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Part 68

Just den Angad fone rang he anwsered it

Angad- Elow

Girl- Iz dis Angad Khanna

Angad- Yh it iz whos dis?

Girl- I will tell u wen u meet me 2dy in cafe star at 4pm make sure u be der if u care about Kripa

Angad- Wah da hell r u on bout

Da girl disconnected fone

Nw we c da girl

Meanwhile we c Angad, Ridz, Ammy, Laiba, Josh, Sujal, Lucky, Tanz and Rob in the Banquet Hall lookin at da engagement arrangements, as da engagement is in the evening

Angad was wearin dis

Angad waz very confused about the fone call

Ridz- Angad r u listenin I been talkin 2 u 4 da past 5 minz wahs rong?

Angad- Nuffin Ridhima

Ridz- R u sure u can tell me wer friends I no ders smefing rong

Ammy- Angad can u go and c da catering arrangements its 4 already da engagements in 2 hours, I gta c da stage arrangements

Angad- Buh Ammy

Laiba- AMMY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ammy- I'm cmin Laiba

Ammy leaves

Ridz- Angad I will c da arrangements u dun wori k

Angad- Thx Ridhima I gta go smwer important I wil tell u wen I get bck, if any1 asks just say I will be bck b4 da engagement gta sort smefing out

Ridz- K

Angad leaves

Ridz goes 2 c da catering arrangements

Lucky and Tanz wer seeing da decoration arrangements outsyde da hall entrance, they wer givin instruction 2 da decorator

Decorator- This looks beauitful wah do u fink?

Tanz- Its Awesome weldne Mr Decorator

Decorator- Fanks by da way da names Sahil

Tanz- Nyce name

Sahil- Fanks wahz ya name?

Tanz- Itz Taniya buh it sounds 2 freshified so in short just Tanz every1 calls me dat

Sahil- K Tanz buh I dnt agree its freshified I fink its a beauitful name

Lucky came bck he went 2 talk 2 Sujal

Lucky- (Angrily) Enough of da flirtin carry on wid ya work yh, da flowers meant 2 be red not pink

Sahil/Tanz- We aint flirtin

Tanz- Lucky da flowers meant 2 be pink coz dats Kripas favourite colour so chill

Lucky- No its meant 2 be red

Tanz- No pink

They wer fightin Sujal came

Sujal- ENOUGH!!!!!!!!!!! I bought u 2 wid me coz i fought u will behave ere and help wid arrangements instead ur causin trouble

Lucky- Soz Bro buh da flowers meant 2 be red and dis stupid decorator put pink flowers

Tanz- No der meant 2 be pink and dnt call Sahil stupid

Sujal- Lucky da flowers meant 2 be pink Tanz is rite and da all da red flowers should be on da stage k y dnt u go and help Ammy Lucky and Tanz da decoration is dne so u can go get ready, u Sahil can cm wid me ur work is dne ere u can nw do da insyde decorations

Sahil- K

Tanz/Lucky- K Bro

Tanz and Lucky leave

Tanz goes 2 get ready and Lucky goes 2 help Ammy wid da stage arrangements

Ammy- Lucky wah u doin ere?

Lucky- Bro sed 2 help u wid da stage arrangements

Ammy- Ok k its dne nearly just gna put heart balloons ere, and flowers

Lucky- Ders no more flowers left

Ammy- Crap I will get sm frm da car u do da balloons k da reds, pinks, and da whites

Lucky- Ayt

Ammy goes outsyde 2 da car gets da flowers and cms bck, Laiba waz givin instructions 2 da decorator in settin da tables

Ammy tripped on da table cloth and all da flowers fell on Laiba

Laiba- Ammy wahs rong wid u ur so clumsy u should c wer ur goin

Sujal came

Sujal- Ammy u dropped al da flowers

Ammy wasnt listenin he was lookin at Laiba

Laiba/Sujal- AMMY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ammy- Sorri Bro it waz accident I will get more flowers

