Immortal Emotions (RA ff) Part-9 Updated - Page 2

Awesome intro n fabulous promo........loved it!!!! 👏 👏 👏

waiting for the fic to start!!! 😳

heyyyyyyyyyyy very nice intro!!!!!!!!!!!!! and woh promo to dhoom machayi hai!!!!!!!!!!!! i really love the line at the end : "where love broke all relations"

I know its nothing big, but it REALLY got me thinking emotionally!!!!!

plz continue soon!!!!!!

thanks a lot frnds,for liking the promo... 😳
herz the first part of the story...hpe u enjoy it!!!


luv,
farheen

Part-1

Its evening time..... An evening that's full of music, dance & celebrations...... Celebration of friendship.....

Celebration of life....Celebration of being together for life time....Celebration of two friends who chose to spend the rest of their life together.....

They had everything, they knew one another since years as they've been the best buddies who were now going to be a couple... They had everything in their relationship..... trust, understanding, respect...but the only thing they didn't had was love....!!!

Lets see who the couple is......

Its a huge lounge that's been decorated beautifully.... & in the crowd of many there was the couple standing waiting

to exchange the rings.....

A person announces...

Person: ex-cuse me ladies & gentleman, may I have your attention please, thank you! The moment that we've all been

waiting for is here! I kindly request all of u to join us for the ring ceremony & shower your blessings upon my daughter Shveta Khanna & my would be son-in-law Raj Mehra....

{there was a round of applause for the couple}

Mrs. Khanna: Raj pehle aap ring pehenayiye

Raj: yes aunty... but... {starts looking out for the ring in his coat} per..wo ...

Shveta: kya hua Raj?

Raj: {still confused & searching for the ring} shveta maine wo.... mmm..

{a person comes & stands behind Raj}

Person: ring yaha hai....

{Raj turns around}

Raj: Yashhh!!!! kaha the tum?

Yash: ab wo bhi main hi batau?

Shveta: kya matlab?

Raj: kuch nahi, are ring mil gayi na,

Shveta: hmm....

{and both of them exchange their rings & were extremely happy....}

Yash: congrats buddy! {huggs Raj}

Raj: bas rukha sukha sa congrats??? hamara gift kaha hai?

Yash: oh hello...aaj tumhari sagaai hui hai shaadi nahi

Raj: to??? Aaj to hamara haq banta hai, hai na Shveta?

Shveta: of course, mujhe to laga tha ki tum sabse bada gift le aaoge

Yash: oh to tum abhi se hi iske side ho gayi? pata nahi ab mera kya hoga....

{the music started}

Yash: heyyy!!!! Both of u go & join the dance floor

Shveta: per tum akele kya karoge?

Raj: iski fikr mat karo...

Yash: {looking at the girls standing beside them} tum jao..., aur galati se bhi mujhe mat bulana....

{& he walks towards those girls}

Raj: yeh nahi sudhrega....

Shveta: so shall we?

Raj: ofcourse...lets rock!!!

{and they really rocked the floor..... Un dono ne apne college ke dino mein best dancing couple ka award jo jita tha, so no one could beat them in dancing.... Oh!!! What a perfect couple they looked!!!

After a while the party was over, & all of them left...}

Khanna house..........

{shveta was going somewhere just then her mother stops her}

Mrs.Khanna: are itni raat gaye kaha jaa rahi ho?

Shveta: bas abhi aayi mama, aap so jayiye

Mrs.Khanna: oh, per jaldi aana....warna tum to jaldi uth jaogi per Raj nahi uthega...

{shveta just laughs & goes out to Raj's house...who stayed just next to her house.... she was just about to ring the door bell, then she sees that the door was slightly open..., she slowly opens the door & steps in}

Shveta: Raj.... Raj, kaha ho tum? Raj......

{just then sumone comes from behind...those two were her dear friends Raj & Yash}

Raj & Yash: bhoooo!!!!

{shveta darr jaati hai & she screams}

Shveta: tum dono bhi na, kabhi nahi sudhroge....

{aur wo unke peeche daudti hai unhe marne ke liye}

Yash: are hume sach mein laga ki koi bhoot hai, isiliye hum bhoot bhoot chillane wale the...

Raj: ha ha bas ...

Shveta: oh ho... to main tumhe bhoot nazar aati hu ha?

Yash: ab yeh to tum hi keh rahi ho....

Raj: waise mujhe nahi pata tha ki bhoot u night suit pehehkar aate hai...

Yash: u see yeh modern bhoot hai

{and both of them laugh}

Shveta: ho gaye tumhare yeh non-sensical jokes???

