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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: -Laiba-

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Ammey and Ridz engagement you better not let that happen ammeyy is mine and anywes a nice but sad part lol! the SK scene was soo cute do continue sooon =)
Love, Laiba

Thx a lot Laiba😃😆

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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome update sk soo cute i am waiting for next update.
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Originally posted by: monikaseth

awesome update sk soo cute i am waiting for next update.

Thx a lot Monika😃 I will update 2moraw or on wed
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hate u di!! U made me cry!! Cant bear seeing Angad with Ridz, especially the part when u said they became really gud friendz!!!!!!! Cant help Angad being with sum1else other then Kripa. Kripa and Shabd are cute, but i have changed my mind!!!!! Do sumthing to Shabd! Make him have cancer or sumthin or make Madan'z plan work or get rid of Angad but at no cost.....total no cost.......do u make Ridz and Angad together! U get it! Or else......aww. Stupid!!!!! 😒 H..a..r...j..i.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1

Hate u di!! U made me cry!! Cant bear seeing Angad with Ridz, especially the part when u said they became really gud friendz!!!!!!! Cant help Angad being with sum1else other then Kripa. Kripa and Shabd are cute, but i have changed my mind!!!!! Do sumthing to Shabd! Make him have cancer or sumthin or make Madan'z plan work or get rid of Angad but at no cost.....total no cost.......do u make Ridz and Angad together! U get it! Or else......aww. Stupid!!!!! H..a..r...j..i.

Aww Harji dnt be sad keep reading nd yh u keep on changing ur mynd i fought u wer happy wid Shabd nd Kripa being 2geva 😆 I will update 2moraw or wed
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thx a lot 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
i love it plzzzzz contuied soon
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Originally posted by: Shafoo

i love it plzzzzz contuied soon

Thx a lot 😃 I will update l8ter
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Nxt Part in a couple of hours
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Part 67

Angad- Wer da hell iz Ammy

Ridz- Angad y dnt u fone him he should be ere

Angad- Yh gd idea

Angad fones Ammy

Nw we c Ammy talkin 2 Laiba

Ammy- Look Laiba I'm sorri i sed it bout 10 times nw plz 4give me (hes fone rang) ELOW!!!!

Angad- Ammy y u shoutin wer r ya? me nd Ridhima r by da cafe

Ammy- Angad just cm on 3rd floor wer in cafe retro

Angad- K wer cmin

He disconnects da fone

Ridz- Wers Armaan?

Angad- Hes on 3rd floor in cafe retro lets go

Ridz- K

They see Ammy talkin 2 Laiba

Ammy- Laiba im sori

Shaz- Laiba stop bein stubborn he sed sori k 4give him, hes ya best friend Laiba he sed bout 10 times nw, ders Angad Bro nd Ridhima nw u lot explain 2 Laiba

Angad- Laiba 4give Ammy plz

Ridz- Laiba we r always upset wid people who we luv nd u 2 r best friends, so 4give him nd be friends again

Laiba- (Angrily) Look Ridhima stay out of dis matter its gt nuffin 2 do wiv u

Angad- (Angrily) LAIBA!!! dnt speak 2 Ridhima like dis (Interuptted)

Ammy- (Angrily) LEAVE IT ANGAD IM SORI RIDHIMA ON LAIBAS BEHALF ND IM SORI LAIBA I FOUGHT U WOULD UNDERSTAND ME AS WER BEST FRIEND BUH U DNT IM GOIN

Ammy leaves

Shaz- C Laiba hes gne nw wahs rong wid u? ur being so stubborn ur overeacting 2 much

Angad- Laiba u neva like dis wahs happened 2 u?

Laiba- (Cryingly) Bro u wont understand wen ur hurt in luv nd (Interuptted)

Angad- I do understand Laiba trust me I no (Interuptted)

Laiba- U dnt understand Bro hw its like 2 betrayed by da person u luv so much

Angad- Buh Laiba dis is nt bout Aryan k it bout u nd Ammy, be friends again

Shaz- Yh Laiba

Laiba- Yh Bro, Shaz, ur rite I fink I'm just takin all ma anger out on Ammy (she goes 2 find Ammy)

