WhenLoveCalled pg112 discontinuation note - Page 8

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part thirty four

On Thursday night Saumya had arranged a private dinner for him, Pari and his friends. 🥳 Pari came with Ishana and Khushi and introduced them to all of Saumya's friends whilst Saumya also did the same. All of them sat down together and exchanged friendly chats, laughs, 😆 and funny moments 😳 of each other. Whenever Saumya's friends pulled his leg, he felt annoyed 😒 and like warned them, not to do so in front of Pari, but they carried on.😃😆

Finally after the food had finished, everyone decided to go their sepearte ways for the rest of the evening. Adi and Rohit made their move and asked Ishana and Khushi to join them. 👏 They were most delighted to do so. Piyush took his leave as his fiance was coming that day. Then Sujal decided to leave the two love birds alone, but as he got up to leave, he was held back by Saumya.

Saumya:
Pari, ek khaas baat hai jo me tumhai batana chahta hu (held Sujal's hand) yeh jo dekh rahee ho na ise, yeh meree zindagee ka sabse azeem hissa hai. Yeh mera sab kuch hai, bhai, dost, humraaz, humdard. Bus yehi samajh lo ke iske bina me adhura hu. Ab tumbhi meree zindagee ka ek azeem hissa bane jaarahee ho, to tumhare liye yeh rishte ko pehchaana bohat zaroori hai.

Sujal: chal Saumya chore na yaar. Ab yeh sab tujhe Pari se hee kehna chaheeye

Pari: nahi Sujal. Me kabhi bhi aap dono kee dosti ke beech, aana nahi chahoongee. Yeh rishta ek anokha hai, jo kabhi nahi toot na chaheeye.

Sujal held both Saumya's and Pari's hand. It was the beginning of a new friendship.👏 Then Pari insisted on taking photos so the night could remain memorable. Sujal did the honours. He took a couple with just two of them and in some he joined them.

Pari: aaj me aapse kuch maangna chahtee hu.

Saumya: are baap re. Abhi, abhi to pyaar ka izhaar kiya hai, or abhi se tumne maango kee list taayaar karli?😛

Pari: (playfully smacked him on his forearm 😵) mazaak mat kijye. Seriously, waada kijye ke jo me maangoongee wo aap mujhe denge

Saumya: (thinks 😍) wo baat pata chal jaye oske baad waada karu to chalega?😉

Pari: 😲 Saumya, please!

Saumya: theek hai baba. Chalo, me waada kar ta hu, tum jo maango gee, wo me doonga. 😊 Ab khush?

Pari: me chahtee hu ke yeh raat hum her saal celebrate kare. Aaj kee taarikh hum dono ke liye ek landmark banjaaye, taake her saal hum apne milan ka celebration kar sake. Waada karte hai aap?

Saumya: (smiled 😃 and held both her hands in his) me waada karta hu. ke yeh taarikh her saal, hum dono hamesha celebrate karenge.

---------------------------END OF FLASHBACK----------------------------------

Saumya and Pari fell asleep in each other's arms, on the lounger.

end of part guys. enjoy it.
Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#72
that was so cute!! i am a silent reader cuz i have no time to comment.. can u change the name on the title everytime u update. plz.. cuz i had no i dea that u updated and i was far behind...

please and thank you!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
👏 👏 👏 grat parts again 👏 👏 👏

😉 😉 kaash har kisi ki love story aapki story ki tarah ho 😉 😉
👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: tekhum

👏 👏 👏 grat parts again 👏 👏 👏

😉 😉 kaash har kisi ki love story aapki story ki tarah ho 😉 😉
👏

anything is possible with a little bit of imagination. yeh sab mere khayaalo kee baate hai

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Posted: 17 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: brainychild92

that was so cute!! i am a silent reader cuz i have no time to comment.. can u change the name on the title everytime u update. plz.. cuz i had no i dea that u updated and i was far behind...

please and thank you!!!

i see so i do have a lot of silent readers. its gud to see that atleast people are reading my story.

i will make sure i change the title in each update so that u can keep up to date. keep enjoying the rest.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: arwa72

anything is possible with a little bit of imagination. yeh sab mere khayaalo kee baate hai

hmmm i have little doubt in tht (anything is possible with a little bit of imagination)

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Posted: 17 years ago
#77
heres another long prt for all f u beautiful people.

Part thirty five

Kashish: kya baat hai Sujal, aaj Saumya kyu nahi aaya?

Sujal was surprised 😲 to see Kashish asking about Saumya

Kashish:
me phone kartee hu ose. Wo therapist bhi aane wala hai.

A faint smile 😊 appeared on Sujal's face. Today Kashish appeared different. Was she actually showing concern for Saumya?

"is number ke saare lines vyast hai"

Kashish:
kamal hai, phone bhi band hai. Me oske ghar phone kartee hu.

