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Posted: 17 years ago
#71
SEEING THAT THE NOISE WAS MADE ONLI BECAUSE OF THE WINDOW; NAINA RELAXED…………….BUT NOT AS MUCH AS TO LEAVE RAJ'S HAND……………


SHE THEN TURNED TO FACE RAJ AGAIN; SAW HIS FACE FARTHER AWAY FROM HERS BT HIS HAND IN HERS……………………..SHE IMMEDIATELY LET GO OF HIS HANDS………SHE KNEW THAT THE MOMENT BETWEEN THEM WAS OVER(thanks to the stupid window)……………….

BUT SHE WAS STILL HAPPY; HOWEVER SHORT THE MOMENT HAD BEEN; SHE HAD LIVED IT TO THE MAXIMUM………………..HAND-IN-HAND WITH RAJ, SO NEAR HIM………………………IT WAS BY FAR THE MOST BEAUTIFUL MOMENT OF HER LIFE WHICH IN DAYS TO COME; SHE WOULD RELIVE OVER ND OVER AGAIN…………….

RAJ- Um…….naina…..raat bahut ho gayi hain….tum…tum…um…tum so jayo….

NAINA- Ji…..haan….raat bahut ho gayi hain….mujhe sona chahiye…..aap …..aap bhi so jayiye….

RAJ- Haan….main…..haan…..mujhe bhi sona chahiye……

RAJ TURNS TO GO TO THE OTHER END OF THE ROOM……………….SUDDENLY HE STOPS ND TURNS; NAINA IS STILL LOOKING AT HIM………………….HE IS ABOUT TO SAY SMTHING BT STOPS…..

NAINA (looking hopeful)- Aap kuch kehna chahte hain??

RAJ (flustered) - Nahi……um….goodnight naina……

NANIA (crestfallen)- Goodnight…..


RAJ ND NAINA LAY DOWN ON THE FLOOR; EACH UNABLE TO SLEEP;LOST IN THOUGHTS OF THE OTHER………………EACH ABUSING……………….

"THE WINDOW"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


SOON THEY WENT OF TO SLEEP; DREAMING ABOUT EACH OTHER………..ND THEN SLOWLY THE SUN ROSE…………
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Posted: 17 years ago
#72
THE NIGHT WAS GONE…….BUT NOT THE MEMORIES THAT WERE ATTACHED TO IT……………….


Last night – it was a lovely night,
And I was very blest-
Shall it not be for Memory
A happy spot to rest?



Yes: there are in the backward past
Soft hours to which we turn-
Hours which, at distance, mildly shine,
Shine on, but never burn.



And some of these but yesternight
Across my path were thrown,
Which made my heart so very light,
I think it could have flown……………..

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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
IT WAS ANOTHER DAY FOR MILLIONS OF PPL ALL OVER, BUT FOR RAJ ND NAINA, IT WAS A SPECIAL DAY AFTER THE SO VERY PRECIOUS NIGHT………


RAJ HAD PLANNED TO GET UP EARLY ND LEAVE TO FIND SM FRUITS TO EAT (idiots had everything else bt food with them…..y can't they carry lays nd pepsi like us normal ppl???)……………………HE WANTED 2 LEAVE BFORE NAINA WOKE UP 'COS HE KNEW THAT AFTER LAST NIGHT, NAINA WOULD FEEL SLIGHTLY AKWARD IN HIS PRESENCE ND WOULD NEED SM TIME 2 BECOME NORMAL AGAIN……..


BUT FATE, DOESN'T IT HAVE ITS OWN WAY ALWAYS??.........................

THOUGH NAINA WAS EXTREMELY SLEEPY,SHE WOKE UP FOR NO RHYME OR REASON; JUST AS RAJ GOT UP 2 LEAVE…………

RAJ WANTING TO BE INCONSPICOUS…………….WAS FOLDING HIS BLANKET ND WALKING SLOWLY; TRYING NOT TO WAKE NAINA UP…………..

