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Posted: 18 years ago
omg that was a great part finily angad showed kripa who was boss lol you have to continue soon you can not just leave a cliff hanger and expecte up the be all like 😃 ....come one you have to continue soon i am dieing to know what will happen....i wonder if angad will make a move on kripa😛
Edited by Rejected - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 😆 😆 too good 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
thanks dear for the beautiful part.. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
thank you to: ash9, jiya imdad, sameira-90, tru_capricorn, memze, desiqt8806, Shazia_haya, jdsean, Rejected, monikaseth, angullgrl91, popgirl, iamsmart , sweetangle04, ishu124, i really appreciate all your comments!!!... A BIG thankssss

Part 10
A- so miss universe, how did you like the party, and what's this playing hide and seek with me?

K- Let go of me you stupid pool boy, and why would I wanna play with you

A- Pool boy? still denying the fact that I'm richer than you, oh please I saw you avoiding me hoping I'd come running to you , but sorry I don't chase after girls like you

K- Shut up, so what your richer, you still work for me get it pool boy which means I can do anything and for your information I wouldn't want you chasing after me

A- So much attitude isn't good snob.

K- You know what would be really funny, if your friends and all those girls found out that "angad Khanna is pool boy", don't ya think, she said grinning

A- You wouldn't dare

K- Oh I certainly would

A- Wait a minute I get it, and he grins

A- so you wanna tell all the girls that I'm a pool boy and then they won't wanna hang around me which means you get me all to yourself, darling seriously how may times gotta tell you me and you = NEVER

K- PLZZZ, I know you can't take the fact that I kripa Sharma the hottest girl doesn't find you hot, and you know what you can run off to your little *****

A- Jealousy isn't a good disease, but nevertheless get well soon and he smirks leaving her getting into his car. And he drives away.

Kripa just stands there, wondering how she would reach home, it started to sprinkle." great, this is all I need", she said to herself. She runs for undercover near the club.

After a few minutes angad appears in front of her in his car, he pulls the window down and just grins.

A-(GRINNING) what happened miss universe ?

Kripa just gives him a dirty she knew he was enjoying this moment a lot

K- what's it to you, go away

A- fine I was only helping

K- I don't want a pool boy's help

A- suit yourself, and angad was about to leave when

K- FINE. I can't believe I have to sit in a car with my own pool boy

Angad just rolls his eyes, why did he have come back to help her. He thought to himself

Car ride

It was quiet, angad decides to put on the radio, which were playing old random songs, such as the one playing:

Nina sky- move ya body

Move your body girl
Makes the fellas go
The way you ride it girl
Makes the fellas go

All up in the club looking fly
Made your first approach
And caught his eye
Slowly move your way towards the dance floor
Grabed her hand
And she whispered
Hold my hip
Got in the groove
Stand behind me
Let me grind with you
If I lick my lips
I'm prob'ly feeling you
Imma make you go ooh

[Chorus]

Whoo (you feelin' it now)
Take it slow
Turn me on
Club gets warmer
Body moves closer
One with the rhythm
Don't stop moving
You're making me
HOT
From head to toe
I feel your flow
Vibe gets stronger
Party seems longer
Makes me really want'cha
Don't stop moving
You're making me
HOT

[Chorus x4]

Can you feel the beat
Can you
Can you feel the beat
Can you feel the beat
Can you
Can you feel the beat

Can you feel the beat within my heart
Can't you see my love shine through the dark

Can you feel the beat

Can you feel the beat within my heart
Can't you see my love shine through the dark
Can't you see that you must be a part
Of that beat in my heart

The song was making kripa uncomfortable especially when she was in a car with her pool boy, angad. Kripa jus off the song

A- what did you o that for

K- I don't want to listen music get it pool boy

A- shut up miss universe, my car , my way get it or else just get out

Kripa was angry when she said

K- FINE like I wanna go with you ugly pool boy

A- go whose stopping you and seriously darling come back with better comebacks "ugly pool boy " I mean seriously just plain sad!!

Kripa just shot s dirty and got out the car when she realized they were on an isolated road that was surrounded only by trees and bushes, "great, now what was she to do". She got out and closed the door before she knew it angad had left.



okay short part for now will update another later on today....please comment!!! 😃 enjoy 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
hehe!!! great part!!!

kripa all alone on an isolated road...thas a bad sign!!!
but of course hopefully our hotty angad willl come to the rescue if something happens to our darling kripa
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Posted: 18 years ago
i bet angad will come back. cont soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Shazia_haya

hey plz do contineu soon.....well I'm starting to like this as well...and plz I don't know what EXACTLY a pool boy is......can you explain that........and wow really cool! plz do continue soon.......hope you have something similar to Desire in the future 😳 ....I'm still not over the fact that it'll be ending soon......

okay so a pool boy is like a person who comes and looks after your pool, like cleans it for you, mae sure the waters all clean etc. and YESS😛 i do having somehting like desire in ,my head for a new ff😃

Edited by Chocolate_luver - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆
dnt worry kripa..angad will b bck..at least to give a ride to a drunk 😆 😆 😆
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Originally posted by: desiqt8806

hehe!!! great part!!!

kripa all alone on an isolated road...thas a bad sign!!!
but of course hopefully our hotty angad willl come to the rescue if something happens to our darling kripa

heheh thank you😃..hmmm yup sure is kinda like a typical movie lolz😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

i bet angad will come back. cont soon.

hmmmm lets seee lol 😉 thank you

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