HAMARI ADHURI KAHAANI-sk fanfic { updated - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey just caught up!!!! awesome intro and the first part!!!!!!!!!! continue soon!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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k darr se thithurte hue s ki taraf dekh rahi hai

wo kisi bhi pal ro padegi

abb s jo drunk to hai,paar uski ankhein intensity se bhari hui hain,aur nigaahein k paar gaadi hui hain

k ko dekhke thoda sa hairaan reh jaata hai wo

kyunki usne ek cheap si ladki expect ki thi

paar wo to bohot haseen,bohot khubsurat,bilkul pure thi,usse dekhkaar kuch gandi bhac\vnae ya khayal jaag hi nahi sakte the

wo bohot pyaari thi,bohot hi masoom,bohot pure

lady-aye chokri jaa inke saath!bohot bade aadmi hain,koi shikayat aai naa taange tod dungi teri!

k is bebas

wo kare bhi to kya kare,kahe bhi to kya kahe,kaun sunega uski

k-wo..wo..paar...[k ki ankhon mein naami hai]

paar koi uski baat nahi sunta,aur usse wo lady s ke saath ek room mein le jaati hai

l-ye lijie saab! maaze kijiega!

the lady goes

s who is half staggerin

goes twrds the door & locks it

k ke darrke maare paseene chut jaate hain,ankhen khuli ki khuli reh jaati hain

wo kaise nikle iss jaal se

abb kya hoga uske saath!


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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
hey neel another gr8 ff...nice concept.......sound really intresting...cont soon cant wait for the next part.. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow dear awesome part loved it tooo tooo gooood ohh pooor kashish i hope uskeh saath koi buraa na ho...usne kabi kisika buraa nahin chaha abbh kashish ko dekkkh kar sujal neh to apne maaan meh ezaaat banali hai uskehliyeh... i hope woh ussseh samjeh and ussseh force naa karrre kisi baat ke liye tooo gooood neelz continue soooon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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HEy
wow...great part.....muje toh lagta hai dono baith ke baatein karenge...lolzz...just guessing
cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsum and vry novel cocept dear...awww poor kash...i dun think suju wil force her though...plzzz cont soon lubd it...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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god abb kya hoga uske saath neelu 😕 . bechari bhaag kyun nahi gayi. and this sujal plz........kuch mat karna uske saath otherwise she will to 100% suicide and die 😭 . cause she is so pure,innocent and a good girl and not like others 😭 😭 . really excited to know sujal kya karega kashish ke saath 😉 . great part. continue soon yaar plz....... can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey amazing part yaar....cant wait to read more 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG!!!suju locked the door 😲...par i am sure woh kash ke paas nahi jaega....he is a gentleman 😳 .....shayad wo kash ko us narak se chudaley......nice part neelu 👏 ...waiting for the next part eagerly 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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abb s locks the door

k darrke maare peeche hatt jaati hai

abb s strts 2 stagger twrds k

his eyes red with intoxication & intensity

his movements r imbalanced

he is movin twrds her

& with every stp of his,k is steppin back

aisa karte karte k deewar ke saath takra jaati hai

aur saamne s hai lookin directly twrds her

abb wo kya kare,she has no where 2 escape no where 2 go

chikhne ka koi faida nahi,kuch nahi hoga koi nahi bachaega usse

s apne dono arms deewar ke saath support karta hai

trapin her between the arms

he is so close ki his warm breath mixed with alchohol is prominebt 2 her nise

k bohot darr rahi hai,pasine chut rahe hain

she is actually shiverin with fear

scared lik a rabit

aur s is movin his face closer 2 her with every passin second

k sisak rahi hai

cryin slowly

asoo a rahe hain ankhon se of her helpnesness

his face is so close 2 her,ki now his intentions her clear 2 her tht he wants 2 smooch her

he is bringin his lips closer 2 her pink lustrous lips,every moment

half closin his eyes as he wants 2 njoy the moment with her

paar k is not likin it even 1 bit,she somehow wanna escape her fate

dheere dheere he brings her lips so close 2 hers ki any second thier lips cld meet & lock with each other

he is findin her quite desirable by appearence but strangely she is cold as a fish,not lik other prsotitutes he jst came across

aur jitna s uske kareeb aa raha hai,utne asoo k ki ankho se beh rahe hain

atlat thinkin abt her fate,wo ro padti hai,sisak uthti hai phut phutke

she is cryin bitterly

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