WhenLoveCalled pg112 discontinuation note - Page 4

Part twenty

Angad: me waapis Shimla nahi jaaraha di.

Kashish: yeh tu kya kehrah hai?

Angad: ha di. Me apna final year yehi Mumbai me pura karoonga.

Kashish: achanak ye faisla kese le liya tune?

Angad: Bus, jee chaha ke Mumbai jaana hai to bus.😊

Kashish: papa ko pata hai yeh sab?

Angad: of course,😛 me onse baat karke to aaya hu (he kept his gaze on the table)

Kashish: (with a firm voice) 😳 Angad?

Angad: (looked up at her and fumbled) ab di aap to jaantee hai na papa ko, to me soch raha tha ke aap…

Kashish: samajh gayee. Yaanee ke phirse mujhe hee tum dono ke cold war ke beech pisna hoga.

Angad: Di, papa aapkee koi bhi baat taalte nahi. I 'm sure is baar bhi wo mana nahi karenge. Pls di, pls.😊 😃

Kashish: theek hai, theek hai. Ab yeh nautanki band kar or khana khaa le.

Thaapar house

Sowmya: kya kehrahee hai? 😲 Waapis nahi jaaehgee?

Kripa: nahi bhaiya ab me yahi rehna chahtee hu, aap or bhabhi ke paas. 😔 Yeh ek saal bohat hee akele per gayee thee me.

Sowmya: yeh tu kehrahee hai, jo mujhse or yeh saare logo se bhaag jaana chahtee thee.

Kripa: dhoore rehke hee mene nazdeekiyo ko pehchanna hai bhaiya. Or ab😭 😭

Sowmya: (he instantly hugged her as he couldn't see tears in her eyes) yeh kya, meree gurya to rone lagee. Sab ko hasaane waalee aaj ro rahee hai. Kahi me sapna to nahi dekh raha?😆

Kripa gave a playful smack on his chest whilst she wiped her tears.

Sowmya: 😆 theek hai, teree jo marzee. Me to sirf teree khushi chahta hu. (he kissed her on the forehead) hmm, ab agar bhabhi, nanad kee baate khatam hogayee ho, to phir chale. Wese bhi bohat bhook lagrahee hai.

All of them shared a light laugh 😃 😆and decided to leave the room. Kripa went first, then Pari was leaving but Sowmya held her hand.

Pari: Sowmya kya karahe hai?

Sowmya: (pulled her into his embrace 🤗 ) kya karaha hu? Apnee hone waalee biwi ke saat ishq lara raha hu. 👏

Pari: acha? Abhi to bohat bhook lagrahee thee aapko?

Sowmya: bhook to lagrahee hai, lekin kisee or cheez kee 😉 (had a naughty glint in his eyes)

Pari: 😳chalye choreye. Ma intezaar karahee hogee

Sowmya: uh, uh. Is baar ma ka bahana nahi chalega. Mene tumse kaha tha ke agar mujhe meree good bye kiss nahi milee to me yaha aake leloonga 😉 or tum mana bhi nahi karsako gee.

He began to get closer to her inch by inch and just as soon as he was close to her lips, they were interuppted.

Kripa: Bhaiya! 😲 Mujhse kaha ke dair horahee hai, or khud yaha bhabhi ke saat aap…

Sowmya: (covered her mouth) 😳 are ahista bole. Yaha to deewaro ke bhi kaan hote hai, agar danima ne sunliya na to…Chal ab (before leaving he blew a flying kiss to Pari.❤️ ❤️ Both had a 440 volt smile 😃 😃on their faces).

end of part

😉 😉 awsome 😉 😉

eagerly waiting fore more parts to come soon. 😉

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Part twenty one

2 days later…

Sowmya: Sujal, Sujal tujhe kya batao mere dost. 😡 Yeh aaj kal kee larkiya bhi na…

Sujal getured 'what happened'.

Sowmya: hona kya hai. Teree pyaaree Pari bhabhi ne, challenge diya hai mujhe do din ka 😉 or aaj raat ke baara baje tak waqt hai mere paas. I mean why can't these women be simple for a change?

Sujal smiled. 😊 He was happy to see his friend being really happy after a long time.

Sowmya: kehtee hai ke ek bohat hee ahem cheez bhool raha hu mein. Yaar do din se dimaag ghas raha hu, 😕 per kuch samjh me nahi aaraha. Ab tu hi meree madad karsakta hai.

