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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys im writing another ff and this time it is a romantic one so i hope you guys enjoy it. i have combined four couples together from three shows so lets see how it goes.

INTRODUCTION

Prince and Rani Thaapar have now been married for over 25 yrs. theoughtout thier life they have faced many ups and hardships but have conquered them all successfully. over the years their love has grown for each other and now they lead a happy go life since the Thaapar empire has grown in numerous parts of the world. Their love is mature and paasionate.

Pari Thaapar is their only daughter who is highly efficient, responsible and creative. she holds her parents' values very close to her heart and loved everywhere she goes. Now she is engaged to be married to Sowmya Parashar after have had been in a relationship with him for over a year.

Sowmya Parashar is suave, emaculate, intelligent and holds a powerful position in the business world. this is is upfront version but for the people who are close to him he is hihly emothional nd sensitive. he carries the values of his parents and aims to follow his family traditions. Sowmya and Pari's love is passioante and understanding.

Sujal and Kashish Garewal had a love marrige and in the beginning their love had bloomed but soon it turned into selfishness. Sujal was intelligent, brave, caring as well as beig highly emotional. he was sensitive towards others but kept it hidden so he didn't appear vulnerable. generally he was a quiet one who only spoke when required. Whereas Kashish was very outspoken, dominating and a control freak. she expressed her emtions openly and loved Sujal head over heels. After Sujal became paralysed a year ago from waist downwards and lost his ability to speak things changed in their relaitonship. she became more possessive towards him.

Sujal and Soumya were best friends from childhood becasue the Garewals and Parashars family friends as well as business partners. Kashish hated Sowmya after Sujal's accident and didn't want the freindship to continue. Sujal and Kashish's love is selfish and possessive.

Angad Khanna the youth of today. he is cool, suave and a hit with the girls. he is Kashish's tounger brother and he holds the values of his family pretty well close, but at the same time he doesnt lose out on the latest trend. at present he is the president of his college and has a new girlfriend each day.

Kripa Parashar is Sowmya's younger sister. she worships her brother becasue since childhood he has raised her like she was his daughter. their parents often stayed over seas due to which Sowmya had to chip in. Kripa respects all his decisions and makes sure she follows the family tradtions. She is bubbly, cute and very outspoken but when it comes to guys she is vey shy. it is her last year in college and yet she and Angad have not met which leaves their love undecided.

okay guys i hope u like the intro. i know its a bit too long but i wanted to make sure the characters were understood in some detail before i began the story.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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i thought of posting the first part also.

Part one

At Thaapar house Rani is performing the mornign pooja in the mandir like every morning. she is an ideal wife who has handled the house and family realy quite well.

From behind her, comes her Parchai - daughter Pari and takes her blessings. she looks exactly like Rani but just a yougner version. in nearly every way Pari follows her mother's steps to make sure she also turns out to be an ideal wife too in the near future.

The phone rings and Pari picks it up

Pari: Hello

Sowmya: Good morning future wife

Pari: Sowmya me jaantee thee ke aapka hee phone hoga

Sowmya: acha meree aahat se hee pehchaan jaate ho?

Pari: nahi, apnee gharee se.😆 roze is waqt hee aap phone karte hai.

Both chuckle. 😆

Sowmya:
theek hai. mene pnone isliye kiye hai kyu ke me waha jaaraha hu aaj

Pari: Sach? per aap theek to rahenge na?

Sowmya: of course, wese bhi ab to adat ho chukee hai bardasht karne kee. phir tum bhi to hona mere saat.

Pari: Me to hamesha aapke saat hoo or rahongee

Sowmya: So sweet. ab chalo jaldi se mujhe ek goodbye kiss dedo

Pari: 😳Sowmya maa ajaengee, abhi nahi

Sowmya: uffo yeh sab choro or jaldi se dedo, warna me jab waha aaoonga tab leloonga. tub mana bhi nahi kar paogee.

Pari: Sowmya aap...(Rani walks into the hall) chalye maa agayee, bye.

she puts the phone down feeling a bit embarassed.

Rani: kis ka phone tha?

Pari: Ma wo, 8 baj gaye hai

Rani: (looks at the clock) oh, to kya kehrahe the janab?

Pari: yahi ke aaj phirse wahi jaarahe hai.

Rani: hmmm, sach, himmat hai osme. me to Ramji se yeh hee praatna kartee hu ke sab kuch jaldi se theek hojaeh.

a voice calls Rani from inside.

Rani: yeh lo, mera bhi call agaya

Pari: Matlab?

Rani: Wahee, 8 bajgaye

both mother and daughter share a laugh and part their ways.

okays here ends the first part. do tell me how u liked it.
Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice beginningggg
plzzz cont soonnnnnnnnn
i'll be waiting
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part two

Rani goes to her bedroom where Prince is waiting impatiently on the bed.