Sujal- Yh go quick we onli gt 2 hours left every1 will be ere soon

Ammy- Yh im goin

Sujal went 2 talk 2 da decorator, Ammy stood der again lookin at Laiba

Ammy- Laiba u look very beauitful 2dy

Laiba- Thx Ammy

Ammy- Laiba (Interuptted)

Sujal- AMMY HAVE YA BOUGHT DA FLOWERS YET

Ammy ran outsyde 2 get da flowers

Meanwhile we c Kripa in Malhotra house Shaz and Alisha wer gettin her ready

Shaz- Di u look very beauitful 2dy

Alisha- Yh u look just like a bride

Kripa- Thx

Kripa waz wearin

Alisha waz wearin

Sam came in da room she waz wearin dis

Shaz waz wearin dis

Sam- R u lot dne yet Ganga Aunty waz sayin we goto go in bout 1 hour hurry up

Shaz- Wer ready and Di is ready 2 I will just go dwn and help mom wid arrangements, Di I will c u lot dwnstairz

Kripa/Alisha/Sam- K

Shaz leaves

Alisha- I will just go and fone Sujal and c hw da hall arrangements r goin on

Sam/Kripa- K

Alisha rings Sujal 2 fynd out about da arrangement

Alisha- Hi Sujal hws da arrangements goin hws everyfing der

Sujal- Alisha da arrangements goin gr8 da halls ready it looks amazing

Alisha- Cnt wait 2 c it

Sujal- Wen u lot cmin Kripa ready yet

Alisha- Yh shes ready we will be der in 1 hour or so

Ganga- ALISHA!!!!!

Alisha- Sujal I gta go I wil c u in da hall l8ter bye

Sujal- Bye

Alisha- Kya hua Aunty

Ganga- Alisha, Kripas ready and so is Shabd Angad aur Josh aneh waleh teh 2 go wid Shabd, woh kya haina beta Shabd keh Parents nahiye hai, auseki sirf ek maami hai aur Mama aur woh loge aneh waleh hai unki flight 1 ghanthe mein hai maine driver ko bhejdiya hai aur Rob ko, Beta mein Shabd keh saat joanghi aur Angad, Josh Anjali aur Kavya bhi, Dev tum logo keh saat jayghe mein nahiye chahathi Shabd ko aisa laghe keh auseka koi nahiye hai woh mera beta hai jaise Josh hai

Alisha- Jee Aunty aap fikar maat kijiye mein abhi Josh aur Angad ko fone karthi hoon

Alisha leaves

Ganga- Tike hai beta

Shabd heard everyfing he was very touched wiv wah Ganga had sed

Shabd waz wearin dis

Ganga- Shabd beta tum tyaar hogaye bahuth ache lagrehay ho

Shabd- Thx Aunty 4 everyfing (he had tears in his eyes) Aapneh aur Uncle neh mujhe kabhi mera Mom, Dad ki kami nahiye honeh di

Ganga- (she hugged him) Beta dnt cry aaj bahuth khushi ka din hai tumhaari engagement hai dnt say thx beta we luv as much as we luv Josh aur Beta aaj mein tumhari side mein hoon aur Dev Kripa ki side mein toh hum ladke waleh aur woh ladki waleh

Shabd- Uncle dekhayi nahiye dehreh kahaan hai

Ganga- Kripa ko leneh ghe hai uppar Beta humhe hall mein janah hai chaloh

Alisha- Aunty maine Josh ko fone kiya hai hes outsyde aur Kavya aur Anjali bhi bahar hai, aur Angad ka fone switched off hai, aur waki sab hall mein hai mein bhi aap sab keh saat chalthi hoon

Ganga- Tike hai beta chaloh hum chalteh hai

They all leave 2 go 2 da engagement hall

Nw we c Dev and Shaz wid Kripa

Dev- Kripa Beta aaj tum bahuth pyaari lag rahiye ho bilkul ek pari ki tarah

Kripa- Thx Papa

Dev- Beta yeh tumhare liye gift

Kripa opened it was a diamond necklace

Kripa- Wow Papa its beauitful (she hugged him)

