Okay guys, so here it is...
Episode 1:
Recap (this is what actually happened in the serial; now I will make up my own story from here): Prerna and Prem are in Panshmeshwar; I know Sam was supposed to be there too, but let's assume she didn't come along and is in Mumbai. So, Prem was sitting on the bench, still with his illness where he doesn't respond to anything, and Prerna left him there for a second to get something... then Prem sees "Mukti" who is really Devki and Prerna sees her too. Devki runs and Prerna tries to run after her...
Devki was running as fast as her lungs would allow her, her veil now not covering her scar that was nestled on the left side of her face.... Prerna was at her heels, and her shawl flew out from behind her... was this really Mukti, or was this a humshakal? Whatever it was, Prerna was going to get to the bottom of this...
The cool Panshmeshwar wind was arising throughout the air as Prerna was getting closer and closer to who she thought was Mukti. However, Devki was fast, much faster... she had reached a road that cars were passing through quickly, and, as soon as she saw that no cars were coming, she rushed accross.
Prerna had just reached the road and was about to cross when several cars came down the road, and Prerna had to wait... Although it was just a minute, it seemed like hours for her, for Devki was already running far away from the road.
Finally, the cars stopped rushing passed, and Prerna quickly crossed the road, only to find that "Mukti" was gone... she ran ahead a little, and then squinted her eyes to catch a sight of "Mukti". But it was useless... she was gone.
Prem still sat on the bench Prerna left him at, looking straigt ahead, still holding the red dupatta from Mukti's dress... though on the outside, he looked completely idle, on the inside, he kept thinking one thing, one name: Mukti... A tear streaked down his face, and landed on the red dupatta... had his Mukti returned? He couldn't control it; his brain was beginning to send pangs of pain down his whole body, and his eyes were blurred... his thoughts were stopped, and he fell unconsious on the bench
Prerna returned to the bench, and found that Prem had become unconcious... she cried for someone to help, yet no one came... finally, a black, expensive-looking car passes ahead of Prerna on the road and a continues on for a minute... inside the car, a man's voice tells, "Driver, go back to that lady and take that boy to the hospital." However, right after he said this, he got out of the car. The driver was confused. "Why are you getting out of the car, sir?"
The man replied, "That is not your business, is it now? Do what you are told and don't worry about me... I will reach back to my house on my own. But you need to make sure that no one knows that you are my driver.
And the man watches as the car backs up to Prerna and Prem and takes them away... His eyes water and he quickly shrugs the tears off... there is no room for that in his life anymore...
Pretty Boring Episode, I know... But I am just getting started... Wait for a few episodes till it starts getting good! And please, try to recruit as many Prem-Mukti fans as you can to this story... I am sure they will like this fanfiction!
Edited by UDman - 18 years ago
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