Rani:
Kya aap bhi. Itne saal hogaye hamare shaadi ko, phir bhi aap jab tak mere haathse apna towel or kapre nahi lete aap kee subhe nahi hotee.

Prince: are tumhare haatho se lene ka maza hee kuch or he. ab chalo jaldi karo.

Rani opened up the cupboard and searched for Prince's clothes and then saw that the towel has been put on the top shelf out of reach. she stands up on her tip toes and as she has reached the towel, Prince comes and catches her from behind by the waist.

Rani:
Badmaash! hum jaante the ke yeh aapkee hee shararat hai. chalye chore yeh. Ek jawaan betee ke baap hone ke bawajood abhi tak aap ka bachpana nahi gaya.

Prince: are jab tum jaisee sundhar biwi ho to phir kese chalajaeh. ye to subhe subhe tumharee yeh kamar dekhneke liye kiya tha.

He gets even closer to her when Prince's mother Surekha enters their room and seeing them in that position becomes a bit embarrassed.

Surekha: 😳
Ahem, ahem.

Prince immediately left Rani and stood innocently red with embarrassment.

Surekha:
Hey bhagwaan kab sudroge tum dono ha.

Rani: yehi to me Prince se kerahee thee maaa. aao he samjhaye inhe.👏

Surekha:
(pulls Prince's ear)
Ise to me ek lagake doongee. Har baar Rani ko chere ta rehta hai. Ab ja jaldi se tayaarhoja, office ke liye dair horahee hai.
Prince makes a funny sad face, collects his things and goes to the bathroom. before that he sees Rani geturing him not to be sad, but he just leaves.

okays here ends another part.
Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice ff cant wait for AK to showw
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy_craze

Nice ff cant wait for AK to showw

thanx, jus wait for a few mor parts and theyll cum

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part three

Sowmya has gone to Sujal Garewal's house because it is the time of Sujal's treatment. Sowmya has taken responsibility of it, so as a motivator he attends the therapies. he makes sure that he holds the treatments when Kashish is not home, so he doesn't have to confront her at all.

Kashish:
agaye tum?

Sowmya:(surprised) Kashish tum abhi yahee ho?

Kashish: Jaha tak mujhe yaad hai to yeh mera ghar hai or tum apne irado me kabhi kaamyaab nahi honge.

Sowmya:kya kehrahee ho Kashish. Mera irada Sujal ko theek karne me hai or wo zaroor pura hoga

Kashish:Jab tak tum oske paas ho wo kabhi nahi hoga. Tumhaara manhoos saya ose her baar koi nayee museebat me daal deta hai isiliye abse me hamesha Sujal kee therapies me oske saat rahoongee, taake tum koi garbar na karsako.

Sowmya:yeh kya kehrahee ho Kashish.Sujal mera dost hai, bhai hai mera. Tum aise kaise soch saktee ho?

Kashish:Kyu ke aaj jis halat me Sujal hai, oske zimedaar tum ho.

lighting thinder flashes on Sowmya

Kashish:
Sirf Sujal kee wajese me tumhe bardasht karahee hu, kyu ke wo khush hota hai umhe dekh kar. abhi tak ose pata nahi chala ke koun dost hai or koun dushman. Ab joa yahase. mujhe tumharee shakal nahi dekhnee hai or.

Sowmya wipes a hidden tear and walks to Sujal's room. Sujal is lying on the bed with the physiotherapist first applying tests on his feet and then legs to see any change. when he sees Sowmya he smiles and gestures him to come close.

Sowmya:
Hai Sujal, kya baat hai aaj to barahee mast lagraha hai.

Sujal smiles and jerks his shoulders. he wants to tell Sowmya so many things but is unable to do it.

Physio:
Kaafi sudhaar nazar aaraha hai inke paairo me. bohat jald hum treadmill kee therapy shuroo karsakte hai.

Sujal holds Sowmya's han gesturing it is all becasue of him. just then Kashish enters and gets disappointed at the scene. she can't tolerate Sowmya getting close to Sujal becasue she was afraid he might harm him.

Kashish thinks: Dushman ko gale lagarahe ho. Sujal; ab to dost or dushman me farak samjho.

Sowmya reads Kashish's expression and got the hint but he didn't want to show it to Sujal.

Sowmya:
Chal, abme chalta hu. office ke liye dair horahee ha. me baad me aaoonga.

sujal in his mind:me jaanta hu mere dost ke tujhe kya takleef hey. teree koi pareshaanee muhse cupee nahi hai. Kashish kee karwee zabban ko roze gil jaata hai jese kuch huwa hee na ho, per mesab kuch jaanta hu. Dekhna ek din Kashish bhi sab kuch Jaan jaegee.

Sowmya sits in his car, wipes the tears he had held back for so long, then drives off.

okay guys ere ends another part, i hope u enjoyed it.
Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Part four

Sowmya is sitting in his cabin fairly disturbed. His laptop is open but his not working. ?The phone is ringing but his is not answering. He rested his head on the back of the ?leather seat, going over the vents over the past few years. The happy good days and then ?the sad remorse days. He remembered his college days with Sujal when Sujal had first ?seen Kashish…?

