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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1

OMG DI!! HOW WONDERFUL!!

YESSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kripa will get a flashback soon!!
U ROCK DI!
Really relived abt the Shabd and Angad scene. Thank god Shabd luvs Kripa. U know the girl u used for Shalini isnt her name Shivani or something? Anywayz awesome. Cant wait when Kripa reacllz her memory. U know di; i think u shud do sumthin like this.
Shabd was lieing to Angad right nw to hide his gulit and when Kripa getz her memory back she remembers how Shabd had betrayed her and went to the Shalini chick, so thtz when Kripa stopped believing in love!
Ok g2g! Gonna write part 6 of Hatred 2 Love now!!
Harji

Thx a lot Harji😃 gd prediction lets c wah happens I will update 2moraw I'm waitin 2 read Hatred 2 Love hurry up its 1.21am ere in UK gan go sleep in a while
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part.. pata nahi ab kya hoga... i dont want shabd negative but ive had a liking to ak...

i like armaan-ridz but then wat will happen to laiba...u no? i dont want laiba all alone..but i dont want armaan ridz seperate..

continue soon....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: brainychild92

nice part.. pata nahi ab kya hoga... i dont want shabd negative but ive had a liking to ak...

i like armaan-ridz but then wat will happen to laiba...u no? i dont want laiba all alone..but i dont want armaan ridz seperate..

continue soon....

Thx a lot 😃 Keep reading 2 fynd out wah happens I will update l8ter
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thx a lot 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks a lot 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome , mind blowing dear you did it i am happy , thx for pm .
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Originally posted by: monikaseth

awesome , mind blowing dear you did it i am happy , thx for pm .

Thx a lot Monika 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

THIS PART IS DEDICATED 2 BRAINYCHILD92 AS ITS HER B'DAY 2DY

HAPPY BIRTHDAY I HOPE ALL UR WISHES AND DREAMS CM TRUE HAVE A WONDERFUL DAY

Part 70

Angad and Ridz go bck 2 Khanna house

Kumkum- Ridhima beta kaisi ho

Ridz- Jee Aunty mein tike hoon aap kaisi hai

Kumkum- Mein tike hoon beta lunch karkeh janah

Ridz- Nahiye Aunty phir kabhii mein toh Laiba seh milneh aiyi thi

Kumkum- Beta, Laiba gharpeh nahiye hai thodi dher mein ajayghi

Ridz- Tike hai mein baad mein ajonghi

Angad- Mom, Ammy kahaan hai

Kumkum- Beta hes gone home

Angad- Mom wers Laiba gone

Kumkum- Patha nahiye beta keh rahiye thi koi zaroori kaam hai auseh, patha nahiye ise ladki ko kya hogaya I'm very worried

Angad- Zaroori kaam Laiba ko aisa kaisa kaam Mom mein dhekar atha hoon

Kumkum- Acha beta mein abhi athi hoon

Kumkum goes 2 da kitchen

Ridz- Angad dun wori Laiba will be k u go and chek da shoppin mall, da beach, and oda places I'm goin 2 tell Mama, Papa dat I'm not goin to get engaged 2 Ammy

Angad- K I will talk 2 u l8ter

Ridz- Ayt bye

Angad- Bye

Nw we c Ridz talkin 2 her parents Shashank and Padma

Ridz- Mama, Papa I need 2 talk 2 u

Shashank/Padma- Haan beta bhaloh wahs da matter

Ridz- Mama mujhe Ammy seh shaadi nahiye karni

Shashank and Padma were shocked

Shashank/Padma- KYA!!!! lekin kyun beta Armaan bahuth he acha ladka

Ridz- Mujhe maulam hai woh bahuth he acha ladka hai mujhe bas shaadi nahiye karni plz

Padma- Lekin beta hum (Interuptted)

Ridz- Plz Mama mein aur Ammy sirf aur sirf dost hai aur hamesha dost rehenghe

Shashank- (Angrily) Ridhima tumhari shaadi sirf aur sirf Armaan seh hogi maine zubaan di hai Shubankar ko aur Kirti Bhabhi ko

Ridz- Lekin Papa

Shashank- (Angrily) BAS!!!!!!!! AB ISE BAAT PAR KOI BEHAAS NAHIYE KARENGHE

Shashank and Padma leave

Nw we c Angad findin Laiba he goes 2 cliffpoint Laiba is standing by da fire burnin all da cards, gifts Aryan gave her

Angad- Laiba wah u doin? wahs all dis?