Sujal gestured 'wo kese?'

Sowmya: mujhse ziada tu, mujhe jaanta hai. 😃 To bata, aisee kounsee Cheez hai jo mujhe yaad honee chaheeye?

Sujal sat there blank.

Sowmya: yeh baat mere or Pari se related hai,😛 or hum dono ke beech jo bhi huwa, wo tu sab jaanta hai, to ab bata na yaar.

Sujal still sat there blank

Sowmya: (felt something in his jacket pocket) are ha! Sach me larkiyan can't be more difficult. 😡 Kehtee hai ke clue diya hai (shows Sujal the picture of him and Pari) ab tu bata isme clue waalee kya baat hai?😡 😕

Sujal looked at the photo and smiled. 😃 He remebered everything.

Sujal: meeting anniversary

Sowmya: tsk…kya meeting anni…😲 kya kaha tune?

Sujal: mee…ting…ani…ver…sary

Sowmya: yeh tune kaha Sujal? I mean literally, tune kaha?

Sujal sat there amazed as well as he didn't realise that he just spoke. After such a long time he was able to speak something and that too with spontaneaity.

Sowmya: Sujal, Sujal mere dost, aaj tune to meree zindagee banadee. 🥳 Teree aawaaz bhagwaan ne lautadee.👏 The credit should go to Pari. Are agar mujhe pehle pata hota to main pehle se hee Pari or meree yeh photo tujhe dekhata (takes out his cell and rings) Hi, Sowmya bole raha hu. Ha wo Sujal ne aaj do shabd kahe…yes he literally spoke two words…😃yes I want the therapy to begin straight away…theek hai (disconnects) bus, ab wo din dhoore nahi jab tu phirse chapar, chapar karne lagega.

Sujal frowned 😔

Sowmya: are meto bhool hee gaya.Tujhe kaha chapar, chapar karna aata hai. Tujhe to award milna chaheeye 'best quiet person' ka.

Both laughed. 😆 😆 Then Sujal handed Sowmya the photo.

Sowmya: are baap re. phirse kaam kee cheez bhool gaya. Sach me, teree khushi ke aage me sab kuch bhool jaata hu (he smiled cutely 😃) asli mudda to yeh tha ke Pari mujhe kya yaad dilaana chahtee hai, or tune kaha – meeting anniversary. Me kese bhool gaya yaar. Tujhe yaad hai maine or Pari ne ye waada kiya tha ke her saal hum yeh manaenge. Me bhi kitna buddhu hu. 🤪 Osne mujhse kaha bhi, ke is cheez se sab shuru huwa.

Sujal: mere…ilawa…zindagee…soch

Sowmya: (lost for words) yaar tuhee to meree zindagee hai. Tune hee to mujhe meree zindagee se milaya. Tere bina me kuch nahi. 😔 or agar tere liye mujhe yeh dunya bhi bhulaanee pare na to me kardoonga. Yeh baat Pari bhi jaantee hai or samajhtee bhi hai.

Sujal smiled. Sowmya left after the speech therapist came. At the same time Kashish arrived home.

Sowmya: (literally hugged her 🤗 in excitement) Kashish, Kashish! You won't believe ke aaj kya huwa. Aaj hamare Sujal ne do shabd kahe. 👏

Kashish: 😃 sach! I can't belive it (she also got excited with Sowmya and hugged him back. 🤗 👏 🥳It was like for that one moment she had forgotten her true feelings against him)

Sowmya left, leaping with joy.

end of part.

Part twenty two

Inside Sujal's room an excited Kashish arrived. The therapist was instructing Sujal to say ?minimal words slowly. ?

Kashish: wow Sujal.👏 Aaj to celebration ka din hai 🥳 (kissed his forehead)?

Sujal gave a weak smile. ?

Therapist: yeh sab Sowmya kee wajese huwa hai. Aaj agar wo Sujal ko itna push nahi ?karte na to phir yeh nahi bolete.👏👏 Isliye me onke naam se hee shuruwaat karaha hu. ?

Kashish's smile turned into a frown 😔 as soon as she heard Sowmya's importance again. ?The idea of him being the main subject didn't make her happy at all. ?

Therapist: okay now say slowly 'Sowmya'. ?

Sujal: SSSSowmya

Therapist: good, now say 'Sujal'. ?

Sujal: SSSSuj, SSSS

Therapist: okay lets leave that for now. Say 'Kashish'?