Shaz- Fank god she reliazed

Angad- Yh shes ma sista end of da day

Just den Shaz so Kasturi lookin at a gucci bag wich Shaz wanted

Shaz- Angad Bro, Ridhima gta go ma Gucci bag cya

Shaz ran 2 da bag shop gt da bag b4 Kasturi could nd took it 2 da counter

Sales Assistant- Dats 150

Shaz- Just 150 dats nuffin eres ma card

Sales Assistant- I'm sori da card didnt go through u gota pay by cash

Shaz- U wah da card didnt go through wah u sayin? ma credit card is always full

Just den Rob came in da shop as he so Kasturi

Shaz- Rob will pay hes over der dat guy der in da black top

Shaz gt da bag nd ran out da shop

Sales Assistant- Mr Rob u gota pay 4 Miss Shaz who just took a Gucci Bag frm ere wich is 4 150

Rob- WAH!!!! 150!!!! Yo I dnt have dat much money sorri just get da bag frm her call da security

Sales Assistant- Yh I will

She called da security Rishi caught Shaz

Rishi- Wer do u fink ur goin?

Shaz- Who da hell r u? do uno who ur talkin Im Shazmin M (Interuptted)

Rishi- Quit da dialogues yh I'm Rishi Shergill i'm an Police Officer nd u Miss Shazmin r cmin wid me 2 da police station rite nw

Shaz- U r mistaken I didnt steal uno wah happened (Interuptted)

Rishi- Just Shurrup quit da fake stories ur cmin police station wid me

Shaz- (Flirts) U cnt take a beauitful girl like me police station (Interuptting)

Rishi- Quit flirting ok wer still goin police station

He dragged Shaz out da shoppin centre

Shaz- U cnt take me police station do uno who I'am uno ma Daddy Mr Dev Malhotra wen he fynds out ur gna get dne u watch

Rishi laughed

Rishi- Yh Yh da usual fake stori do uno who ma daddy is uno who ma mummy is quit it

Nw we c Shaz in jail

Meanwhile we c Laiba findin Ammy nd she finally so him on the fourth floor outsyde by da stairz

Laiba- Ammy I'm Sorri plz 4give me

Ammy- Ur Sori Laiba so finally Laiba Khanna realized her mistake, I been sayin Sori 2 u 4 da last past half an hour

Laiba- Plz Ammy uno me I get angry nd den I lose it I took all Aryan's anger out on u Im sori Ammy ab khaan pakro uthak bethak karoon (she makes a cute face) Im sori Ammy plz maaf kardoh

Ammy Smiles

Ammy- Haan khaan pakro uthak betho karoh uno Laiba mein tumhara dost hoon itni jaldi nahiye manoongha

Laiba does dat nd Ammy smiles

Shabd nd Kripa cm

Kripa- Aww dats so cute

Shabd- Very cute Armaan ab Laiba ko maaf kardoh

Kripa- Yh Ammy

Ammy- KK as u nd Shabd r sayin it Laiba u r 4given

Laiba- Thx Ammy (she hugs him)

Kripa- Wel all shop 2geva

Ammy- Yh gd idea I will call Angad, Ridhima, Shaz as well

Kripa- Every1s ere shoppin

Ammy- Yh

Kripa- K wel go 2 Asiana Bride shop call every 1 der Ammy

Ammy- Yh ayt

Kripa- Wahz rong Shabd chaloh

Shabd- Yh lets go

Just den Shabd recieves a fone call

Shabd- Excuse me u lot go I will c u lot der

Kripa- Ayt

Shabd goes outsyde 2 anwser his fone nd Ammy, Kripa nd Laiba go 2 Asiana Bride Shop

Shabd- (Angrily) Y DA HELL DID U FONE ME WAH DO U WANT TELL ME I DNT HAVE ALL DAY 4 U

Just den Angad nd Ridhima cm

Angad- Kya hua Shabd who wer u shoutin at is everyfing ayt

Shabd- Yh everyfing k just a call frm ma event manager, chaloh lets go Kripa nd every1 is waiting 4 us in Asiana Bride shop

Angad- Yh lets go

Nw we c Asiana Bride Shop Sujal nd Alisha wer also der shoppin 4 Kripa

Sujal- Show us da latest designer lenghas

Alisha- Every colour in every design it should be da best

Sujal- Yh end of da day its ma sistas engagement

Sales Assistant- Yh sure dis is da latest designs nd dese r da colours in it

Sujal- Pack dis Lilac 1 nd da Pink, Alisha is it ayt

Alisha- Its nt Ayt

Sujal- Wah? really its nt k u choose den

Alisha- No Sujal its beauitful can we also have mathcing sandals nd jewellery wiv it

