KISMAT SE HUM MILE-sk fanfic { updated} - Page 6

gr8 part i want to know what happened with kashish plz continue soon 😊

hey nice part why is kashish behavin like this 😲

hmmm so ab kashish sujal ko kehti hai k q bacahay mujahy mar jane dia hota aur sujak kafi heraan hai uske aise behaviour se aur aur kehta hai k ghr chor doon tumhein tumhare ghr wale pareshaan ho rahay honge to kashish aise react kerti hai jaise she don't have n e 1 in her life jo uske liye pareshaan ho ya jisko woh apni family bol paye i don't know whta's her probleb kai raaz hai yeh ? 😕 aur woh kehti nahi mein chali jaongiper sujal kehta hai itni raat meine akele kaise jaogi mein chordeta hun per woh mana ketri ahi aur suajl ab ghusse mein meien kaah na chalo n then shje quiely follws himab tehy both sits in teh car aur suajl kehta hai k rasta bata dena aur ab she si guiding him per jahn woh rokne ko kehti hai whn aik sunsaan jungle k siwa aur kuch nahi sujal kafi heraan hai k yahn?jungle mein rehti ho?n hse says nahi agay thora sa agay mein chali jaongi aur chali jaati ahi sujal ko aik sawaal k saath chorke k yeh larki ajeeb hai 😳 nice dear cont sooon