Sujal: Ka…Kash…k.k.k…(he gave up)?

Therapist: Relax. So far you've only been able to say Sowmya's name properly. 😃 I think ?he should be with you in these therapies. Then only you would push harder.? 👏

Sujal: yyyess.?

Kashish: (just left from there abruptly. In the next room she began throwing things from ?the table with frustration)😡😡😡 SOWMYA! SOWMYA! SOWMYA! Jab dekho os Sowmya ?kee tasbee hotee rehtee hai is ghar me. Lekin ab bus, bohat hogaya. Ab mein Sujal ko sirf ?meree importance ka ehsaas karwaoongee. Or os Sowmya ka naam or nishaan mita ?doongee, Sujal ke dil or dimaag se.

end of part?

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Part twenty three

Kripa sat in her room, staring into space. She was remembering her college days where ?she spied on 'Hoxy' most of the time 😳 and didn't do anything else. Then she went into a ?dream trance 😍 where she imagined herself and 'Hoxy' somewhere in the countryside. They ?were standing face to face, lost in each other's eyes. ❤️ ❤️Both of their hearts were beating ?faster, full of passion. Both their bodies had this urge to touch each other. ?

Hoxy: I love you Kripa!?

Kripa: ☺️ 😃 I love you too!?

Both hugged each other tightly, 🤗 feeling the passion rise between them. They wanted the ?world to stop where it was, wanted nothing else to exist except their love. Hoxy pulled ?apart, held her by the shoulders and crushed her in him. Both their chests touched. They ?had an eye locking session for a few minutes and then Hoxy began getting closer and ?closer to Kripa. He was so close to her lips but before he could kiss her, out of no where ?an angry 😡 Sowmya appeared in between them. ?

Sowmya: (snapped his fingers) Hello! Kripa…earth to Kripa…?

Kripa: (shaken a bit) 😲 Bhaiya aap??

Sowmya: nahi mera bhoot! Aise ghoor rahi hai jese sach me bhoot dekh liya ho

Kripa: wo bhaiya aap achanak aise aaeh ke…?

Sowmya: (mischievous grin 😉) kiske khayaalo me ghum thee? ?

Kripa: 😳 kis…kisee ke bhi nahi

Sowmya: hai, hai, 😉 😆dekh kesa laal face hogaya hai tera

Kripa: bhaiya ab aap mujhe chiraana band kijye.?

Sowmya: theek hai, theek hai. Chal ab sun. aaj tujhe mera ek kaam karna hai. Aaj tujhe ?Pari ko koi bhi bahana bana ke house boat pe laana hai raat ke baara baje.?

Kripa: kya? Aisa kya karne waale hai aap??

Sowmya: sach me teree yeh sawaal poochne kee aadat bohat buree hai.😛 Dekh aaj mere or ?Pari ko milne ko do saal hogaye hai, to me ose surprise dene waala hu.🥳?

Kripa: wow bhaiya that's so sweet! Me abhi Pari bhabhi ko bata tee hu…?

Sowmya: 😡 chup! Yeh surprise hai, or tu batane jarahee hai. Jese mene kaha hai wesa kar. ?

Kripa: per mujhe kya milega??

Sowmya: to ab tu blackmail karne bhi lagee hai.?

Kripa: itna bara kaam karna 😉 hai to kuch to milna chaheeye na 😆

Sowmya: itna bhi bara kaam nahi hai

Kripa: theek hai to khud karlo. Me chalee (attempts to get off bed but gets held back by ?Sowmya)?

Sowmya: are are tu to bura maangayee. Meto mazaak karaha tha. 😊 Chal bata kya chaheeye ?tujhe? ?

Kripa: (after thinking for a few minutes) aap kee wo blue Mercedes…?

Sowmya: kya? 😲 Itna mehnga tohfa? ?

Kripa: mehnga bara zamana bhaiya. ?

Sowmya: chal theek hai. Tu bhi kya yaad rakhe gee apne darya dil bhai ko. ?

Kripa:🤗 wow bhaiya, you're the best. ?

Sowmya: per tu apna kaam karna mat bhool na. wese to tere pait me koi baat nahi rehtee, ?phir bhi tujhe kehraha hu. Agar koi garbar kee, 😡 to tu jaantee hai…?

Kripa: don't worry bhaiya, my lips are zipped. ?

?end of part. ?

