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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#311

Nice part. Luved Raj-Naina romance. W8ing 2 c wats Aalekh upto.

PLS CONTINUE SOON.

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sea_nyx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#312

wow, fantastic part!!! It had everything in it, romance, suspence, love, friendship, loss....but what a cliffhanger!! can't wait 4 thhe nxt part

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Posted: 16 years ago

#313

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW...............i was late in reading the updates as i was out of station....but i didn't know ki itna sab ho jayega....i mean Raj-naina wedded....their beautiful romance.....their chupke chupke waali shaadi......and then the shocker....it jolted me completely....i mean.........AALEKH......i hadn't even thought abt this in my daydreams.....hehehehe.....usse kyun villain banayaa....cry cry.....par i swear it has paced up the story to a 150km/hr waali speed........hehehehe......it is getting interesting and breathtaking by each update.......par PLZZZZZZ........just one request....Raj-Naina, Navin aur unke parents ko kuch mat hone dena......plz keep them safe, secure and alive........gazal.....plz....its a genuine request.......

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#314

Originally posted by: sea_nyx
wow, fantastic part!!! It had everything in it, romance, suspence, love, friendship, loss....but what a cliffhanger!! can't wait 4 thhe nxt part

thanks for the comment

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#315

Originally posted by: sweet.dreamz
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW...............i was late in reading the updates as i was out of station....but i didn't know ki itna sab ho jayega....i mean Raj-naina wedded....their beautiful romance.....their chupke chupke waali shaadi......and then the shocker....it jolted me completely....i mean.........AALEKH......i hadn't even thought abt this in my daydreams.....hehehehe.....usse kyun villain banayaa....cry cry.....par i swear it has paced up the story to a 150km/hr waali speed........hehehehe......it is getting interesting and breathtaking by each update.......par PLZZZZZZ........just one request....Raj-Naina, Navin aur unke parents ko kuch mat hone dena......plz keep them safe, secure and alive........gazal.....plz....its a genuine request.......

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aalekh kyon????

well...central role diya hi usse...
you shud be happy!!!!

dont worry

tumhari request dipika tak paunch jay gi

Edited by gazal_sameer - 16 years ago

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#316

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Nice part. Luved Raj-Naina romance. W8ing 2 c wats Aalekh upto.
PLS CONTINUE SOON.

thanks for comment

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#317

Kyon Aisi Umeed Ki Maine ..
Jo Aisi Naakaam Huvi..

Door Banayi Thi Manzil...
To Raste Mein Hi Shaam Huvi..

Ab Kahan Jaao Main..
Kis Ko Samjhaaon Main ..

Kya Maine Chahaa Tha Aur ...
Kyon Kismat Main Aayi....

Tanhayee Tanhayee...
Jaise Andhero Ki Ho Gehrayi....

aalekh was not a rash driver...
but today..his mind was in a turmoil...
full of negative thoughts...

he knew wat he was about to do..
would probably shatter naina..

but that really was the only
way to save her life....

kyon..
kyon main tumse itna pyaar karne laga??
wen did i become so obsessed???

"aalekh..maarega kya?..
dheere chala...kis cheez ki jaldi hai tujhe?"
navin smiled...

aalekh couldn't return it...

"bahut door jaana hai navin...
bahut door..."

his eyes had a far-away look....

"bahut door?...aalekh...
mall to aa gaya...

i was wondering...
tum dono bhi aa jaao andar..
5 minutes ka kaam hai..
phir main bhi DJ ke paas chalti hoon...
wat say?"
tehzeeb suggested....

"fine...chal rocky.."
aalekh stopped the car...
and they went in....

navin & tehzeeb were busy lookin thru
some stuff wen aalekh's cell
rang....

"main abhi aaya..."
he stepped aside...

"hello?"

"aalekh..kaam ho gaya?"

"n..nahi..bas..thodi der aur...."

"tu mission poora kar to paayega...?
hello?"

"huh..haan...5..5 minute..bas...

abdul...naina..
naina ko to kuch nahi hoga na..
ek baar main mission poora kar doon...
to usse chod doge na?"
his lips quivered...

"haan aalekh...
waada hai..chod denge...
bas tu kaam kar aur waapis aa.."

"waapis...haan...
aata hoon...."
he kept the phone down...
his pulse racing....

naina..shaayad usne letter pad liya hoga....
toot chuki hogi..yaan phir...
ho sakta hai abhi bhi..
raj ki baahon mein....

he shut his eyes tightly....
wondering why his life had taken such a course...
why had he been chosed by God???

it was time..time for an end...