Dev- Ur welcm Beta ab hum sab chalteh hai tumhari Mom aur waki sab chaleh ghe hai Shabd keh saat aur hum sab abhi jayghe, Shaz Beta jaldi karoh kabseh make-up kar rahiye ho

Shaz- Daddy 5 minz I'm just fixin ma make-up

Dev- Beta kabeseh 5 minz keh rahiye ho

Shaz- Im done nw we can all go nw

Dev- Finally ab chaloh

Nw we c every1 in da engagement hall besides Angad

Dev- Sujal beta sab arrangements bahuth he achi hai

Sujal- Thx Uncle akhir meri behen ki shaadi hai toh sab kuch top class honah chahiye, hum sab neh bahuth mehenath ki

Dev- Haan beta dikh raha hai

Ammy and Laiba wer wearin dis

Ridz waz wearin dis

Sujal waz wearin dis

Tanz waz wearin dis
Lucky waz wearin dis

Kumkum- Laiba wers Angad he came 1st in da hall 2 c da arrangements wer did he go?

Laiba- Dunno Mom last tyme I so him he waz talkin 2 Ridhima y dnt u ask her

Kumkum- Yh I will ask her

Ridhima was talkin 2 Kriti

Ridz- So Aunty, Mom, Dad aaj anehwaleh I cnt wait

Kriti- Haan Beta unki flight ek ghanteh mein land hojayghi, tum aur Armaan chaleh janah uneh leneh

Ridz- Jee tike hai Aunty I cnt wait 2 c dem I missed dem so much

Kumkum- Ridhima beta have u seen Angad

Ridz- Aunty, Angads gone out smwer he goes hes got sm important work woh thodi dher mein ajygha

Kumkum- Tike hai Beta I foned him buh he didnt anwser

Ridz- Aunty he should be cmin maybe ders no network

Kumkum- Yh could be

Meanwhile we c Angad in Cafe Star waitin 4 da girl dat foned him, nw we c da girl cmin

Girl- Hi I'm Shalini

Angad- Uno itz 6.30 I been waitin ere for 2 hours nw will u bother tellin me y u called me ere and wah u got 2 do wid Kripa

Shalini- I will tell u listen Kripa cant marry Shabd coz I luv Shabd, me and Shabd wer 2geva in Italy we would have gt married as well, buh dat Kripa came and coz of her memory loss Shabd went wid her he luvs me and I luv him all I wana tell u is dat me and Shabd are meant 2 be 2geva so u goto stop dis engagement I no u like Kripa u should be wid her if 2dy Shabd gets engaged 2 Kripa it will onli be sympathy 4 Kripa not love

Angad- Look me nd Kripa r just friends, waheva u sed bout u and Shabd I cnt believe dat coz Shabd luvs Kripa I no dat he luvs her frm childhood and (Interupted)

Shalini- Shabd onli luvs me look heres our photograpghs, we been 2geva 4 so many yrz Shabd and Kripa r onli friends hes just doin all dis coz of sympathy u goto stop dis engagement coz if it takes place den everyfing will be ruined ma lyfe, Shabds, Kripas, and urz 2 itz all up 2 u

Angad- I dnt believe u

Shalini- F9 ask Shabd urself den uno wah ur so gna regret it, i dnt fink u care bout Kripa ur gna get her lyfe ruined do u want Shabd 2 marry her in sympathy if u do den stay quiet if u dnt den stop da engagement (she started crying badly) I luv Shabd I cnt live wivout him he luvs me 2 i no buh he has 2 be der coz of Kripa shes his childhood best friend and (Interuptted)

Angad- Dnt cry if Shabd luvs u den he will be wid u, buh if I fynd out he doesnt luv u and u wer liein 2 me den it wont be gd 4 u

Shalini- I dnt have anyfing 2 hide go and ask him his engagement waz fixed wid me and take dese photos take da album