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Sowmya, Sujal and Pari went to the same collge, St.Martins. They were the biggest ?pranksters who hadn't spared anyone till date.?
That day was Kashish's first day in college and as she entered through the gates, ?the trio were sat in their usual place, a chai thela near the entrance. Sowmya and Pari ?were already couple then. Sujal's gaze fell on Kashish and butteflies began flying in his ?stomach. It was like he drawn to her by magic. Kashish had worn a black and white kurta ?in which she looked amazing. ?

Sowmya: Are yeh dekh lagta hai new entry hai. Chal naya murga.?😆

Pari: Sowmya yeh larki hai or shakal surat se to seedhee saadhee lagtee hai .?

Sowmya: madam, hum log seedhe saadhe log ko hee tang karte hai.😛 Or wese bhi aaj itna ?bhed bhao kyu? (he held her tight in his lap).?

Pari:
Nahi aisa nahi hai, bus mujhe laga ke…?

Sujal: Sowmya Pari theek kehrahee hai. Jaane dete hai.?

Sowmya: Am I hearing right?😲 Koun ho tum dono or mere dost kaha gaye? Come on yaar ?mazaa aaega, or wese bhi tujhe kya farak parta hai??

Sujal didn't want his friend to realise his feelings towards Kashish.?

Sujal:
Theek kehraha hai. Per is baar kya karenge??

Sowmya with a wicked smile 😃explains the plan to Sujal andPari and then they get to ?action. ?
Meanwhile Kashish is looking for the principle's office when she stops in her ?tracks because a guy is running towards her. It is Sowmya dressed as a nerd. He has a ?garland of flowers which he puts around Kashish's neck.?

Sowmya:
Welcome to St. Martins

Kashish: Yeh haar??

Sowmya: Hum yaha sab naye students ko haar pehnake hee swagat karte hai ?shrimateejee.?😆 😆

Kashish: Jee mera naam shrimatee nahi hai

Sowmya: nai wo to me aapko izzat de raha hu (pretends to shy out,😳 typically like a geek).?

Kashish: Dekhye aap…?

Sowmya: Swami

Kashish: Jee?? 😕

Sowmya: Mera naam Swami hai

Kashish: Oh, Swami kya aap mujhe principal saab ka office dekha sakte hai??

Sowmya: ha, ha kyu nahi.?

He takes her to the fake principal's office they have made. Inside the principal is no other ?than Sujal, with gelled up hair and glasses. ?

well heres another end to another part, kindly pass comments.

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Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Part five

Kashish: May I come in sir??

Sujal: yes come in. (he had his back turned to her so neither can see each other).?

Kashish: Sir me Kashish Khanna, aaj admission ke liya milna hai…?

Sujal twirled around facing her and there was an eye lock session.😍 He lost himself into ?her eyes but she snapped him out.?

Kashish:
Sir aap??

Sujal: Kaashissh!😉 Hmm. Kaha kee rehne waalee ho??

Kashish: wese to me Shimla kee rerehne waalee hu per further studies ke liye me ?Mumbai shift huwee hu.?

Sujal: Aap kee umar??

Kashish: Jee 21 saal

Sujal: Major??

Kashish: business administration. Lekin sir aap yeh sab kyu poochrahe hai. Mere form ?me sab kuch likha hai.?

Sujal: Sssh! (he took her hands and made her sit on a chair) wo kya hai ke yaha ke kuch ?rules hai, jo tumhe follow karne honge or kuch conditions jese tumhe follow karnee ?hogee.😉 Oske baad hee tumhara admission accept hoga.?

Kashish: rules kee to baat theek hai sir, lekin conditions??

Sujal: Ha conditions. Teen conditions puree karnee hotee hai. Kyu ke her student ko hum ?pehle tole te hai, naap te hai, phir accept karte hai. (he said all this whilst checking her ?figure)?

Kashish noticed him doing that so gave him a stern look. He immediately pretended to be ?doing something else. ?

Sujal: ahem, ahem.😳 Chalo tayaar ho??

Kashish: yes sir.?

Sujal took Kashish outside in the campus grounds near a well. There was also a donkey ?stood next to it.?

Sujal: hmm. Condition no 1 – tumhe is kuwey se teen baaltee nikaalnee hogee or ?condition no 2 – tumhe is gadhe pe wo buckets taang ker pure campus grounds me ?phiranee hogee.? 😆

Kashish: 😕yeh kaisee condition hai sir? Why??

Sujal: hum yaha ke students kee sirf mental strength hee nahi naapte, balke physical bhi ?dekhte hai. Chalo shuroo hojao. ?

hey this is one's quite short but i hope u still enjoy it.
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Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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omg..that will b a sight 2 c...continue soon

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