neelu dear kya baat hai tune nayi story post kiya hai..aur main aagayi apne comments lekar....hope you like my comments... 😃
tho me coming to the analysis of this story..pehle title kii baat karthe hai.. kya title hai kismat se hum mile.... wah jee kya baat hai..bohat hii dhassu title.... thoab coming to the intro is fiction ka tho sujal is sujal garewal ek bade industralist ka beta.... woh akele India mein rehtha hai wahaan ka business sambhal ne ke liye..... uski family sab koi aboard mein hai... aur sujal ke saath koi rehtha hai tho woh bas uski governess hai jisne bachpan se uska khayal rakha..she is mrs d sauza... sujal agar kiisi ko apna kahe tho woh bas uski yeh governess hai.. baaki uske saare apne tho usse durr jaa baite hai.... well this shows kii sujal aur uske family ke beech koi khaas lagaav nahii hai... shayad uske pariwaar waalo ke liye money matters more than their son..issi wajah se tho sujal yahaan apno se khoso durr rehkar kaam kar raha hai paise kama raha hai... his family does not care for him... bechara sujal has nobody... well ab tho kahani mein ek aur twist bhi hai sujal kii shaddi archie khanna se ho rahi hai.. ahhhhhh..that is very very bad... ab humari hero-heroine ke beech pehle se hii dhera daal ke baitke yeh archie khanna....anyway chal koi baat nahii usko tata-bye bye karne mein bada mazaa aayega.... ab yeh shaddi tay hui hai sujal aur archie ke beech yeh koi rishtha nahii balki ek business deal hai... sujal aur archie kii shaddi se un do gharo ko 500 crocres ka fayada hoga... this deal itself shows kii sujal ke gharwaale care a damn for sujal....unhe kisski kii parwah hai tho the money which the marriage will bring about.... issi liye tho they have chosen archie jaisi ladki for our pyaara sa sujal.... sujal does not even like archie to one percent.....sujal ko pyaar pe vishwaas nahii tho bas family ke liye aur apne business ke liye he is marrying her... well sujal ko bhi pyaar pe vishwaas hone lagega woh bhi jald hii jab the girl who is made for him comes in his life.. na chahthe hue bhi woh apna dil har baitega..... aur archie is a chipkoo..jab dekho sujal pe ghirthi rehthi hai.. aur sujal se yeh bardhast nahii hotha.. hmm... well sujal se yeh sab bardhast hoga bhi kaise she is not the type of girl jiske saath woh zindagi guzaarna chahtha hai..woh tho koi aur hii hai... hahaha.. aur it has been seven years of their sagayi par abhi thak shaddi nahii hui unki... this is strange.... par sujal ka always postponing the shaddi is justified.... waise bhi kaun karega us archie maharani se shaddi..uff.....ab archie knows sujal from the childhood..phir bhi woh sujal ko samajthi nahii hai..nor she cares.. woh itne bade ghar se hothe hue bhi ek third-grade ladki se bhattar bartaav karthi hai.. sabse cheap hai woh tho.. har ladke ke saath ghoomthi hai..she wants too sleep with every boy in town.. paiso ka ghamand hai usse... sabko galli dethe hue phirthi hai..aur rumal jaise chotte kapde pehenthi hai.. smoking , drinking har buri aadat hai uski... aur sujal se shaddi kar rahii hai paiso ke liye aur apne jismani satisfaction ke liye... and she does not even want to change after sujal se shaddi karke... uff..kya ladki... ladki hai ya chalthi phirthi paapo ka bhandaar... dharthi pe bhoj hai woh tho... aur us archie ka introduction padke mera jee kar raha hai kii usko kheench ke tho thappad maroon... bechare sujal kii kya kismat kharab hai joh kii uski zindagi aisi ek characterless ladki se judne jaa rahii hai... all i pray is kii sujal kii jaan chutte usse.... yeh archie tho pukka ek badi si bhootni hai... woh tho sujal kii zindagi mein kala saaya banke mandra rahii hai.... ab chal neelu ab me coming to the first part of the story joh tune post kii hai... tho yeh part wahaan se shuru hotha hai jahaan pe bohat raat ho chuki hai..ek bada sa alishaan ghar hai... yeh yeh kahoon kii makaan hai ghart nahii... kyunke us ghar ko joh ladki ghar banayegi , joh sujal ke dil mein , uski zindagi pyaar ke rang bikher de... jab thak woh nahii aathi woh ghar bhi makaan hai aur sujal ka dil bhi khalli hai.... raat ke dus gyarah baj rahe hai... ek bade se kamre mein sujal baitke apne kaam kar raha hotha hai apne laptop pe...next table mein uski drink rakhi hui thi.. and he is too engrossed in his work..... he is too busy with his work... this shows kii sujal kii zindagi mein kaam ke alawa aur koi bhi cheez exists hii nahii karthi..he has nobody joh uski parwah kare... he has been brought-up in such a environment... it was a toofani raat..bahar toofan aaraha tha..hawa taiz chal rahii thi.... lekin phir bhi everything was peaceful with the atmosphere around... tabhi achchanak se ek awaaz aathi hai... sujal is suprised kii yeh awaaz kahaan se aayi..tho woh utkar khada ho jaatha hai.. he is confused and apne aap se kehtha hai kii yeh awaaz tho garage se aayi... he wonders kii kaun ho saktha hai woh bhi is samay.. he thinks shayad koi chor hoga.... is baat pe mujhko sujal se kehna hai kii sujal jao tho sahii wahaan..shayad wahaan jaane ke baad tumhari zindagi achche ke liye badal jaye.... kya patah.... hahaha...ab he starts walking to the garage.. woh garage ke pass jaake shutter kholtha hai... wahaan bohat andhera hotha hai..tho sujal ko kuch theek se nahii dikh raha hotha hai... ab sujal switches on the light.... sujal har jagah just gives a glance and does not find anybody there..ab sujal doubts kii chor kahaani chupa hai wahiin par... phir sujal kii nazar ek parchayi mein padthi hai... he thinks kii chor wahaan chupa baita hai... well aisa lag raha hai kii sujal will surely make a very good detective... haha.. ab sujal without making any noise goes to that corner of the room... aur achanak se us insaan ka haath pakad ke pulls towards himself.. well sujal is acting like sherlock holmes... bada bahadur ho raha hai sujal tho.... agar us chor ke haatho mein koi chakku-vaaku hothi tho sujal ko lag jaathi na.... lekin humara sujal tho sher hai.. the brave tiger.. haha..... lekin ab sujal kii saari soch-voch dhari kii dhari hii reh gayi kyunke chor kii jagah sujal ke saamne aa khadi hui ek khoobsurat si , pyaari si , sehmi hui ladki... sujal kii saari soch gayi paani mein.... hehehe... ab woh tho hai humari kashish sahiba..joh kii sujal sahab kii future heroine bhii hai... well sujal ne sahii socha kashish chor tho hai lekin woh wahaan koi cheez nahii balki sabse keemthi cheez choorane aayi hai...aur woh hai sujal ka dil... haha.... ab sujal is tho fulltoo confused.. he is like tum....tum kaun ho...tum to ek ladki ho.. well is baat pe mujhko sujal se kehna