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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
thanks a ton for all those wonderful comments n predections too..!! 😉
will be updating soon..



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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part-3

Recap-

shveta ki mulaqat Mr.Singhania se hoti hai, aur phir Sidharth se....jiske kehne per wo uski bhabhi se

milne singhania mansion jaati hai.....

ab aage.........

Shveta was really impressed with the Singhanias...she was sitting there waiting for

Sidharth's bhabhi to come..just than she comes...wearing a lite blue color saree...looking extremely sweet & beautiful..she was Sidharth's bhabhi....

Person: Miss Khanna?

{shveta turns around}

Shveta: {smiles} ji...per aap?

Person: {smiles} i'm Sahiba Singhania.... {aamna shariff} Sidharth ki bhabhi...

Shveta: oh.. hi...

Sahiba: please make yourself comfortable....

Shveta: thanks....,

Sahiba: yeh Sidharth kaha hai?

Shveta: wo aa rahe the per tabhi unhe kisi meeting ke liye jana pada

Sahiba: oh.., anyways yeh batayiye kya lenge aap?

Shveta: thanks, per abhi kuch nahi

Sahiba: ok..., to kahiye kya madat kar sakte hum aapki?

Shveta: sabse pehle to hume venue aur baki aapki pasand bata dijiye & accordingly I'll start on with my work

Sahiba: thik hai...., aap kaam kabse shuru karenge?

Shveta: kal hi se..., aur ha main ek bar payal se bhi milna chahungi.., just to know a bit about her taste too!

Sahiba: thik hai, jab aap kahe milva denge..

Shveta: ok than.., waise aapka beta kaisa hai?

Sahiba: he's fine.., per aap uske bare mein kaise jaante hai?

Shveta: darhesal Sidharth bata rahe the ki aapke bete ki tabiyat kuch thik nahi hai...

Sahiba: oh.., he's fine now

Shveta: thik hai, to ab main chalti hu..., kal se kaam shuru hoga

Sahiba: thik hai, aapko jab bhi hamari zaroorat pade bas phone kar dijiyega..

Shveta: ji.. ok then, byee..

Sahiba: byee...

{Shveta jaa hi rahi hoti hai ki Sidharth aa jata hai}

Sidharth: hi..., aap bhabhi se mil liye

Sahiba: ha mil liye..., per aap iss waqt yaha kya kar rahe ho? aapko office mein hona chahiye tha

Sidharth: wo kya hai na hume apni girlfriend ki bahot yaad aa rahi thi..., aur phir bhook bhi lagi thi..

to bas chale aaye.., waise Shvetaji u know hamari girlfriend {pointing towards Sahiba} kamaal ka khana

banati hai...

Shveta: {smiles}well.., mujhe ab chalna chahiye...

{and shveta leaves}

Sahiba: to kahiye, kya khayenge aap?

Sidharth: khana nahi..., bhabhi please ek request thi

Sahiba: Payal se baat karni hai?

Sidharth: {smiles} dekha bhabhi..., i love you for this..... bina kahe hi aap meri saari baatein samajh jaate ho...

Sahiba: {laughs} tum khud kyun nahi baat karte? ab to tumhari shaadi hone wali hai na?

Sidharth: yeh baat mere hone wale sasur ko samjhayiye..... huh!

Sahiba: acha thik hai, hum phone kar dete hai...

Sidharth: thanks a lot bhabhi... i love you for this.. Acha main bas abhi aata hu..pehle chotu se to mil lu...

Sahiba: saara waqt to uske saath hote ho...

Sidharth: ab kya kare, chotu hai hi inta pyara...., just like me!

Sahiba: ohhh..., {smiles}

{tabhi Sidharth ki mama Neena aate hai..., yeh bahot hi sweet hai per utne hi strict bhi.., Sahiba ko yeh apni bahu nahi beti maante hai}

Neena: Sahiba beta, Arav ro raha hai...., jaldi dekho use...

Sahiba: ji mama... {and she runs towards her room}

Neena: aap iss waqt yaha?

Sidharth: bas mama, wo wedding planner aayi thi to use bhabhi se milvane aaya tha...

Neena: oh.., acha hua aap yaha aaye ho, hum waise bhi shopping ke liye jaa rahe the... aap bhi chaliye

Sidharth: shopping??? no mama please... aap chachi ke saath jayiye na...

Neena: thik hai.., tum jao aur Arav ko dekho, tab tak hum aate hai...aur ha Sahiba akeli hai to kisi ke aane tak kahi jana nahi...

Sidharth: dont worry mama..., mian hu yehi...

{Let me give u a little information about the Singhanias......

Balraj Singhania ke chote bhai the, Vikram Singhania.. Kam bolne wale, inke liye society mein apna

status, apni shaan hi sab kuch tha... Family inke liye hamesha apne kaam ke baad aati thi.., per he was not

that bad too.., per inki image hi kuch aisi thi...