Laiba- Bro just gettin rid of all da fings dat remind me of Aryan, I neva ever fought dat he would ever betray me 2dy I make a promise 2 myself Laiba Khanna will neva ever fall in love, from nw on I dnt believe in da word LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (she cries)

Angad- Laiba just coz 1 person leaves doesnt mean u dnt believe in da word love, he doesnt deserve u itz all destiny dat y 2dy ur nt wiv him u derserve way beta nw stop crying (he hugs her)

Laiba- Bro u dnt understand wah bout u Bro u love Kripa will u be able 2 luv sm1 else is it destiny dat ur nt wid Kripa and Shabd is y bro y do we have 2 suffer all da tyme

Angad- Its destiny and luck at da same tyme our tyme will cm also, nw lets go home Mama waz worried bout u, i gta talk 2 u bout smefing important lets go home dnt cry 4 sm1 whos not worth it ma sistas strong girl

Angad and Laiba go 2 Khanna Mansion

Meanwhile we c Ammy talkin 2 his parents and they are very angry wid him

Shubankar- (Angrily) AMMY!!!!!!!!! ENOUGH U CANT SAY NO 2 DIS RISHTHA

Kirti- Ammy wahs rong wid u beta akhir kyun wahs ur reason

Ammy- Coz I (Hes fone rang) WAH!!!!!! RISHI KA ACCIDENT IM COMIN!!!!!!!!!

Ammy leaves goes 2 Mahattan Hospital 2 c his friend Rishi

Nw we c Angad, Laiba, and Yuvika in Khanna Mansion

Yuvika- Chachu, Bua chaliyeh hum park mein jayeghe itneh din hogaye hum park nahiye ghe I gt ma football Chachu me and u can play football plz lets go

Angad- Bacha wel go sm oda tyme not 2dy ur Laiba buas not in good mood

Kumkum cms

Yuvika- Plz Chachu plz chaliyeh nah Dadima tell Chachu and Bua

Kumkum- Angad, Laiba tum loge joa Yuvika ko park lejoa shes really bored at home beta itneh dino seh keh rahiye hai

Laiba- Bro u take Yuvika I'n not feeling 2 well Yuvika bacha wen u cm back I will play wid u promise bye

Yuvika- Bua aap tike toh haina Chachu we wont go Bua not well

Laiba- Yuvika Bacha mein tike hoon just a slight headache Mom keh paas bethoghi sab tike hojaygha

Kumkum- Laiba I will call da doctor

Laiba- Nahiye Mom I'm F9 mujhe sirf aapke paas bethanah hai, Bro u take Yuvika

Yuvika- Lekin Bua (Interuptted)

Laiba- (Happily) Im F9 tum loge joa and yh Bro bring ma favourite Bens and Jerrys Chocolate Ice Cream ders no more left and bring loads of chocolates

Angad- K anyfing 4 ma beauitful sista

Yuvika- (she hugs Laiba and kisses her cheek) Bua u take care of urself hum jaldi wapis ajayenghe I promise

Laiba- K Bacha bye

Angad and Yuvika go Park they play football have a lot of fun just den Yuvika sees Ridhima standing by da bench crying

Yuvika- Chachu dats Ridz Di shes crying over der by da bench lets go and c

Angad- Chaloh lets go

Yuvika- Ridz Di kya hua y u crying

Ridz cried more

Angad- Ridhima wah rong plz dnt cry

Ridhima hugged Angad

Angad- Ridhima wah happened?