Sales Assistant- Yh sure

Alisha- Sujal I will be bck just gna ring every1 c wer they r nd call dem ere I bet they must be messin around den they will say 2 me Alisha we couldnt fynd anyfing

Sujal- Yh fone da idiots

Alisha fones every1 nd tells dem 2 cm 2 Asiana Bride Shop

Shabd, Angad nd Ridz cm

Kripa was lookin at lenghas wiv Ammy nd Laiba

Kripa- Hey Angad, Ridhima u lot ok

Angad/Ridz- Wer k wah bout u

Kripa- Im very very happy all thx 2 ma Shabd (she hugs him)

Shabd- K Kripa chaloh lets buy sm clothes 4 u nd yh we goto collect da lengha I ordered

Kripa- K Shabd dat Pink lengha is gurjus

Shabd- Yh dats da 1 I ordered 4 u excuse me I've cm 2 collect a lengha heres da reciept itz dat pink 1

Sales Assistant- Im sori u wer meant 2 collect it dis morning as its afternoon nw we sold it 2 sm1 bout 5 minz ago

Shabd- Hw u can do dat can u tell me who bought it

Sales Assistant- Mr Sujal Garewal hes over der

Kripa- Sujal Bro

Sujal- Can u pack dis blue lengha nd da matchin jewellery wiv it plz

Sales Assistant- Yh sure

Kripa- Sujal Bro (she hugs him)

Sujal- (Happily) Kripa hws ya? hws da engagement arrangements goin its onli 3dys left

Kripa- Der goin gr8 buh ders a prob

Sujal- Yh tell me wah happened

Kripa- Bro uno Shabd ordered me a pink lengha nd he was meant 2 collect in da morning buh we didnt nd nw its sold nd u've buyed it

Sujal- Yh I'm sori I didnt no dat well Kripa I buyed dat lengha 4 u I wanted 2 gift u it, u will be wearin dis lengha 4 da engagement

Kripa- K Bro thx

Sujal- Ur always welcm

Shabd- Buh Sujal (Interuptted)

Sujal- Shabd I'm gifting her da lengha u buy her smefing else ok I have rite on Kripa I'm Bruva end of da dy

Shabd- Yh ok Sujal

Da gang arrives Alisha helps dem all choose lenghas nd sherwanis nd nw Sujal, Alisha nd da gang leave

Every1 waz busy buying clothes nd Ridhima so Angad he wasnt payin attention or buying anyfing he was upset

Ridz- Wah happen Angad u look very upset

Angad- Nuffin Im just tired I was finkin 2 go home

Ridz- Nt wivout buyin anyfing

Laiba- Yh Bro Ridhima is rite Im sori bout earlier on I was angry

Ridz- Itz ayt dun wori

Laiba- Bro Mom foned u best buy smefing 4 urself k

Ammy- Yh Ridhima u gta choose smefing 2 dat u will be wearin in da engagement Mom nd Dad wana gift u it

Ridz- Its ayt really its no need

Laiba- Ofcourse der is it's Kripas engagement end of da day

Ammy- Yh u best choose smefing odawyse I will be in trouble frm Mom k

Ridz- Ayt

Laiba- Yh Ridhima help Bro as well

Angad- Laiba I wana go home I dnt feel 2 well

Ridz- R u ok Angad wahz rong?

Angad- Nuffin just tired

Laiba- Bro waheva u gta buy ya clothes den u can go

Angad- Ayt

Ridz nd Angad choose clothes 4 demselves

Ridz- Angad Im quite confused shall i get da lilac or da green

Angad- Ridhima da lilac nd blue is nyce

Ridz- K den I will just go nd try dis on did u choose ur clothes

Angad- No I waz finkin 2 get da cream nd gold 1 wah u fink

Ridz- I fink u will look gd in da Black nd Silver 1

Angad- K I will try it on

Meanwhile we c Shaz in jail

Shaz- RISHI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rishi- Excuse me its Inspector Rishi Shergill

