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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#321

Nice part. The letter was so touching. I feel really bad 4 Aalekh. But cant even wish 4 his happiness coz dat means Raj's pain. But Y Navin n Tehzeeb?? My mind isnt working. PLS CONTINUE SOON.

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springsign29

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Posted: 16 years ago

#322

its long tym since i replied properly but i wanna tell u ,this fic is precious ,i really lov it, so ud soon.now comin to the updates raj and naina's romance is so cherishing ,sweet and naughty and a breath of fresh air.....but feeling really bad fr aalekh, the guy really lovd naina , i thnk lov may nt b the proper wrd , but obssesed can be.the letter was hrt wrenchng.......poor aaekh but plz save nanoo and taz , do not let anythng happen to him.......plz plz......

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#323

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Nice part. The letter was so touching. I feel really bad 4 Aalekh. But cant even wish 4 his happiness coz dat means Raj's pain. But Y Navin n Tehzeeb?? My mind isnt working. PLS CONTINUE SOON.

thanks for comment

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gazal

@gazal_sameer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#324

naina was still sitting in his lap..
with an unaltered dead expression...

as raj...forced himself to go on with the letter...

hoping...dat everything was fine..normal...

before i go on...
i just have one request....

meri position samajhne ki
koshish zaroor karna nia...

yaad karna un palon ko jo humne saat bitaaye...

college main..tumhaare ghar par...

that has been the only positve...
the only bright phase of my life.....

jab itne saalon baad tumhe..
academy mein dekha...

mere saare emotions..
ones dat i had bottled up for years
..began tumbling out...
par tab tak bahut der ho chuki thi...

main ek dal-dal mein fas chuka tha...
girta jaa raha tha....doob chuka tha..

i never stopped loving you...
although i tried to forget you...

yaad hoga tumhe..

years back..nanoo must have told you...

about...about the scandal that rocked the army..
the ministry...

jab kargil war ke dauraan..
defence secrets leak ho gaye the...

jiski wajaah se humaare kayi
soldiers shaheed bhi hue....

meri galti thi naina...

main bika nahi...
it was never about money...

bas ek bhool ho gayi thi...
anjaane mein..
mujhse..security breach ho gayi...
and ..and those guys got wat they wanted...

humaari military positions ki ek-ek
baat un tak pahunch gayi....

i knew..that the only punishment i'd get..
and probably deserved ...

was a court martial...

par..par itni srtuggle..itni mehnat ke
baad main is position par pahuncha tha .....

nahi thi mujh mein himmat
apna gunaah qubool karne ki...

i never confessed...
aur shaayad yeh mera
sabse-badi gunaah tha...!

woh terrorists..woh jaante the ..
mere baare mein sab kuch...

they..they blackmailed me...
main nahi maana...

they beat the hell out of me..
main phir bhi nahi maana..

desh ke saath gaddaari...nahi kar sakta tha....

but there's always a limit to the amount of
torture dat a person can handle.....

..main..main toot gaya naina..
thak gaya tha..

i wanted the power that
i had always craved for...

main jhuk gaya...unke saamne...
i gave up the fight....

khud ko bachaane ke liye..
maine apne desh ko bech diya....
aur ban gaya un mein se ek...

a traitor...

mujhe galat mat samajhna nia..

yakeen karo..
doosra koi raasta nahi tha mere paas...

khair ab in baaton se waise
bhi koi farak nahi padega..

there is another confession that's due....

main...
main raj se nafrat karta hoon naina...

cheen liya usne tumhe...
mere pyaar ko mujhse...

is liye...sirf is liye..maine tum dono ko juda
karne ki koshish kari..
bahut koshish....

woh..saare attacks...tum dono par..

maine karwaaye...
yeh baat dhyaan mein rakhte hue...
ki tum..tum safe raho...
par tum har baar raj
ko bachaati aayi...aur main rota raha..

pooja aur ali ki maut ka
zimmedaar bhi main hoon....

nahi jaanta tha main..
ki tum ..kabir ki ...

that you were interpol...

jab tum delhi chod kar chali gayi...
aur raj toot gaya..to usko maarne ka
maksad khatam ho gaya...

aur hum kashmir aaye...

yahaan mere peeche se..
tum par kya beet rahi
thi..ushi mujhe bhanak bhi nahi thi....
i never knew about it...