Angad- Ayt

Angad leaves

Meanwhile we c Manhattan Airport

Armaan and Ridz have cm 2 collects Ridhimas parents

Ammy- Ridz da flights landed der must be cmin

Ridz- Yh woh Armaan sori

Ammy- Sori 4 wah

Ridz- Woh tum nahiye anah chahteh teh lekin Aunty neh (Interuptted)

Ammy- Its ayt dun wori woh kya haina mein Laiba seh bahuth pyaar (Interuptted)

Ridz- U mean u luv Laiba

Ammy- Yh just wanted 2 try telling her dat 2dy shes in gd mood, buh Mom sent me ere buh its ok I will tell her wen we get back

Ridz- Yh u and Laiba look very cute 2geva if u need any help I will always be der 4 u Armaan

Ammy- Thx Ridhima and yh call me Ammy nt Armaan

Ridz- K Ammy

Ammy- Ridhima ur namez 2 long hw bout I call u Ridz or Ridzy wah u fink?

Ridz- U can call me Ridzy

Ammy- Ayt it sound cute (he hugs her)

Just den Shashank and Padma came Ridz parents they so Ammy and Ridz huggin each oda they both wer very happy

Shashank- Padma jo kuch bhi humneh aur Kirti bhabhi aur Shubankar neh soacha tha wahiye hogha Armaan aur hamari Ridhima ki shaadi

Padma- Haan aap tike kehrahaye hai saat mein dono bahuth he ache lag rehay

Shashank- Ab chaloh

Padma- Haan chaliye

Ridz- (Happily) MAMA, PAPA!!!!!!!!!!

Ridz hugged dem and Ammy greeted dem

Nw we c every1 at da engagement hall Shashank, Padma, Ammy and Ridz wer der as well every1 was der besides Angad he was on his way buh it waz 2 much traffic

Shabd and Kripa wer on da stage they both exchanged rings, every1 waz very happy especially Shabd and Kripa and seeing dem happy Dev and Ganga wer very happy

Shubankar/Kirti- Ise khushi keh maukhe par humbhi aap sab ko kuch batanah chahateh hai, hum apne beta Armaan ki shaadi Ridhima keh saat karehay hai aur hum bahuth he jald in dono ki sagaai karneh waleh hai

Every1 clapped

Ammy and Ridz wer shocked

PREVIEW- ANGAD AND SHABD CONFRONTATION

-SHABDS AUNTY AND UNCLE ARRIVE

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O-M-G!! GREAT IDEA! Now u dont have to kill Angad or Shabd!
Cant wait for Shabd-Angad confrontion.
Armaan and Ridz! YES!
Not Angad-Ridz! YES!
Luv ya lotz di!!
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O-M-G!! GREAT IDEA! Now u dont have to kill Angad or Shabd!

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Armaan and Ridz! YES!
Not Angad-Ridz! YES!
Luv ya lotz di!!
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Armaan and Ridz were very shocked every1 was congratulating them

Laiba hugged Ammy and Ridz

Laiba- Congrats!!!!!

Ammy left angrily

Ridz wasnt happy either

Kirti- Shubankar Armaan chalah gaya mein jakar dekthi hoon

Shubankar- Kirti reheneh doh woh abhi ajaygha

Shashank and Padma were confused y did Armaan leave

Padma- Kriti, Armaan ko kya hua woh bahaar kyun chalah gaya

Shashank- Mujhe kuch tike nahiye lag raha

Shubankar- Nahiye aisi koi baat nahiye hai woh abhi ajaygha

Dev, Ganga, Summit and Kumkum congratulated Kirti, Shubankar, Shashank and Padma

Laiba was talkin 2 Ridz

Laiba- Kya hua Ridz u ok mujhe nahiye lagtha tum khush ho, u should be happy Ammy bahuth he acha ladka hai he will keep u very happy

Ridz- Laiba I dnt want 2 marry Ammy (Ridz goes outsyde)

Laiba waz confused

Meanwhile we c Angad he has finally reached da engagement hall, Ammy is angry and is outsyde

Angad- Ammy has da engagement happened

Ammy- Yh Angad it has where wer u?