Shaz- Waheva it iz I wana go home fone Daddy rite nw or fone ma Josh Bro

Just den Rishis fone rang it was Josh

Rishi- Elow Josh hw r ya man

Josh- I'm F9 Rishi hwz everyfing in da police station u must be very busy

Rishi- Well rite nw I gt a big headache I just arrested dis stupid girl 4 stealin a gucci bag

Josh- (laughed) OMG!!!! who would steal a handband anyways Rishi its ma sista Kripas engagement make sure u cm its after 3 days k

Rishi- Yh sure I will be

Shaz- DADDY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BRO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Josh- Rishi whos screamin in da background

Rishi- Da girl I told u bout shes so annoyin

Josh- Her voice sounds familiar anyways I will talk 2 u l8ter bye

Rishi- Bye

Shaz- DADDY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BRO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rishi- Shurrup ur Daddy nd Bro wont cm 2 save u b4 u committed crime u should of thought bout it

Shaz- FONE DEM NW

Rishi- Stop demanding k BE QUIET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bck 2 Angad nd Ridz

Angad wore da shervani nd came outsyde

Laiba- Bro u look gr8

Angad- Thx

Ridz came wearin lilac nd blue lengha

Laiba- Ridhima dis lengha is so beauitful I want 1 like dis

Ridz- Thx Laiba Angad chose it

Laiba- Gr8 choice Bro end of da day ur ma bruva so u gota have gd taste in clothes (she laughed)

Elderly couple went past they so Angad nd Ridz

Elderly couple- Beta tum dono saat mein bahuth he ache lagthe ho, Beta kya tum dono ki shaadi honeh walhi hai

Angad/Ridz- Jee nahiye woh hum sirf dost hai

Elderly couple- Sori Beta humneh socha (Interuptted)

Angad/Ridz- Jee koi baat nahiye

Da elderly couple left

Shabd nd Kripa so all dis nd started laughin

Ridz gt embarassed by all dis her cheeks went all red

Kripa- Angad, Ridhima tum dono bahuth he ache lag rehay ho, bahuth he pyaari jodi hai tum donoki

Shabd- Yh Kripas rite u suit each oda just like me nd Kripa

Ridz- Shabd, Kripa tum loge bhinah hum sirf dost hai

Angad gt angry

Angad- Excuse me I gta get get changed

Angad went 2 da changin room

Nw we c Ammy nd Laiba

Ammy- Werz Shaz Laiba?

Laiba- Patha nahiye I foned her buh her fones off

Meanwhile we c Sujal in da police station

Rishi- Sujal itneh dino baad aiye kaise ho

Sujal- I'm F9 tum batoa kaam kaise chalraha hai

Rishi- Itz gr8 buh rite nw I gt a heachache

Shaz- I WANNA GO HOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sujal- Dats Shaz voice

Rishi- Uno dat paagal girl shes so annoyin

Sujal- Shes Kripas Sista y did u arrest her

Rishi- She stole gucci bag frm da shoppin centre

Sujal- Shaz nd stealin itz hard 2 believe call her I will talk 2 her

Rishi- Ayt

Shaz cms

Shaz- Sujal Bro thx god ur ere I wana go home

Sujal- Shaz wah happened?

Shaz tells him wah happened

Shaz- Buh its nt ma fault I wanted it b4 Kasturi

Sujal- Ayt Shaz Rishi let her go plz

Rishi- K u may go Miss Shazmin

Shaz- Ur such a jerk Rishi

Rishi- U just didnt say dat

Bck 2 da shopping centre

Angad- Laiba u lot dne wer goin home rite nw

Laiba- Yh lets go Bro

Ammy- Angad I waz finkin me nd Laiba gna spend sm tyme 2geva go cinemas nd dat, It will cheer her up if dats ayt

Laiba- Ammy wel go sm oda tyme lets go home

Kripa cmz

Kripa- Angad u go me nd Shabd r also goin cinemas wel take Ammy nd Laiba wid us nd drop dem of l8ter dun wori u nd Ridhima go

Angad- Ayt inabit every1 bye

L/A/K/S- Bye

Angad nd Ridhima go 2 da car park Ridz waz bout 2 fall nd Angad caught her, they wer both lookin in each odas eyes

PREVIEW- MADANS PLAN!!!!!!!!!!

-2 NEW CHARACTERS

- SHABD ND KRIPA ENGAGEMENT

Edited by Anam Ali - 14 years ago

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