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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ImPrEsSiVe_Grl

aww very sweet...raj has got such good frndz...they care so much for him....loved it..cont soon far 😊 heen cant wait...

yes honey, hez got two lovely but mad frnz...😆 😆

Originally posted by: ruksaar_khan

dat was such a sweet part..!! loved sahiba's character.. n Raj has such sweet frnds.., poor yash 😆 😆 he's crazy... but i like his character too.. n shveta 😆

" Shveta: u mean aaj raat 12 baje farmhouse pe?
Yash: nahi kal raat 12 baje kabraastan mein..., bhooto ke saath hide-n-seek khelenge.... !!! ofcourse aaj raat 12 baje hi cake katenge na?"

😆 this was really funny.... i just love the relationship between them...
i'm loving this story dii...
pls pls update soon..

😆 😆 😆 aise bhi characters hote hai...!! three of thm are completely crazy...

Originally posted by: Honii

wow dear awesome part loved it tooo toooo goooood just awesoome heheeh yash itna funny hai i reallly like his character and uska rishta shweta aur raj keh saath is just great .....continue sooooon

seems yash's madnes is loved by all 😆...!! Me too like him 😉

Originally posted by: **-**Guriya**-*

so sweet..such nice frnds da three are.. 😃 ..have gr8 bond..n character of sahiba..seems gud 2... 👏 ..cont soon... 😊

yes dear..., they are best of buddies but cn be really crazy at time..!! hpe u like sahiba's character further too..

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Part-4

Recap-

Shveta Sahiba se milti hai, aur agle din se hi kam shuru karne ko kehti hai.... Yash aur Shveta Raj ka birthday manate hai....

Ab aage..

Next day.....

{Raj and Yash were back to office & Shveta on her work.... She went to the venue & started off with her work...

She was so much busy in her work that she didn't realize it was almost evening time now.... after all she wanted to give her best..... She then suddenly realized that the details that Sidharth had given her........ that file was left at home.. so she called up Raj & asked him to get that file if he could.... Raj told her that he'll be there in 2 hours....

Shveta was just waiting for Raj , just than Sahiba & Sidharth come there}

Shveta: are aap? aayiye...

Sidharth: hum to bas yeh dekhne aaye the ki aapko kisi cheez ki zaroorat to nahi na...

Shveta: ji nahi , ab tak to nahi.... waise abhi abhi hi kaam shuru hua hai...

Sahiba: {smiles} hmm

Sidharth: aayiye bhabhi main aapko iska backside dikhata hu.., the view's just beautiful...

Sahiba: ok.... ex-cuse me, we'll be back

Shveta: yeah sure...

{Sidharth Sahiba ko le jaa raha hota hai tabhi use kisi ka phone aata hai aur wo Sahiba ko wahi rukne ko kehta hai aur wo apni car ki taraf jaata hai..., aur tabhi Raj aata hai.... woh Shveta ko dhundta hai per Shveta kahi dikhayi nahi deti... phir wo Sahiba ko dekhta hai.., aur uski taraf jaata hai}

Raj: ex-cuse me...

{sahiba palatti hai...., aur Raj bas use dekhta hi rehta hai.... uski simplicity, uski aankhein...in sab mien raj bas kho jaata hai}

Sahiba: yes...

Raj: emmm... wo ...... main Shveta ko dhund raha hu...

Sahiba: oh, she's there... {pointing towards shveta......, shveta raj ko dekhti hai aur waha aati hai}

Shveta: main kabse tumhara intezar kar rahi thi Raj.....

Raj: i'm sorry...

Shveta: oh, by the way Raj she is Sahiba Singhania... & Sahibaji he's Raj Mehra

Raj: hi....

Sahiba: {smiles} hi...

{tabhi Sidharth waha aata hai}

Sidharth: bhabhi, we'll have to rush home.... mama ka phone tha

Sahiba: oh, thik hai..... ok Shvetaji hum aap se phir milenge... {looks at Raj & smiles.... & both of them leave, while Raj was standing there}

Shveta: kya hua?

Raj: kuch nahi..., waise tumhara kaam ho gaya ho to chale? Its been too late

Shveta: ha, wo to hai.. thik hai main bas abhi aati hu...

Raj; ok...