hai kii obviously sujal agar woh ek ladki hai tho tumko ladki hii dikhegi na... zahir sii baat hai tumhe woh ladka tho nahii dikhegi na..hehe... sujal ke tho lagtha hai chehre pe barah baje hue hai... ab kashish rone lagthi hai... bechari kashish darr gayi.. upar se yeh sujal is acting like a hairaan mahashay... ab kashish starts pleading him saying please mujhe chod do..rothe hue.. well is baat pe mujhko kashish se kehna hai kii kashish kyun keh rahii ho apne future life partner ko tumhe chodne ko.. waise koi baat nahii abhi keh lo agar aage zindagi mein jaake tum chahogi bhi na tho nahii chodogi sujal ko....aur na sujal tumko chodega... hahahaha... ab sujal tho ek bhondu hai hai he is like tum yahaan chori karne aayi ho.. is baat pe mujhko sujal se kehna hai oye bhudhu ram tumko kashish jaisi innocent ladki ko dekhkar lagtha hai kii woh chor hai.. lagtha tumhari aankhon ko operation kii zaroorat hai... haan woh tumhara dil choorane aayi hai... tumhari zindagi mehekane..... ab kashish ka face is poori tarah se white with fear...par phir bhi she was looking like a princess..soo innocent.... ek khila hua gulaab jaise.... lekin yeh sujal hai kii does not see woh kitni achchi hai.. he is too confused to see that.. ab kashish tells him nahii main chor nahii...please leave me....chod dijiye mujhe... well is baat pe mujhe kashish se kehna hai kashish sujal koi gaint nahii hai joh tumhe kha jayega joh tum itna darr rahi ho.... ab sujal mahashay i think is so lost in looking at kashish aur uska innocene.. he then realizes kii he is holding kashish ka haath... well shayad sujal bhool gaya..aur waise bhi mann kaise kartha kashish ko chod ne ko.. usne tho sujal ke dil mein ek ajeeb si bechaine create kii hogi.. issi liye woh kashish ka haath chodna bhool gaya.. me sure of it... hahehahe... ab sujal leaves her hand..confused...ab sujal opens his mouth and asks tum yahaan kaise.. isse pehle kii sujal kuch aage pooche kashish just pushes sujal away and runs away wahaan se.. phir kashish us raat ke andhere mein gayab ho jaathi hai.... hmm..well this bartaav of kashish is very wierd... sujal is trying to act in such a good way with her par woh tho bhaag gayi.. sujal kii zindagi mein apna chaap chodke... ab sujal tho pehle se hii bada confused tha... ab tho aur bhi zyada hairaan hogaya... he is just unable to react..he is suprised.. kii abhi kya hua..kaise hua.. he is startled by her bartaav... and sujal is smitten by kashish kii khoobsurathi.... hhye..hye..kya baat hai..iska matlab kii kashish kii pehli mulaqat sujal ke dil pe asar kar gayi..woh bhi direct dil pe... toooo gooddd... bohat hii achcha yaar.. ab sujal ko khayalo mein sapno mein aake kashish satayegi...she will always be at the back of his mind chahe woh kuch bhi kare.... this is totally awesome neelu dear... ab neelu me coming to the comments on the next part... tho yeh agla part starts from there jahaan it is a sunday... sujal aaram se bed pe baita hai.. lazily.. well obviously he must be really lazy on a sunday kyunke saare hafthe ho mar-marrke kaam mein laga hua hotha hai...and he does not get any time to relax... tho achcha hai he is relaxing... and waise i think he must be lazily sitting like that and thinking about the beauty jisse he was smitten.. me sure he must thinking about kashish.... ab archie kahiin se tho suddenly jumps on him and shouts saying sujalll... us archie kii tho main..uski itni himmat sujal ke pass jaane ko... sujal ab falls back on the bed with archie... yeh archie na is totally useless.. patah nahii sujal usko kaise jhel raha hai.... ab archie tries to hug him , she is getting close to him and she is kissing sujal on his chest... uff... you know what neelu i want sujal to just throw her away out of his house and life... she is just so irritating... aise kaam koi achchi ladki karthi hai kya..nahii karthi..yeh tho archie is such a loser... me getting very much ghussa on her.. ab sujal is very irritated he knows archie ka character bohat achche tarike se....ab sujal pushes her off and stands up from the bed... ab sujal is quite rude to her and asks kii usko kya chahiye..he tells her to behave herself.... woh kyun aayi hai wahaan.... well sujal ko usse rude hona chahiye she is such a person.... lekin ab bhi sujal ka ghussa has no asar on archie she says mujhe bas tum chahiye....and she gets close to sujal... OH..GOD....can this archie get a life....she is sooo chipkoo... usko i want to give the name chipkoo cockroach.... yeh archie ko sharam nahii aathi hai kya sujal is moving her away aur woh hai kii she is baar-baar falling on him.... ab sujal says sternly kaam kii baat karo... well sujal knows kii archie bina matlab ke wahaan nahii aayegi tho he is getting to the point... ab archie says kii oh..darling... i was thinking kyun naa aaj waterfall ke pass ek romantic si picnic manane jaye.... phir she keeps her hand on sujal's shoulder and sujal moves away..... i think archie has lost her mind...cannot she see sujal is so disintrested in her..phir bhi she is acting so damn cheap..... ab sujal clearly tells her no...ab archie is like mera bohat mann hai.. well is baat pe i would like to tell archie , archie agar tumhara mann hai tho why don't you take your koi aur boy friend... sujal ko kyun pareshaan kar rahii hai.. she can let him be na.... ab sujal says mujhe bohat kaam hai... well archie deserves it..sujal achcha kar raha hai usko mana karke... ab archie is like i know it is an excuse please chalo na..well is baat pe i would like to ask archie kyun archie tumhare saare boy friends kahaan kho gaye.. kii tumhe aaj sujal kii zaroorat pad gayi.. are apne doosre boy friends ke pass jao sujal kii tho jaan chootegi... ab sujal bhi asks the same thing joh maine poocha.. he says tumhare saare boy friends kahan marr gaye....unke saath jao... haha.. meri aur sujal kii soch bilkul bhii ek jaisi hai.... ab archie tho apni asliyat pe utar aathi hai... and she blackmails him saying kii if he does not come she will call her father and her father will inturn call his family and back-out from their shaddi... and then she says because of that unko woh 500 crocre ke deal ka fayada nahii hoga... well is archie ne dikha di apni cheap mentality...waise main archie ko abhi se warn kar doon ek baar kashish aagayi na sujal kii zindagi mein tab sujal woh 500 crocre kii deal ko tokar marega..aur usse laath marega...aur woh uski zindagi se durr jaa ghiregi.... tho usko itna zyada uchal ne kii koi zaroorat nahii... ab sujal thinks about it and he has no option..he kicks the ground ghusse se... and then asks