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sanjana25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#281

it was really gud plz contd soon

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sea_nyx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#282

I hope they get married the "usual" way later on cause the last time i checked, the indian civil code does not recognise blood vows however romantic they may be as a marriage..lol. and pla don't let anything happen to raj

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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#283

It was simply an outstanding part. Just luved it. Firstly the conversation was very scary. Feeling really worried 4 Raj. I hope everything will be f9 in the end.

And now the most shocking yet the most pleasant part. RN r finally MARRIED. Ya dat was in a filmy style but certainly luved it. And their conversation was so nice n romantic. Raj's dialog of a virgin bride was so cute. And the his saying JAAN - each n everything was so wonderful. Just simply luved the UD.

W8ing 4 the next part. PLS CONTINUE SOON.

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
It was simply an outstanding part. Just luved it. Firstly the conversation was very scary. Feeling really worried 4 Raj. I hope everything will be f9 in the end.

And now the most shocking yet the most pleasant part. RN r finally MARRIED. Ya dat was in a filmy style but certainly luved it. And their conversation was so nice n romantic. Raj's dialog of a virgin bride was so cute. And the his saying JAAN - each n everything was so wonderful. Just simply luved the UD.

W8ing 4 the next part. PLS CONTINUE SOON.

i m glad that u like it

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#285

dil khudgarj hai,
phisala hai yeh phir haath se...

kal usaka raha,
abb hai tera iss raat se....
o meri jaan..........

tu aa gaya yuun nazar mein....
jaise subah dopahar mein...

madhoshi yuun hi nahi dil pe chaayi...
niyat ne li angadaayi..

chhuaa tune kuchh iss tarah..
badli fiza badla sama...
o meri jaan..........

naata samajhe ??? yeh dil mera..
jaanu na jaanu na isko kya hua..

teri baahon ki phir se dhunde yeh panaah...
tu hai kahaan, tu hai kahaan...
o meri jaan..........

they lay entwined in each other's arms..
warm in the blanket that they shared...

naina snuggling against him..
a contented smile on her face...
as they slept.....

raj stirred...
his eyes flickering open....

he smiled wen he saw that
the blanket had slipped
off her..

or she'd tried to cover him instead..

& inspite of the warmth from his body..
she was cold....

he shook his head..smiling...
& covered her instead...

the fire was burning low again...
& there were no more logs left...

he cursed himself for getting
such few the first
time he went out...

holding her arms gently...
he removed them from his chest..
& sat up...

the movement woke her up....
as she pulled him back...
atleast she tried....

"kahaan jaa rahe ho?"
she mumbled..sleepy...
her body tired...

he kissed her on the forehead..
"aa raha hoon jaan...go to sleep"

"hmmm.."
and she was already asleep.....

dressing...he opened the door...
shivering as the chilly wind
hit him on his face...

it took him about 10 minutes to
collect the logs...and wen he came back..
he was as cold as ice...

having build the fire...
he climbed into bed with her again...

she jumped awake...
her eyes wide..

"kya hua??"
raj asked....wondering...

unable to take his eyes off his beautiful
bride...

"you're freezing!!!...
i was so warm..aur achaanak
tumne mujhe..."
she rubbed herself...
unaware wat her action was doing to him...

it was 3 at night...& they made love again....
.........................................

it was 8 in the morning wen
raj shook her...already awake....

"sone do naa bhaa.."
she stopped mid-way...
blushing.....

"hey bhagwaan!!..
meri biwi mujhe apna bhaai
banaane lagi hai..
anything is possible these days!"
he was grinning...

habitual of being woken up
by navin since the past few days....

the word had almost slipped off her tongue....

"good morning....."

she smiled....
sitting up...covering herself up
with the blanket....

"morning jaan..."
he handed her a cup of tea..

"u like calling me jaan..don't you?"
she took her tea...

"you don't like it?"

"i love it!"

he chuckled at her enthusiasm...

"well..suits you...
aakhir tum ho hi meri jaan...
chai kaisi hai?"

"arrey tum to zeher bhi pilaaoge to
main aankhen band karke pee loongi.."
she added dramatically....

"mera bhoot tumhaare andar
kaise aa gaya...
ek dum filmy dialogue maara!!..
waise...tum bahut soti ho...
very inactive huh..."

he was delighted at her expression....
she was embaraased...
yet tryin to hide it....

"inactive !!...
activity ka scope choda hi kahaan
aapne patidev...
saari raat sone hi nahi diya..."

she flipped her arms around his neck....
forgetting everything ..
even the blanket that had almost slipped again...

"yeah right!...as if kal raat aap
ka sirf sone ka plan tha!!.."

"ho sakta hai...
jaise mera abhi mann kar raha hai..
sone ka..!"

"i bet!...to chalo aap ki
mann ki muraad poori kar den..."

he took her in his arms...

kissing her passionately...

his lips infusing warm life into her...

Dhaage tod laao chandani se noor ke...
Ghoonghat hi banalo roshini se noor ke...
Sharma gai to ..aagosh mein lo..
ho Saaaso se uljhi rahi meri saasein..

Bol Na Halke Halke
hooth se halke halke
bol na halke ........

Aa neend ka sauda karein ..
Ek khwaab de ..ek khwaab le...
Ek khwaab to ..aankhon mein hai ..
Ek chand ke takiye tale...

Kitne dino se yeh asmaan bhi ..
soya nahi hai ..Isko sula de...

