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Posted: 16 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: sea_nyx
NAHINNNNNNNNNN!!!!!

lol.....but really gazal, how COULD you? mere Alekh ko traitor bana diya? aur koi nahin mila tha kya? I mean ALEKH?!!!! I never thought you would do this yaar....no, plz,plz, plzzzz do something, plzzzzzzz!!!!!

its not my decission

its dipika,s

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#292

"phir se pyaar jaag gaya kya
aalekh???????"

and a tear fell down his eye....

"pyaar ......
woh toh kabhi mara hi nahi tha...
i love her..i love naina..
aur tu yeh baat
acche se jaanta hai aslam"

"dekh dost...
yeh raasta tune khud chuna tha...
yeh jaante hue ki ek baar is raaste par
chal pada..
to kabhi peeche mud kar nahi dekh paayega....
to ab apne hosh sambhaal..
aur mission ko uske ant tak pahuncha..."

"nahi pahuncha sakta!!...
nahi hai mere bas ki baat...
uski khushi ko tabaah karke main
zinda nahi reh paaoonga aslam..."

"aur agar tune aisa nahi kiya..
to kabir tujhe aur usse..waise bhi maar dega...
soch le..."

he was a bit cynical...
"kabir ko abhi yeh baat nahi pata
ki uski maashooka se tu bhi...
uska gussa saatve aasmaan par hoga aalekh...
aur waise bhi...plan to tera hi tha na..
tune hi jail mein...."

"haalat badal gaye hain!...
main ...main raj ko ...
woh uska husband hai..
aaj unki shaadi hui hai...
isse pehle to main usse maarne
ke liye tayyar hi tha na.."

"mujhe samajh nahi aaya aalekh..tune
kyon sign kiya shaadi ke paper par...?"

aalekh closed his eyes..
remembering the scene dat
had met his eyes in the court....

naina..dressed in a saree..

haathon mein kangan..

maang mein sindoor...

uski aankhon se uski
khushi jhalak rahi thi...

she was blushing...
and wen she'd seen raj
approaching..her eyes had lit up....

it had been the first time wen
aalekh genuinely realised..
dat he'd been wrong...

agar raj marr bhi gaya hota..
tabhi naina meri kabhi nahi hoti....never!

"woh dono papers sign kar chuke the..
main nahi sign karta..to
koi aur kar deta..."

"khair..main woh sab nahi jaanta...
sabki salaamati chaahta hai..
to tujhe mission poora karna hoga...
maarna hoga kisi ko...
raj nahi..to uske bhaai ko maar..."

"bakwaas mat kar abdul!
navin ne humaara kya bigaada hai...??"

"chaahta kya hai?"
the man sounded arrogant..business-like...

"kabir bhaai ko kya boloon?
jawaab dene se pehle..
itna yaad rakhna..
ki tu nahi maarega..
to kabir koi aur raasta dhoond lega..

aur waise bhi..
abhi tak bhaai ko yeh nahi maaloom...
ki naina par jo bhi attacks hue..
delhi mein...
woh teri wajaah se fail hue...

main apne usoolon
ko aur nahi tod sakta tere liye...

naina ki jaan pyaari hai..
yaan nahi...tujhe par chodta hoon...sochle..
aur bata dena..."

the man slammed the phone down....

aalekh found hiself standing at the crossroads
of his life...

greed for power...it destroys everything...

par aalekh jaanta tha...dat it wasn't only this..
that had pushed him into terrorism...

it had been something worse.....
it was blackmail....sheer blackmail!

jis insaan se main sabse zyaada
pyaar karta hoon...jisse maine har samay
maut ke mooh se bachaane ki koshish kari...
aaj uske saath...

he knew wat he'd done for her....

it was him..
who'd warned the truck driver initially
to just hit her mildly....

but wen he hadn't..alekh had been
caught in a fit of rage and shot him....

main...main jaanta tha..
abhimanyu ussi raaste se jaayega...
aur tumhe bachhayega...

woh to thapar ne mujhe tumhaare
baare mein us raat bata diya..
warna main jaan hi nahi paata...
ki tum...meri naina...

aalekh remembered shooting thaapar..
wen he'd confessed that
he'd tried to rape her...

main tha naina...

maine bheja tha un gundon ko..
jab tum pooja se mil kar aa rahi thi....

par unhe strict instructions thi.
ki woh tumhe sirf daraaye....

yudi naa bhi aata..to tumhe kuch nahi hona tha....

jab mujhe pata chala..
ki kabir bhaai ne
tumhaare peeche assassin...
that the house was bugged...