kahaan jaana hai...and then bina mann ke he accompanies archie to the waterfall picnic spot.. uska tho dil lag hii nahii raha......ohh..poor sujal..bohat buri tarah se phasa hai.. woh archie jaisi ladki se peecha choodana chahe tab bhi he is unable too...and he is stuck-up with her..very bad and sad for sujal... the place is very beautifull... lekin sujal ko us jagah mein koi khoobsurathi nahii dikh rahi... haan jab company archie jaise ho tho achchi cheez bhi buri lagthi hai....woh kehthe hai na it all depends on the company..aur wahaan sujal ke saath kashish hothi tab sujal mast fulltoo-charged hotha..par woh wahaan hai tho us archie ke saath na.. woh kartha bhi tho kya kartha... aur archie was irritating sujal zyada with her talks and also woh time to time sujal ke kareeb aane kii koshish kar rahii thi...yeh ladki prove kar rahii hai kii she has brains... and sujal ka mann kar raha tha to slap archie...well on this i would advice sujal kii woh apne dil kii baat foran maan le and us archie ke gaal pe ek kheench ke lagaye.. aur archie tho is such a chipku... woh bhii aise kii agar fevicol company log usse dekhenge tho they will sponsor her.. and archie ke kapde tho jaise usne kuch pehna hii nahii....is baat pe i would like to say agar archie aisi hai tho uske maa-baap kaise honge... baap re baap..sochthi hoon tab hii jhatka miltha hai....aahhh yeh archie.....she is acting so wierd.. agar mere bas mein hotha tho main uspe cheekthi gala phaad phaadke kii sujal se durr raho..... ab woh bake hii jaa rahii hai... aur sujal is not paying any heed to what she is saying..woh agge waterfall kii taraf dekh raha hotha hai... and sujal just wants to run away from there..ohh..poor baby..is in such a mushkhil... ab sujal kii nazar durr waterfall pe padthi hai jiske edge mein ek ladki khadi hui hai... aur woh humari heroine sahiba hai tho lazmi hai kii sujal kii nazar uspe tho jayegi na.. ab sujal stands up suprise hoke..kyunke he realizes kii she is about to jump... sujal is shocked... and he starts shouting saying heyyyyyyyyyy ...kudnaa matt...don't jump...paani ka bahav bohot zyada hai....doob jaog....hey.... he shouts at the top of his voice...this shows sujal kitna achcha insaan hai.. he cannot see koi hurt... chahe woh koi bhi ho..uska apna ho yaa no ho.. he is such a achcha person... kissi ka bhi kabhie bura nahii chahtha... such a goody-goody boy... lekin sujal kii shout us thak pohanche kashish jumps off...bohat dhair ho chuki hothi hai... patah nahii yeh kashish bechari ko zindagi mein kya ghum hai... she has tried to commit suicide... bechari.. tho ab me coming to my guess on the next part neelu...tho next part mein aise hua kii kashish paani mein khood chuki hothi hai... sujal usse dekhkar shock ho jaatha hai.... he runs to save her...paani ka bahaav bohat taiz hotha hai.. sujal jaise-taise karke kashish kashisj ke upar apma arm ka support dethe hue...pulls her fragile body along.. kashish is behosh... ab usko bachatha hai aur wahaan ground par le aatha hai... well is baat par sujal ko shabhashi milni chahiye...main aisa is wajah se keh rahii hoon kyunke sujal kashish ko na pehchaantha hai , aur na hii usse jaantha hai.. iska matlab yeh hua kii kashish sujal ke liye ek ajnabee hai.... aur sujal ne ek ajnabee kii jaan ko bacha ne ke liye khud apni jaan jhokhim mein daal di...waise is baat kii wajah se ek aur baat bhi hai joh mere zehan mein aayi hai.... aur woh yeh baat hai kii sujal ne kashish ke ajnabee hone ke bawajood uske liye itna kiya , tho agar kashish uski apni ho jaye joh kii aage aage ho jayegi tab sujal kashish ka kitna khayal rakhega... this kind of bartaav by sujal shows kii woh apno ke liye jaan par khel jayega kuch bhi karega..he is soooo goodd..ab yahaan haa kuch aisa hai kii kashish behosh hai... and after sujal gets her on the ground he realizes kii woh tho wahii ladki hai joh uske ghar pe kal raat ko thi... well iska matlab yeh kii joh chaap kashish sujal ke dil pe chod gayi thii woh bada hii ghehra tha... ek adoori si hii mulaqat between sujal , kashish hii kaam kar gayi....... kya baat hai... sujal , kashish kii kahani kii tho shuruwaat bade achche se ho rahii hai.... mujhko bada mazaa aa raha hai...... ab sujal is trying to revive kashish.... he tries to pat her cheek par kashish hosh bhi nahii aathi......aa rahii hai... ab kashish ko saans lene mein takleef ho rahii hai.... woh haf rahii hothi hai... sujal tries his best par kashish neeli padthi jaa rahi hai..she is not getting back to life... aisa lag raha hai kii kashish jeene ke saari umeedein kho chuki hai.....finally sujal is bound to give her mouth to mouth respiration , he does that twice... hyee.....hyee..kya baat hai.. main satke jawaan.... sujal tho is brave and also a saviour... he is a real hero..... lekin phir bhi kashish ko hosh nahii aatha...... sujal is very worried... kya baat hai sujal abhi se apni kashish ke liye fikar mand hue jaa rahe ho.. very good..lage raho... ab archie tho in sab se waakif nahii hai.... in sabse bekhabar apni hii duniyaan mein apne dimaak mein nayii scheming kar rahii hogi.... ab sujal cheek kar archie ko awaaz detha hai..ab woh madam hilthe-dulthe..aaram se sujal ke pass aathi hai.... uff..yeh archie ko kya dikhayi nahii detha , ya phir sunayi nahii detha... sujal uske pass se hii tho gaya na kashish ko bacha ne ke liye.. mujhko yeh archie ka bartaav dekhkar aise lag raha hai kii wohg archie aankh kii andhi , kaan kii behri aur dimaak kii piddi bhi hai..useless.... ab archie wahaan aathi hai and she is like why is sujal calling her.... then archie sees kii kashish wahaan behosh hai....atlast dikh hii gayi archie ko kashish..chalo achcha hai abhi se archie ko kashish ka chehra dekhne kii aadat daal leni hogi..after all sujal ke saath zindagi tho kashish hii bitayegi na....sujal ke saath kadam se kadam milake kashish ko hii tho chalna hai na....ab archie is like yeh kaun hai..isse kahaan se utta laye... uff is archie mein tho insaniyat naam kii bhi koi cheez nahii hai... woh ladki wahaan behosh padi hui zindagi aur maqt ke beech jhoool rahii hai aur yeh archie hai kii apne betuke question pooche jaa rahi hai..it is so damn irritating... lagtha hai archie just humko ghussa dilane ke liye hii jee rahii hai...ab sujal tries to explain to archie kii woh kashish ko apne saath ghar lejaye...aur usko doctor ke pass dikhaye.. lekin yeh archie tho hum jaanthe hai na kitni zyada begairrat hai... usmein tho koi sharam nahii woh mana kar dethi hai... she tells her kii woh kashish ko apne saath apne ghar le jaake khud ke liye pareshaani nahii create