{and after a while these two return back home.... Though it was Raj's birthday today per wo uss dinko sirf Yash aur Shveta ke saath hi celebrate karta tha, jo wo already kar chuke the...., so no more celebrations.. ab Raj aisa hi tha...!!!}

Its night time now... & Raj was in his room working on his laptop..... phir achanak uska kaam mein mann nahi lagta hai wo laptop bandh karta hai aur bas aise hi baitha hai resting his head on the sofa.... He than just closes his eyes...., and he suddenly

sees Sahiba's face & just gets up}

Raj: {smiles} main bhi na... pata nahi kya kya sochta rehta hu....

{tabhi yash aata hai}

Yash: kya hua? kisse baatein kar rahe ho?

Raj: kuch nahi, bas yeh kaam khatm kar raha tha...

Yash: kal kar lena, din bhar bas kaam kaam aur kaam..., shakal dekho apni..,kitne thake hue lag rahe ho...., jao jakar so jao abhi…. u really need a break Raj...!!!

Raj: aisa kuch nahi hai, bas aaj thoda thak gaya tha...

Yash: bas aaj? yeh roz ki baat ho rahi hai Raj....

Raj: {smiles} tumhare hote hue mujhe kuch ho sakta hai bhala?

Yash: waise baat kya hai? aaj kuch jyada hi muskura rahe ho?

Raj: kyun? ab muskura bhi nahi sakta?

Yash: nahi per aaj iss muskurahat mien zaroor kuch baat hai.....

Raj: kuch bhi nahi..... chal ab sone do mujhe neend aa rahi hai

Yash: thik hai...goodnite

Raj: goodnite...

Next Day...........

{as usual Raj & Yash were at office & Shveta at her work... Now only a week was left for Sidharth's wedding, so Shveta was completing the decoration part of the SinghaniaMansion,which was a very big responsiblity & she was doing it really well.... By this time Shveta and Sahiba were good friends, & ofcourse Sidharth & Shveta too...}

Shveta was in the Singhania mansion, just then Raj calls her up....

Shveta: hi Raj

Raj: Shveta kal main kuch designs papa ko dikha raha tha aur phir wo file wahi chod di...aur ghar bhi lock hai..

Shveta: oh.., ghar pe to koi nahi hai, per tumhare paas to keys hai na?

Raj: nahi na..., tum kaha ho?

Shveta: oh ho...,main to abhi Singhania mansion mein hu..

Raj: oh, thik hai main waha aata hu

Shveta: oh to suno, raaste mein please tina ko bhi lete aana..., wo bhi yehi aa rahi hai aur uske paas kuch saamaan hai

Raj: thik hai.... {hangs down}

Shveta: {to herself} yeh Raj bhi na..

Sahiba: kya hua? any problem?

Shveta: ji nahi..., no problem... {smiles} actually choti si hai... per its ok

Sahiba: {smiles} ok....

Shveta: waise Arav kaha hai?

Sahiba: uper kamre mien, abhi so raha hai

Shveta: oh...., ok

{yaha Raj tina ko lete hue Singhania house pohochta hai..., ab tina kuch boxes lekar chal rahi thi aur wo use gira deti hai.. so Raj use ander jaane ko kehta hai aur wo boxes wo khud uthata hai...aur ander jaata hai... box pakadne ki wajah se uska chehra dikhayi nahi deta hai…… Sahiba use dekhti hai}

Sahiba: ex-cuse me.

{raj box neeche rakhta hai}

Raj: {smiles} hi...

Sahiba: oh aap.., lekin yeh sab??

Raj: yeh sab Shveta ka hai...., whooh!!!

Sahiba: aap baithiye

{and she asks the servant to get a glass of water for Raj}

Sahiba: lijiye...

Raj: thanks.... {he drinks the water in one breath.....}

Raj: yeh Shveta kaha hai?

Sahiba: wo abhi bahar garden mein hai.... ek minute.. {asks the servant to call shveta}

{tabhi sidharth waha aata hai, Arav ko lekar}

Sidharth: hey sweetheart, aapka sweetheart uth gaya hai..

Sahiba: oh..., humne kaha tha Sidharth ki hume bula dena...

Sidharth: uff ho chill..., yeh apne chachu ke saath khel raha hai ...hai na chotu..{and the baby too smiles looking at Sidharth} dekha...