i was the one who convinced him to
kill raj instead of you...
at the restaurant...

raj ne tumhe nahi bachaaya tha nia...

maine bachaaya tha..
phir bhi tum mujhse nahi raj se pyaar....

i hate him.....
hate him!!!

mera plan tha...
usse boat-house mein maarne ka...
ghut-ghut kar..tadpa-tadpa kar...

kaisa dost hai woh...
mera pyaar mujhse...

par tum wahaan pahunch gayi....

aur saara plan
bigad gaya...
goli tumhe lag gayi...
main jaanta hoon us din mere dil par kya beeti....

bas ek baar..ek baar main fail ho gaya...
kashmir mein...

mujhe laga mera plan successful raha..
aur darr ne tumhe waapis london bhej diya..
par nahin...tum..yahan chali aayi...

mujhe yeh baat ka koi andaaza nahi tha...
ki in logon ne tumhe..
mere peeche se maarne ki koshish...

i'm sorry ...
ek galti to dushman ko bhi maaf hoti hai..
par main..main to tumhaara dost hoon na...
aur dosti ka farz main nibhaaoonga...

tumhaari jaan bachaane ka mere paas
shaayad yahi raasta hai...
mujhe mission ko uske ant tak le jaana hoga...

he picked up the phone....
"kal...kal kaam ho jaayega.."

he closed his eyes...
tumhe dukh de kar main kaise jiyoonga naina...

his eyes had tears.....
as he began writing a long letter to someone..
..........................................

they'd arrived home after the marriage
ceremony...all cheery and laughin...

teasing the newly-wed couple...

the first thing dat naina had done was to shift
into the master bedroom with her husband..
& it had given them a feeling of never-ending bliss...

kaka havin heard about the ceremony..

and had quickly decorated the room with flowers..
a room dat opened into a massive garden...
divided into 4 parts by walls...

since the cottage was more or less circular in shape...

each room could be said to have a private garden..
obviously meant for privacy!!

they were all sitting at the dining table...
having dinner....

naina had changed into a sexy black saree..
a bit transparent...with a single tied knot
holding her blouse at the otherwise
bare-back...
(like the one ash wore in sholon-si!!!)

raj couldn't take his eyes off her...
& neither could aalekh....

"mom-dad..uncle aunty..
dono kal pahunch jaayega..
early moring ki flight hai..."
navin told everyone...

raj,naina stole a glance at each other..

sitting together..holding hands beneath the
table....

"unka..reaction kaisa tha bhaai?"

"wat do you expect?"

"must..have been...shocked!"
raj grinned...

"dat's the understatement of the year my friend!!!

shock is a mild word for wat they felt....
don't blame me if you're murdered tomorrow!!"
navin smiled...

"shit bhaai!..you're scarin me!"

"maine kaha tha shaadi karne ko..!"

"par...we ..loved each other..."
naina was bit upset...

as aalekh's heart clenched...

"let me alter my statement sis...

'maine kaha tha bina bataaye shaadi karne ke liye'!!
no body would have stopped u guys...
infact..sab khush hi hote...
specialy our families..
i don't understand...
aisi kya emergency aa gay thi??"
navin was shaking his head...

naina blushed at his remark...
well aware..dat jo kuch kal raat hua
..dat really was an EMERGENCY!!...

raj grinned..
and finally chuckled wen naina glared at
him...

it took nanoo a second to comprehend
their reaction....

"alright!!..don't answer dat question!
i got it!....u guys are...."

"navin..unhe kuch bolne se pehle
zaraa apne girebaan mein jhaank lena.."
tehzeeb reminded him..
as they all burst out laughin..

seeing navin blush...
who instantly decided to shut up!!!

.........................................

they were pushed into their room...

"enjoy the night guys!!..
kal to waise bhi jhaad khaane waale ho!
navin aur mere se pehle jo baazi maar li..
harzaana to dena hi padega!!"
tehzeeb winked and left them alone....

"i've been waitin to do this
bahut der se..."
raj had a naughty look in his eyes..

"kya?"

she asked..feigning ignorance..

he pulled her into him...
& took her lips in his mouth...
kissing her passionately....

they knew how their night would turn-up...

but wat they weren't aware of...

was the darkness dat their life would succumb to
the following morning....

[DEATH...that would be their wedding gift!!