Shashank and Padma went passed da park and they so all dis

Shashank- (Angrily) Toh yeh baat hai Ridhima Angad ko chahathi isliye Armaan seh shaadi nahiye karnah chahathi hai, Padma ab humhe itna sharmindha honah paregha Shubankar aur Kirti Bhabhi keh samneh

Padma- Shashank aap kuch zyadah he overeact kar rehay hai, agar Ridhima Angad ko chahathi hai toh auseki shaadi Angad keh saat hoghi hum abhi jakar Kirti aur Shabankar bhaisab seh milteh hai aur uneh saachai batha detha hum itneh saloh seh dost hai woh samaj jayenghe dekhiye yeh hamaari beti ki zindagi ka sawaal hai mein auseki ankoah mein ansoo nahiye dekhsakthi

Shashank- Haan tum tike keh rahiye ho hum abhi Malik house chalteh hai

Shashank and Padma go 2 Malik house

Ridhima- Woh Angad I told Mama, Papa dat I dnt want 2 marry Ammy buh they sed I have 2 Papa waz shouting badly I cnt do anyfing nw 2 help Ammy and Laiba Im sorri I tried ma best I dunno wah im gna say 2 Ammy

Angad- (he wipes her tears) Ridhima dun wori everyfing will be fine wel all sort it out I will tell Ammy

Ridhima- Buh Angad I promised Ammy dat I will help him, buh nw i cnt do anyfing (she cries more) mein Mama, Papa keh kilaaf nahiye jasakthi

Angad- Ridhima i told u well all sort it out everyfing gna be alright dnt cry

Yuvika- Ridz Di plz dnt cry aap hamareh saat chaliye hai hum Bens and Jerrys Ice cream shop ja rehay aapka mood bhi tike hojaygha dnt wori Di Chachu neh kaha sab kuch tike hojaygha dat means he will make sure everyfings alright nw stop crying hamareh saat chaliyeh Chachu tell Di

Angad- Haan Ridhima hamareh saat chaloh tumharah mood tike hojaygha mein Ammy ko bhi fone kartha hoon

Yuvika- Haan Di ab chaliyeh

Ridhima agrees 2 go nw we c dem in Ben and Jerrys Ice Cream shop Angad rings Ammy buh hes fone is switched off

Ridz- Angad kya hua, kya kaha Ammy neh

Angad- Ridhima hes fone is switched off I will talk 2 him l8ter (Just den Angads fone rang it waz shalini he goes outsyde 2 anwser da call) (Angrily) Y DA HELL R U FONEING ME U LIED 2 ME SHABD DOESNT LUV U HE LUVS KRIPA

Shalini- HES LIEING!!!!! he luvs me u dnt no him Angad hes really clever and evil (she started crying more) hes fooled u 2 just like he has fooled Kripa and da rest of da family plz listen 2 me

Angad- (Angrily) Just shurrup dnt ever fone me again (he disconnects da fone)

He goes bck in da shop

Ridz- Angad waz dat Ammy on da fone

Angad- No it waz sm rong numba shall we leave nw I'll just get sm ice cream and chocolates 2 take home 4 Laiba

Ridz- K

Yuvika- Chachu I want strawberry ice cream 2 I will cm wid u I want 2 choose da chocolates

Angad- K chaloh Ridhima do u want anyfing

Ridz- No thx Angad

He left his fone on da table and went to get da Ice cream, his fone rang it waz Kripa

Ridz- Angad ur fones ringin its Kripa

Angad- Ridhima anwser it

Ridz- K (she answers da fone)

Kripa- Hey Angad kaise ho itz Kripa mein aur Shabd tumhareh ghar mein hai tum kab arahey ho woh hum shaam ko desi club jarehay hai Shabd keh dost Italy seh aiye hai toh party rakhi hai tumhe aur Laiba ko invite karneh aiye teh