khair..mere paas zyaada waqt nahi hai nia...

tum soch rahi hogi..ki main tumhe yeh sab aaj
kyon bata raha hoon...2 wajaah hain...

pehli..you got married...&
i realised ki agar main..
raj aur tumhe juda bhi kar doon..
tab bhi tum meri kabhi nahi ho sakti...

aur doosri...main apne aakhri mission ki taraf
bad raha hoon.....

aaj ke baad hum kabhi nahi milenge naina...

aur jaane se pehle main tumhe
apne group ke baare mein
kuch details dena chaahta hoon...

so that this ends..forever...
aur kabhi..koi aur aalekh paida naa ho...

don..kabir ka baap..
Fujairah ..united arab emirates
mein kahin hai..

and he's planning something disastrous
within the next 2-3 weeks...
you have to stop him...
interpol mein yeh baat pahuncha dena...

secondly...main...main army mein akela
gaddar nahi hoon naina..
there's someone else too..
kaun..woh main nahi jaanta...par koi hai...

isse zyaada main bhi kuch nahi jaanta...

tumhaari jaan khatre mein hain naina..
yeh letter padte hi..raj ko lekar..
bahut door chali jaao...

tumhe bachaane ke liye..
mujhe ek sauda karna pad raha
hai nia....

mujhe..mujhe maaf kar dena ...
for i'm about to murder your emotions...

aaj ke baad..tum...
navin se kabhi nahi mil paaogi...
yeh padte hi...news dekh lena...

i..i'm sorry....
shaayad yeh shabd tumhe khokle lage..

par ek marta hua aadmi kabhi jhooth nahi bolega....

i loved you..i really did.....

chupke se chaand ki roshni tumhaari ho jaaye..
dheere se hawa tumhe kuch keh jaaye..
dil se chaahte ho jisse...usse rab se mang lo...
aur main dua karoonga..
ki tumhara woh khwaab pura ho jaaye...

alvida nia...

tumhaara...
rockstar..........................

please forgive me...

raj was trembling real hard...
sweating...unable to analyse anything....

to comprehend the situation....

he realised that the words in red..
were written in blood..
and a fear surged him too

bakwaas hai yeh sab....
jhooth...aalekh....

navin ki jaan khatre mein.....

nahi ho sakta yeh...
aalekh ..
navin ke saath kuch bura kar hi nahi sakta....

oh god...please.......
.........................................

Zindagi Ne Zindagi Bhar Gam Diye
Jitne Bhi Mausam Diye Sab Nam Diye.....

Jab Tadapta Hai Kabhi Apna Koi
Khoon Ke Aansoo Rula De Bebasi...
Jee Ke Phir Karna Kya Mujhko Aisi Zindagi...

Jisne Zakhmon Ko Nahi Marham Diye...
Zindagi Ne Zindagi Bhar Gam Diye..

Apne Hi Pesh Aaye Humse Ajnabee
Waqt Ki Saajish Koi Samjha Nahi....

Yeh Maana Kuch Khatayein Humse Ho Gayi....

Raah Mein Patthar Meri Har Dam Diye..
Zindagi Ne Zindagi Bhar Gam Diye...
Ek Mukambal Kashmakash Hai Zindagi...
Usne Humse Ki Kabhi Naa Dosti....

Jab Mili Mujhko Aasoo Ke Woh Tohphe De Gayi...
Has Sake Hum Aise Mauke Kam Diye..
Zindagi Ne Zindagi Bhar Gam Diye..

he was feeling heavy...
knowing that this would be the toughest moment..
wen he had to actually press the trigger....
and blow away like a leaf

ek second...bas..ek second mein sab khatam ho jaayega...
and he'll find himself next to God.....

main poochoonga unse..kya galti thi meri
jo unhone mujhe yeh kaam diya....

kyon itne dard diye...
kyon mera ek bhi sapna poora nahi hone diya....

his eyes were shut..as he took a deep breath...

feeling the air surrounding him...

the faint murmers of shoppers....

the noise of people shuttling up & down the stairs...

the feel of his clothes sticking to him....

and finally...he pressed it...

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!!!!!!!!

he was falling....falling into god's arms..

