....

Nasha Yeh Pyar Ka Nasha Hai...
Yeh Meri Baat Yaaron Maano....
Nashey Mein Yaar Doob Jao...
Raho Na Hosh Mein Deewano...

Ke Jabse Maine Tumko Dil Ye De Diya...
Mitha Mitha Sa Dard Le Liya....
Suno O NIA, Maine Tumko Dil Diya

Nazar Se Yoon Mili Nazar...Deewana Main Ho Gaya....
Asar Yeh Kya Hua Asar....Kahan Yeh Main Kho Gaya...
Behke Behke Kadam..Behka Behka Hai Man...
Cha Gaya Cha Gaya...Mujhpe Deewana Pan..
.
Jhuki Jhuki Nagaha Mein...
Balaa Ki Shokhiyaan Chupi...
Khuli Khuli Latoon Mein Bhi, Haye...
Ghataa Ki Mastiyaan Ruki...
Yeh Haya, Yeh Addaa...
Yeh Hasee, Yeh Nayan...
De Gaye, De Gaye....
Meethi Meethi Chubhan......

.......................................

they were unaware of all the
things that were going around outside....

the hall had been decorated
with garlands and streamers......

people ..close friends had been invited
to a small reception that was being held
here in the evening...

huda..abhimanyu..yudi...navin...
were all doing something or the other..
organising stuff...calling people....

tehzeeb and kaka were inside the kitchen..
preparing an assortment of delicacies..
that would lead to a plethora of
epicurean indulgences for the guests dat arrived...

"yeh aalekh kahaan hai?...
kitne kaam pade hain!"
navin was screaming....

"nanoo!...chillao mat
...raj..naina so rahe honge...
faaltu uth jaayenge.."
tehzeeb scolded him...

"kitna soyenge dono!!..
dus baj rahein hain...
kar liya jo karna hai...
bahut ho gaya!..."
he added stubborn....

"navin..."

"kya?"

"shut-up!...& let them be!"

"navin...
raj ke mom-dad ko abhimanyu le aayega...
tere parents ko airport se main le aata hoon..."
huda suggested...

it was then that aalekh had stepped out..
"huda...tu unhe pehchaanega kaise????"

"oh..maine to pehle unhe kabhi dekha hi nahi..
kya karna hai phir?"

"navin..main aur tu chalte hain...
waise bhi shaam ke liye DJ
organise karwaana hai..
chalein?"

"do minute ruko...
main bhi chalti hoon...
mall mein drop kar dena mujhe...
thodi bahut cheezein khariidni hain..."
tazz shouted....

"theek hai tazz..get ready...
kaka..!!"
navin shouted..and the man came rushing...

"raj-naina so rahein hai...
aur hum sab baahar jaa rahein hai...
jaldi aa jaayenge...."

"kaka..."
aalekh added..
"naina ko bolna..
uska shaadi ka gift maine mere room
mein rakha hain...dekh le...
yaad se..."

"jee aalekh baba!"
kaka smiled.....

locking the door after bidding
everyone a good-bye...
.................................................

"naina...naina...utho...
it's 10...sab pata nahi kya soch rahenge?"
he shook her lightly...

"10!!...oh goodness!..
baaki sabka to i'm least bothered...
par haan..mom-dad aane waalen hain...
hum dono ke....i..i better get ready..."

"ready?...for what?"

"huh?...
i'm newly married!!..
mera yahaan as your wife pehla din hai raj ..
i'll be meeting my in-laws..
thodi nervous hoon aaj...

wat should i wear?"

she asked him..innocently...

"meri maano to kuch bhi nahin!
dat's how you look the prettiest!"

she smiled at his naughtiness....

"kabhi badalna mat raj....
i really love you..."

& for the first time....
since being officially married...
she felt tears welling up in her eyes..

"hey...nia!...
c'mon yaar...kya hua?"

"promise me you'll never leave me..."

"wat makes you think i will?
faaltu baatein mat karna ab...
i love you..and whatever your
instincts are pointing at...
main itni aasaani se tumhe chod kar kahin nahin
jaane waala...is dat understood?..

if not..den i've got other ways to
explain.."

he winked..taking her into his arms...

sajan ghar aana tha ...
sajan ghar aaye hai...

piya mann bhaana tha...
piya mann bhaaye hai..

har khushi hai ab tumhari
mujhe de do gam.....
jaaneman jaaneman ....

zindagi mein aaye tum chaahaton ke raste ....
kaash yeh raste sanam kat jaaye haste haste ....

sone dildara tere pyar ..to main vaariyaan...
meri ya duvaawa tainu.. lag jaave saariyaan...
chaand ho tum chaandani... se bheega jaaye mann...
jaaneman jaaneman ....

khwaabon ke iss ghar ki khair kare o rabba ...
duur talai kalash aur bair kare o rabba...

naaz se bade maine kari hai tayyariya...
din raat pyar diya nazara utaariya...
yeh mohabbat hai ibaadat kabhi ho na kam..
jaaneman jaaneman ..

aaghosh mein meri zulf sanwari teri...
chahat ke rangon se main maang saja du teri...

maahiya ve aaj mainu aaive kyon ve lagda...
aashiq je sachha hove roop honda rab ka....
ham yahaan hai tum yahaan ho hone do milan...
jaaneman jaaneman ..........

...................................

she stepped out of the room..
dressed up in a beautiful saree..
encrusted with stones...

"raj..jaldi aao..."

he came rushing outside,....
"wow!...ghar ka naksha hi badal diya hai....
wen did they get the time for it??"

"kaka!"..nia called out...
"baaki sab kahaan gaye..."

"pata nahi beta..sabko kuch na kuch kaam
tha...arrey..yaad aaya..
aalekh baba aapke liye shaadi
ka taufa chod gaye hai kamre mein..."

"jee...main dekh leti hoon...."

naina went to his room..
while raj remained outside...

she instantly saw..a large bouquet
and a letter to go with it.....

smiling she began reading the letter...

her heart began to slow down...

darkness covering her eyes...

her head reeled...

as she swayed due to the sudden shock....

but it was the end..

the end of the letter...

that changed her life....

stopped her breath....

she gave a pained cry...
"raaaaaaaaaaaj!!!!"

as she fainted.....
and her world seemed to cease!!!

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gazal

@gazal_sameer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#310

that's it guys!!!
for all those who replied
thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
a looooooooooooooooooooooooooot...

it means a lot to me..

aaj maine to bahut kuch likh liya....

don't worry..
i'm tryin my level best to step up the pace..
and get over with the fic....

trauma....pain..hoga bhi to zyaada nahi
kheechoongi...pakka!!!

cya kal den...
byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Edited by gazal_sameer - 16 years ago