Ridz- Kripa itz Ridhima

Kripa- Ridhima hw cm u gt Angads fone

Ridz- Woh Angad gne 2 get smefing so left his fone on da table he told me 2 anwser it

Kripa- Oh k I was goin 2 ur house afta as well 2 invite u, make sure u cm tell Angad cm soon me and Shabd r waitin 4 him at his house k bye

Ridz- Ok bye

Nw we c Shabd and Kripa talkin 2 Kumkum and Laiba

Kumkum- Kripa beta kya kaha Angad neh kab arahe hai woh loge

Kripa- Aunty, Ridhima neh fone uthaya woh loke thodi dher mein ajaygha

Kumkum- Ridhima woh bhi Angad aur Yuvika keh saat hai, Angad aur Yuvika toh akele ghe teh, athe hoghe beta tum loge betho

Kripa- Jee Aunty

Nw we c Ridz, Angad and Yuvika

Ridz- Angad woh Kripa neh fone kiya she's at ur house ders a party 2dy at desi club 4 Shabd and Kripas engagement, all of Shabds friends r cmin frm Italy so dats y ders a party she wants u 2 be der, Kripa and Shabd r both at ur house

Angad- K we should be goin

Just den a middle aged couple went passed

Middle aged couple- Beta tum dono ki beti bahuth he pyaari hai kya naam hai tumahrah beta

Yuvika- Mera naam Yuvika hai Yuvika....P

Middle aged couple- Bahuth he pyaarah naam hai, beta tum dono saat mein bahuth ache lagthe ho

Ridz gt embarassed Angad wanted 2 clarify everyfing b4 he could do dat Yuvika spoke

Yuvika- Uncle, Aunty yeh dono mera parents nahiye hai mera naam Yuvika Prem Khanna hai, yeh mere chachu hai aur yeh meri Di haan aapneh ek baat tike kahiye meri Di aur Chachu saat mein bahuth ache lagteh hai

Middle aged couple- Wer sori beta humhe patha nahiye tha

Ridz/Angad- Koi baat nahiye hai

Middle aged couple- Humhe toh lagah aap loge saat hai aur yeh aapki beti hai, hum chalthe hai bye Yuvika beta

Yuvika- Bye Uncle, Aunty

Da middle aged couple leave

Angad, Ridz and Yuvika leave

Ridz- Angad mujhe ghar chor doh

Yuvika- Di hamareh saat ghar chaliyeh nah hum bahuth masti karenghe, khelenghe movies dekenghe

Ridz- Phir kabhi Yuvika beta

Yuvika- Nahiye aap hamareh saat chaliyeh plz agar aap nahiye aiyi mein aapseh baat nahiye karoonghi (Yuvika folds her armz and makes a sad face)

Angad- Ridhima tum chaloh hamareh saat warnah Yuvika naraaz hojayghi I cnt see her upset

Ridz- Tike hai chaloh

Yuvika- (Happily) YAY!!!!!!!!!

Nw we c Angad, Ridz and Yuvika in Khanna Mansion

Kripa- Der u r Angad, Ridz and ma beauitful princess Yuvika kaisi ho?

Yuvika hugged Kripa

Yuvika- Im F9 Di aap kaisi hai

Kripa- I'm F9 u lot took ages

Yuvika- Di mein aur chachu park geh teh we had a lot of fun we played football and den we so Ridhima Di in da park we all went Bens and Jerrys Ice Cream shop I had a lot of fun Di, Dadi, Bua,Shabd Uncle I'm gna tell u smefing really funni Chachu, Ridz Di bathadoo sabko

Kripa- Batha Yuvika jaldi seh

Yuvika- Di uno aaj humhe ek Uncle, Aunty mileh they thought Chachu aur Ridz Di were married and I waz der kid, it waz so funni Chachu aur Di ki shakaal dhekeneh liake thi

