WhenLoveCalled pg112 discontinuation note - Page 6

Originally posted by: tekhum

😉 😉 😉 well, very good again , aur ha mere hisab se to tumhari romantic baato me to mastari he. 😉 😉 😉

really? ab achanak fasila kese badal diya?

😉 😉 😉 yeh to waqt waqt ki baat he 😉 😉 😉
😉 😉 right now u r in very much romantic mood 😉 😉
😉 tumhare soumya aur pari ke pyaar me kuch khas hi baat he 😉

Part twenty eight

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At the roller skating ring, Saumya and Sujal were sat with their gang (Rohit, Adi, Akshat and Piyush). That was their usual hang out in the early collge days. They didn't go there to skate in particular, but went to create mischief.😈 What they would do is that whilst sitting they would throw paper balls, nuts, paper airplanes, etc on the skaters so then they would get distracted and fall down.😆 That would create entertainment for them.

That day the guys were sitting as usual and Saumya was eating hazelnuts. A mischievous glint appeared in his eyes when he rolled a paper into a pipe and spat out nuts on passing skaters. One or two turned around to see what hit them which made them collide into each other. All the guys laughed out loud.🤣 This created a huge havoc as the other skaters bumped on the fallen ones 😆 who were trying to get up, but got thrown down again. The guys couldn't control their laughter.🤣 🤣 🤣

Saumya's eyes noticed something new that day. From the other side a girl wearing a pink kurta over blue jeans, long hair, stepped into the ring and was actually helping out those who had fallen. She appeared innocent to him and there was something in her smile which sent him into a daze. 😍

Adi: yeh dekh, social workers peda hogaye.

They all laughed at that girl.😆 😆 😆 😆

Saumya: kya larki hai yaar! 😉

Akshat: rehne de. tsk. Tere type kee nahi hai.

Saumya: tu jaanta hai ise?

Akshat: me kaha jaanta hu

Saumya: to phir tujhe kyu jalan horahee hai. Dekh kese sab ko sahara de rahee hai. 😍 Agar wo haath is badan ko chulena to maza aajaeh.

Sujal: tu nahi sudrega. Abhe saale, larkiyo ko yu patana kab chorega?

Saumya: (to himself) yeh pat jaaye to kisee kee zaroorat hee na pare.

Sujal: oska haath tujhe zaroor chuhega, lekin tere haatho ko nahi, tere gaalo ko.😃 😆

All of them laughed except Saumya

Saumya: chal lagi shart 5, 5, 100 kee?

Sujal: laggayee

Saumya: dus minute me ose apnee baaho me daal daloonga me.😛 😉

Piyush: are jaa, yeh larki chehre se itnee shareef lagtee hai ke wo tujhe ghaas bhi nahi degi.

Rohit: rehne de Piyush. Abhi dus minute me faisla hojaega. Chal bait ke tamasha dekhte hai.😊

Saumya: (puts on his roller skates and gets up) chal Saumya, dekha de apna jalwa! 👏 👏

He stepped on the ring and held the railing for support. Then he took baby steps away from the railing, as if he was a beginner.😆 In reality he was an excellent skater because Sujal and he use to come there since childhood, but that day was a different story. 😈'His story'.he tried skating, but many times stumbled. At one time he lost balance and nearly fell on his back but he grabbed the railing. His friends were laughing 😆 😆 😆at his acting. Again he attempted to skate forward but he lost balance and this time he fell, 'THAPPAK!'

The girl: 😊 laaye, haath dijye.

Saumya was pleased to see that the girl in the end did come to save him. Her fair, slender hand was put out for him as if it only belonged to him. He took it and once stood up, he still pretended to stumble.

The girl: aaraamse. 😕 Aapko skating nahi aatee to phir akele kyu aaye?

Saumya: (lost in her voice. 😍 He felt it was so cute of her to ask that question) wo me…oooh…(he pretended to loose balance) 😆

The girl caught hold of his hand. He smirked and his friends were amazed.

The girl: sambhalkar!

Saumya: kya karoon wo pehlee…wooa, baar hai na isilye…darasal me yaha pe aaya apnee marzee se nahi. Wo dekhrahee hai on larko ko waha (points towards his friends) onho ne mujhe zabardasti bheja hai.

Rohit: 😕 yeh Saumya, hamaree taraf ishara kyu karaha hai?

Sujal: zaroor koi khichree paka raha hai.

The girl: aise larko ko to saare aam peetna chaheeye 😡 logo pe hasna or mazaak uraana koi unse seekhe. Beechare logo ko kitnee takleef hoti hai.

Saumya was some what impressed by her thought. She was so innocent and decent that he was almost feeling ashamed of his actions.

The girl: chalye me aapko sikha tee hu.

They both held hands and she instructed him to slowly glide one leg after the other at a steady pace. He was just lost into her, 😍 😍 that everything happened automatically. He didn't know when he was skating away like a pro, with her round and round and when he let go of her hand. Due to his gaze only on her, he didn't see another skater coming in the wrong direction and knocking him over. It made him loose his balance and as he fell on the floor he grabbed onto the girl's hand, which made her topple over him. Now they both lied on the floor with Saumya underneath the girl. They starred at each other's eyes. They were so close that they could smell each others scent. Saumya's hands automatically wrapped around her back, pulling her into an embrace. 🤗

His friends got up with shock 😲 and went near the railing to see clearly. They found it unbelievable.

