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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
awesome part!! shashank was kinda creepyy!! 😆 ...i hope prem and prerna will both be alright!! i think the girl that anurag saw was mukti, or devki! either why i think she'll just end up being mukti!! 😃
plzz cont soon!! 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
Episode 6:

Recap: We find that the man who took Prerna to the hospital was Shashank Aggarwal, and that he is kind of weird... Anurag realizes that Prem is missing and goes to the police to give a report. While driving back to the hospital, he sees a lady he thinks he knows... by the time he can take a second glance, however, the lady is gone...

Let's See:


Hospital:
Anurag returned to the hospital just in time. Tushar and Sneha were waiting for the doctor to come out of Prerna's room, and so he joined them.
The doctor finally came out... "Nurse, Nurse!" He screamed. "Get me my surgery uniform!"
Sneha looked shocked. "What are you telking about? I thought mom... I mean Mrs. Prerna, didn't need any operations. You were just keeping her under observation. Then what operation are you talking about?"
I am in a hurry, so I can't tell you the full story... basically, we found that Mrs. Bajaj's bandages... the one's on her head... were removed by someone... her head started bleeding badly again... If I don't hurry with this operation, something serious could happen..."
Anurag was furious. "How can you be so irresponsible, doctor? Who removed the bandages? What kind of doctor are you!?"
"I'm sorry, but I really don't know who removed the bandages." The nurse came to him with his gear, and without a word, he went into the room to operate on Prerna.
Anurag was still mad, while Tushar and Sneha began crying. "Did you leave from outside this room at all?"
Tushar replied, "No... wait...yes, we went down to the main floor to get some coffee." Anurag was going to scold him, but he decided to stay low, as Prerna was in grave danger.

At some Big Mansion:

We see the indside of the house. It is full of pictures and paintings of a woman holding flowers, and the tables are scruntched with more flowers as well. On the sofa, we see that a man is sitting there. It is Shashank... He is just staring at small photo of yet another lady holding flowers.

He gets off the sofa and puts the photo on the side table. He then heads off to his kitchen to prepare his lunch (surprising, isn't it? He doesn't have a servant in his house, even though he is rich...), then heads to his office. Once there, he goes into his cabin, and there are flowers on the desk and more paintings of the same lady. He sits in his chair and begins his work...
Someone enters his room, and says, "Sir, I need to know what quotation you wanted to put for this contract."

"Shashank didn't look up, but merely replied, "Don't worry... I... ummm... I will fill it out myself."
"But sir, this is my job... I can do it for you, really."
Shashank glared at him, remember, not angrily, just abruptly, and said, "Just because I am the CEO of the company doesn't mean that I can't fill out a quotation form on my own, does it?"
"Yes sir," and the person left the file on Shashank's desk for him to work on...

Back at the hospital, a few hours later, and finally the doctor came out of the theater. He took off his green surgery cap.
"well, docotor?" Said Anurag. "Is she going to be okay?"

"I'm sorry Mr. Basu, but Prerna has slipped into a comma."

Anurag, Sneha, and Tushar are shocked.

Will update soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
Man, not many people are reading this fan fic! 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
hey im reading ...its really gud plzzz continue soon!!! Luv it!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
poor prena. where the hell is prem? i bet you that budda bajaj took him. how could he be so mean?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Episode 7:

Recap: Prerna is in critical condition, because someone removed the badages from her head(we still don't know who it is) and she starting bleeding a lot. Later we find that she has slipped into a comma. We also see Shashank in his house... he is rich, for he is the CEO of a company... there are flowers and pictures of a lady holding flowers in his house... Anurag, Tushar, and Sneha have just found out Prerna is in a comma... let's watch...

Sneha is crying untrollably, and although Tushar handles her, he is in tears himself... Anurag just stands there, paralyzed...
He remembers the first time they met... he just came from abroad and he came out of his car to enter his house... Prerna is nearby and then her red dupatta flies into the air and lands on his face... he takes off the dupatta and sees her face for the first time...
Next, he remembers when he saved Prerna before she drowned in a lake, although he couldn't swim himself. He then remembers when Prem1 was born, and how he looked at him with his tiny eyes... when he got to the part where Prem1's death happens, he comes back to his senses... and cries...

Somewhere Unknown:

Money is exchanged between two people...
One person speaks... it is a man...
"Here is your first installment... but, if you want more, you need to keep doing what I have told you to.
A woman replies. "Have I ever let you down?"

"Well, yes you have; you were supposed to finish Prerna... kill her... while she was in the hospital... but she is not dead... she is just in a comma... but no worries, as long as she can't open her mouth, we're fine... but if she comes out of her comma... but that won't happen, will it? She will be up," he pointed his finger upward, "by that time, with her first son Prem, won't she?"
And the man and woman laugh together.

Shashank sat in his office, in his building called "Aggarwal Publications" working on some quotations... someone called him.
"yes," he said.
"Hello, sir? Yes, I have found out that the lady you hit with your car has slipped into a comma."
"Really? Well, send her a few flowers, along with an apology card."
"Yes, sir."

Shashank thought to himself, and then called his secretary back. "You know what, I think I will go personally and give the flowers myself."
"okay, sir."

Before getting up to go to the hospital, Shashank turned around in his chair to look at the painting of a woman holding flowers. He seemed to be in a trance, staring at it, but shook it off and left the office.



Hospital:
As Shashank reached the hospital, he noticed that Anurag, Sneha, and Tushar were all sitting in chairs outside of Prerna's room, still crying.
He had his flowers in is hand, along with the card in the other.

He came up tp Anurag, who hadn't noticed him, and said, "I brought flowers for Mrs. Prerna."
Anurag looked up, startled, and he became angry. He took the flowers and threw them on the floor, along with the card.
"Who do you think you are, huh? Look what you did to Prerna! If anything happens to her, I'll...
And he grabbed Shashank's collar.
Tushar tried to stop him. "Mr. Basu, what are you doing?! Leave him! He didn't do anything? It was Mom's fault! She got in the middle of the road!!!!!"
Anurag came back to his senses, and let go of Shashank's collar. Anurag felt really bad, because he took out his anger on someone who didn't even do anything. It was just an accident...
"I'm sorry, Mr. Shashank, I..."

But Shashank didn't reply... he just got down on his knees, picked up each petal of the roses, along with the crushed card, and left the building. He did not get angry, nor did he shed any tears... he just left with the same look as he came...

Will update on Sunday, sorry... because I have a debate championship tomorrow and Saturday... but if I get time, I will definitely update!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
awesome update!! omg i hope prerna will be alright!! she's in coma 😭 😭 ...and where is prem??!!!
plzz cont soon!! 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
i loved the update, and how could u do that with prerna, anyways continue soon cant wait 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
where is prem? how could dat buddah wala do dat bajaj? man now she has gone into coma that prena. how could you? poor anurag & the kids. please continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
hey great update plzzzz continue soon!!!

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