Kripa laughed so much

Kripa- OMG!!!! Really I should've been der 2 c

Angad- Kripa enough its nt dat funni

Ridz- Yh they just had a misunderstanding

Yuvika- I told dem Im Yuvika Prem Khanna they were shocked I sed dats my Di and Chachu

Kumkum- Acha toh Yuvika beta aapneh bahuth masti ki ab jakeh araam karoh, Mukthi ka fone aiya tha tumseh baat karnah chahathi maine kaha tum bahir gayi hui Angad keh saat

Yuvika- Dadima Mama, Papa kab arahey hai

Kumkum- Beta do din mein ajayenghe tumhari Nanima tumhe bahuth miss kar rahiye hai, Mukthi batha rahiye thi,

Yuvika- Haan Dadima I miss Nanima 2 lekin yeh skewl bhi na, agar skewl nahiye hotha toh mein bhi jathi Canada Mama,Papa, Raj keh saat Im missin dem all

Kumkum- Beta 2 din mein ajayenghe ab tum joa thoda araam karoh

Yuvika- Dadima mujhe Ridz Di keh saat khelnah hai aur Chachu, Bua keh saat basketball khelnah hai bahuth saari games khelni hai aur movies dhekin hai plz Dadima

B4 Kumkum can say anyfing Laiba spoke

Laiba- Chaloh Yuvika mein aur tum Basketball khelteh hai

Yuvika- Tike hai Bua mein abhi athi hoon I will put ma trainers on

Laiba- Tike hai hurry up

Shabd recieves a fone call

Shabd- Excuse me (Shabd goes outsyde) I sed 2 u dnt fone me ever Shalini tumhe ek baar samaj mein nahiye atha (he disconneted da fone) just den hes fone rang again (he anwsered it again) I TOLD U DNT FONE ME I GT NUFFIN 2 DO WIV U

Chachiji- Shabd beta itna kyun chilah rehay ho mein tumhaari chachi bhol rahiye ho

Shabd- (Calms dwn) Sorri Chachiji woh kuch dher pehele ek rong numba neh fone kiya tha anyways inko choriyeh kya baat hai

Chachiji- Beta mein keh rahiye thi aaj shaam ki club party mein tum Balma ko bhi saat lehjo

Shabd- Jee tike hai Chachiji

Chachiji- Acha beta ek aur baat Kripa ki family ko hum kal invite kar rehay hai dinner keh liyeh, phir mein shaadi ki baat karoonghi unseh beta tumhe koi eteraarz toh nahiye hai tum uneh batha deneh shaam ko mein uneh fone kardonghi lekin tum apni taraf seh uneh batha denah

Shabd- Nahiye Chachiji mujhe koi eteraaz nahiye hai mein uneh bathadoongha

Chachiji- Tike hai beta ab mein fone rakthi hoon

Shabd disconnected da fone

Angad came outsyde

Angad- Shabd I'm sorri for wah I sed I believed Shalini its just I care 4 Kripa shes ma m8 I dnt want her 2 be hurt and (Interuptted)

Shabd- Its ok Angad I can understand dnt wori bout it make sure u cm 4 da party

Angad- Yh I will defo be der

Shabd- Dats gr8

They go insyde da mansion

Shabd- Kripa we need 2 go 2 ya house nw

Kripa- K make sure u cm Laiba and Angad and u Ridz it will be a lot of fun

Shabd- Yh do cm

Angad/Ridz- Yh we will be der

Laiba- Sorri I wont be able 2 cm Im in no mood 4 parties

Angad- We will be der

Kripa- U beta cm Laiba

Kumkum- Ofcourse Beta she will cm

Shabd- We gta go now we need 2 go 2 invite Ammy and den wer goin Kripas house 2 invite Josh and Shaz

Kripa- I will c u lot in da party bye

Laiba/Angad- Bye

Shabd and Kripa leave

Nw we c Malik house Shashank and Padma apologise 2 Shubankar and Kirti and tell dem wah happened