{raj yeh dekhkar bas smile karta hai}

Sidharth: oh hi...!! i'm sorry maine aapko dekha nahi....,

Raj: its ok..... {raj looks at the baby & waves at him playfully... & the baby too smiles}

Sidharth; are wah! yeh to aapke dost bann gaye..,kyun chotu.???

Raj: naam kya hai iska?

Sahiba: Arav

Raj: nice name.... {and he comes closer to arav and starts playing with him.... tabhi Sidharth ka cell ring karta hai so wo Arav ko Raj ko deta hai... and Raj like a kid starts playing with Arav..., while Arav too smiles looking at him... and looking at them Sahiba too smiles...just than Sidharth comes and takes Arav from Raj}

Sidharth: lagta hai aapko bhi bachche bahot pasand hai

Raj: {smiles} ji...., aur phir Arav to kitna cute hai....

{just than again Sidharth's cell rings}

Sahiba: Arav ko yaha laao, aur payal se kehna ki ab bas 1 hafta hi baaki hai....

Sidharth: {smiles blushingly} ji bhabhi....

Raj: yeh Shveta ab tak nahi aayi..

Sahiba: lijiye aa gaye

Shveta: oh you are here..... yeh rahi keys, aur please ab ise mat khona warna aaj raat mujhe bahar hi rehna padega

Raj: are dont worry, waise bhi aisa kuch hua to mere ghar chali aana

{tabhi tina waha aati hai aur shveta ko kuch keti hai aur shveta uske saath chali jaati hai}

Raj: acha to main bhi chalta hu...

Sahiba: {smiles} ji...

{raj chala jata hai......

Kuch der baad wo office mein kaam karte karte bas ruk jaata hai aur aise hi baitha rehta hai.... just relaxing on the chair}

Yash: hey kya hua?

Raj: kuch nahi....., bas aise hi

Yash: ab bas bahot ho gaya.... {yash raj ke haatho se saare files leta hai} ghar jao au thoda aaram karo.....

maine kal bhi tumse kaha tha ki u need a break..... waise bhi abhi yeh kaam itna zaroori nahi hai, ise main dekh lunga per please apne liye naa sahi to mere liye ghar jao aur thoda aaram karlo...

Raj: are baba, i'm absolutely fine

Yash: what fine? din bhar yaha kaam aur raat bhar ghar pe kaam....., but not anymore, tum jaate ho ya nahi?

Raj: per Yash

Yash: per ver kuch nahi...., just leave

Raj: meri baat to suno

Yash: i said leave now ya phir main abhi Shveta ko phone kar raha hu....

Raj: ok fine.... main jaa raha hu. Per tum bhi aaj jaldi aa jana

Yash: ha...

{ at last raj ghar chala jaata hai...., aur bas baitha rehta hai.... ki Shveta waha aati hai}

Shveta: oh hi..., mujhe laga ki shayad Yash hai

Raj: wo to office mein hai..., waise tum aaj jaldi kaise?

Shveta: ha bas kaam ab hone ko hi aaya hai so bas aa gayi... Tina to hai hi waha.....

Raj: hmmm......

Shveta: are ha waise main tumhe batana bhool gayi...., tumhe pata hai main Lemon yellow associates ke saath kaam karti thi

Raj: oh kaun wo Mr. Malia?

Shveta: ha wahi...., unhone ek party rakhi hai jiske liye hume bhi invite kiya hai

Raj: oh... but Shveta main waha kya karunga? I harldy know anyone there

Shveta: {smiles} ha per wo log to tumhe jaante hai na.... Please Raj mere liye...

Raj: ok ok...., kab hai party?

Shveta: kal shaam

Raj: ok...

{tabhi shveta ko call aata hai and she rushes out}

Shveta: office se phone hai, mujhe jana hoga...

Raj: ok...

{shveta chali jaati hai....Raj than has a cup of coffee & than just go out in the garden... he just steps out

than he sees a car coming..... the car stops in front of Shveta's house.... & it was Sidharth... He sees Raj so he comes to him}

Sidharth: hi.... yeh Shvetaji yehi rehti hai na?

Raj: ha, per abhi hi wo bahar gayi hai

Sidharth: oh..., darhesal wo apne kuch papers wahi chod gaye the aur main bhi isi taraf aa raha tha to socha ki unhe deta jao

Raj: oh... ok

{tabhi raj ko koi call aata hai}

Raj: hello..., ok fine.... mujhe to nahi pata aap hi dekhiye agar koi acha designer mil jaye to thik hoga... ab bas interiors hi baaki hai.......... ok fine......... ok thanks a lot...