The girl: 😳chalye, chore ye mujhe

Saumya: (came out of his trance) I'm sorry, wo pair…

They both tried getting up, but because of their skates, they kept on slipping.😆 😆 First the girl managed to get up and whilst she was doing that, Saumya attempted to hold her hand but by mistake the edge of her kurta came in his hand and he pulled it. It ripped slightly from the side which exposed part of her waist.

She was shocked!😲 He was shocked!😲 Finally he did manage to get up on his feet and before he could utter a word, he held his cheek in pain.

😡She just gave him a big blow on his face.

He was shocked!😲 His friends were shocked!😲

end of part, im glad u all are appreciating it.

Originally posted by: tekhum

😃 😃 😃 good one 😃 😃 😃
but me yeh zarur kahunga ki yeh part dusre part ki tarah itna accha nahi tha.
dont mind ha. this is just wht i thought.
👏

just because there is no mushy romance in it? oh ur bad 😃 😃

Originally posted by: arwa72

just because there is no mushy romance in it? oh ur bad 😃 😃

😉😉😉 "YAH U CAN SAY LIKE THT"😉😉😉

Part twenty nine

The girl: 😡 yeh thappar isliye tha, ke dubara kisee larki ko cherne se pehle do baar soch lijyega

She skated away leaving a dazed Saumya. He didn't know how to react.

His friends were laughing 😆 because they were right and he was wrong. They went over to him, but were amazed to see him still standing there with his hand on his cheek.

Sujal: abhe eh, 😛 kya aise bandaro kee tarha khara hai? Chalee gayee wo, or tujhe haseen tohfa bhi degayee.

Rohit: yaar iskee to hawa tight hogayee 😃

All laughed.😆😆😆

Saumya: kya huwa yeh yaar? 😲 Soche, samjhe bina, thappar maar diya osne.

Adi: agar tu oske kapre pharega, to kya wo teree aarti utaregee?

Saumya: jaan bujhke thoree kiya tha. Yeh aaj kal kee larkiya bhi na, 😡 I tell you. Pehle to kitnee free hotee hai, per jab hum free hone jaate hai to ek dumse aadarsh waani ban jaatee hai.

Sujal: maine tujhse kaha tha, ke ek din yeh hoga. Ab yeh sab chore or paise nikaal.

Saumya: paise?

Sujal: ha paise. Shart ke mutabik tu haar gaya hai, to yeh nautak chore or paise nikaal.

Saumya: are wah! Shart ose gale lagane kee thee, jo mene kiya to…

Piyush: or phir oska haseen tappar bhi khaaya 😆

All of them laughed again, 🤣 except Saumya. 😒

Sujal: saala, beimaan ka beimaan hee rahega. Is baar nahi chorunga. Chal paise nikaal. (he forcefully took his wallet and removed 500 rs out of it).

Meanwhile at the opposite side of the ring…

The girl: chal paise nikaal

Ishana: maan gaye yaar tujhe Pari. 👏 Kya zore ka thappar maara hai ose

All three girls laughed. The girl was none other than Pari who had been noticing how those guys were creating mischief. She also decided to do something mischievous, 😈 so she made a bet that she would teach those guys a lesson. At first when she saw Saumya, her heart raced because there was an instant liking towards him. ☺️ The way he was pretending not to skate properly, was cute. But when he took her in his arms, she got lost, 😍 as everything changed. She felt the world stopping in its tracks, but when he ripped her kurta, she came back to reality and automatically her hand reached for his cheek. She was enraged 😡 for those few moments but now whilst counting her money, she was laughing at it.😆😆

Khushi: dekh, beechaare ka chehra kese bandaro kee tarha hogaya hai.😃

Ishana: phir bhi, kitna cuuute lagta hai.😳😊

Pari: (couldn't help to steal a glance at how Saumya was struggling with his teasing friends. He did look cute, which made her want to tease him more.) Chal, dhuwa uraate hai. 😉

All three got off from the bench and stepped into the ring. Then as they made their way to the boys, they began clapping and singing

Beedi chalayi leh…
Jigar se piya– Pari went near Saumya and mockingly seduced him.
Jigar maa badi aag hai – they began dancing.

Then all three just gave each other high fives,👏 laughed 😆😆at the boys and walked off.
Pari fanned herself with the money before leaving as if to show off her actions.

Saumya: ab to ise me zaroor pataoonga. Saumya Parashar se punga.

Rohit: dekh, tu pehle he ek thappar kha chukka hai. Ap hum main or himmat nahi hai tujhe or peethe dekhne kee 😛

Saumya: hahaha. Tu dekhna is thappar ka badla to main zaroor loonga. Kya kehta hai Sujal, lagjaye 1000 rs kee shart?

Sujal: abhe saale, yeh 500 rs tu denahee raha tha, or ab tu 1000 kee baat karaha hai?

Saumya: to dene kee koun baat karaha hai.😛 Me to lenee kee baat karaha hu. Is larki ko sabaq to seekhana hoga. 😳 Saumya Parashar se koi bhi nahi bacha.

Sujal: tu nahi sudrega. Chal, lagalee shart.

Saumya: so its done. 2 hafto me Valentine's day hai, or os din yeh larki mere peeche deewaanee hojaehgee. 😉😉

Piyush: chalo ab ek or tamasha. Abhi to sirf thappar khaya hai, 😆 agli baar kahee tera kaam tamaam hogaya to hum beecharo ka kya hoga (mocking him) 😃

Saumya: kaam tamaam to uska hone waala hai. Ghalat darwaaze pe dastak dee hai osne. Ab to bahaar jaane ka raasta nahi milega ose (evil grin)

end of part.