kar sakthi.. well archie you do not know kii agar tum kashish ko sujal ke pass wahaan chod ke gayi tho future mein tumhare liye musibaato ke pahad khada ho jayega... waise if you don't care then what do we care.. humare liye tho bohat achcha hai..... she tells sujal to take her home.... if he wants....... ab sujal is like woh ek ladka hai , ghar mein akela rehtha hai...and agar he takes kashish home achcha nahii lagega... this is a perfect gentleman ka act..sujal is sooo sweeett... us ajnabee ladki kii izzat kii kitni zyada parwah hai usse... woh nahii chahtha kii koi us ladki pe ungli utaye...uspe thouhamat lagaye...how very damn nice of sujal... he is really a sweetie-cutie-pie...ab archie is like she will not take the girl home... ab she says kii tho usse yahii chod do.. well archie is pagal.... ek ladki joh zindagi aur maut ke beech jhool rahi hai how can she even think of leaving her stranded there... ab sujal yells at hersaying kii kya woh pagal hai....can't you see iski haalaat kitni nazuk hai.. good sujal tumhe archie ko daant na chahiye lekin abhi tumhari priority kashish honi chahiye.... ab archie is liye she is your problem..bachaye kyun isse.. well is baat pe mujhko archie se kehna hai kii archie sabhi tumhare jaise begairat nahii hothe... sab mein insaniyat naam kii cheez exists karthi hai.. lekin tum ek specail gone case ho... ab sujal is like kya matlab kyun bachaye... marr jaathi yeh.. sujal is so considerate.. ab archie is like mare tho mare.. jee kar raha hai usse ek jhappad marron.. .. yeh archie ufff... aise lag raha hai kii hoor aur langoor kii jodi hai.. sujal hoor aur archie langoor...and she says kii woh ek party ko jaa rahii hai and she leaves... this is very bad on archie's part..par phir dekha jaye tho us jaisi ladki se aur expect bhii kya kiya jaa saktha hai.... waise main ek baat boloon woh yeh kii archie khud apne pair mein khulhadi marr ke gay leaving kashish with sujal.... ab archie in future bohat zyada pachthayegi... kyunke usne bina jaane sujal aur kashish ko kareeb aane ka mouka joh de diya hai.... ab aayega mazaa.... ab sujal being the perfect gentleman kashish ko wahaan chodke tho nahii jaa saktha... though he cares about the rules of the society but still woh ek ladki ko marrne ke liye tho nahii chod jaa saktha hai na.... tho he takes kashish to his house usse apni bahon mein utake..... hyee..... well ab main is baat kii gaurantee dethi hoon kii kashish will make sujal's house his home... ab the doctor aake checks kashish.. aur sujal ko keh detha hai kii woh theek hai...usko hosh kuch time mein aajayega... she is just weak... and then the doctor leaves... well is part mein the thing i liked is that sujal , kashish ko milna tha... unki mulaqat jis bhi haalat mein hui par woh dono mil liye...dono nahii tho atleast sujal kashish ko mil liya... ab bas sujal ko kashish ko jaanne kii dairi hai..phir tho archie ka patta cut ho jayega.... hahaha....mazaa aayega yeh dekhne ko jab archie ko apni zindagi mein ki hui sabse badi ghalthi ka ehsaas hoga.. aur woh yeh ghalthi kii woh sujal ko kashish ke pass chodke gayi woh bhii akele.... yeh baat archie ke liye will be very harmfull... lekin sujal ke liye aur humare liye it is very beneficial..... ab neelu here is my comment on the next part you have posted..tho yahaan haal kuch aisa hai kii doctor leaves... and sujal goes to check on kashish.... woh wahii rehtha hai kashish ko hosh aana ka intezaar karthe hue....aww..how sweett of sujal.. sujal ko dekh kar mann mein yeh sawaal aatha hai kii koi itna achcha- itna sachcha akhir kaise ho saktha hai.. lekin sujal tho hai achcha aur sachcha bhi.... ab bohat dhair ho chuki hothi hai.. it is night time...sujal wahiin bed ke pass neeche baite baite... bed par apna sar rakh kar so jaatha hai...ahhh...poor baby thak gaya hai... the days events have taken a toll on him..pehle woh archie ka kissa phir kashish ko bachana...sabki kii wajah se bechara tired ho gaya... ab kuch dhair baad yeh behosh madam ko yaani kii humari heroine sahiba ko hosh aatha hai..woh apni aankhein kholthi hai tho she sees she is in a alltogether new surroundings....kashish ko aise lag raha hoga kii main tho marrne gayi thi , suicide commit karri thi maine..ab main yahaan kaise aagayi..yeh kaunsi jagah hai..kahiin yeh jannat tho nahi..well agar kashish kii aisi soch hai tho main usse bata doon kii yeh jannat nahii balki uske future pyaar ka , uske future pati ka ghar hai....hahaha.... me sure kashish ke dimaak mein aise hii kuch na kuch tho zaroor chal raha hoga...ab she sees kii sujal is sleeping by the bed... aur woh darr jaathi hai.... ab kashish ko tho kuch bhii samaj hii nahii a raha hai.. kii woh kahaan hai..yahaan kaise aayi..yeh aadmi kaun hai... well is baat pe mujhko kashish se kehna hai kii kashish dimaak pe itna zor na daalo phir bechare sujal ko tumko sambhlathe sambhalthe pareshaan ho jayega sujal tho... ab yeh kashish madam sujal ko joh pareshaan kiya kya woh kum tha ab she starts shouting saying aahhhhhh... ab sujal who hears that gets up he is startled..ghabra sa jaatha hai..woh hadbada ke khada ho jaata hai.... aur yeh kashish cheeke jaa rahii hai.. is baat pe mujhko kehna hai kii sujal kashish ke mooh pe plaster laga do.... uff yeh kashish bhi na bechare sujal ko disturb kar diya us bechare ko chaine se nahii jeene degi yeh kashish tho....ab kashish starts going away from sujal.. she is very frightened..darri hui si..sehmi hui sii hai woh.. she runs near the side by wall aur wahaan chipak khadi ho jaathi hai..aur darr rahii hothi...... she keeps shouting aur darr kii wajah se kaamp rahii hai.. kashish sujal ko ek mouka tho do yaar to explain.. lekin nahii tum ho kii cheeke hii jaa rahii ho bas cheeke jaa rahi ho.... ab sujal is confused kii kashish akhir aise kyun react kar raha hai.... obviously confuse tho hoga hii na woh kashish ko jaantha thodi na hai... ab he tries to talk to her saying dekho suno.... lekin aise lag raha hai yeh kashish madam ko kuch bhii sunne ke mood mein hii nahii hai aur time pass ke liye she is shouting... ek baar sun tho lethi sujal ko.... ab kashish tries going aur peeche lekin peeche nahii jaa paa rahi hai kyunke peeche deewar hai..... ab sujal starts to pacify her lekin kashish shouts sayingg help bachao....kya baat hai jisne jaan bachayi ab ussi se jaan bachane ke liye keh rahii hai shouting... kya jhanjhat hai..jisne uski jaan bachayi..she is not giving him a chance to speak aur ussi se help ke liye she is shouting... yeh kashish na is just too muchhhh...ab sujal tells her hey listen.... he is going close to her to