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😉 😉 i think ke tumhe part thode bade banane chahiye 😉 😉

😉 😉 wait nahi kar sakta yaar, its too good, samjha karo. 😉 😉

Originally posted by: tekhum

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😉 😉 i think ke tumhe part thode bade banane chahiye 😉 😉

😉 😉 wait nahi kar sakta yaar, its too good, samjha karo. 😉 😉

kya samjhoo mein, ur acting as if u have nothing else to do then read this. 😛

Part twenty four

Kripa: bhabhi, bhabhi!😃 Aap jaantee hai bhaiya kya karahai hai??

Pari: kya??

Kripa remembers Sowmya's words and becomes cautious

Pari: ab bole bhi

Kripa: umm,🤔 mujhe kya pata, kya karahai hai

Pari: 😕 paagal hogayee hai kya? ?

Kripa again remembers how Sowmya threatened her that if she will say anything to Pari ?he will make sure she can't eat for a whole week. ?

Pari: (snaps her fingers) kaha khoee huwee hai. Sach me tum dono bhai, behen ek jaise ?ho.😡 Jab dekho yu khoye huwe rehte ho. ?

Kripa: yeh sab choreye. Pata hai bhabhi ☺️mujhe os larke ka pata chalgaya

Pari: 😊 acha! Chal teree to nikal paree.?

Kripa: nahi bhabhi,😔 mujhe to ghabrahat ho rahee hai. Aaj raat ko osne mujhe milne ?bulaya hai. ?

Pari: ab pyaar kiya to darna kya??

Kripa: you've to come with me. ?

Pari: are wah! Mujhe koi shoke nahi hai kebab me hadi banne ka. ?

Kripa: please bhabhi.😛 Aapko aana hoga. Me akele nahi jaana chahtee. Pata nahi kesa ?hoga.?

Pari: tu to kehrahee thee ke ek saal se tu ose jaantee hai. ?

Kripa: 😍 nahi jaantee bhabhi. Me sirf os ke bare me kuch kuch jaantee hu. Aapko ?aana hee hoga. ?

Pari: yeh kaam tujhe akele hee karna hoga. Wese bhi aaj mujhe ek dosra zaroori kaam ?hai. ?

Kripa: ise or zaroori kya hosakta hai aapke liye? Bhabhi yeh meree zindagee ka sawaal ?hai. ?

Pari: chal, chal ab ziada emotional blackmail karne kee zaroorat nahi . theek hai, kitne ?baje bulaaya hai? ?

Kripa: raat ke baara baje

Pari: raat ko baara baje?😲 Yeh koi milne ka waqt hai kya? Phir to me bilkul nahi aaoongee ?or tujhe bhi nahi jaane doongee. ?

Kripa: (margaye ) bhabhi chalye na. dekhye aap saat hogee na to phir darr nahi lagega. ?

Pari: ose kahe ke koi or waqt bataye. 😡Yeh theek nahi hai or aaj to bilkul hee nahi. ?

Kripa: kyu theek nahi hai?😕 ?

Pari: 😳bus, theek nahi hai.?

Kripa: per kyu nahi. Dekhye ab hum do responsible adults hai, to isme problem kya hai? ?

Pari: 😡problem yeh hai ke tere bhaiya…(stopped midway because she didn't ?want to reveal the challenge thing) Sowmya bhi naraaz honge.?

Kripa: onhe kuch pata hee nahi, to phir naraaz kyu honge? Bhabhi aap ko chalna hai, bus. ?

Pari: tu or teree zid!😛 Theek hai, wese bhi aaj mera mood off hai. Tere saat aane se kuch ?change hojaeh. ?

Kripa: 🤗 you're the best. Chalye me chaltee hu.(leaving but stops midway) or ha ?bhabhi 😉 aaj puree tarha se sajna sawarna. ?

Pari: wo mujhse mil ne aaraha hai ya tujhse?😆 ?

Kripa: samjha karo. Impressions. Bus ab me kuch sunna nahi chahtee. Do as I tell you. ?Me aapko pick karne aajaoongee (before Pari could defy, Kripa left since now her work ?was done). ?

end of part, enjoy guys and thanx for the comments.

ur fic is just great and i am loving it enjoy reading ur fic.

Originally posted by: golu_1677

ur fic is just great and i am loving it enjoy reading ur fic.

thanx for appreciating it. i hope u still enjoy the further on parts.