Raj: oh ho bahadkti kyun ho? hum to bas uhi mazaak kar rahe the

Shveta: yeh bhi koi mazaak karne ka waqt hai Raj?

Yash: oh ha yeh to sone ka waqt hai...Chalo Raj chalkar so jaate hai...

{raj just gives him a weird look}

Yash: oye!!! aisa waisa mat socho.... mera matlab hai ki hum dono uper jaakar apne apne kamre mein so jaate hai...

{shveta & raj laugh at yash's silliness}

Yash: pata nahi kya kya sochte rehte ho... acha main jau ya ruku, nahi to kahoge ki kabaab mein haddi bann raha hai

Raj: uff ho Yash... yeh kya paaglo jaisi baat kar raha hai? chup chap se baith....

Shveta: ha, maana hamari sagaai hui hai, per iska yeh matlab nahi ki hamari dosti mein koi fark pada ho... ya tumhe humse dur rehni ki zaroorat pade

Yash: are tum log to serious ho gaye, main to bas u hi keh raha tha...

Raj: acha baitho, main coffee banata hu...

Shveta: make that a strong one for me!

Yash: ahhh!!!

Raj: mujhe laga tum kahogi, its ok aaj main bana deti hu

Shveta: kyun? tum bana rahe ho na...to jaao bana do

Raj: ha...

{Raj gives a cant help it look & goes to the kitchen}

Yash: {mummers} hey kal kya plan hai?

Shveta: kaisa plan?

Yash: are parso Raj ka birthday hai na?

Shveta: ha to wo parso hai

Yash: uff ho... wahi to main bhi keh raha hu

Shveta: {gives him an irritating look} u know what? I think u've lost it!!!

Yash: tum to koi bhi baat pehli baar mein samjhti hi nahi ho... aur kaisi wedding planner ho tum?

Shveta: listen main wedding planner hu, per main birthday parties nahi plan karti, aur phir aaj hi to party hui hai

aur tum ek aur party ki baat kar rahe ho

Yash: ok to ek kaam karte hai hum fancy dress competition karte hai.. ok??? jo jitega wahi Raj ke birthday ka cake katega

Shveta: kabhi to kuch sensical baatein kiya karo

Yash: you know Raj ko parties pasand hai, aur hum kaunsa saare sheher ko invite karne wale hai

Shveta: to? tumne kuch socha hai?

Yash: ha, mere farmhouse pe main saare arangements kar lunga, tum bas Raj ko waha lekar aana

{tabhi Raj comes with the coffee}

Raj: kaha chalne ki baatein ho rahi hai?

Yash: Timbuktu.... Main aur Shveta jaa rahe hai, chalega?

Raj: sorry i asked!!!

Shveta: are main tum logo ko batana hi bhool gayi... Mujhe Singhania's ka contract mila hai?

Yash: kya matlab?

Shveta: are Mr.Singhania ke bete ki shaadi hai...., to kal unke office se call aaya tha, they were impressed with

my work so i got the contract

Raj: hey congrats... Kab hai shaadi?

Shveta: next month 15th ko

Raj: oh, so ab tum saara time wahi busy hogi, waise hum bhi iss pure hafte busy hai, & Yash parso tak wo designs bhi pure karne hai

Yash: are hamara apna office hai to jab chahe kar lenge, jaldi kya hai?

Raj: ok, to jab tak hum iss car ka design banate rahenge tab tak kisi aur company ne waisa hi model market mein utaar diya hoga

Shveta: ha,phir koi muh latkaye hue, haatho mien usi car ke designs lekaar tumhare paas aayega aur cute sa bachcho jaisa face banakar kahega, "Raj yeh gaadi to market mein aa chuki hai yaar"... {laughs}

Yash: huh! jab aise dost ho to dushmano ki kise zaroorat... Raj main sone jaa raha hu... aur tum {pointing towards Shveta} parso aa jana...wo bhi waqt per...

{aur wo bas apne room ki taraf chala jata hai, aur yaha Raj bilkul confused sa khada rehta hai}

Raj: parso tak??? kya matlab iska?

Shveta: oh, tum bhi kiski batein lekar baith gaye...

Raj: oh ha.. wo bhi hai

Shveta: waise Raj, tumse kuch kehna hai

Raj: kaho

Shveta: thanks....

Raj: hamare beech yeh thanks kabse aana laga? Aur jab keh hi diya hai to yeh bhi bata do kisliye?

Shveta: {looking at the engagement ring} iske liye..., meri zindagi ki sabse badi khushi, waise tum khush to

ho na?

Raj: tumhe aisa kyun lagta hai ki main khush nahi hu?