calm her down.... ab kashish starts shouting nahi...pass matt aanaa...kya chahte ho..durr raho....dur hato mujhse...kya irada hai tumharaaa..... kyun muje laye ho yahan.... mujhko kashish ko dekh kar aise lag raha hai kii madam ne utni uchayi se jump kiiya na us wajah se uske dimaak mein asar hua hai.. uska screw dhilla ho gaya hai... what does she think of herself.. what right does she have to question sujal... usko tho shukar guzaar hona chahiye kii he has saved her... lekin yahaan tho she is shouting at sujal... usko tho main... ab sujal is like kya main tho bas... he tries to say this may be because he has sensed kii kashish uske baare mein ulta-seedha soch rahii hai .... that is why he wants to clarify.. par isse pehle kii sujal kuch kehtha hai kashish cuts him in between and again says jao yahan se....gunde badmaash kahin ke.. oyee... kashish tum jaana chahthi ho tho tum jao.... yeh sujal ka ghar hai.. tum kyun usse bahar jaane ko keh rahii ho... utna hii hai tho tum kyun nahii chali jaathi..... ab sujal bechara pareshaan kii main gunda , badmaash... he must be thinking like itne bade businessman ko is ladki ne badmaash karaar kiya...uff... ab kashish starts shouting again.. aaaaaaaaaaaaa..... ab sujal is like chup ho jao... ab kashish is baat se chup nahii balki.... aur bhi zyada cheeckne lagthi hai... she is half crying.... and shouting... uff..yeh kashish ka dimaak lagtha hai satak gaya hai... ab sujal could not take it anymore and he yells saying kii shut up.. this shows sujal has lost all his patience...aur kashish mast darr gayi hai.... kashish main tumse kitni baar yeh kahoon kii sujal tumko kha nahii jayega....woh koi bhoot nahii..aur na hii koi dracula hai jisse kii tumhe darrne kii zaroorat hai... sujal tho ek darling hai... sabse achcha.... ab sujal ko kashish ke bartaav pe hairaani ho rahii thi aur ghussa bhi aa raha tha....he was high time very irritated...aur woh kehtha hai kii kya problem hai tumhari haan.......ab kashish joh pehle se hii bohat darri hui thi ab tho uski haalat poocho hii matt...woh tho aur bhi zyada darr gayi.. uske mooh se awaaz hii nahii nikal rahii thi...is baat pe mujhko sujal se kehna hai kii sujal ko kashish kii haalat samaj nachahiye na... woh uske liye ek ajnabee hai aur kashish ka aise darrna lazmi hai.....ab sujal says kii pehle tho tumne suicide karne kii koshish kii , tumhari jaan bachayi aur tum ho kii aise act kar rahii ho thankfull hone ke bajaye........ well sujal ke is baat pe mujhe usse yeh kehna hai kii sujal tumne humpe koi ehsaan nahii kiya kashish kii jaan bachake..tumne tho khud par ehsaan kiya hai usko bachake... kyunke kashish aage jaakar , i mean in the future tumhari jeene kii wajah , tumhare dil ke dadhak ne kii wajah joh banne waalii hai....aur waise i think sujal ka koi irada tho nahii tha kashish pe cheekne ka..bas kyunke woh sun nahii rahii thi he had to do it.. majboori mein aakar.... ab kashish is like aapne meri jaan bachayi... yeh kehkar her voice chokes woh yeh baat rukh-rukhkar kehne lagthi hai..... bechari bohat darri hui hai..... aur uski aankhon se aasoo behne lagthe hai.... well kashish ke aasooyo kii do wajah ho sakthi hai pehli wajah yeh kii she is greatfull to sujal kii usne uski jaan bachchayi aur ussi liye yeh aasoo out of thankfullness...aur kashish ke aasooyo kii doosri wajah yeh kii her tears are asking sujal kyun bachaya aapne mujhe..marr jaane diya hotha mujhe...main jeena nahii chahthi.... i think yeh doosri reasoning of mine is more apt to explain kashish ke aasoo... ab sujal is like haan dhoob rahi thi tum... kashish agge kuch nahii kehthi uski aankhon se halke se aasoo beh rahe hai... and she is standing in that position ek statue kii tarah bina hile hue... uff... bechari ko patah nahii zindagi mein aise kya ghum mile joh kii woh itni udaas hai... me sure though sujal ke liye kashish ajnabee hai lekin phir bhi seeing kashish ka haalat sujal ka heart might have come to his mouth..seeing kashish kii haalat.. all he must be wanting to do is go to kashish and console her... me sure sujal ka dil zaroor aise hii kuch na kuch karne ko chaha hoga... awesome yaar.. really very well written..absolutely stupendous... story jaise jaise agge bad rahii hai the story is getting to damn interesting... bohat achche..... very nice..... ab kashish sujal pe ek question ka bomb girathi hai.. yeh kehthi hai kyun bachaya mujhe..marrne diya hotha... woh bhi rothe hue kehthi hai...well lagtha hai kashish thodi pagal ho gayi hai.. insaan kii jaan kitni zyada keemti hothi hai kashish ko us baat ka ehsaas bhi nahii aur yeh madam chali hai marrne ke liye.. uska dimaak sach-much kharaab ho gaya hai... ab sujal is like kyaa...dekho main tumhe ghar chod deta hoon..tumhare parivaar wale pareshaan ho rahe honge.... yeh dekho kashish hai kii sujal se itna darr rahii thi..sujal se durr bhaag rahii thi.. and yahaan sujal is being so good to her.. even though woh usko jaantha nahii , usko pehchaantha nahii , he even does not know her name but still sujal cares for her... ab kashish has a blank expression on her face and she is like ghar , parivaar. well this blank expression on kashish ka chehra shows kii kashish either has nobody in her life... yaa nahii tho yeh ho saktha hai kii kashish has a family par they do no care for kashish any more.. this expression on kashish's face expresses kii she is all alone and has nobody jisse woh apna keh sake... kashish says kii nahii main chali jaaungi.. well this shows kii kashish ko kahiin akele chod diya tho woh phir se koi na koi gadbad karegi... shayad wapas hii suicide karne kii koshish kare.. tho uske liye best option hoga kii sujal usse chod de.. ab sujal is like itni raat mein akeli kaise jaogi..kuch ho gaya tho... well sujal is such a perfect gentleman yaar...woh ek ladkii kii izzat karna bakhoobi jaantha hai.. he knows it is not safe for a ladki to go alone in the night time..he cares for her safety... ab kashish kii aankhein speaks depths of volume but it is still expressionless..she says kya farq padtha hai ab.. well kashish kii is baat mein kahiin na kahiin kuch tho baat hai.. i think kashish ko recently ek zakhm mila hai jisne uski zindagi ko jinjhod ke rakh diya hai... aur ab woh zakhm nasoor ban gaya hai..aur issi liye kashish ne apni jaan leni chahi..ab sujal kehtha hai dekho main tumhe chod detha hoon.. well is baat pe mujhko sujal se kehna hai kii sujal abhi tho tum kashish ko chod rahe ho lelin agli baar jab woh tumhari zindagi mein aayegi na tab tum kashish ka haath saari zindagi thame hue rahoge...ab kashish is like nahii main chali