Umrein lagi kehte hue...
do lafj the ek baat thi...
Woh ek din sau saal ka...
Sau saal ki woh raat thi...
Kaise lage jo chupchap dono..
Palpal mein puri sadiyan beetadein..

............................

it was 10...and they were both dressed..
ready to leave...

both hadn't bothered opening
the door since morning..

& wat met their eyes early next morning..
was something extraordinarily beautiful...

a sight that neither would forget for a long time..

everywhere they looked...
they saw only snow..

a white blanket covering the earth ...

the closely packed pine trees...

and the distant mountains...

it was so wonderful that it took
her breath away....

it was like a scene on a christmas card...
"main bhool gayi thi...
kashmir really is heaven...paradise..."

"a..don't mind..but if navin
finds about us somehow...
we'll both be in hell..."

she smiled...
"idea!!!"
...................................

"navin..."

"raj!!..kahaan hai yaar?
have you guys left the cabin?"

they were talkin on the phone....

"haan yaar..par..."

navin could sense the tension in his
friend's voice...

"kya hua raj?..naina theek to hai?"

"nahi navin...police...
they've taken her away again...

aur abhi..
main court ke baahar khada hoon..
trying to get her a bail...
jaldi pahunch yaar...
& do get everyone here...
i mean everyone!!...
baaki baat baad mein karta hoon...
c'mon quick.."
he kept down the cell....

..................................

"raj..."
all of them caming running towards him...

he stood out of the court...

"yeh sab kaise??Nia kahaan hai?"
navin was paranoid...

"time nahin hai guys...
follow me..quick..."

yudi,tehzeeb, aalekh,
abhimanyu, huda , navin..
all of them rushed behind him....

he knocked on a door..and they entered...

and they stood still...shocked...
rather surprised...

naina was standing right there....

her blush matching the red of her saree..
of the thin line of sindoor that she wore....

her hair open...
she was looking gorgeous...
trying to handle her heavy saree...

elegant..beautiful...she wore no

jewellery...except the light bangles....

the wedding chooda that adorned her wrists...

and almost no make-up...
a light lipstick..and kaajal that
highlighted her eyes....

"naina!!...how could you??"
navin almost screamed at her...
shattered...

the smile on her face vanished....

"woh..bhaai..main.."

"raj tujhse itna pyaar karta tha naina...
tune usse dhokha kaise de diya??

i'll kill the bas***d you married..."

"what?!!"

they all burst out laughin..
except nanoo..everyone understood
wat had happened...
and who naina's groom really was...

"navin.."
raj was grinning...
"i'm the bas***d that your
sister just married...

and you my friend...
are the world's biggest LOSER!!"

Raj showed him a big L
made from his thumb & forefinger...

"t..tu?....tum dono..shaadi..."
his jaw had dropped open...

"par tum dono aisa kaise kar sakte ho??...
i mean..permission...ceremomy..nothing..."

he was really angry..
but too confused at the same time...

"a..reception de denge na bhaai...
btw..we need two witnesses
to sign our marriage papers..
hum dono ne kar diye hain...."
she was hiding her smile..

"koi sign nahi karega!!"
navin yelled adamant...
and turned away...

"c'mon navin bhao mat kha yaar...
you know we love each other..."

raj was consoling him....

"yaar..mere itne sapne the...
naina ko acche se..&
u both ruined it!!"

he was stubborn as a child...

"par abhi bhi kuch nahi bigda hai..
you aren't legally married...
hum mein se koi sign nahi karega..."

meanwhile ..behind his back...
aalekh and tehzeeb signed the papers....!!!

"congratulations...
you are now legally pronounced husband &
wife!"
the barrister smiled....

"kya??!!...noooooooo!!..nahi!!..
dammit yaar...
meri saari importance khatam kar di..!"
he stomped his foot on the ground...

and they were all laughing....

except one man..
a man...who saw how happy she was...
& it pained his heart..for her
happiness..was limited...

he instantly decided something!

....................................

"m..main..mission nahi caary kar paaoonga...
things have changed.."
the traitor was nervous...

"kya!!..tum jaante to ho..
tum kya keh rahe ho?
peeche hatne ki sazaa jaante ho na?"

"h..haan"

"maut hai ...sirf maut...
are you ready for dat?"

"usne shaadi kar li hai..."

"to?..kill her husband..!"

"nahi!!...uski...zindagi...
khushi..sab khatam ho jaayega..."

"phir se pyaar jaag gaya kya
aalekh???????"

and a tear fell down his eye....

"pyaar ......
woh toh kabhi mara hi nahi tha...
i love her..i love naina.."

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#286

that's all folks!!

to..jhatka kisa raha!!

par haan..abhi bahut kuch baaki hai!!

how was the romance????

hopin to see loads of replies!!!

gtg...
byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Edited by gazal_sameer - 16 years ago

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sanjana25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#287

IT WAS REALY GUD WHY DID U MAKE ALEKH D TRAITOR I ALWAYS THOT IT WAS HUDA

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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#288

Firstly it was really nice. Raj n Naina r legally married. But AALEKH LUVS NAINA??????? I'm totally shocked. He's the villain????? Thats too bad. But I'm glad dat he decided not to kill Raj.

W8ing 4 the next part. PLS CONTINUE SOON.

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sea_nyx

@sea_nyx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#289

NAHINNNNNNNNNN!!!!!

lol.....but really gazal, how COULD you? mere Alekh ko traitor bana diya? aur koi nahin mila tha kya? I mean ALEKH?!!!! I never thought you would do this yaar....no, plz,plz, plzzzz do something, plzzzzzzz!!!!!