A wave of fire was sweeping him away..
far away...as his mind cleared for a minute...

it is said..that a person visualises
his entire life in the last 12 seconds....

it happened to him to...

he saw himself as a child..

polishing shoes...

studying hard..

slogging...

in the university..

laughing away with naina....

in india..

training to be a captain...

his mistake...

his joining hands with the terrorists...

his killing pooja & ali....

attacks he forged on raj...

writing a letter...

finally...he was alone..

standing at the end of a tunnel..
a long.. dark tunnel...

in the end..everyone was alone...

each person had to die his own death...

a feeling of blessed peace stole over him...
& there was no more pain....
....................................

"naina!!..baat suno m..meri...
aalekh aisa n..nahi kar sakta..
yeh kisi ka mazaak hai...
both of us ...know him...!!....

navin ko kuch nahi hua....
he's..he's alive..

everything is normal....

news....news mein bhi kuch nahi hoga...
c'mon...we'll see...chalo..."

he wondered whether he believed his own words..

she didn't speak..or bat an eye-lid....

as he dragged her along to the living room...
and switched on the television...

the news reporter was very excited....

"aaj ABC news aap sabke liye..
sabse pehle...ek breaking news laaya hai...

kashmir mein aaj ek aur
aatankwaadi hamla hua...

super-mall ko ek suicide-bomber
ne theek 10 minute pehle
blast kar diya hai...

hum apne darshakon ko seedha
mall lekar chalte hain..
diya...kya haalaat hai wahaan?"

"main..diya..reporting live from
outside super-mall
jahaan abhi-abhi ek massive blast hua hai..

according to ABC news sources..a
ndar kuch 400
log maujood the..

zaahir si baat hai...in mein se koi nahi bacha...

the explosion was so massive...
ki andar khada har banda..j
al kar raakh ho gaya hai.

injured or wounded conditions mein bhi
yahaan khadi ambulance..fire-brigades..ko
koi nahi mila.....
this has been an extremely tragic day in the history of
our country...."

"riya...yeh kaise pata chala...
ki koi suicide-bomber hi tha?"

"well...humaare news channel ke sources
ki wajaah se
...right after the incident...
ABC news got a call from '.......'
terrorist organisation..jinhone
is incident ki zimedaari li hai....

they want that their leader kabir be instantly
released..nahi to....

ek minute...bodies ko laaya jaa raha hai..."

the camera turned towards a burned face...
and for the first time...

naina screamed....so loudly...
that the place almost shook...

then..all of a sudden...
she started laughing...
giggling....

"raj...i'm hungry..
let's have some breakfast.."

her eyes were extraordinarily bright....

it took him a second to realise
that naina had gone hysterical...
and he shook her....

"nia!....hosh mein aao...!"

she continued smiling...
a little too much...

raj's eyes welled up with tears...
tears dat he didn't bother stopping...

she must see them fall...
she must feel the hurt...
the grief...
the pain...

his tears wiped her smile off...

and she was lifeless again...

a cold numbness began enveloping raj too..
as the news sank in...

he sat down on the sofa...taking her along...

he felt as if he was in an aquarium...
moving underwater...back & forth...
unable to breath....

navin...aalekh...both were...dead...

out of space..out of time...

a sensation similar to a glass piercing through him..
passed in his heart...

he was seized by a feeling
of failure..of grief...

but he had to hold himself....
had to take a stand...

he forced himself...for naina's sake...

i have to let go off this hurt....
she needs me....main toot nahi sakta..
abhi nahi....

he turned towards her....

she still wasn't sobbing...

"naina..."
he was at loss of words...

kya bolu main tumhe ..
jab main khud...

but he was taken-aback...
for she spoke....

"raj...someone's....killing....me...

mujhe..aisa ..lag raha.. hai...
that..my soul's... tearing away ...to pieces....
wake me up....please..."

she seemed stunned....

raj realised..
dat she felt this was all a nightmare..

and all he had to do..
was wake her up...

how he wished...
ki sab kuch itna aasaan hota.....
kaash...kaash yeh ek mazaak..ek sapna hota...

par yeh haqeeqat hai...

he wiped his face ...

a long journey...a long time
that was what it would take to bring her back
to her senses....to heal her...

she would have to accept..that death..
was a part of life....