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#293

ALRIGHT GUYS..
DAT'S IT!!!

i hope sincerely dat it's not gettin borin...
i'm about to end the fic real sooooooooooon!!!!

hopin to read ur replies

gtg...luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuv
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Edited by gazal_sameer - 16 years ago

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sea_nyx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#294

poor alekh, I know his sufferings are a result of his greed for power but still I can't help sympathising with him....I mean, this is Alekh we're talking about... and when you said "death would be their wedding gift" I got really scared yaar, I hope nothing happens to RN. But fantastic update and thankz soo much for the pm

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sanjana25

@sanjana25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#295

it was really gud plz dont kill raj plz

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#296

Nice part. Luved the convo btwn Raj, Naina n Navin. But end is scary yaar. Who is gonna die??

PLS CONTINUE SOON.

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

poor alekh, I know his sufferings are a result of his greed for power but still I can't help sympathising with him....I mean, this is Alekh we're talking about... and when you said "death would be their wedding gift" I got really scared yaar, I hope nothing happens to RN. But fantastic update and thankz soo much for the pm

aap ki sympathy aur braheygi

u r most welcome

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#298

Originally posted by: sanjana25
it was really gud plz dont kill raj plz

dont worry

RN will be safe

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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#299

"it's been such a long time since
i stepped into that garden...
kitni chotti thi na jab last
time yahaan aayi thi..."

raj was holding her waist..

resting his head on her shoulder....
rubbing his thumb round her waist

as naina gazed out into the darkness...

this was one room that had been locked all
the time that naina had been in kashmir...

"raj...baahar chalein?"
she eyed him eagerly....
a child-like excitement in her eyes....

he smiled...
"tum chalo...main aata hoon..."

she nodded & stepped out....

the moment she stepped out..
the cold air hit her face...
but she
relished the feel...

gazing around...
she was surprised to see..

that inspite of the fact that it
had stopped snowing in the morning...

the entire garden was a bed of white....

the wind made her saree
cling to her as she shivered...

feeling her nose & ears becoming cooler by
the second....

a sudden spark of mischief urged her
forward....

bending down...
she began wat she'd been
longing to do for a while...

build a snow-man!!!

once she started..
she got lost
in the activity...
completely engrossed...

forgetting dat it was her wedding night..
and there were better things to be done!!!

she made the eyes..nose ,mouth
and a fat belly...
relived her childhood...

it was then that she sensed that she was
no longer alone in the garden...

& instantly knew who was behind her....

but before she could face him...
she heard him chuckle...

"nia!!...tum...bacchi ho bilkul jaan!!
you're building a snow-man...

itni thand mein...in that..that..
well...sexy saree..."
he couldn't stop himself from laughin....

she bent down again..

crushing a handful of snow into a ball-shape...
facing him finally...

"stop laughing !!..."
wen he didn't...
she aimed the ball right at his face....

it was direct hit...much to her delight..

as she saw the snow melting..
trickling down his face...

"hanso..aur hanso..."

"yeh...tumne..theek..nahi..kiya...biwi!"

retaliation gleamed in his eyes..
as he picked up some snow...

his aim proved way better than hers..
and hit right at her nose!!

it had been years since they'd done this..
throwing snow-balls at each other...

& laughing lightly with happiness....
their fight became intense...

since his aim proved way better
dan hers...
she found herself
sprayed with snow...
her hair gleaming brightly....

after a while..she screamed..

"bas!!!..enough!...you win!"
she gasped...
smiling..walking over to him....
falling against him..exhausted...

he looked at her with admiring eyes...
as she sat down on the snow...
breathing heavily....

"utho naina..."

she shook her head...

"you'll freeze your butt!!!"
he frowned...
holding out his hand to her...

a gleam of devilment entered her eyes..
deepening as she took his hand....

& instead of allowing him to pull
her up..
she pulled him off-balance!!!

& he landed face-down in
the snow at her side!

THE CAPRICE OF WOMANHOOD!
he wondered wen men would realise that
women were smart as hell!

naina meanwhile had jumped to her feet..
laughing her head-off

"how the mighty have fallen!!!"

he became still..eyes narrowing...
mouth curving into a smile...

a smile dat knew was dangerous...
"jaan...the fight is far from over!"

she felt a sudden thrill of
excitement surge through her...

a sudden anticipation...

but she had to show him that she wasn't scared...
bending down...

she took some snow in her hand..
& put it down the back of his neck....

running off before he could catch her...

"Nia!!...you're one provoking woman!!"

he stood up..brushing himself..
his movements unhurried as
he followed her thru the snow...

gaining on her all the time...

"mujhse bachke jaaogi kahaan...?
i'm your bad evil husband...
whose about to torture you!"

she knew it was true..
he would torture her...
torture her with undying passion....

"raj..ek game hi to thi bas..."

she was almost pleading...
as she bumped to a wall....

