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Posted: 16 years ago
#91
God that witch!!!!
but i loved Pooja in this, i hope her comment helps naina realise her feelings properly, btw just read my last comment and realised i confused this ff with another 🤢 sorry!!! i guess all that lack of sleep is finally catching up with me.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sea_nyx

God that witch!!!!

but i loved Pooja in this, i hope her comment helps naina realise her feelings properly, btw just read my last comment and realised i confused this ff with another 🤢 sorry!!! i guess all that lack of sleep is finally catching up with me.

its ok
ya she is
thanks for comment
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: nihatri

superb. update soon yaar

i,ll update know
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RAJ IS WALKING TOWARDS HIS TENT…..


"Raj…."

"Hmmmm…."

RAJ IS TALKING 2 NANDINI WID HIS BACK 2 HER….HE DOESN'T WANT HER 2 SEE THE PAIN IN HISEYES( she could not even if she wanted 2…she didn't care enough 2 realize he was hurt)……………HE DIDN'T WANT NE1 2 KNOW HOW SAD HE WAS BY WAT NAINA HAD 2 ENDURE…..


HE FEARED THAT IF PPL KNEW HE WAS FEELING BAD…..THEY WOULD KNOW HISTRUE FEELINGS FOR HER……WHICH HE HIMSELF WASN'T SURE OF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NANDINI PUTS A HAND ON RAJ'S SHOLDER NDTURNS HIM AROUND…..

"Hmmm….tum naraz t nahi ho na??"

"Naraz??.....mein kyo naraz hou bhalla??"

HE GIVES A FALSE SMILE WHICH NANDINI SO TOTALLY BUYS ND GIVES A GENUINE WIDE SMILE….

"Hmm….to thikh hain….waise raj…special style kissi aur ke liye bachake rakha hain tumne….nahi??"

"Special style…ye tum kya keh rahi hoon"

RAJ IS GENUINELY UNAWARE OF WAT NANDINI IS SAYING….ALL HIS THOUGHTS R REVOLVING AROUND NAINA….

"Oh…cm onraj…tum jante hoo main kya keh rahi hoon….jab tumne mujhe propose kiya…tabhi mein samajh gayi thi…"

STILL CNFUSED…..RAJ SAYS…

"Samajh gayi thi?? Kya samajh gayi thi??"

"Ab bano maat…"

RAJ GIVES HER A TOTALLY PERPLEXED LUK ND SHE REALIZES TAT SHE HAS 2 EXPLAIN….

"Yahi ki tumne mujhe sabse romantic style mein nahi propose kiya tha….jaisa ki dare mein kaha gaya tha….tumne to bas yu hi propose kiya….juz for the sake of it…special style mein proposal to kissi aur ke liye reserved hain….right??"

NOW RAJ REALISES WHAT SHE HAD INTENDED 2 SAY…..HE STARTSGETTING IRRITATED OF HER….SHE HAD JUZ PUT NAINA IN SUCH GREAT DANGER…ND WAS STILL ACTING SO CASUAL!!!!

"Right…."

"Right??..."

NANDINI SEEMS ANNOYED, BT PRETENDS 2 BE THRILLED……(DAYAN!!)

"Oh wow raj…..kaun hain wo??"

"Wo??....Kaun wo??"

JUST 2 "SHOO" HER AWAY (like a dog..lol)…..HE HAD SAID YES…PAR YE TO PECHHE HI PADH GAYI!!!!

"Oh raj wahi…jisse tum pyar karte hoon…."

"Oh god nandini main kissi se pyar nahi karta….jab karne lagunga, sabse pehle tumhe bataunga……okay??"

"Promise…??"

"Promise"
2 RAJ, NANDINI SEEMS 2 BE SATTISFIED …..BT DID SHE RELLY BUY HIS STORY OF HIM NT LIKING NE1??????????

RAJ IS GLAD THAT THE CONVERSATION HAS ENDED….HE WANTS 2 GET AWAY….BT OH NO!!!....NTHING COMES SO EASY IN LIFE…ATLEAST NT WHEN U HAVE NANDINI AROUND!!!!!
PEECHA HI NAHI CHOOD RAHI THI!!!!