Vikram ki wife hai Barkha Singhania. Ye bhi bilkul inke pati ki tarha hi hai, per in mien fark itna hai ki yeh sabse pehle apni family ko ehmiyat deti hai. Yeh pehle aise bilkul nahi thi, per Singhania ki family mein kuch aisa hadsaa hua jisse yeh badal gayi, inki soch bhi badal gayi... Inki koi bachche nahi hai... yeh Sidharth ko hi apna beta maante hai.. aur ab se Arav bhi inki aankho ka taara tha}

Waha Shveta Raj ke office jaati hai. Yash usse bahar milne wala tha, per Yash being Yash, bhool jata hai to Shveta ko

unke office hi aana padta hai.....

Wo unke cabin mein jaati hai...

Raj: hey iss waqt yaha kaise?

Shveta: {staring at Yash} aana pada Raj...

Yash: {to himself} oh terriii!!! mujhe isse bahar milna tha aur main bhool gaya..., God save me today!

Raj: kya hua? tum dono ek dusre ko aise kyun dekh rahe ho?

Yash: kuch nahi Raj..., acha Shveta aaj tumhari meeting kaisi thi?

Shveta: {smiles} are bahot badhiya.... Singhanias are just tooo good! Everything about them is just so perfect...., aur wo Sidharth Singhania..

{laughs} what a person. Itna down to earth, itna maazakiya hai ki kya kahu....

{all this while Raj was busy in completeing the designs while Yash was just looking at Shveta}

Shveta: pata hai wo har kaam apni bhabhi se puchkar karta hai...

Yash: bhabhi se? Sidharth Singhania ka koi bhai bhi hai?

{atlast Raj speaks}

Raj: tum to aise bol rahe ho jaise inhe barso se jaante ho

Yash: are Singhania are of the most renowned family....., unhe kaun nahi jaanta..., main to bas isliye

puch raha tha kyunki aaj tak unke bade bete ke bare mein kabhi kuch suna nahi hai...

Shveta: wo to pata nahi, per ha shayad Sahiba unki hi wife hai...

Yash: hey that's a lovely name... Sahiba Singhania..

Shveta: and she's a lovely person too!

Raj: tum mili unse?

Shveta: ha, unke ghar gayi thi..., bahot hi achi hai wo

Raj: hmmm.... milna hoga inse phir

Yash: wo sab chodo.., Raj mujhe bahot bhook lagi hai, main bas thodi der mein aata hu... Shveta tumne

lunch kiya hai?

{shveta bas gusse se yash ko dekhti hai..., wo log lunch ke bahane se hi milne wale jo the}

Yash: ooppsss!!! mar gaya... Raj main aur Shveta bas abhi aate hai...

{isse pehle ki Raj unse kuch kehta wo log bahar chale jaate hai}

Shveta: yeh kya hai Yash? tum mujhe ek ghante pehle milne wale the....

Yash: i'm sorry yaar, kaam mien itna busy tha ki bhool gaya, but dont worry hamare paas ab bhi waqt hai...

main abhi farmhouse jaa raha hu, aur tum thik 12 baje Raj ko lekar waha aana

Shveta: u mean aaj raat 12 baje farmhouse pe?

Yash: nahi kal raat 12 baje kabraastan mein..., bhooto ke saath hide-n-seek khelenge.... !!! ofcourse aaj raat 12

baje hi cake katenge na?

Shveta: dumbo! mera matlab hai ki raat mein main use bahar kis bahane se le aungi? tum to Raj ko jaante ho na...

Yash: koi bhi bahana karo.., ab itna to tum kar sakti ho na.... {looks at her doubtfully} i hope kar sakti ho...

Shveta: ok ok, main use le aaungi, per tum please saare arrangements kar lena.., and for God's sake iss baar

cake mat bhulna..., peechli baar tum decorations aur khaane mien itne gum ho gaye the ki cake laana hi bhool gaye the..

Yash: ab tum bekaar ki baatein mat karo.., ho jaati hai kabhi kabhi galati insaan se... acha ab mujhe jaane do

time waste mat karo, aur please waqt pe aa jana

Shveta: thik hai....

{yash rushes towards his farmhouse & shveta goes back to Raj}

Raj: Yash kaha hai?

Shveta: pucho mat..., pura pagal hai wo....

Raj: wo mujhe pata hai.... per yeh batao ki wo hai kaha?

{shveta kuch samajh nahi paati ki ab wo kya bahana kare}

Shveta: wo...wo use..., ha use Tarun uncle ka phone aaya tha isiliye kahi chala gaya..., anyways mujhe bhi abhi jana hai...

Tina ka phone aaya tha.... tum please shaam mein free rehna mujhe kuch kaam hai...

{and she just goes out of the cabin before Raj could say anything}

Raj: {to himself} yeh dono bhi na... {smiles} thik se jhoot bhi nahi bol paate....

It was night time now...& Shveta was in her room calling up Yash....

Shveta: ha Yash ab kuch ho gaya?

Yash: ha almost sab done! tum niklo.., waise i hope tumne Raj se kuch kaha nahi ho...

Shveta: nahi kuch nahi kaha hai...