Raj: sorry..., waise how about a cup of coffee? Achi bana leta hu...

Sidharth: {smiles} waise mujhe kahi aur bhi jana hai........... per ok fine....

Raj: {smiles} please come in.....

{raj makes coffee for both of them}

Sidharth: hmm... nice coffee......, just similar to what bhabhi makes...

Raj: {smiles}... so shaadi ki tayyariya kaisi chal rahi hai?

Sidharth: peechle ek mahine se bas wahi chal rahi hai... waise aap kuch pareshan se lag rahe ho.... kya baat hai?

Raj: no nothing serious.....

Sidharth: shayad hum itne ache dost nahi hai ki aap mujhse apni problems share kar sake.....

Raj: are aisi koi baat nahi hai bas ek chotisi problem hai......

Sidharth: to kahiye na, ho sakta main aapki koi help kar pau

Raj: well, baat yeh hai ki maine abhi abhi ek ghar liya hai..... and i need a good interior designer now.....

Sidharth: oh...!! waise to bahot se hai, infact the best one's at my house only........... per.. anyways, main dekhta hu shayad koi mil jaye....

Raj: best one?

Sidharth: haa.. Sahiba bhabhi..., she's the most renowned interior designer...... per ab wo kaam nahi karte

Raj: per unhone u achanak se kaam karna kyun chod diya?

Sidharth: kuch personal problems ki wajah se.....

Raj: ok...

Sidharth: acha ab main chalta hu, & i'll surely look up for someone & let you u know..

Raj: thanks....

Sidharth: ok than bye.. & thanks for the coffee

Raj: my pleasure......

Sidharth: i think hamari bahot jamegi...., anyways bye...

Raj: bye.....

{and sidharth drives off}

............End Of Part 4............

Comments awaited!!!

Lotsa luv,

farheen

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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 awesoem part..... raj ke dil mein kuch kuch hota hai ..sahiba ko dekh kar jaise humare dil mein hota hai raj ko dekh kar..... 😆 .....raj kaho toh main interiors ka course karlo apka ghar design karne ke liye..... 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajeev-bigfan

👏 awesoem part..... raj ke dil mein kuch kuch hota hai ..sahiba ko dekh kar jaise humare dil mein hota hai raj ko dekh kar..... 😆 .....raj kaho toh main interiors ka course karlo apka ghar design karne ke liye..... 😉

ha neha, raj ko dekhkar kuch nahi bahot kuch hota hai..😉 😆 😆 n ya come fast raj's waitin 4 u....😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
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sorry for late comments dii..
n it was just awsome update..!! i love yash n raj's friendship here.. n d convo between sid n raj was really sweet..
sid's so cute...i guess he's more of bhabhi's boy.. 😆 😆
in all a grt n lite part to read..!!
continue soon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks..!! will be updating asap...
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Part-5

Recap-

Shaadi ke preprations bahot zoro se chal rahe the aur in sab ke beech Sahiba aur Shveta ke beech achi dosti hoti hai.... Sidharth aur Raj ki bhi achi dosti ho hi jaati hai....

Ab aage.....

Sidharth ke jaate Raj wahi garden mein baitha hota hai. Use shaam ke waqt u akele waqt guzarna bahot pasand tha jo shayad hi use apne liye milta tha... Wo bas baithe uss dubte suraj ki taraf dekhta.., to kabhi aasmaa mein un panchiyo ko dekhta.., to kabhi saamne phoolo ko dekhta... Use yeh sab bahot pasand tha..., uski liye yehi khubsoorti thi. Bas aise

mein kisi ki kami thi tho bas kisi saathi ki.....

Phir use kuch yaad aata hai, aur wo ander chala jata hai....

Kuch der baad Yash ghar aata hai.., to dekhta hai ki Raj wahi so raha hai aur tv on hi hai. Wo Raj ko u dekhkar hasta hai

Yash: bilkul bachcho ki tarha hai yeh... {smiles & goes to his room without making a noise}

Phir kuch der baad Raj ekdum se uth jata hai..use kuch jalne ki smell aane lagti hai jo ki kitchen se aa rahi hoti hai...

Pehle to wo yaha waha dekhta hai per sab kuch use thik thak lag raha hota hai....

