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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ash9

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dnt worry kripa..angad will b bck..at least to give a ride to a drunk 😆 😆 😆

😆.....lol hehehehe thank you for commenting

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Posted: 18 years ago
nice part...

silly silly kripa..just being stubborn is gonna cost u... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Chocolate_luver

okay so a pool boy is like a person who comes and looks after your pool, like cleans it for you, mae sure the waters all clean etc. and YESS😛 i do having somehting like desire in ,my head for a new ff😃

thx...and it was a gr8 part...do continue it......

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey
I read all the parts tonight but voudnt comment cuz my mom was yelling at me to get off the computer..neways this fan-fic is so interesting..i like the way angad ignores her and she gets mad...i had a question though..u know how kripa told kaajal that she didnt want to come with dev and kaajal and she'll come to the party by herself then shouldnt she have her car with her...if a driver dropped her then cant he pick her up too..i hope u dont mind me asking asking this..keep up the good work. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: 1985

hey
I read all the parts tonight but voudnt comment cuz my mom was yelling at me to get off the computer..neways this fan-fic is so interesting..i like the way angad ignores her and she gets mad...i had a question though..u know how kripa told kaajal that she didnt want to come with dev and kaajal and she'll come to the party by herself then shouldnt she have her car with her...if a driver dropped her then cant he pick her up too..i hope u dont mind me asking asking this..keep up the good work. 👏

hey, thank you!!😃, no i don't mind at all, sorry forgot to add that her driver went off he was off his time, hmm maybe i should add that lol thanks!!

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Chocolate_luver

hey, thank you!!😃, no i don't mind at all, sorry forgot to add that her driver went off he was off his time, hmm maybe i should add that lol thanks!!

ohh ok..i was just wondering u dont have to add that

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetangle04

nice part...

silly silly kripa..just being stubborn is gonna cost u... 😊

thank you!!!😛......yepp silly girl 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

part 11



Kripa started to walk very slowly, it was windy and cold most of all isolated, it was dark, she was scared she remembered started to remember all the horror movies where they would get killed, this is all she needed to remind herself.

She kept on walking till she heard a noise, she looked around finding nothing, she began to sweat, she was really freaked out, and oh how she wished she was still in the car with her dumb pool boy.

She kept on walking still hearing those noises, she didn't know what to do, and she looked around her till she spotted a little house in the distance between the bushes and the tree. She decided she would be better off there then out on the road by herself.

She made her way through the bushes and trees carefully avoiding to get cut, she finally reached the little house. She knocked on the door, no one answered , that when she heard those noises again, she began to panic instead of knocking she was banging on the door now. Still no response. That when she grabbed the door knob trying to make noises when to her surprise the door opened.

"Strange" she said to herself. She entered, the place was creepy, it was dark inside there was no light, she closed the door and went and sat down on the floor In the corner. Boy was this one of the scariest experience in her life.

She sat there hoping for daylight to come when she heard someone open the door. "****", she forgot to lock the door. Kripa tried not to move or make a noise, maybe the person wouldn't notice her being present since it was dark.

The person walked towards her way , she could hear the footsteps coming towards her, her heart beats were going insane, she wanted to cry, she didn't know what would happened to her .

That when the person stopped in front of her and bended down and in no time there was light , she looked up to see angad, she instantly put both her arms around him and hugged him tightly angad couldn't understand, how he knew she was here well he had seen her going through the bushes and tree so he followed her he had came back to drop her home.

He carried her in his arms since kripa wasn't letting go, he had never seen her like this before and was sure surprised, he put her in the car and drove off, the car ride was complete silent. They reached Kripa's place when he noticed she had fallen asleep. He picked her up and took her to her room; he laid her down on the bed carefully.

Maybe she wasn't so snobbish after all he thought to himself, and with that he left for his house.



okay so here the next part...short i know sorry..i could post all i could think of ....and yes itslike a typical movie where the hero comes and saves the heroine 😆 😆 😆 but i think its cute when that happens i absolutly love it 😳 lol
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwwwwwww that was choooooooooooo chhhhhhhwweeeeeeeeeet of angad!!

love him!!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
AWESUM prt!!! schooo schweet of Angad to do tht!!! 😳 👏 👏
👏 but, on second
thought, it was kinda his fault, coz she kept hearing the noises he was
making!!! 😕 but, still wht he did was REALLY cute... nd now he doesnt
think she is tht snobbish!!! YAY!!! lol... CANNOT wait to read more...
continue soon!!! 😛

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