Yash: usne pucha nahi ki main kaha hu?

Shveta: ha pucha to tha, per maine bata diya ki tumhe Tarun uncle ka phone aaya aur tum kahi chale gaye..

Yash: what??? God! i knew tum kuch na kuch gadbad zaroor karogi

Shveta: kyun? kya hua?

Yash: Raj achi tarha se jaanta hai ki papa kal hi US gaye hai, aur tumhare aane se kuch hi der pehle Raj ne

unse baat ki thi...

Shveta: oh no!

Yash: ab yes no chodo aur Raj ko yaha le aao... & please iss baar kuch aisa waisa mat kehna...

Shveta: ha ha.., main abhi uske ghar jaa rahi hu..... {hangs down}

{Shveta Raj ke ghar jaati hai, Raj as usual laptop pe kuch kaam kar raha tha}

Shveta: hi Raj

Raj: hi.... baitho... waise kuch pata hai yeh Yash hai kaha?

Shveta: ha ...mm... nahi

Raj: ha ya na?

Shveta: nahi.., pata nahi usse baat nahi hui.., acha Raj chalo na kahi bahar chalte hai

Raj: bahar? iss waqt?

Shveta: ha.., bas u hi mann kiya....., chalo na {wo laptop bandh kar deti hai}

Raj: per Shveta, mujhe yeh kaam abhi khatm karna hai

Shveta: kya tum mere liye itna bhi nahi kar sakte?

Raj: hmm... chalo....,

Shveta: {smiles} thank you so much.....

{& she somehow manages to take Raj to the farmhouse.... it was almost 12 o' clock & they entered...but as soon as

shveta opened the door...they see Yash falling down}

Yash: aaoouccchhh!!!! mama......

Shveta: yeh kya hai?

Raj: tum tapke... {laughs} i mean gire kaha se?

Yash:{somehow gets up & hugs Raj} happy birthday!!!

Raj: thanks.... to sab iss liye tha...

Shveta: happy birthday Raj.... {hugs him}

Raj: thanks...

Shveta: yeh raha tumhara gift....

Raj: thanks... kya hai?

Shveta: dekh lo

{raj opens the box, and it was a watch}

Yash: hey that's cool!!! Waise mera gift main ghar pe hi bhool gaya...,koi bat nahi lautne per dunga... filhaal tum

yeh lo {shows him the knife}

Raj: yeh kya hai?

Yash: hindi mein ise chaku kehte hai...., lo aur cake kaato...

{and three of them celebrates Raj's birthday}

Raj:waise yeh batao tum gire kaise?

Yash: are mian uper balloon laga raha tha, per issne {looking at shveta} itne zor se darvaza khola to mera balance gaya aur main stool se

seedha neeche....

Shveta: {laughs} u deserved that!

Raj: but thanks for the lovely treat! Tum logo ke hote mujhe kabhi bhi kisi ki bhi kami mehsoos nahi hoti

Yash: aur naa hi kabhi hogi...

Raj: thanks for being there always...

{they smile... & after a while return back home}

............. End Of Part 3................

Comments awaited..!!!

Lotsa luv,

farheen

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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
hey awesome part yaar.....i hope sabiba and raj meets soon.... 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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really awesome part.....really like shahiba's character......i wish raj and shahiba meet soon........i am waiting for it......ple continue soon.....thanks
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwww awesoem part n sooooooooo sweett of dem... 😳 yash is mad.....it was great part... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww very sweet...raj has got such good frndz...they care so much for him....loved it..cont soon far 😊 heen cant wait...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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dat was such a sweet part..!! loved sahiba's character.. n Raj has such sweet frnds.., poor yash 😆 😆 he's crazy... but i like his character too.. n shveta 😆

" Shveta: u mean aaj raat 12 baje farmhouse pe?
Yash: nahi kal raat 12 baje kabraastan mein..., bhooto ke saath hide-n-seek khelenge.... !!! ofcourse aaj raat 12 baje hi cake katenge na?"

😆 this was really funny.... i just love the relationship between them...
i'm loving this story dii...
pls pls update soon..

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow dear awesome part loved it tooo toooo goooood just awesoome heheeh yash itna funny hai i reallly like his character and uska rishta shweta aur raj keh saath is just great .....continue sooooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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so sweet..such nice frnds da three are.. 😃 ..have gr8 bond..n character of sahiba..seems gud 2... 👏 ..cont soon... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ami_princess

hey awesome part yaar.....i hope sabiba and raj meets soon.... 😛

thank u so much... well they'll meet soon...

Originally posted by: goodkashish

really awesome part.....really like shahiba's character......i wish raj and shahiba meet soon........i am waiting for it......ple continue soon.....thanks

thnks a ton..!! yes dear they'll be meting soon...just stay tuned for it!!

Originally posted by: rajeev-bigfan

wowwwwwwwwwwwwww awesoem part n sooooooooo sweett of dem... 😳 yash is mad.....it was great part... 👏

yes neha yash's completely mad 😆 😆..!! u'll get to see more of his madness further...

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