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Posted: 18 years ago
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Episode 8:

Recap: Somewhere unknown, a man gives a lady money, and tells her that she was supposed to put Prerna to death, not in a coma, but that's okay, because he knows she will finish the work he has given her. Meanwhile, Shashank finds out that Prerna has slipped into a coma, so he goes to give her some flowers. Anurag accidentally gets angry at him, and rips the flowers apart. Shashank, without any emotions, picks up each petal and leaves. Let's see:


Shashank reached back at home, the remains of the flowers and card in his hands... he put them on the side table, next to a picture of a woman holding flowers, and just sat on his sofa... a single tear came out of his eye, but he quickly wiped it away, and got up to go back to his office...

Hospital:

Anurag went inside Prerna's hospital room. She just lay there, with her eyes closed. He sat down on a chair next to her bed and took her arm. He remebered all the times they had together, and then started to cry again... then he quickly wiped them away, and swore to her that he would take her out of this condition...

Basu House:
Sampatha sat on the sofa, awaiting her AB's call... she told him to call once he found out about Prerna's condition. But of course, he is Prerna's loverboy, why would he listen to me? Anger boiled inside her, but she didn't worry... she had a plan or two up her sleeve as well!


Somewhere unknown:

The man said to the woman, "I am tired of waiting... it's been two days, and you still haven't killed her yet!?"
"I have to be careful, if I get caught, we both will be in danger."
"Okay, hurry... I want her dead as soon as possible. You know what our deal was."
"Of course."
"Good, after all these years of pain Prerna has given me, I want her to suffer, along with that Mr. Basu too." We see now that it is Mr. Bajaj, but the woman's face is still in the shadows.
Mr. Bajaj continued. "But anyway, if you kill Prerna, you know what you'll get...Prem!"
The woman laughs, and we see that it is Debonita...
"And don't worry about him escaping... I have my men keeping an eye on him!" Mr. Bajaj said, and they both laughed.


In the USA, in a hospital:

We enter the hospital, and we enter one of the rooms. We see that a doctor and several nurses are around one patient, holding him down, while the doctor gives the patient electric shocks. The patient bounces up and down, but his eyes remain closed. Finally, the docotors issue a much bigger shock, and the patient bounces higher... he then lays on the bed, still...
"Is he dead?" One of the nurses asks.

The man's eyes open slowly, and he screams, "MUKTI!!!"

Well guys, here it is! I am really sorry I couldn't post for the past few days, but I was very busy... so, I decided to present you guys with a good episode to make up for it!

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Edited by UDman - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow. that means prem is in hospital. dat nautanki. HOW COULD SHE? she wasnt prem to die or sumtin? i feel like killing dat BUDDA BAJAJ. HOW COULD HE DO DAT TO HIS WIFE? DOES HE EVEN KNOW WHAT HAS BEEN HAPPENING? DOES HE EVEN KNOW DAT MUKTI IS DEAD OR NOT? JUST KIDNAPPING PREM AIN'T GONNA DO ANYFIN. PREM IS MUKTI'S, ONLY MUKTI'S
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Patel 1993

wow. that means prem is in hospital. dat nautanki. HOW COULD SHE? she wasnt prem to die or sumtin? i feel like killing dat BUDDA BAJAJ. HOW COULD HE DO DAT TO HIS WIFE? DOES HE EVEN KNOW WHAT HAS BEEN HAPPENING? DOES HE EVEN KNOW DAT MUKTI IS DEAD OR NOT? JUST KIDNAPPING PREM AIN'T GONNA DO ANYFIN. PREM IS MUKTI'S, ONLY MUKTI'S

Only I know all the answers! You'll have to wait and see!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wonderful part hun, i wonder if prem escapes, continue soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey great update plzzzz continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part!! omg bajaj and debo are together!!! 😡 😡 😡 ...gosh!!!
plz cont soon!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sorry guys... I might not post till tomorrow! I'll se though!
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its okay but just make sure to update 😃
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Awesome Part

I h8 Bajaj and Debonita 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Episode 9:

We find out who had tried to kill Prerna; it was Debonita, who is working under Bajaj. Her motive? Since Mr. Bajaj has Prem captive somewhere, he will "give him" to her after she finishes of Prerna... Also, in some hospital in the US, a patient is shocked until he becomes consious... the first words that screeched from his mouth were, "Mukti!" Let us see what happens next:

It was night time at the hospital in Panshmeshwar. Anurag had sent Sneha and Tushar to the hotel, and he waited outside Prerna's room... He sat with his chin on his chest, trying his best not to fall asleep. If that killer is going to come, he is definitely going to come at night.
But before he knew it, his thoughts began to overtake him... he remembered when he and Prerna went out for the day, and when they were leaving in different directions, they both thought at the same time before racing back and hugging, "10...9...8...7...6...5...4...3...2...1..." And he was off to sleep.