but how could she...wen he hadn't either...
not as yet...main ek soldier hoon...
par aaj...phir aisa lag raha hai..
ki mera pehli baar maut ke saath saamn hua hai....

tears trickling down...

he wound his arms around her...
bringing her as close to himself as possible...

trying to protect her from this sorrow...

her head buried against his chest....
as he held her real tight...
enveloped...
"we'll get out of this together naina..
i promise you....."

and she broke down.......
miserable...

nanoo....she trembled...
kahaan chale gaye tum bhaai...

only one thing remained in her heart then....

the song he'd sung for her long back...
& how terribly it reminded her of him..
his smile...

chandni muskuraye jab hawa kuch kahe ...
samjho meri sadaye hai tere saath main ...

jo ghana ho fiza main andhera ...
layenge hum savere tere liye ...

le chale le chale yaadon ke yeh kaafile
jayenge hum jahan ...
yeh zameen aasmaan mile ...

narm boondo ki rimzhim ...
pehli baarish ke din ...
dopahar garmiyon ki ...
shame woh sard si ...

rut koi koi mausam koi ghadi ..
ho saath main humko har dam tum paaoge ...
le chale le chale ...

ahaatein dheemi dheemi tere awaaz ki ...
choti choti si baaten woh shararat bhari ...

un palo un lamho ki jaddoogari ...
aaj bhi hai sanjoye ...
dil ne mere ...
le chale ...le chale yaadon ke yeh kaafile

death...death of her dear brother....
had been her wedding gift...

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gazal

@gazal_sameer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#325

that's all guys.....

aaj pehli baar..main khud likhte-likhte
shake kar rahi thi...
i felt like crying

i might not hv expressed my feelings
properly today....
but this is the best i could do...

it was really sad to part with
aalekh and navin....

remember..these guys don't know
ki tehzeeb bhi navin ke saath thi....

chalo...don't hate me...
or kill me for this...

let's see koi reply karta hai yaa nahin...!!!

byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Edited by gazal_sameer - 16 years ago

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#326

Wat an UD!!!!!! It was so intense. Just luved it. I cud imagine Raj doing all this n we all knw how gr8 he is wid such intense scenes. It was fabulous dear.

PLS CONTINUE SOON.

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gazal

@gazal_sameer

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Wat an UD!!!!!! It was so intense. Just luved it. I cud imagine Raj doing all this n we all knw how gr8 he is wid such intense scenes. It was fabulous dear.

PLS CONTINUE SOON.

i m glad that u liked it

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gazal

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Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

Oh god Alekh!!! Why?!!!

these ppl are dealing with terrorists
& mafia...sumone had to die!!!

anyway...
ab bas badle ki ghadi nazdeek aa rahi hai..

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gazal

@gazal_sameer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#329

as naina cried in his arms...
shattered...broken....
and raj held on to her....

two cars had stopped outside the mansion...

"ahem-ahem...
dulha-dulhan ka romance khatam
ho gaya to thodi attention apne
so-called parents ko bhi dede!"

raj's mom stood at the door ...grinning...

raj & naina froze in each other's arms...
both had completely forgotten
dat their parents were to
arrive any second...

"arrey mrs.shekhawat...
humaari inki life mein koi importance hi kahaan
hai...hum to bas door ke rishtedaar hai...
yeh hai na ek doosre ke liye.."

naina's mom taunted...

"arrey aunty..aap log andar to chalo..."
huda was carrying some bags...
"dono par baad mein chillaana..."

"raj..naina...wat's wrong guys??"
abhimanyu was the first one to
notice that they hadn't left each other's
side even to meet their parents...

raj closed his eyes for a minute....
then opened them...
wiping away her tears...he stood up..

"raj!!...kya hua yaar?"
huda dropped the suitcase mid-way
and rushed to his side....

"beta ..hum to mazaak...
kuch aur baat hai na...?"
naina's father asked...

this was the toughest moment he'd
faced in his life.....

naina ..he knew..was not in her senses...
she would never be able to break the news....

so the herculean task was left to him....
par...

"bol na raj...naina kyon royi
jaa rahi hai?"
raj's father stood frowning...
"have you..had a fight or something?"

how he wished things were so simple...
so uncomplicated....

he shook his head...
"papa...woh...."

he switched on the television again...
and they all saw the news....