jaaungi.. well is baat pe mujhko kashish se kehna hai kii kashish dekho achche bachche zidd nahii karthe..aur shayad issi bahane sujal bhi tumhara ghar dekh le...hahaha...ab sujal ko ghussa aatha hai and he says main ne kaha na chalo.... yeh kashish bhi na sujal ka hint samajthi hii nahii hai..sujal uske ghar ko dekhna chahtha hai...aur yeh madam hai kii usko mana karthe jaa rahi hai...hahaha... ab sujal walks to his car... and kashish silently follows..well ab tho scene aisa hai future mein jab sujal , kashish saath honge tab kashish chapad-chapad karegi....aur sujal uski baatein sunega.. aur woh dono kadam se kadam milakar chalenge... ab sujal tho i told told you is a gentleman tho kashish ke liye darwaaza kholtha hai.. kashish sujal kii taraf dekhthi hai..with num aankhein.. i think aaj thak kabhi kashish se koi itne pyaar se pesh na aaya..issi liye seeing this kind off care from a stranger she has her aankhein num sujal ko dekthe hue... ab sujal starts driving...sujal tells her kii woh usse raastha bata de...ab kashish is like hmm.. well may be this shows kii kashish khud nahii jaanthi usko kahaan jaana hai... kashish apni nazrein neeche rakthi hai... aur sujal is driving... and sujal cannot help it but wonder kii why is kashish so mayoos , zindagi se rooti hui..oye..oye..itni parwah kar raha hai sujal kashish kii jab woh ek ajnabee hai..tho socho jab woh sujal kii apni banegi tho sujal mahashay ka haal kya hoga... ab sujal asks her ab yahaan se kahaan... ab kashish is in confusion and woh zara sochke kehthi hai sidha.. well yeh kashish ke asar are really not looking proper..she is surely upto something... i think she is lying to sujal.... woh koi uske ghar ka raastha nahii hai... sujal continues to drive..he again asks her the direction.. kashish phir ek confused soul kii tarah pehle left phir usse correct karke nahii sidha kehthi hai.. ab tho mereko yakeen ho chala hai kii humari heroine sahiba jhoot bol rahii hai... kashish buri baat humare hero se kyun jhoot bol rahi ho..jiske saath tumhe zindagi bitani hai... very bad on your part...... ab sujal ko bhi yahii baat khatak thi hai kii yeh ladki apne ghar ka raastha kaise bhool gayi... par sujal let's his doubt aside..and continues driving... ab suddenly kashish says rukhiye..sujal brake lagatha hai... ab kashish says bas yahiin mera ghar hai.. lekin agar aas paas dekha jaye tho aazu baazu ass pass saab sunsaan hai...bas agge ek andheri si sadak..aas pass bas jungle....naa durr duur tak koi makaan hai..naa koi insaan... lagtha hai kashish is a tribal..main aisa is liye keh rahii hoon kyunke wahaan se raastha jungle mein jaatha hai... andhera tha..durr durr thak koi ghar bhii nahii...well kashish ka woh waterfall se ghirna has had major impact on kashish's brain.. she is really acting so wierd...ab sujal sees the surroundings and is confused and says yahaann.. ab kashish says haan.. tho sujal poochtha hai yahaan road par..well this is a sarcastic comment by sujal..may br kyunke he knows kii kashish jhoot bol rahii hai.. he has sensed it.. ab kashish tells him to cover-up her jhoot kii yahiin pass mein hii hai mera ghar..tho sujal says main chod detha hoon..he says this kyunke he does not want her to fall into trouble... ab kashish nahii main chali jaaongi... thanku..yeh kehke woh jaldi jaldi mein gaadi se utar jaathi hai isse pehle kii sujal kuch aage kehtha woh chali jaathi hai..... yeh ladki kyun itni ajeeb hai..what's wrong with her... aise kyun behave kar rahii hai.. uska bartaav is just a bouncer to us and sabse zyada tho it is a sabse high bouncer to sujal... ab sujal sees around and then thinks ghar yahaan..ajeeb ladki hai.. haan sujal tumne bilkul sahii kaha.. woh kashish bilkul ek ajeeb , rare piece hai.. one in a million..uska samajna is not possible... and then sujal starts driving back..well all the parts you have posted are just too good.. me getting hooked to this story.. me started liking this story just like how i like pyaar kii raahein... me getting chipka with this story also... damn amazing yaar..simply mind blowing...ab thak the way you have presented the emotions too wellll..me loving every bit of this story completely... keep up the good work going neelu yaar.. your story rocks ans so does your writing...outstanding..superb.. too interesting.. your stories are always different..zara hattke... but it is great..tooo goodd..mazaa aagaya... 👏
ab neelu coming to my guess on the next part...well this is my first guess on kismat se hum mile.. i hope i'am right.. and now me carrying on with the guess.. in the next part i think kashish apne koi ghar ko nahii jaa rahii hai... mere hisaab se tho kashish wapas jaa rahii hai apni jaan dene ke liye.. me almost sure about it... kashish ka bartaav uske mannerisms all show this aur mere shak ko aur bhii zyada pukka , mazboot aur puktha banathe hai..... ab doosri taraf sujal who is driving back home will suddenly realize kii kahiin woh ladki wapas suicide tho nahii karne chali hai.. then may be it will strike to him kii indeed the girl is going to try and commit suicide again...ab shayad sujal mahashay will rush back to that place... shayad is baar bhi kashish apni jaan lene kii poori tayari karle lekin last time kii tarah hii sujal usse correct time pe bacha le... is baar phir he takes kashish back home..woh kashish ka khayal rakhega... then shayad kashish ko hosh aane ke baad sujal will give kashish the best care.. aur he will get atached to kashish.. phir shayad kashish aur sujal ke beech argument ho..sujal might scold kashish kii woh jaan kyun de rahii hai and all stuff like that..he may lecture her to have put in some brain in her empty head... ab shayad kashish starts opening-up to sujal and tells him kii uski zindagi mein kya problem hai , why she does not want to live and all etc etc stuff... then sujal gives kashish confidence... kii humein kabhi himmat nahii haarni chahiye.. kashish then understands kii what is sujal trying to say.. phir the starting starting mein sujal , kashish ke beech sab awkward ho... sujal tells kashish to stay with him there... then they slowly slowly start becoming friends... then shayad beech mein archie taunts kashish..kashish ko bura lage..sujal supporting her..giving her strength..well neelu this is my guess for the forth coming parts..please tell me mera first guess of kismat se hum mile kaisa hai..kya main sahii hoon yaa ghalat i really want to know..😉 ab neelu yaar please next part jaldi se post karna..mujhse sachchi intezaar nahii ho raha hai..me very eager to read the next part..do post soon.... 😃