"navin...tehzeeb...
zara aana to sahi...
kuch...dikhaana hai.."

he took them to a corner...
and...unzipped his jacket....
.....................................................

"woh..kaam kar dega...
kabir bhaai..."
abdul was standing outside his cell....

kabir smiled..

"shabaash!..tujhe iska inaam zaroor
milega abdul...tune mujhe dhokha nahi diya...
bas ek kaam aur...
mission ke poora hote hi...
aalekh..aur naina..dono ko humesha ke liye
sula dena...."

"jee...jaisa aap kahein.."
abdul smiled...
"bechaara aalekh.."
............................
raj had been in the living room..
while naina read the letter....

he'd just picked up the newspaper...
a mug of coffee in his hand...
trying to focus his mind on the headlines....
but he couldn't...

the last 2 days...rather nights...
had been pure bliss..

he'd never experienced such hapiness in life...
her passionate love-making..
left a smile on his face...

and he knew..his face was probably glowing...

"raaaaaaaaaaaj!!!"
he heard her scream...

a scream of panic,...
of terror...of fear

banging the cup on the table...
the contents spilling all over...

he rushed inside.....
wondering wat had gone wrong....

to his horror...
he saw her unconscious on the bed...

her face drenched in sweat...
"naina!!..."

"kaka!!!...paani..jaldi!

nia...jaan..."

he was lightly slapping her face...
shaking her....
resting her head on his chest..

"naina...naina..."

kaka came running in..
handing a glass of water to raj....

he sprinkled a few drops of water on her face...
unaware of the crushed piece
of paper in her hand....

her eyes flickered open...
slowly....emotionless..blank...dead...

"hua kya naina?...
nia??...speak up..."

but she didn't....

she saw no one...felt nothing...
no hurt...no pain...nothing....

it was den dat his gaze fell
on the paper in her hand...

frowning..

wondering wat had gone so wrong..

wat mysteries a letter could hold....

he began to read...

naina sitting still in his lap....
non-responsive..not reacting....

dear naina...

shaadi bahut mubaarak ho...
congratulations babes....

main..
main jaanta hoon...
ki abhi tum...
raj ke saath..
uske paas ho....khush...

aur main hamesha se sirf yahi chaahta aaya hoon....
your happiness...
you never knew dat it probably
meant everything to me.....

this letter...
will never bring wat you
desire...
main tumhe kuch dene ke kaabil nahi hoon....

my words may seem...weird to you..
but that's coz you don't know me....

wipe dat smile off your face!!...
main serious hoon....

raj smiled...
aalekh knew her so well...

she's so lucky to have such a good friend..
par..iski baatein...

he read on...

"ab..main tumhe ek kahaani sunaane waala
hoon...
ek ladke ki kahaani...
you might wonder how it's related to you..
you'll find out soon....

& i want you to read this at a stretch....
& i hope dat eventually...
you'll
forgive the boy.....

he was one of the billions of men in
the world..
someone you can't tell apart from the others...

he was a shoe-maker....
poor...decent looks...but ambitious..

uski kayi dreams thi..hopes....

he slogged..day & night...studied ..
with mice & cockroaches giving him company...

kayi din usne bina khaana...
bina sar par chat kaate...

but he never gave up....

running errands for people...

bahut saal ki mehnat ke baad..
sholarships ke baad...

he found himself in one of the best
universities in the world...

his dreams were coming true....

then he fell in love with a girl....
and his life changed again..
for the worse.....

usse kuch samajh nahi aata..
woh career par dhyaan de..
yaan us ladki par...

but the lad had faced so much misery in life..
that he craved for power....
& eventually....took a decision...

he came back to india...

politics was never on his agenda...

a true patriot..he wanted to
serve his nation & wield his true power...
but...
god had a different thing on his mind....

a different plan for him!

he joined the army...
the girl still at the back of his mind....
24 hours....

ek din...
us soldier se bahut badi bhool ho gayi..

ek aisi bhool..jisne uski zindagi badal di....
barbaad kar di...
& he became a.....

a...terrorist.....

jisse pehle tum aage jaao....
you need to know who the
characters are....

the girl is you...

the boy is me...

i love you....

aur haan..woh traitor..
woh gaddaar..main hi hoon naina.
main hi hoon....

this bit was smudged...
a tear drop.....

raj's eyes widened..
his face pale...

oh my god!!!

even his hands were trembling now...

aalekh...terrorist....aatankwaadi....
no way!!!!....

he didn't have the heart to go on....
but knew the real jhatka was still to come....!