Angad- I went smwer it was 2 much traffic so I couldnt reach on tyme, I will talk 2 u l8ter 4 nw i goto talk 2 Shabd

Angad goes insyde half of the guests left and nw its just da sm close relatives and da Malhotra family, Khanna family and Malik family

Kripa- Angad I'm very angry wid u wer u been u missed ma engagement

Angad- Kripa I went smwer important it waz 2 much traffic so couldnt make it

Kripa- Angad wah could be more important den ma engagement

Angad- I'm sori Kripa well I'm ere nw

Kripa- Yh

Laiba- Bro arent u goin 2 congratulate dem

Angad- Happy engagement

Shabd/Kripa- Thx =)

Laiba- Bro u have 2 congratulate 2 more poeple

Angad- Who?

Laiba- Ammy and Ridz Aunty and Uncle announced der engagement

Angad- WAH!!!!

Laiba- Yh u should've seen Ammy and Ridz they wer so shocked, I will be bck I will just c wer Ammy is

Laiba went outsyde 2 fynd Ammy

Angad- Shabd I need 2 talk 2 u bout smefing

Shabd- Yh tell me

Angad- Uno... (Interuptted)

Ganga- SHABD BETA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tumahareh Chacha, Chachi agaye

Shabd- Angad wel talk afta i gta meet ma Aunty and Uncle

Shabd goes 2 meet his Uncle and Aunty

Nw we c Shabds Uncle and Aunty Inderjeet Sareen and Monorama Sareen

Monoroma and Balma (They came in Pari Hoon Main der so funni) 😆

Shabd- Kaise hai aap Chachaji, Chachiji

Chachaji- Hum toh tike hai tum kaise ho beta

Chachiji- Mera beta kitneh saloh baad tumhe dhekrehay jabseh humhe patha chalah tumhari shaadi horahi hum seedha London seh agaye flight thodi delay hogayi thi

Shabd- Mein bilkul tike ho Chachaji, Chachiji aap loke aiyi hai mein aapko Kripa seh milwatha hoon

Chachiji- Haan beta hum hamari huneh walhi bahu seh milenghe

Shabd takes dem 2 meet Kripa

Chachiji- Jeethi raho beti (she hugs her) hamaari bahu bahuth he pyaari hai

Chachaji- Manoramahji hamari bahu ko shagun toh doh woh soneh keh kaagan

Chachiji- (Angrily) Haan haan dethi hoon woh driver kahaan gaya, bag mein rakheh hai yeh naspitha, kalmooha balma kahaan gaya

Just den we c Balma he is Chachijis bruva

Balma- Behenah hum yaha hai

Chachiji- Balma bag kahaan hai jisemein soneh keh kagaan rakheh teh

Balma- Behenah yeh loh woh wakhi ka saaman woh driver neh nahiye laneh diya

Chachiji- Auseh mein baad mein dhekloonghi Kripa beta yeh kaagan humneh tumhaari liye banaye (she put da kaagan on her, Kripa touches der feet) jeethi raho beti

Chachaji- Jeethi raho beti tumhe duniya ki saari khushiyaan mileh

Dev/Ganga- Aapko raaste mein koi takleef toh nahiye hui

Chachaji- Jee nahiye hum araam seh agaye

Chachiji- Flight delay hogayi thi waise aapka woh driver bahuth hi bekaar hai, itni engrazi baultha hai humhe toh samaj nahiye aiyeh

Balma- Behanah agaya woh driver yahaan kya kar raha hai

Ganga- Manoramahji yeh Rob hai Kripa ka dost driver nahiye hai, iseh toh maine peheja tha aap logo ko leneh leh liye

Chachaji- Acha humhe patha nahiye tha

Ganga- Aap loge chaliyeh hamareh ghar

Chachaji- Aaj nahiye hum kal aiyghe hum pehele ghar janah chahateh hai

Ganga- Tike hai jaise aap loge tike samje

Dev- Haan agar kisi aur cheez ki zarooth ho humhe bathadijiye

Chachaji- Tike hai

Nw we c Rob he was very angry wid Shabds Uncle and Aunty and Balma

Alisha- Wahs rong Rob?