Kirti- Aap loge maafi kyun maag rehay koi baat nahiye jahaan Ridhima ki khushi auseki shaadi aap wahiye kariye

Shubankar- Angad bahuth he acha ladka Armaan aur Angad best friends seh bachpaan seh, aur hum une ki family ko bhi janthe bahuth he ache hai hum rishteh ki baat karteh hai Summit aur Kumkum seh

Padma- Haan yeh acha rehagah

Ammy came and heard all dis he waz very happy

Ammy- (To himself) Angad aur Ridz neh acha plan banaya ab mein aur Laiba hamesha leh liya saat hosakteh, mein abhi Ridz aur Angad ko fone kartha hoon mere fone ki battery dead hai pehele fone charged kartha hoon (he goes 2 his room he charges da fone and den he sees 4 miss calls frm Angad) Angad neh zaroor plan bataneh keh liye fone kiyah abhi auseh fone kartha hoon actually mein ausekeh ghar jatha hoon I can c Laiba as well

Ammy cms dwnstairz

Shubankar- Ammy kahaan ja rehay ho idhar aoa

Ammy- Jee Dad namastey Uncle, Aunty (Ammy sat dwn on da sofa

Shubankar- Ammy kya tum janteh teh Angad aur Ridhima ek dosreh seh pyaar karthe hai toh tumneh humhe bataya kyun nahiye

Ammy- Woh Dad mein bataneh walah tha aaj mera fone aiya mera dost Rishi ka accident hogaya tha isliye mein hospital chalah gaya Angad aur Ridhima ek dosreh seh bahuth pyaar karteh hai aur mein unke beech mein nahiye anah chahatha toh Uncle, Aunty aap plz une donoh ko alaag maat kijiyeh (he had tears in his eyes)

Ammy was joking 2 dem he fought dat Angad and Ridz mde dis plan 2 get him and Laiba 2geva he was very happy

Shashank- Armaan beta tum tike keh rehay ho hum Angad aur Ridhima ki engagement kardenghe bahuth he jald

Ammy- Jee Uncle mein abhi atha hoon mujhe bahar janah hai

Shashank- Acha beta joa

Ammy- Bye Mom, Dad, Uncle and Aunty

Ammy leaves

Kirti- Isse ladke ko kya hua itna khush hogaya ab kahaan chalahgaya

Shubankar- Kirti ajaygha obviously khush hogha na tumbhi na akhir Angad ause ka best friend hai aur Ridz aur Angad saat hai toh hes happy 4 dem

Meanwhile we c Ammy in Khanna house his fone rings its Kripa

Ammy- Elow Kripa hws u?

Kripa- I'm F9 wah bout u?

Ammy- I'm gr8 I'm so happy tum bato

Kripa- Ammy we went ur house buh u werent home its mynes and Shabds engagement party 2dy in Desi Club mke sure u cm

Ammy- Sure I will be der

Kripa- Ayt I gta go nw I will c u l8ter

Ammy- K bye

Kumkum- Ammy beta betho

Ammy- Aunty Im so so happy 2dy Angad kahaan hai

Kumkum- Hes in da garden basketball match chal raha hai Angad aur Ridhima again Laiba and Yuvika

Ammy- Oh k mein abhi jakar dektha hoon interestin match

Kumkum- Beta tum jakar dekho mein jakar tumhareh liye garma gam samoseh lathi hoon

Ammy- Samoseh!!!! Yummy jaldi seh Aunty Im hungry I luv da samoseh u make

Kumkum- Haan abhi lathi ho beta

Kumkum goes kitchen and Ammy goes in da garden 2 c da match

Ammy- ELOW EVERY1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yuvika- Ammy ur ere (she hugs him) u play as well be on our team

Ammy- Yes im ere Yuvi I aint gna play I will watch u Aunty mere liye samoseh laneh gayi hai I'm gna eat samoseh I'm supporting u and Laiba

Yuvika- Tike hai wer gna wiv

Ammy- Haan ofcourse my Yuvi is champion and not 4gettin Laibu

Laiba- Ammy da names Laiba not Laibu

Ammy- Mere liye tum Laibu hoon

Laiba- Ammy stop sayin dat warnah

Ammy- Warnah kya!!! mein toh kahoongha Laibu Laibu!!!!!!!!!