UNKNOWN 2 HIM, NAINA WAS WATCHING HIM MOVE AROUND MEEKLY LIKE A SMALL MOUSE (jerry perhaps?? Mickey is nt small, is he? Jerry is)


UNABLE 2 CONTROL HERSELF NE LONGER SHE SPLIT WITH PEELS OF LAUGHTER……..

HEARING HER LAUGHTER; WHICH SOUNDED LIKE WATER GURGLING; RAJ TURNED TO FACE HER………………………ND BLUSHED BRIGHT RED……


RAJ- Um……tum uth gayi………??

NAINA- Oh god!! Aap ye kya kar rahe the?? Kya aap har subha aise hi kaam karte hain; bina awaz kare??..............

RAJ- Huh?? Nahi………wo main bas soch raha tha…ki tumhe na uthaoo………….maine socha ki tumhe shayad subha subha mera chehra nahi dekhna ho……matlab kal raat ke baad………………(he suddenly stops………)

NAINA( blushes red nd turns away frm him; fiddling with her blanket, folding it nd unfolding it again…...handling it with care fit for sm relly delicate nd precious object……

RAJ CAN EASILY FEEL THE SILENCE PREVADING IN THE AIR BETWEEN THEM………………..WITHOUT SAYING ANOTHER WORD……….HE QUIETLY MOVES OUT………………..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74
OUTSIDE

RAJ MOVES AROUND ND FINDS SM BERRY BUSHES ND APPLE TREES………AS HE GOES AROUND PLUCKING THE FRUITS; HIS MIND IS PREOCCUPIED BY THOUGHTS OF NAINA……………..

HE REMEMBERS THE FIRST TIME HE SAW NAINA…..SHE HAD THAT SMTHING SPECIAL IN HER ALWAYS……….BUT NEVER EVER; EVEN IN HIS WILDEST DREAMS DID HE THINK THAT SHE WOULD BECOME THAT SPECIAL SOMEONE IN HIS LIFE SO FAST…..

HIS HEART ALWAYS WENT OUT 2 HER INNOCENCE, BEAUTY ND CHARM…..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#75
FLASHSBACK



RAJ SEES A SHORT BOY COMING TOWARDS THEM; THE BOY THEN HANDS OUT A PIECE OF PAPER TO NAVIN………..

"Ye le, mere ghar ka address aur landline no. Thanks a lot yaar navin….."

"Are no problem karan; mein to vaise bhi kuch nahi karta hu; tu padhai kar; mein tera kaam karta hu….."

'thnks…"

THE BOY WALKS AWAY……

ABHI, RAJ ND NAVIN ARE SITTING ON A BENCH OUTSIDE THE BOY'S HOSTEL……….

KARAN, ONE OF THEIR CLASSMATES WAS THIS RELLY STUDIOUS ND JERKY KIND OF A GUY……HIS PARENTS WERE FOREVER PARANOID ABOUT HIM BEING KILLED BY A TERRORIST OR SOMETHING, INSIDE KMA.
THEY THEREFORE WANTED HIM 2 MEET THEM EVERY WEEK OR ATLEAST SEND NEWS ABOUT HIS WELL BEING…..

SINCE KARAN DID NOT HAVE MANY (SSRY "ANY" ) FRNDS, HE HAD 2 GO MEET HIS PARENTS HIMSELF EVERY WEEK……..

THIS , THUS ATE AWAY MUCH OF HIS STUDY TIME…..

BUT AFTER INDEPENDENCE DAY, WHEN NAVIN MET KARAN'S FAMILY, NAVIN HAD BEEN VOLUNTEERING 2 GO TO KARAN'S PLACE FOR HIM…..

TO ALL OTHERS, INCLUDING KARAN, IT WAS JUST A SWEET GESTURE FRM NAVIN'S SIDE…….BUT HIS BEST FRNDS, RAJ ND ABHI KNEW BETTER……..