Raj: are yaha to sab thik hai to yeh awaaz aur jalne ki bu kaha se aa rahi hai?

{Phir use kitchen se dhua nikalta dikhta hai}

Raj: oh god! aaj phir Yash khana bana raha hai! god save me now!!!

{aur wo wahi dubara se pillow apne face per rakhkar so jaata hai......phir kuch hi der baad use kuch tutne ki aawaaz aati hai.

ab irritate hokar wo uth jata hai aur seedhe kitchen mein jata hai...aur dekhta hai ki Yash gas ke paas khada kuch kar raha hai}

Raj: oh Mr. Chef. Aap khana bana rahe ho ya jala rahe ho? Yeh kya halat bana rakhi mere kitchen ki....

Yash: tumhara kitchen? baat to aise kar rahe ho jaise ki tum meri biwi ho aur maine tumhare kitchen pe kabza kar liya ho. Are main to khana bana raha tha, wo bhi bina shor kiya taake tumhari neend kharab naa ho sake

Raj: bina shor kiya??? aur yeh batao ki yeh plate kisne todi?

Yash: are wo galati se tut gayi...

Raj: {looks at him irritatingly} please Yash, zindagi mein har kaam karna per kabhi khana mat banana

Yash: yaar tum sach kehte ho...., dekho na main yeh book padhke khana bana raha tha, per galati se wo page palat gaya aur maine mutter aur halwa mix kar diya... har cheez ulti ho gayi...

Raj: {smiles} acha ab rehne do hum aaj bahar chale jayenge, waise bhi ab mera bhi khana banane ka mann nahi hai...

Yash: are to phir jaldi bhaag chalte hai, warna wo Shveta yaha aa gayi to mera pata nahi kya kar degi.., phir to shayad wo meri hi koi receipe bana de

Raj: pehle apni shakal to thik karlo...

Yash: bas do minute.....

{aur phir kuch der baad wo dono kahi bahar chale jaate hai.... aur phir kaafi der baad wo kisi restaurant mein jaate hai,

aur phir kaafi der raat ghar lautte hai}

Next morning.....

Roz ki tarha Raj aur Yash office ke liye nikal rahe the, tabhi Shveta aati hai

Shveta: hi guys, kal raat tum dono the kaha? Main kabse intezar kar rahi thi

Raj: bas zara {looks at Yash} bahar gaye the.

Shveta: to ek phone to kar dete, main khaane pe kabse intezar kar rahi thi, anyways aaj tum dono ko SinghaniaMansion aana hai.

Yash: kyun?

Shveta: aaj Sidharth ki sangeet ceremony hai aur usne tum dono ko bhi invite kiya hai

Yash: per main to use thik se jaanta bhi nahi, i mean we've hardly met.

Shveta: per wo tumhe achi tarha se jaanta hai infact unhone to Mom Dad ko bhi invite kiye hai

Raj: ok hum aayenge, per bas kuch hi der ke liye.... per abhi hum chalte hai, clients aa chuke honge chal Yash

Yash: ha shveta, byee...

Shveta: are per..acha thik hai jao... per aana zaroor..byeee

{and yash & raj drives off}

SinghaniaMansion........

Yaha sangeet ceremony ki preparations lagbhag puri ho chuki thi. Everything was just perfect here, as always done by the Singhanias, but today it was a bit special as it was Sidharth's sangeet ceremony.

But least interested in all this Sidharth is enjoying playing with Arav.

Sahiba: Sidharth, mehmaan aa chuke hai, aap jaldi se neeche jayiye

Sidharth: ha bhabhi, waise bhi jab tak main nahi jaunga wo function start nahi kar payenge.....

Sahiba: isiliye to keh rahe hai ki jaldi se jao

Sidharth: acha, per aap bhi to ab tak ready nahi hue....

Sahiba: emmm.... wo hum baad mien aayenge, per abhi tum jao

Sidharth: baad mein kyun? aap abhi mere saath chaliye

Sahiba: per Sidharth, yeh thik nahi...tum zid naa karo aur jao

Sidharth: kya thik nahi hai? Aap jaante hai ki main un sab baato mein yakeen nahi karta, aur naa hi aap kijiye....

Sahiba: Sid, tumne hamesha hamari baat maani hai na... please aaj bhi maan jao...