Rob- (Angrily) Alisha im so angry Shabds Aunty and her bruva wahs his name dat gawaar Balma were annoyin me all da way wah do they say in der gawaar language naspitha, kalmooha etc.... all da way wer annoyin me they wer callin me driver idiots do I look like a driver

Alisha- Calm dwn Rob ignore dem wer doin all dis 4 Kripa so we goto tolerate dem

Rob- Yh I no I feel sorri 4 Shabds Uncle poor him he has 2 tolerate dem, and nw even Shabd has 2 tolerate dem der such clever people, they look evil

Alisha- Rob we shouldnt judge people da way they look, we should be goin I will c wer da rest r

Rob- K

Just den Alisha sees Monorama and Balma and gets scared, Sujal cms

Sujal- Alisha wah happened?

Alisha- (Scaredly) Sujal lets go home plz rite nw

Sujal- K calm dwn lets go, Rob get da odas I will wait in da jeep quicktyme

Rob- K Bro

Dev and Ganga leave wiv Kripa and Khanna family also leaves, Malik family and Gupta family leave as well

Nw we c Sareen Mansion

Shabd- Chachaji, Chachiji yeh aap logo ka kamrah hai, aur Balmaji yeh aapka

Chachiji- Beta ghar toh bahuth he pyaarah hai tumharah aur yeh kamrah bahuth he acha hai

Shabd- Thx Chachiji

Chachaji- Shabd Beta hum tumhari aur Kripa ki shaadi dhekar he jayienghe

Chachiji- Haan Beta mein toh kehthi hoon Shaadi jald seh jald ho mein baat karthi hoon kal Kripa keh Ma, baap seh

Shabd- Jee Chachaji, Chachiji jaise aap tike samjeh ab aap loke araam kijiye

Chachiji- Acha beta

Shabd leaves

Nw we c Chachaji and Chachiji talkin

Chachiji- (Angrily) Kya zaroorth thi soneh keh kagaan denikee haan, tum toh (Interupted)

Chachaji- Manoramaji aap ko toh patha hai Shabd ka koi nahiye mein auseka Chacha hoon hamarah bhi kuch faraz bantha hai

Chachiji- (Angrily) Toh kya karoon mein hum yahaan koi shaadi nahiye dhekneh aiye hai, hum yahaan (Interuptted)

Balma- Behena!!!! mujhe thareh seh zaroori baat karni hai

Chachaji- Tum loge baatein karoh mein abhi atha hoon

Chachiji- Thari baise ki pooch naspiteh kalmoohain tu galath waqt par agaya, mein toh Inderjeet seh Shabd ki property ki baat karni walhi thi, mujhe property chahiye ismein sirf aur sirf meri Beti ka haq hai ause Shabd ka nahiye aur tu bhi galth waqt par ajahtha hai (she started hittin him) naspiteh.. (Interuptted)

Balma- Behena marnah baand kar meri baat to sune

Chachiji- Kya baat suno

Balma- Behena tu bhi paagal hai agar tu jeejaji ko bathadethi toh woh pehele seh he sab Shabd ko deh dethe jeejaji Shabd seh bahuth pyaar karthe hai unke signature keh begaair property transfer nahiye hosakthi ek signature Shabd ka aur ek signature Jeejaji ka aur phir property hamaari humhe sabar seh kaam lenah chahiye

Chachiji- (Happily) Areh Balma tu sahiye keh raha hai tu itna samajdaar kaise hogaya

Balma- Behenah tumseh he sikha hai

Chachiji- Haan Balma ab tujah sojah subhah baat kareghe

Balma- Jee Behenah

Nxt day Angad decides 2 confront Shabd he fones Shabd

Shabd- Hello

Angad- Shabd I need 2 talk 2 u about somefing important meet me in in Sports Club in bout half an hour