"oh my god!...ek aur terrorist attack!
kashmir is so unsafe...but how does that...
koi jaan-pehchaan waala tha kya andar?"

raj's mom asked him....

sighing...
he looked upto
navin's mom...

as soon as the eye-contact was made...

the smile on her face lasted
for 3 seconds...
which was instantly replaced
by a look of horror...

the brain is an amazing computer..
3 seconds..
and she knew her son wasn't coming home...

an unintelligible sound came from her mouth...

at the same time...huda too figured out
the matter...

"god dammit!..tehzeeb...woh mall gayi thi na?"
a look of terror was there on his face...

"tehzeeb bhi unke saath...!"
raj's face paled again..as
he held the chair for support....
and naina gave a cry...

"tazz bhi....kya matlab raj?"
abhimanyu seemed nervous....

"navin...aalekh...they're...
sab khatam ho gaya yaar....
sab..."

he lost control...and began crying...
miserable...

everyone was shattered....

they'd come to celebrate the
wedding of their chidren...
and now..instead...
would be mourning for their dead ones....

destiny had taken away their happiness...

and wen raj looked at naina....
their was just one thing in his mind....

revenge....he'd kill them all....
he promised himself....

feeling a hatred he didn't know he was capable of...

every person who was involved in this....

who'd destroyed their life.....
.....................................................

days turned into nights..
& nights into days....
but the storm continued......

for naina..every day was more of a punishment....

she was depressed...felt isolated...
and cried out very often....
something that pierced his heart...

huda had suggested ..that raj gave her sedatives...
to calm her down..

so that she could sleep a little at night atlest...
but he refused....

"i'm not letting my wife touch drugs again...
main lekar aaoonga usse baahar...
i'll bring her back..."

he assured himself.....

almost everyday...she'd get up
in the middle of the night...screaming..
and would cry uncontrollably....

and raj would take her in his arms...

hold her..
comfort her...
whisper words of love in her ear...
until she dozed off on his chest...

some other day...he'd find her walking alone
in the middle of the night...expressionless...

and his vow of avenging the death of his
best friend would strengthen...

............................
3 weeks later.....
...........................
kabhi Khushboo, kabhi jhoNkaa,
kabhi havaa saa lage..

judaa hokar bhi tu mujhse
juDaa-juDaa saa lage ....

koi dastak, koi aahaT,
koi aavaaz nahin...
tu dabe paaNv KhyaaloN
mein chalaa aataa hai...

baarhaa aisaa bhi
mahsoos huaa hai mujhko..
aake chupchaap tu pahloo
mein baiTh jaataa hai..

tu kahin aaj bhi mujh mein
zindaa-zindaa saa lage...
judaa hokar bhi tu mujhse
juDaa-juDaa saa lage...

naina stood outside....
calm...letting the chill seep
through her..slap her....

her mind was blank...
but atleast she had got
a hold on herself....

knowing that her misery would
make others uncomfortable...

she learnt the art of bottling her
feelings in her heart...

after having searched for her everywhere...
raj came out...
and felt relieved seeing her there....

"nia...khaana.."
he held out a plate for her....

"bhookh nahi hai raj..."

"how do you plan to survive
without food naina?"
his expression softened...

"thodi der akela chod do mujhe raj...
please.."

"aur kitni der naina...1 ghanta..1 din..1 hafta...
there's a limit to everything...
baahar niklo apne depression se...
zinda rehna hai tumhe..
you have to fight!"

"kis ke liye raj?"

"mere liye!!...khud ke liye...
navin aur tehzeeb ke liye naina....

kabhi socha hai..navin tumhe is haalat
mein dekhta to us par kya beet ti?"

"mera bhaai tha woh raj!.."
tears dropped again..as her wounds bled again..
"bhoolna aasaan hai kya?"
she accused him...

he kept the plate aside...
held her shoulders..

glad that she was finally making an
intelligent conversation...