Kashish dialled Parashar house. Kripa was still asleep and was really annoyed 😡 with the ringing. She put the pillow over her head to shut out the noise.

Kashish: lagta hai, wo ghar se nikal chukka hai. Pata hai Sujal, me chahtee hu ke Saumya her therapy me ho kyu ke oske under jaadoo hai. 👏 Ose dekh the hee tum improve karte ho.

Sujal thought: 😊lagta hai meree Kashish dheere, dheere laut rahee hai.

At the port

Pari woke up and saw a sleeping Saumya by her side. She was still half asleep. He opened his eyes and smiled. 😃

Saumya: good morning.

Pari: good morning…Saumya. (then all of a sudden she was wide awake) Saumya? (She immediately got up, straightened her saaree and was in full shock.) 😲 Saumya hum yahape hee sogaye? Mene aapse kaha tha ke mujhe sone mat dena. 😡 Per aap bhi so gaye? (glanced at her watch) hi Ramji, 11 baj gaye!

Saumya: (still half asleep) ab agar tum itne lambhe flashback me jaogee, to phir neend to aahee jaehgee na. 😆

Pari: 😡 mere yaha ghabrahat se paseene chute rahe hai, or aapko mazaak suj raha hai. Get up Saumya!

Saumya: (relunctantly got up and tried to calm her down) dekho khamkha me itna pareshaan mat ho. Pata nahi kal kya huwa, me apnee aankhen khulee rakh hee nahi paaya. Aisa lagta tha ke koi zabardasti meree aankhen band karaha hai. Khair, jo huwa so huwa. Ab ghar chalte hai, or dekhte hai ke situation kya hai.

Pari: mujhe to darr lagraha hai. 😒 Agar danima ko pata chalgaya ke me saaree raat aapke saat thi to…

Saumya: agar hum thoree dair or yaha ruke to zaroor pata chaljaehga.

They both hurried off the boat and to Saumya's car. Whilst driving, he sent a quick SMS to Kripa:

"REACH THAAPAR HOUSE ASAP. TIME FOR PLAN B"

Thaapar house

Surekha: 😡 tune use ijazat kese dee? Jaanta hai na ke yeh mangnee or shaadi ke beech ka faasla bara hee nazuk hota hai, or yeh aaj kal kee larke, larkiya to…

Prince: maa, kya tumhe Pari pe bharosa nahi?

Surekha: os bharose se hee to mera vishwaas jura hai. Per phir bhi itnee dair hogayee hai, or puree raat…khair aane do onhe, puree khabar loongee me.

Prince: maa, tum khamakha kyu itna ghussa horahee ho? Dekho, osne mujhse poocha tha, ke kya me Kripa ke saat raat ko jaa saktee hu.

Surekha: tu to hai hee nalayak. 😆 Lekin Rani, tune bhi ose nahi roka?

Rani looked at Prince who gestured to her 'don't say anything' and then at Surekha who was upset. She didn't know what to do, so she stayed silent.

Pari and Saumya reached Thaapar house and stayed at the door. Then, peeped inside to see the situation. They saw Surekha, Rani and Prince in the hall having a discussion. They had a wild guess it was related to them.

Saumya: lagta hai ke head office ke paas complaint pohoch gayee. 😛 Ab appeal karne ke liye apne, apne wakeel chunlo.

Both walked in calmly as if nothing happened. Pari went to Rani and Saumya went to Prince. Before they can say anything Surekha spoke.

Surekha: 😳
yeh kya harkat hai Saumya? Ghar kee izzat kee koi parwa nahi tujhe?

Saumya looked at Prince to come to his rescue. Surekha then turned to Pari, which gave Saumya and Prince a chance to talk.

Prince:
itnee dair kese hogayee tum dono ko. Mene kaha tha na, ke subhe 6 baje tak aajaana.

Saumya: kya batao uncle, aisee aankh lagayee ke abhi subhe 11 baje khulee or…

Surekha: yeh tum dono kya khusur pusur karahai ho? 😒 Jo bhi hai, khul ke kaho. Jawaab de Saumya, itnee dair tak kaha the?

Prince: maa, ab bacche hai, galatee to hojaatee hai…

Surekha: Prince tu beech me mat bole. Dekh Saumya tu ab is ghar ka jamai banne waala hai, or mere liye yeh important hai ke tujhe is ghar kee izzat kee parwa ho. Jawaab de, kya tujhe hai?

Kripa: Dadiji, iska jawaab me detee hu (she walked in from the door and stood next to Saumya) darasal kal raat ko mene hee zid kee thee Pari bhabhi se, ke wo wahi sojaeh. Bohat dair hogayee thee or oskee wajese hee aaj subhe bhi dair hogayee. Phir Saumya bhaiya bhi puree raat office me hee the to phir akele kese aatee.👏 Bhaiya abhi aaye to mene onse kaha ke Pari bhabhi to chore de.

Surekha: tune kaha kyu nahi ke, puree raat tu office me tha?