Shabd- Wah happened Angad anyfing serious

Angad- I will tell u wen I meet u mke sure u be der

Shabd- K

Ammy cms 2 meet Angad nw we c dem talkin in da garden

Ammy- Angad u must have heard bout da engagement I dunno wah 2 do

Angad- Ammy Laiba waz tellin me bout it I dunno u should tell Ridz da truth she will understand shes a nyce girl, and talk 2 Uncle and Aunty

Ammy- I told Ridz already b4 da engagement was announnced and she agreed 2 help me, buh dunno wah 2 do I luv Laiba buh dunno bout her I no she dnt luv me in dat way u gta help me

Angad- Ammy dun wori I will handle everyfing u just tell Uncle and Aunty dat u dnt want 2 go ahead wiv da engagement they will understand

Ammy- Der gna say why

Angad- U tell dem Y

Ammy- U mean bout me and Laiba

Angad- Yh, Ridz will support u 2 k everyfing will be ayt I will talk 2 Laiba rite nw Im goin 2 Sports Club 2 talk 2 Shabd bout smefing serious

Ammy- Wah happened?

Angad tells Ammy about his meeting wid Shalini and wah she told about Shabd

Angad- Dunno wah 2 do who 2 believe Shabd or Shalini, I gta ask Shabd da truth I dnt want Kripas life 2 get ruined

Ammy- Ayt u go I will talk 2 u l8ter

Angad- K dun wori Ammy everyfing will be ayt

Angad goes 2 da Sports Club

Shabd is der waiting for him Angad cms

Shabd- Der u r Angad I been waitin 4 half an hour nw kya baat hai

Angad- Shabd wahs all dis? (he shows him da pictures) U and Shalini luved each oda frm Italy and den wen u so Kripa u left Shalini and nw u luv Shalini buh ur gna marry Kripa coz of sympathy (he carried on talkin)

Shabd- (Angrily) ENOUGH ANGAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ur calling my luv 4 Kripa sympathy hw could u even fink dat afta all u seen Shalini is lieing I dnt luv her she luvs me buh I've always taken her as a gd friend dis pics r taken frm my college and uni days. I luv Kripa and only her all dese yrz I waz waitin 4 her I cnt believe u hw could u even listen 2 her sayin all dat I dnt care wah u fink bout me or any1 else does I luv Kripa and she luvs me

Shabd leaves angrily

Angad is shocked afta hearin everyfing meanwhile Ridz sees Angad and cms 2 talk 2 him

Ridz- Hey Angad u ok

Angad- Hey Ridz yh im k wah bout u? wah u doin ere?

Ridz- I just cm ere 2 play badmington

Angad- Oh k I cm 2 meet Shabd

Ridz- Oh k Angad u must of heard bout mynes and Ammy engagement I dnt want 2 go ahead wiv it, I'm gna help Ammy and Laiba

Angad- Yh I no Ammy waz very tensed bout it I told him to talk 2 his parents

Ridz- Yh i waz finkin 2 do da same buh dunno hw Mama, Papa gna react

Angad- Dun wori everyfing will be ayt

Ridz- I hope so

PREVIEW- ANGAD APOLOGISES 2 SHABD

-SHABD AND KRIPA AT CLUB WID GANG, ANGAD, LAIBA, AMMY AND RIDZ

- KRIPA GETS FLASHBACKS

-SHALINI IN CLUB

Edited by Anam Ali - 14 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG DI!! HOW WONDERFUL!!
YESSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kripa will get a flashback soon!!
U ROCK DI!
Really relived abt the Shabd and Angad scene. Thank god Shabd luvs Kripa. U know the girl u used for Shalini isnt her name Shivani or something? Anywayz awesome. Cant wait when Kripa reacllz her memory. U know di; i think u shud do sumthin like this.
Shabd was lieing to Angad right nw to hide his gulit and when Kripa getz her memory back she remembers how Shabd had betrayed her and went to the Shalini chick, so thtz when Kripa stopped believing in love!
Ok g2g! Gonna write part 6 of Hatred 2 Love now!!
Harji

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