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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 8
Half an hour later she reached the club, she made her way in and spot her gorgeous bf – Kaajal wearing this
">- her hair like this

And her bf- dev looking cute wearing:
- except the shirt inside is white

She walk up to both of them and greets them

Kr- hey guys looking hot

Ka- thank …you look beautiful kripa

Kr- thanks

D- So you came with anyone kripa?

Kr- nah

Kr- I'm so excited finally get to meet the guy behind this party.. have you seen him before dev?

D- of course all the time

Kr- aww lucky, is he hot

D- Well see I don't go that way but girls are over him if that helps

Great kripa thought, like he would notice her now if he was surrounded by girls all the time. She was about to say something when she heard some girls around scream" his here look", kripa couldn't wait she would finally see this guy everyone was talking about.


She went over, pulling people behind to have a look when she was just left dumb founded, it was angad, her face lost color, wow how she wished she would have kept her mouth shut. She was just lost for word she couldn't even think and if she was the only thing she was thinking how hot he looked in this:


- except the jacket was open and he wore a white tank and his stud!!


kripa finally got out of her trance noticing angad kissing other girls cheeks greeting them, they sure were pretty though, he wasn't even looking at her , she said to herself, but why was he a pool boy, she thought.

Finally angad had looked Kripa's way and saw her looking like a lost soul with a shocked face expression which caused him to grin like there was no tomorrow, he slowly moved away from the girls and walked towards kripa who noticed angad moving.

She couldn't face him she turned around to run for it when she felt him capture her hand. "Great", she thought


okay so here was the next part hope you like it please comment and thanks once agian to everyone for commenting i'll post another!! part later coz this part is like really short
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 9
She slowly turns around hoping by chance it wasn't angad when though she knew it was him, when she found and ever sexy angad smirking.


A-hey miss universe, wassup, why you look so shock, grinning after he had said that knowing what the cause was for her ever so shock face expression.

Kripa on the other hand couldn't able to spill one word out, she snatched her hand back and ran from there leaving a proud and grinning angad behind who went just left for the dance floor to dance with other girls.

Kripa ran over to Kaajal and dev who knew what had happened

D- Shocked rite?

Kr- um yeh you could say that again

D- Kaajal sweetie want to go dance?

Ka- okay, kripa we will be back okay

Kr- yeah sure take your time


Kripa just watch the two leave for the dance floor and watched them dance romantically, she still couldn't believe what she had just experienced a few minutes before. Kripa's eyes wander around until they stop at Angad who is too busy to notice as he is dancing closely to another girl, which made kripa mad.

For some reason she didn't like how he paid attention to other girls, even though she used to consider him her pool boy, it made her mad now knowing th truth. She was starting to get bored siting by herself. She decided to get a drink. She walked over to the bar and ordered a drink when she felt someone's hand n her bare back she turned to find angad, she couldn't face him right now, and she got up and left without her drink.

Angad just smirked, boy did he like her face expression at the moment. He ordered himself a drink and sat on the stool facing his back towards the bartender. He kept his gaze on kripa while smirking. Kripa who felt someone's gaze upon her looked up to find Angad's eyes on her, it made her uncomfortable after all that happened tonight.

Angad picked up his drink and started heading for kripa, kripa noticed this and still was not ready to face him, and she instantly got up and ran to the restroom, where he definitely could not find her. She sat her self on the couch that was in the bathroom, it was quiet, as she couldn't hear the music.

Kripa stayed in there for a long time which caused her to sleep in their. She woke up and looked at her watch. She had been in there for four hours. She got up cleaned herself up and made her way outside.

When she got out she realized the party was over everyone had left. "Great in least she wouldn't have to face angad today", she thought. She made her way outside of the club.
It was chilly, and she forgot to bring her jacket. She didn't know what to do it was too late to call a cab and there were none around.

She then spots a black sports car in a distance, she decided to see if should get a lift and she walks. She finally reaches the car to se who is inside but to her bad luck the windows are tinted, suddenly she is being turned around and pushed against the car , she looks up to find angad smiling mischievously leaning on her.



don't forget to comment please!!!.. enjoy!! 😃
Edited by Chocolate_luver - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
wht is he doing there when every1 else is gone
btw..loved the way u dressed them up 😉
Edited by ash9 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow!! double treat hun!!
the look on kripa's face must be priceless i wish i could see her dumbfounded , what a sight it could have been.
she was sleeping in the washrtoom for 4 hours , that's pretty funny but i guess it didn't help bcuz she's here again face to face with angad 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey great part 😊
casn't wait to see her reaction
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Posted: 18 years ago
excellent part....continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was awesome luved it i hope he kisses her lolz anyways gr8 parts cant wait 4 next one 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
didn't anyone else go in the washroom...if so why didn't they wake her up...lol...they probably thought she was one weird girl for having left the party 😆 😆
soo....angad stayed around for 4 hours just to see kripa...haha thas nice... 😉 😆
great parts!
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey plz do contineu soon.....well I'm starting to like this as well...and plz I don't know what EXACTLY a pool boy is......can you explain that........and wow really cool! plz do continue soon.......hope you have something similar to Desire in the future 😳 ....I'm still not over the fact that it'll be ending soon......
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Posted: 18 years ago
Haha Would of loved to see Kripa's face. It was a good part.

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