Sidharth: no way bhabhi.... Aapke bina yeh function nahi hoga... Aur aap kiski parwah kar rahe hai? Unn logo ki, jinka aapse koi rishta nahi hai....

Sahiba: nahi, per hume unki parwah hai jo iss ghar mein rehte hai... Iss ghar ki kuch maryaada hai Sid, please hume samajhne ki koshish karo...

Sidharth: agar aap nahi chal rahe to main bhi nahi jaa raha....

{tabhi koi ander aata hai}

Person: bilkul sahi keh rahe ho

Sahiba: Payalllll...... {that's Panchi Bora}

Sidharth: ab tumhi inhe kuch samjhao Payal

Payal: bhabhi, chaliye sab aapka aur hamara intezar kar rahe hai.... Neena mama ne aapko abhi bulaya hai

Sidharth: ok so ab aap chalenge, warnaaa.......

Payal: kya????

Sidharth: kuch nahi..... chaliye na bhabhi, acha main Arav ko le jaa raha hu aap aajiye

{aur bina kuch sune Sidharth Arav ko lekar kamre se chala jaata hai}

Payal: kya baat hai bhabhi?

Sahiba: kuch nahi, bas.....

Payal: hum bhale hi aapse chote hai, per hamesha aapke saath hai bhabhi....

Sahiba: {smiles} jaante hai... ab chale?

{Sangeet ceremony shuru hoti hai.., sabhi bahot khush the... per Sahiba apne aapko kuch uncomfortable feel karti hai....

per iss waqt uske liye Sidharth aur Payal ki khushi mayane rakhti hai, to naa chahte hue bhi wo waha rukti hai...

Gaana bajana chalta hai, aur dher saari masti...Shveta aur uske parents bhi aate hai. Per kuch der baad Shveta bhi bore hone lagti hai, wo besabri se Raj aur Yash ka intezar kar rahi thi, per unka koi pata nahi tha}

Sahiba: kya baat hai? You seem to be lost...!!!

Shveta: {smiles} nahi... actually main Raj ka intezar kar rahi thi

Sahiba: oh ha, aapke dost ab tak nahi aaye?

Shveta: nahi..., lagta hai bahot busy hai....

{tabhi Arav rone lagta hai to Sahiba use lekar bahar lawn mein jaati hai. Iss waqt waha koi nahi hota.... bilkul shaant, thik waise jaise aksar Sahiba ko rehne ki adat thi. Wo Arav ko lekar wahi baith jaati hai..... Per bas kuch pal ke liye kahi kho jaati hai...

Tabhi Neena use bulane aati hai per dekhti hai ki Sahiba phir waise hi khoyi hui gumsum si baithi hai... Use Sahiba ka aisa rehna bilkul pasand nahi tha..., wo bas waha chup khadi thi, tabhi Sidharth waha aata hai}

Sidharth: Kya baat hai ma? aap yaha kyun chale aaye?

Neena: nahi... wo bas Sahiba ko...... {still looking at her} Wo aaj bhi apne yaado se nikal nahi paayi

Sidharth: jaanta hu...., per mama, kya bhabhi phir se unka kaam shuru nahi kar sakte? Kaam mein mann laga rahega to wo in sab ke baare mein nahi sochenge.... Iss tarha to wo bas ander hi ander ghutte jayenge...

Neena: per beta, tum apne papa ko jaante ho na

Sidharth: ha, aur main unse baat karunga... Main bhabhi ko aise nahi dekh sakta..... Anyways, aap chaliye main unhe bula lata hu

Neena: nahi... Arav ro raha tha , isiliye wo use bahar le aayi.. Kuch der use yehi rehne do...

Sidharth: thik hai... aap chaliye...

{wo ander chale jaate hai... Sahiba wahi baithi hoti hai.... Tabhi gate ke bahar ek car aakar rukti hai, aur koi Sahiba ki taraf aata hai...

That was Raj. Wo Sahiba ko wahi baithi dekhta hai to uske paas aata hai... aur dekhta hai wo kahi khoyi hui hai... uski aankhein namm hai}

Raj: Sahibaji.....

{she quickly wipes off her tears}

Sahiba: aap?

Raj: yeh kya aap....

Sahiba: kuch nahi..., waise Shveta aapka kabse intezar kar rahi hai

Raj: ji wo office mein kuch kaam tha, isliye zara der ho gayi... Per aap yaha bahar... i mean

Sahiba: wo Arav ro raha tha, to ise lekar hum bahar aa gaye..., per aap ander jayiye...