Laiba- Dats it Ammy ur in trouble (Laiba waz running afta Ammy in da garden) Ammy ur so dead u just wait der

Yuvika- Run Ammy!!!!!!!!

Ridz started laughin seein all dis Angad waz happy seeing Ridz laugh

Ridz- Do dese 2 always fight der so cute

Angad- Yh I no they dont listen

Kumkum- Garama garam samoseh tyaar hai chaloh ab baad mein khelnah chaloh Yuvika bacha betho, Angad, Ridhima tum dono bhi aoa aur AMMY LAIBA!!!!!!!!!! tum loge bhi aao enough fighting

Ammy and Laiba cm

Laiba- Mom its nt my fault yeh Ammy bhinah hes an idiot

Ammy- Buh Aunty yeh Laiba bhina (Interuptted)

Kumkum- Bas ab koi fight nahiye karengha ab samoseh ko and be quiet mein abhi athi hoon

Every1 is eatin samoseh and enjoyin demselves

Meanwhile we c Kripa in da gangs house she came 2 invite dem, she started gettin headache she waz bout 2 fall buh Shabd held her

Shabd- Kya hua Kripa tum tike toh honah

Kripa- Patha nahiye Shabd Im gettin a slight headache aisah lagtha hai I been ere b4 actually lived ere b4 sab kuch itnah familiar lag raha hai

Shabd- Kripa yeh sirf tumhara wehem hai dnt wori hum iskeh baad ghar chalteh hai ok have a parecetomol u will feel beta

Kripa- Yh tum tike keh rehay ho

Just den Lucky came dwnstairz and Tanz waz chasing him and hittin him

Tanz- Im gna kill u gd 4 nuffin idiot gimme bck ma fags rite nw

Lukcy- Do 1 der mynes u had 2 already nw get lost

Tanz- Y dnt u get lost

Hearin all da noise Alisha came out of da kitchen she so Shabd and Kripa

Alisha- LUCKY, TANZ!!!! Quit fightin be quiet go and sit down, Shabd and Kripa have cm, sori guys dese lot never listen they didnt realise u wer der

Kripa- Yh dese idiots r always fightin they always do dat rememba wen Aryan came and Tanz gt confused who was who coz der both twin I choked dem out da house and I called dem retards den they gt quiet we should do dat again der onli scared of me and Bro

Alisha, Lucky and Tanz were shocked Kripa remembered sm of da past dis happened wen Kripas memory didnt go. Shabd waz very confused

Kripa- So Lucky, Tanz dnt fite odawyse (Interuptted)

Lucky/Tanz- Wer sori Kripa

Alisha- Lucky, Tanz can u 2 go in da garden and get da washing

Lucky/Tanz- K Alisha

Lucky and Tanz go in da garden

Alisha- Kripa, Shabd tum loge kya loghe chai, coffee, cold drink (Interuptted)

Shabd- Alisha dnt be formal wer F9

Kripa- Yh we just came 2 invite all of u for our engagement party itz gna be in Desi Club 2dy evening at 7pm

Alisha- K we will be der

Kripa- Wers Sujal Bro? and every1 else

Alisha- Sujals gne out da odas gne shopping

Kripa- Oh k I just need 2 go 2 da bathroom I wil be bck

Alisha- Da bathroom is on da (Interuptted)

Kripa- I no its on da left side cm on Alisha I no itz ma house end of da day

Kripa goes 2 bathroom

Shabd- Alisha yeh sab kya horaha hai Kripa ko headache horaha tha aur ab auseh yaad hai she remember u lot and some of da incidents wah happened