Shveta: aisa nahi hai, main to bas janna chahti hu

Raj: ofcourse main khush hu, waise bhi mujh jaise sar phire ko to bas tum hi sambhal sakti ho

Shveta: {laughs} ha, wo to hai per jab bhi tumhari aankho mein dekhti hu,to mujhe wo khushi nazar nahi

aati..., ek.... ek adhurapan sa dikhayi deta hai...

Raj: kaisa adhurapan? are mujhe pura karne wali tumhi to ho..., tumhari wajah se aaj main iss mukaam pe hu,

warna mujhe jaise anaath ko...

Shveta: {interrupts} Raj please! maine tumse kitni baar kaha hai ki tum yeh shabd kabhi nahi kahoge...

Raj: {smiles} per main apni sachchayi ko jhutla to nahi sakta na?

Shveta: oh please ab bas bhi karo...., waise bhi aajkal tum jo bhi kehte ho tumhari aankhein tumhara saath nahi deti...

Raj; oh to tum meri aankhein itne ache se padhti ho? to kaho aur kya kya kehti hai meri aankhein?

{raj shveta ke kareeb aata hai aur wo peeche peeche jaati hai, wo badhte rehta hai}

Raj: batao na aur kya kehti hai meri aankhein?

{tabhi Yash unko dekhta hai aur jhat se neeche aata hai}

Yash: ye shveta jaldi se bata do aur ise sone do, waise peeche dewaar hai.... aur tum dono yeh games khelna bandh karo & for god's sake kam se kam darwaza to band kar dete....

{raj n shveta cudnt help it & they burst out laughing}

Shveta: tum dono pure pagal ho...., mian jaa rahi hu... & please Raj jaldi uth jana... gudnite

Yash: ha ha dont worry main jaanta hu ise kaise uthana hai...

Raj: goodnite Yash

Yash: wo jaa rahi main nahi, aur ab sone ka mann kare to aa jana... mera matlab hai ki apne kamre mien.. mere nahi,

warna phir Shveta ko mujhse shikayat hogi...

Shveta: byeee... {and she just walks out banging the door}

Raj: ab chale?

Yash: kaha? kitni baar samjhau?? tu apne kamre mein aur main apne...

{raj just gives him a weird look & without saying anything goes to his room & he too bangs the door}

Yash: {to himself} dono ki harkatein ek si hi hai...

{& he too goes to his room}

....... End of part 1......

Comments awaited!!!

Luv,

farheen

gr8 part dear... 👏 ..n da frndship u hav shown b/w da three.. 😳 😳 😳 ...2 gud.... 😊

👏 awesoem part....awesoem starting n yash 😆 n raj is choooooooo chweettt 😳

nice starting dear.... 👏 👏 👏 cont soon cant ait to read more.. 😊

wow dii, was waiting for this fic to start..
the intro was fab, n the promo was rocking!!! 👏 loved it..
n the first part was really very good, very well written.. loved the trio's convo n the relation they share...
n ya me loved the name 'Sahiba' just soo beautiful..
in all a rocking start!!!
update soon huny 😳

Originally posted by: **-**Guriya**-*

gr8 part dear... 👏 ..n da frndship u hav shown b/w da three.. 😳 😳 😳 ...2 gud.... 😊

thanks a lot dear.., hpe u like it further too...

Originally posted by: rajeev-bigfan

👏 awesoem part....awesoem starting n yash 😆 n raj is choooooooo chweettt 😳

yes honey, raj n yash's friendship is really sweet n a bit strange too....

Originally posted by: ImPrEsSiVe_Grl

nice starting dear.... 👏 👏 👏 cont soon cant ait to read more.. 😊

im glad u liked it.., will be updating soon....

Originally posted by: ruksaar_khan

wow dii, was waiting for this fic to start..
the intro was fab, n the promo was rocking!!! 👏 loved it..
n the first part was really very good, very well written.. loved the trio's convo n the relation they share...
n ya me loved the name 'Sahiba' just soo beautiful..
in all a rocking start!!!
update soon huny 😳

awww...thank u so much ruku..., luv u 4 this.... 😳

hahahahahahaahaha!!!!!!!!!! bada mazaa aaya!!!!!!!!! I love their friendship!!!!!!! i must specifically compliment u one that line where it said that 'they had everything but love...' it was really something to think about!!!! i dunno y but there is always one specific line that strikes me!!!! 😳 😆 😆

continue soon!!!!!! im just waiting for aamna's entry... and according to the promo... Raj and Sahiba's pasts r connected... right???!!!!????

I really have enjoyed the part!!!!!!