ON INDEPENDENCE DAY, NAVIN HAD MET KARAN'S SISTER PRIYA, YOUNGER 2 HIM BY A FEW YEARS……

APART FROM BEING PRETTY, PRIYA WAS ALSO FLIRTY…….PERFECT FOR A SHORT FLING……

NAVIN THEREFORE OFFERED 2 SPEND HS ONLI FREE DAY, SATURDAY…."HELPING" HIS "FRIEND" KARAN………OR PERHAPS……HELPING HIMSELF ON HIS "FRND'S" SISTER….
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76
[COLOR=BLUE] "Navin, wo tujhse choti hain yaar, tu usse pasand kaise kar sakta hain??"

"Are raj, pasand karne aur issi ke umar mein kya relation hai??"

"Tu bhi na……jo bhi ho…umar aur pyar mein koi relation nahi hain…par tu to usse pasand tak nahi karta hain…bas ritu ko jalane ke liye uska istamal kar raha hain…..its not fair yaar…."

"Ey…raj….lecture dena bandh kar yaar….tu bhi na….ekdum naina ke jaise hain….shayad ussi ke liye bana hain…..usse bhi sirf long term relationships hi chahiye….aaj tak 12 ladko ko na kar chuki hain….bilkul tere jaise…..tunhe bhi kitne??....10 ladkiyo ko mana kiya hain na??........saalo tum log ko to ek dussre ke sath hi rehna chahiye…..kash tum dono ko ek dusre se pyar ho jaye….mera to peecha chut jayenga….baath bath par chidte ho ……sheesh"

SAYING THIS NAVIN WALKS OFF LEAVING RAJ SHOCKED AT THE SUDDEN OUTBURST…..

RAJ LOOKS AT ABHI WHO GIVES HIM A SMILE ND WALKS AWAY……..

RAJ TOO GOES UP TO HIS ROOM, NAVIN IS ALREADY SLEEPING…OR ACTING THAT HE IS…..

RAJ TOO GETS INTO BED…….THERE IS ONLI ONE THOUGHT IN HIS HEAD…..WHAT IF WHAT NAVIN SAID COMES TRUE?? DOES STUFF SAID IN A FIT OF ANGER COME TRUE?? I MEAN HE HAD NEVER SEEN NAINA……BUT WHY WAS HE THINKING ABOUT ALL THIS….ABOUT HER……IT COULDN'T HAPPEN….SHE WAS YOUNGER THAN HIM ND MORE IMPORTANTLY HE HAD NEVER MET HER, FORGET MEETING HER….NEVER EVEN SPOKEN TO HER……I MEAN HE COULD START LIKING HER IF HE HAD SPOKEN TO HER IN THE LEAST…BUT HE HAD NOT…SO IT WASN'T POSSIBLE…YA….HE….WAS SURE….IT WASN'T POSSIBLE………………… [COLOR]
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Posted: 17 years ago
#77
NEXT DAY BEING A SATURDAY WAS A OFF, ND NAVIN HAD GONE 2 KARAN'S PLACE EARLY IN THE MORNING…….LEAVING A LETTER ASKING RAJ 2 ATTEND 2 HIS MESSAGES, SUMMONS ND PHONECALLS….

RAJ READ THE LETTER CASUALLY ND THREW IT ASIDE, HE KNEW NAVIN WOULDN'T GET NE CALLS TODAY….IT WAS A SATURDAY, HIS PARENTS WERE OUT FOR THE WHOLEDAY, ND SO THEY ALWAYS CALLED ON WEEKDAYS……SO CALLS TODAY??....NO CHANCE…

RAJ GETS READY ND GOES DOWN FOR BREAKFAST…..

ON THE WAY, AN ORDERLY ASKS HIM ABOUT NAVIN'S WEREABOUTS…….CITING A PHONECALL FRON NAVIN'S HOUSE AS THE REASON FOR HIS QUESTIONING….

SURPRISED BY A SATURDAY PHONECALL FRM NAVIN'S PLACE, RAJ GOES TO ANSWER THE CALL…..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#78
HE PICKS UP THE RECEIVER ND HERAS A BUBBLY YET MATURE VOICE ON THE OTHER SIDE…
Helllo bhaiya…." ..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#79
yaar update karo itne din ho gaye hain plz. plz. plzzzzz...... ab to update karo 😭 😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
#80
if any one is intrested in this fic
i m ready to update it

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