"tumhaara bhaai tha woh....
par mera...mera bhaai..dost...
saala..roomie..bahut kuch tha jaan!

i have spent more years of my life with him
than you have....24x7 we've been together...

missions mein..border par...fighting..
bleeding together....laughing ..crying...
mere saath uski rooh judi hui hai naina...

and death is too trivial to separate him from me...

main jaanta hoon..vishwaas hai mujhe...
yahin hai woh..humaare paas..humaare saath...

bas..farak itna hai..ki hum usse dekh-sun nahi sakte...
aur jahaan tak main apne dost ko jaanta hoon...
right now..he wants you to eat.."

bas yahi sochkar raatoN ko,
main nahin sotaa...
neend aayee to teraa
Khvaab chalaa aayegaa..

phir subah jab khulengi aaNkhen meri.....
tu bhi subah ko sitaare
saa chalaa jaayegaa...

aa kar ab teraa jaanaa
buraa-buraa saa lage...
judaa hokar bhi tu mujhse
juDaa-juDaa saa lage...
kabhi Khushboo, kabhi jhoNkaa,
kabhi havaa saa lage...

he held the plate in front of her...
a bite of roti in his hand....
urging her to eat....

she did....

ate food from his hand..
and he caressed her cheek....
hugging her thereafter....

"badla lenge hum naina...
we'll..we'll kill the bas***ds...
ruin their plans..."

she nodded....

"aur mujhe pata hai..
ki shuruaat kahaan se hogi..."
she had a fire in her eyes....

her determination was back....
so was her self-confidence....

main kabir ko nahi chodoongi...
even if i have to kill myself
in the process....
.............................

inside..
she was making a phone call...

"agent naina here sir!"
her voice shook a bit...

"naina!..i'm so sorry!...
maine..maine suna...yudi told me
about your brother...."

samir..her boss expressed his condolences....

she closed her eyes...
not wanting any sympathy
from strangers....

"i need some help sir...
research work hai...
fujairah mein..UAB ...
mail me a list of casinos..
bars...five-star hotels....
abhi..."

"kyon naina?..why?"

"please sir...immediately..."
she didn't trust anyone anymore...

"theek hai...half-an-hour.."
............................

an hour later..she was checking her mail....
and was engrossed in details...

after about two days of permutation ,combinations...
several international phonecalls....
she hit jackpot!!

"naina singh ahluwalia...interpol.."

"hold on ma'am..
i'll transfer your call..."

she was making a call to her indian partners
in Dubai...

"i know where the don is..."

"what?!..u mean mafia?"

"yes...i have a list of 5 places in fujairah...

within an hour..in sab jagaah par raids
karwaao...he's bound to be there!...
i want to be kept posted..."

"oh man!...naina..do you realise...
wat it means...agar yeh baat sach nikli...
we'll be changing the face of the world....!"

there was an inherent excitement
in the man's voice

"it's true...source..pakaa hai...
hurry up.."

source...aalekh...how she hated him!

..............................

..............................
a day later...
naina singh ahluwalia received a phone call....

"you did it!!...
congratulations naina!...

we have the mafia dancing on our fingers!
don...SALIM MALIK..stands arrested..."

not even a smile touched her lips...

"yeh to bas shuruaat hai ...
now..deport him to india..."

"par..uske liye ministry ki permission.."

"uski chinta mat karo...
i'll see to that..
full security ke andar..
i want the man here....
i'll see him hanging in front of my own eyes....!"

revenge screamed from her body....

raj meanwhile had other plans....

nahi..he didn't deserve to be hanged...

that was too simple a death...

main apne dost ke kaatil ko
itni aasaan maut nahi doonga...

i'll execute them all...
but..in style!

there was a gleam in his eyes!

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#330

pehli baat....
raj naina didn't know that tazz was with navin &
aalekh..aalekh ne letter mein sirf navin mention kara tha...
for he didn't know dat last moment par tazz bhi saath chalne
ke liye aa jaayegi...isilye woh dono aur bhi shock hue..
wen dey realised dat dey'd lost even tazz

doosri baat...
as the news reporter said...
andar haalat itni kharaab thi..
ki dead bodies ka bhi scope nahi hai...

this fact is even more depressing for the family..
coz they didn't even get to see their son's body....

teesri baat...
aalekh ne navin ko isliye maara..
coz he had to save naina...
he was disoriented..
sahi-galat ki samajh woh kho chuka tha!
nia ko bachaane ke liye.he killed dem...
but....he didn't know ki kabir double-cross karne waala tha!

lastly....

thanks for ur lovely comments...
i hope i've cleared all ur doubts satisfactorily!
byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Edited by gazal_sameer - 16 years ago

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