Prince: maa, tumne is beechare ko moka hee kab diya. Bus Hitler kee tarha, baras paree.😆 😆

Surekha: (pulled Prince's ear) 😵 tujhe to me nahi choroongee.

Prince: maa, 😳 ab baccho ke saamne to mat daato

Surekha: mere liye yahape sab bacche hai. Samjha!

She left and Prince and Saumya breathed a sigh of relief, both Rani and Pari were unhappy with the men.

Pari: 😡 Saumya, yeh kya? Itna bara jhoot kyu bola aapne?

Saumya: madam, 😉 agar yeh nahi kehte na, to aaj adalat hame sazaa – e – maut ka faisla sunatee.

Prince: sahi kehraha hai. Wese to mene kaha tha ise, ke subhe jaldee aajaana, lekin…

Pari: kya, 😲 aapko bhi pata tha ke Saumya ne mujhe bulaya hai?

Prince: (looks sheepishly 😛 as he doesn't know what to say) ha, wo osne kaha tha ke kuch karaha hai. Ab dekho tum bacche abhi enjoy nahi karoge to kab karoge?

Pari: papa, pehlee baar mene aap dono se jhooth bola or aap mujhe shai dete rahe. 😔 Yeh theek nahi huwa.

Saumya: dekho Pari, agar uncle nahi hote to phir hum wo pal saat me kese beetate? Or tum aaeeh to apnee marzee se na?

Pari: sawaal yeh nahi hai Saumya. Sawaal sach or jhoot ka hai, or kal maine ma or papa se jhooth bola, or aaj danima se. ab pata nahi phir kitne jhoot boloongee. Yeh sab aapkee wajese huwa hai. (turning to Kripa) 😡 or tu, tune bhi apne bhaiya ka saat diya?

Kripa: ab bhabhi, bhaiya kee baat ko me kese taal saktee hu (acting innocent 😃)

Pari: baree aaee. Her baar to apnee zid manwaatee hai tu or is baar…Saumya me aapse bohat naraaz hu. 😡 😡 Mujhe aapse ab kabhi baat nahi karni.

Saumya: Pari…ab Pari suno…Pari! Uff, ye aurte! 😡 😡 😡(he stomps out of the house)

At night time Prince went in his bedroom and found Rani sitting on the bed, distressed.

Prince: yeh kya, 😃 aaj chaandsa chehra itna uthra huwa kyu hai?

Rani: aapne mujhse jhooth kyu bola Prince?

Prince: abhi tak wahi baat leker baithee ho?

Rani: aaj tak aapne mujhse kuch nahi chupa ya.

Prince: oho, jaaneman, 😉 agar tumhe yeh bata deta, to phir yeh baat home ministry tak pohoch jaatee.😆 Sachai kee putli jo ho tum.

Rani: kya matlab hai aapka,😡 ke me her baat maa ko jaake bata detee hu?

Prince: ab sachai ko jutla to nahi sakte na. Tumhaare pait me kuch nahi rehta. 😛 Ab dekho, maa hum dono ko to kabhi akela nahi choretee to ab un do beecharo ko to azaad rehne do.

Rani: to mere pait me kuch nahi rehta ha?

Prince: 🤢 ab mera yeh matlab nahi tha…

Rani: acha, to phir ek sachai or bhi sun lijye, 😡 mujhe aapke saat aaj raat ek kamre me nahi rehna. (she drags Prince out of the room)

Prince:
are Rani, yeh kya…meree baat to suno…

Rani: mujhe kuch nahi sunna. Or wese bhi, mere pait me to koi baat rehtee nahi. 😡 😡 Aap jaake bahaar makheeyo ke saat baat kijye (she slams the door on his face)

Prince:
Rani! Hey Rani chalo ab mazaak choro! Rani darwaaza khola na! Rani! Uff, yeh aurte! 😡 😡 😡(he storms off to the next room).

Somewhere unknown we see someone sitting in a dark room, looking at Saumya's and Pari's photo. The person is angry because their plan failed.

end of part.




Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#78
👏 👏 👏 great part cont. soon.. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thank you so much for the title thing.. that was a great part.. i think thats sanjana or kashish... i mean i dont want it to be kashish. or sanjana cuz i dont want ehr in the ff but i have a feeling maybe kashish isnt changed..

well that was probably my last comment for a while but i juust wanted to say thanks for listening to my request!

contine when u can
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Posted: 17 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: brainychild92

thank you so much for the title thing.. that was a great part.. i think thats sanjana or kashish... i mean i dont want it to be kashish. or sanjana cuz i dont want ehr in the ff but i have a feeling maybe kashish isnt changed..

well that was probably my last comment for a while but i juust wanted to say thanks for listening to my request!

contine when u can

even i dont like Sanjana, but bringing her in wouldntbe a bad idea. dont wory she wont be comign anytime soon. the mystery is going to continue. catch the next parts.

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