"pata hai..."

his eyes dark with satisfaction...
he came towards her...
a look of determination on his face...

"phir mujhe aisa kyon lag raha hai..
that..dat you've..stopped playing..."
she asked..nervous...

he moved really slowly..
a step at a time..

as her heart lurched...

"i'm still playing jaan...
it's just dat i've changed the rules a little"

"raj..i was..just joking.."

his grin deepened at her nervousness....

as she began moving away...
running again..
and his leisurely strides..gained on
her all the time..

she was started to feel weary...
and he decided it was time ........

he plunged for her...

catching her by her waist..
which had gone cold....

& they both fell down..
the snow absorbing the shock...

her struggles to free herself
from beneath him..
were ineffective against his superior strength...

they lay still...
her arms held captive above her head...
her breasts rising and falling as she breathed..
exhausted..
"a...sorry bolne se koi..farak padega?"
she asked..hopefully...

"ho sakta hai.."

"den i'm sorry.."

"but..it doesn't help the fact..
that i have icy cold snow dripping
down my back!"

her eyes widened...

"i'm wearing a backless blouse..
& lying on the snow!!
aur abhi to tumne kaha that if i apologised..."

"den it might help!..it didn't!"

he laughed..
as his hand came down on her bottom...
the saree not helping....
and lightly pinched it...

"ouch!!"..
she glared at him...
"satisfied?!!!"

"it didn't really hurt..i can bet!"

"accha !..tell dat to my butt!"
she pushed him...
rubbing the pained part of her anatomy!

"i'd love to..."
he winked....

colour darkened her cheeks...
as she realised the
suggestion he was making....
"raj...."

"you're beautiful nia.."
he claimed her lips in passion...
& they infused warm life into her body....

her arms going up about his neck..
as he cradled her against his chest..

both forgetting the surroundings...
the coldness of the snow they were sitting in..

his hands captured her chin...

as his lips moved across and into hers with
slow eroticism...

his tongue probing the warm
softness beneath...

as his thighs..throbbing against her..
cried out for an even deeper possession.....

her body arched up into his..
as he moved to lie across her...

"we pick the damndest places for this!!"

he muttered before his mouth claimed
hers again....
fiercer this time....drawing her into him...

he fumbled with the knot of her blouse...
as his warm hands caressing her spine..
sent a shiver down her....

he felt it too...and grinned....

"you love it wen i touch you..
don't you?"

she blushed...
"you know i do...
pochne waali baat thi?"

" haan...because i want to
make love to you right now...
and for that ...i need a bed!"

he got up..scooped her in his arms..
and carried her to the bed...

her hands were tangled in his hair..

as she allowed him to lead her into
the sensual night....

to fulfil
the ritual of love-making...

as he placed her there..
stripping out of his shirt......

he shuddered..

unable to hide his desire for her...

something that the longing in
naina's eyes reflected too...

he lied down ...
on top of her...

his lips teasing her neck...

tickling her...as she felt his back...

slowly..

deliberately..

his thumbs slid down the
straps of her blouse...

as he kissed every part of her....

the pallu of her saree had long
been removed..

and raj found himself
covered with it...

between the pallu and her blouse...

once again..
fumbling with the knot at the back...

finally managing it open...

brushing it aside....

and hiding his face in the
trough between her breasts...
..

she clutched his arm..

her hair going wild....
as she felt her veins throb with need...

and she shivered....
trembled with pleasure at
her husband's touch...

all control began to wither-away...

as they helped each other
out of their clothes.....

and her swelling breasts were pressed to the
rock-hard planes of his chest...

she molded herself into him..

as his hands caressed her hips...
rubbing the area he'd hurt...

they both felt a fierce exultation
rising within them..
a madness urging them to greater fury.....

her nails trailed the column of his neck...
as he devoured her breasts...

she gasped and held him...

her skin glowing with an internal heat...

he sought to guide his entry into her...

their breathing echoed...

a pure sensation...an incredible..
boundless ecstacy shuddered across her...

as he forged himself into her
with the powerful bonds of passion...

dazed..

overwhelmed...

exhausted...

4 hours later...

they lay in each other's arms...
as he gently stroked her curves...

her body...
and leaned to kiss her trembling eyelids....

both..were completely ravished....
as the sunrays hit the room...

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gazal

@gazal_sameer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#300

that's all folks!!

kaafi romance ho gaya...
ab thoda action ki baari hai...!

hope you enjoyed it...!!!!
& hope it was hot enough!!!

looooooooooooooove
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Edited by gazal_sameer - 16 years ago