Ok nxt prt-

Abb s is drivin back

S[thinking]-wo ladki zarur jhooth bol rahi hai..paar kyun..akhir kya baat hai..dekhne mein to achchi ladki lagi hai..phir kyun…oh no!abb kahin phirse…jaan dene!..oh no!

Abb s decides 2 follow k

Wo gadi wahin chodkaar,walks 2 the place jisse k ko car ki awaaz se ye pata naa chal jae she is being followed

Idhar-

K chup chap,bina kisi aaske ke seedha chal rahi hai

She has an expressionless face,eith no hope

She is alkin lik a zombie

Aise chalet chalet she eaches on a bridge

Jo bohot hi ucha hai,neeche gehri khai hai

Wo jaake uss bridge ki railin mein jaake khadi ho jaati hai

& she strts climbin on other side of railin

gehri khai ki taraf dekhti hai,

closes her eyes,ankh se ek asoo behta hai

& takes a step 2 jump

& she jumps off!

Paar-

Girne ki jagah she fels a strong hand holdin her

She gets a pull

Aur in a split of a second,apne aako safe zameen paar mehsoos karti hai

K ne jo darr aur ghabrahat ke mare ankhen band kar li thi

She opens her eyes

Aur apne saamne ussi admi ko pati hai,jisne usse peechli baar bachaya tha [haan haan sujal]

S is looking twrds her with intense eyes

& she is starin at him blankly

s-YE KYA KARNE JAA RAHI THI TUM????????? Haan bolo?????

k-[strts cryin]main jeena nahi chahti

s-maarna chahti ho???????bhagna chahti hi zindagi se!!!!!!!!!haan bolo

k is cryin,phut phutke,kuch kehne ki haalaat mein nahi hai

s-to maaro,tumhare jaise kayaar aur escapist ko jeena ka koi haak nahi!go jump!

S uska haath pakadke usse bridge ke kareeb le jaata hai

K is cryin not movin a bit

s-tum jaise khudgarz logo ko to maar hi jaana chahie!jo kisi ki parwah nahi karte,pata hai tumhare parivaar paar kya asaar hoga tumhari maut ka kya beetegi unpaar!arre umar hi kya hogi tumhari!aise sahenge wo apni jawan beti ki maut ka sadma!jisko dolo mein bithane ke sapne dekhe the,kaisa lagega unhemusse arthi paar chadane ke samay,jisse shaadi paar laal joda dena chate the,uspe kafan chadane ke waqt kya mehsoos karenhe wo!arre royenge tumhareparivar wale,tumko to maarke chudtkaara mil jaega,aur unki zindagi jeene layak nahi bachegi!arre chah[6] mahine taak tumhari maa ko tumhari maut ka vishvas taak nahi hoga,jiska sahara tumhe budape mein banna tha,jaab tumhare papa tumhare arthi paar kandha denge,kya beetegi unpe!bolo!!!!!!!!buzdill kahin ki!apna naa sahi apne parivaar ka to khayal karo!

K is cryin phut phutke

Jaise taise bolti hai

k-mera koi parivaar bahi!chid dia mujhe!jo hua uske baad!

s-kya?kya hua?boy frd ne chod dia,dhoka dia,shaadi tutt gai hua kya????

k-[k bohot ro rahi hai,rote rote hafte hue,zameen paar bebas girke baith jaati hai]rape!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG! shit how sad yaar 😭 kashish have been raped !who was that bloody 😡 😡 thnx to GOd k sujal is baar bhi wahan agay aur kashish ko bacha liya sujal to jaise kashish ki life mein farishta banke aya hai ab kaash yeh farishta kashish ki barbaad aur daaghdaar zindagi mein naye rang bahrde aur usko jeene ki aas de jeena sikhaye well done dear cont soon very nice concept i just like it 👏

OMG! shit how sad yaar 😭 kashish have been raped !who was that bloody 😡 😡 thnx to GOd k sujal is baar bhi wahan agay aur kashish ko bacha liya sujal to jaise kashish ki life mein farishta banke aya hai ab kaash yeh farishta kashish ki barbaad aur daaghdaar zindagi mein naye rang bahrde aur usko jeene ki aas de jeena sikhaye well done dear cont soon very nice concept i just like it 👏

awww 😭 😭 😭 ...........thats soo sad......but ab sujal hai na, wo kashish ko sabhal lega 😛

😭 sooo sad for kashish!!!!!! very determined of Sujal to go back!!!!!! whew! thank god he did!!!!!!

the story's really interesting so conyinue soon!!!!!!!!!