Alisha- (Worriedly) Dis isnt gd Shabd if she remembers all of us all da incidents den she will regain her memory

Shabd- I no Alisha buh it will be gd in a way she will no shes nt 17 anymore she finks wer goin colij so if her memory cms bck den it will be gd me and Kripa can get married

Alisha- Yh Shabd buh I dunno y I'm scared I will tell Ganga Aunty 2 take her 2 c da Doctor c wah he says

Shabd- Yh I will go 2

Kripa came bck

Kripa- Shabd shall we go now we need 2 go home make sure all of u cm

Alisha- Yh we will cm tc bye

Kripa- Bye

Shabd and Kripa leave they go 2 Malhotra Mansion which is nxt door 2 da gangs house

Shaz- They r u Di wer did ya go

Kripa- Shaz I went wiv Shabd went 2 invite every1 for our engagement party its 2dy at 7pm in Desi Club

Shaz- Desi Club sounds cool gr8 cnt wait I beta go and choose ma outfit cm on Di lets go 2 ma room we can choose outfits 4 ourselves

Kripa- K

Shaz and Kripa go 2 Shaz room

Shabd talks 2 Josh and Ganga

Shabd- Josh u cm 2

Josh- Yh I will be der

Shabd- Aunty mujhe aapsab ko invite karnah tha kal dinner keh liye Chachiji neh aap sab ko bhulayah hai

Ganga- Acha Beta hum ajayenghe

Shabd- Aunty ek aur baat bhi karni thi (he tells ganga wah had happened at da gangs house) I fink Kripa ki memory waapis arahiye hai

Josh- Dats gd news

Ganga- Nahiye Josh its nt agar auseki memory waapis agayi toh woh phirseh humhe chorkeh chalijayghi

Josh- Mama Kripa humseh dhoor thoda jayghi she lives next door 2 us

Ganga- Josh I no lekin phirbe if she goes dat means shes will be a drug addict again, aur mein apni beti ko phirseh kodonghi

Shabd- Aunty aap fikar maat kijeeyeh sab kuch tike hojaygha aap doctor keh saat appointment banaiye hum Kripa ko unkeh paas lekar chalteh hai

Ganga- Haan beta mein abhi fone karthi hoon

Shabd- Tike hai Aunty mein chaltha hoon mujhe kuch zaroori kaam hai

Shabd leaves

Kripa cms dwn

Kripa- Mom Shabd chalah gaya humhe toh Madan ko bhi invite karneh janah tha

Ganga- Beta auseh kuch kaam tha

Josh- I will fone Madan and tell him

Kripa- No I will fone (she fones Madan) elow Madan kaise ho its Kripa

Madan- (Happily) I'm F9 Kripa tum kaisi ho

Kripa- Im ok woh Madan aaj Desi Club mein meri aur Shabd ki saagai ki party make sure u cm

Madan- Ofcourse I will be der Kripa

Kripa- K Bye

Madan- Bye

Madan disconneted da fone and smiled evily

Nw we c every in Desi Club enjoying demselves Shabd and Kripa have cut der engagement cake and now every is just chillin in da club

Kripa goes on da oda syde of da club and sees sm people doing drugs, her head hurts she has sm fade images of a girl in a club doin drugs smokin, and she faints

Nw we c Ammy and Angad talkin

Ammy- Angad ur da best u fought of a sik plan u neva told me u proper fooled Ridz parents and ma parents Im so happy nw me and Laiba can be 2geva

Angad- Ammy wah r u on bout I neva sed anyfing 2 dem nor have i mde a plan I waz fonein u buh u didnt anwser so dat we could make a plan

Ammy- WAH!!!!!!!!!

PREVIEW- KRIPA IN HOSPITAL

-ANGAD AND RIDZ ENGAGEMENT

Edited by Anam Ali - 14 years ago
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wowowow tht niceeeeeee i love it

Thx a lot 😃

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