Raj: darhesal mera ek dost aane wala hai, usi ke liye ruka hu....

Sahiba: acha...

{than Raj looks at Arav and than he starts playing with him}

Raj: waise Arav ke Papa bahot......

{tabhi waha Sidharth aata hai}

Sidharth: Bhabhi Arav ko main.... are Raj aap?

Raj: {smiles} hi..

Sidharth: aap bahar kya kar rahe ho? Ander chaliye na

Raj: ha bas wo apne dost ka intezar kar raha tha....

Sidharth: oh, acha bhabhi mama aapko bula rahe hai.... , iss chotu ko hume dijiye...warna yeh phir aapko tang karenge...

{sahiba arav ko sidharth ke paas deti hai aur chali jaati hai}

Sidharth: heyi chotu kya hua? aaj aap mama ko bahot tang kar rahe ho..ha, {he goes on playing with arav}

Raj: aur Arav ke papa?

{sidharth just looks at him but said nothing...}

Raj: kya hua?

Sidharth: bhaiya is no more

Raj: what? main kuch samjha nahi..... bhaiya..

Sidharth: mere bade bhaiya, Arav ke papa.... pechle saal unki death ho gayi

{raj was a bit shocked to know this}

Raj: i'm ..... i'm sorry to know that...

Sidharth: its ok..., I believe life is all about moving ahead now... bhaiya ki kami to hamesha rahegi... per phir zindagi to chalti rehti hai na

Raj: ha...

{tabhi Sahiba waha aati hai, aur Raj bas uski taraf dekhta hai... Shayad ab use sahiba ki khamoshi, uss adhurepan ka ehsaas hota hai... Wo Arav ko lekar chali jaati hai, aur Yash bhi aa jata hai}

Yash: i'm sorry yaar traffic mein phass gaya tha

Raj: I thought so.., anyways Yash that's Sidharth, & Sidharth that's Yash Mittal... my best friend & business partner too..

Sidharth: okie to aap hai Yash Mittal... waise i must say that u two are doing great job..!! Infact Mr.Mittal i've got an offer for u

Yash: {smiles} welll.., that's good, per aap mujhe Yash kahe to jyada beheter hoga aur rahi baat offer ki to hamara office hamesha apke

liye khula hai... You are always welcome there....

Sidharth: well in that case, we'll be meeting soon... Per abhi ander chalte hai warna sab bahar aa jayenge...

{teeno ander jaate hai...Shveta was very much releived to see Raj & Yash there... The function went on...

Jab bhi Sahiba aati Raj bas uski taraf dekhta hai..., use yeh ab tak yakeen nahi ho raha tha ki itni kam umr mein Sahiba ke saath itna kuch ho gaya...

Funtion was over and they were back home.... That night Raj couldn't sleep... He too didnt knew why, but he was feeling a bit restless.

Hiten: are Raj, kya baat hai? kya saari raat jaagne ka irada hai?

Raj: nahi, bas neend nahi aa rahi

Yash: hmmm... kya sirf yehi baat hai?

Raj: ha baba, aur koi baat nahi hai.... are ha kisi interior designer se baat hui?

Yash: are koi acha mile to na.... Tum to Shveta ko jaante ho... She's so particular about everything. Maine to usse kaha ki wo khud hi

interiors kar le...

Raj: {smiles} ha.., waise mujhe bhi ab tak nahi mila hai...

Yash: i wonder tumne ab tak Shveta se itni badi baat chupayi kaise? but i'm sure jab use pata chalega ki yeh ghar tumhara apna hai to use bahot

khushi hogi...

Raj: isliye to chah raha tha ki ek baar sab kuch ho jaye phir use dikha du....

Yash: dont worry, mera ek dost hai, shayad kal kuch baat bann jaye...

Raj: okiee... anyways goodnite...

Yash: goodnite...

......End of Part-5.....

Comments Awaited!!!

Lotsa luv,

farheen

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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome yaar.....i am also sad..plzzz continue soon...cant wait to read more 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: ami_princess

awesome yaar.....i am also sad..plzzz continue soon...cant wait to read more 😛

thanks..😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww awesome part faru........great yaar.....fantastic part...eager to read morte so plzz uplaod soonn..... 👏

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