Someone seemed to have been watching them... she smiled it a sinsister way... we see that it is Debonita. Slowly, she creeped into Prerna's room and walked over to her... "I am sorry, Prer... oops..." she giggled... "My soon to be mother in law! Oh, but wait! By the time I get married to Prem, you will be dead! After all, I will only get Prem if I kill you!" She reached toward Prerna's life support, and was about to click the button to end her breathing...

Her hand was moved away by some strong force, and she was slapped... she fell hard to the ground... The light in the hospital room went on... Debonita looked up sharply, frightened and angry because her plan was soiled... Shashank glared down at her, angrily... yes, he is actually showing his emotions... and says to her, without even stammering once, "What were you trying to do, huh?! You think that you can just walk in here and try to kill someone?!" And he picked her up off the ground bu her hair... she let out a shriek, and Anurag woke up startled... he ran into the room...

Shashank let go of Debo's hair, but was so close to her face that she could feel his breathing... "I haven't seen such a sadder excuse for a human, especially a woman, in my whole life! If I could, I would strangle you to death right now" and he held up both hands and mimed strangling her... "I am calling the police right now!!!"
He dialed his cell phone to the police, and soon the police was on its way... Anurag entered the hospital room, and was shocked to see what happened... Shashank explained what he had seen, and Anurag, flaring his nostrils at Debonita, gave her two, count em', two tight slaps on the face, and she fell, crying, and with her lip busted open... she grabbed Anurag's leg... "Please, please, let me go! I am only doing this because he told me to!" Anurag picked her off the floor and grasped her tightly with both hands...
"Who told you to do this?!"
She thought for a moment... if she told him, Mr. Bajaj would never let her have Prem...
"TELL ME!!!" Anurag gave her another slap, and the mark was visible on her face. Shashank just watched, still angry.
She replied. "Okay, okay... it was MR. BAJAJ!"
Anurag went into a mental shock; he let go of Debonita, and she quickly ran to the door, but fortunately, bumped right into the police... they took her away, and before she was dragged off, she shriked to Anurag, "I know where Prem is! AND YOU WILL NEVER FIND OUT, YOU HEAR ME ANURAG BASU!!!! YOU HAVE MESSED WITH ME, NOW YOU SHALL SEE MY WRATH!" She turned her attention to Shashank. "AS FOR YOU! YOU ARE NOW GOING TO BE VERY SORRY FOR WHAT YOU DID!" And off she went.
Anurag was starting to regret that he sent her to jail... what would happen to Prem? Well, he thought that Prem should be fine wherever he is... as for Prerna's killer, what gave Mr. Bajaj such hatred against her that he would want to murder her!?

He quickly came to his senses and turned towards Shashank. Shashank was now back to his normal self, and looked down at the ground. Anurag put a hand on his shoulder. "Thank you, son. You have saved Prerna's life! And I thought that you tried to hit her with your car!" He smiled at Shashank, who was still looking down.
"It's okay, Mr. Basu, I can understand how you are feeling... I myself have..." And he quickly stopped talking, before he spilled any information about hismself...
Anurag said to him, "You can call me uncle, son... after all, you did what not even a close relative would do."
But Shashank didn't reply. He was already lost in his own thoughts, and made his way out of the hospital... Anurag looked at him with a puzzled look, but then smiled...


In US:
There is an old building next to some sea, and inside the building, we see two crooks talking to someone they tied to a chair. We see the crooks, but not the person in the chair.
One of them said, "Now that you are back to normal, we can keep you in this building, okay? Stay comfy, and don't try to run away! We'll be right back."
And both men laughed, and left to grab some food.

The person tied to the chair looked around the roon, scared, and tried to get his hand untied from the rope... he moves his arms back and forth, and finally the rope losens... his hand are free! He quickly removed the cloth that they had placed on his mouth... then he untied his legs, got up...

"HEY!" Both of the men just came back, and they pointed guns at him. "Don't even think about taking one more step, or we'll shoot you!"
The person looked from one man to the other, and remember the one woman he truly loved, and the mom that had taken such good care of him... and he jumped from teh window before the men could shoot, and SPLASH! right into the deep sea waters...

The two men ran up to the window, and saw that there were bubbles coming from one spot... then, the bubbles slowed, and then completely stopped...
One man dialed a number on his cell, and said, "Sir, Prem is dead!"


10/10 I'm sure? Well, I will only be able to post once a week now, so enjoy it while it lasts... I made the episode longer too, so it is a 2 in 1!
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