"Raj…..ye shalini ko kya ho gaya hain??"

NO NAINA….NO LOVE…..NO PROPOSAL….NO TALK OF RAKHI…SUDDEN CHANGE OF TOPIC!!!!..............YE KAISE HUA??...RAJ BHI YAHI SOCH RAHA HAIN!!!

"Shalini??....usse kya hua hain??"

"Oh cm on raj….kya hua hain??....she likes CADET YUDI!!"

"Haan…to ussme kya burai hain…"

"KYA BURAI HAIN!!!!!............Raj koi apne junior ko kaise pasand kar sakta hain??"


RAJNOW REALISES WHAT SHE IS PLAYING AT….ND DECIDES 2 PLAY ALONG…..(afterall….dogs, oops…bitches r meant for playing!!!!!)

"Patahe nandini, mein bhi yahi soch raha tha??.....Your tight…apne junior se pyar karna…..ajeeb hain"

NOW THIS, NANDINI TOTALLY BUYS!!! ND IS PLEASED 2 HEAR 2…….

"Wow raj…hum dono eik jaisa hi sochte hain…."

ANOTHER FAKE SMILE FROM RAJ…..

"Ab mujhe chalna chahiye…goodnite raj…."

"Goodnite…."

WHEW!! FINALLY SHE LEFT!!



RAJ GOES 2 HIS TENT ND STANDS OUTSIDE……HE CAN SEE NAINA….NT CLEARLY……BT DEFINITELY ENOUGH 2 ADMIRE HER COURAGE….


BY THE LAKE…..


NAINA IS JUST ABOUT 2 ENTER THE LAKE…..UNAWARE OF A PAIR OF EYES WATCHING HER MOVEMENTS FRM FAR OFF………


UNAWARE???....DID I SAY UNAWARE??

NO…NOT UNAWARE…ATLEAST HER HEART WASN'T UNAWARE….

IT KNEW WELL ENOUGH THAT A PAIR OR EYES WERE WTCHING HER, GUIDING HER, PRAYING FOR HER………SM1 WAS THERE FOR HER ALWAYS….RAJ

HER HEART KNEW…THAT RAJ WAS ALWAYS WITH HER…HELPING HER….GUIDING HER….CARING FOR HER…LOVING HER……

BUT HER MIND??....IT WASN'T MATURE ENOUGH 2 ACCEPT THESE FACTS…..

THE MIND IS ALWAYS MORE IMMATURE AS COMPARED 2 THE HEART…..THEREFORE 1 MUST ALWAYS LISTN 2 HIS/HER HEART….'COZ URE HEART DOESN'T LIE OR BETRAY U…IT SIMPLY GUIDES U TO U'RE DESTINATION…

NAINA STOPPED BELIEVING HER HEAR AFTER NAVIN'S DEATH…..BT NOW 2 MAKE THE RITE DECISIONS, SHE MUST LEARN 2 TRUST HER HEART…..AGAIN…..ND THEN SHE WOULD NEVER EVER GO WRONG.

ON ANOTHER SIDE, 2 PPL ARE IN A HEATED CONVERSATION……IN A DARK SECLUDED CORNER…



"Itna attachement bhi achha nahi hain…"

"Oh…look who is speaking…"

"Maine aapna kaam to pura kiya tha…..juz concentrate on your mission…..kal tak….kaam pura ho jana chahiye……ab koi dekhle, iss se pehle…."

"Goodnite…"

BOTH FIGURES LEAVE THE PLACE & GO IN OPPOSITE DIRECTIONS….WITH A SECRET BURIED IN THEIR HEARTS….KEEPING CARDS CLOSE 2 THEMSELVES……BUT FOR HOW LONG??......AND WHY???


NEAR THE LAKE…



NAINA STEPS INTO THE WATER ND DRAWS A SHARP BREATH…..

THE WATER IS IN ONE WORD…………….



FREEZING



OH GOD! WHAT WAS NANDINI THINKING…..WHAT A TERRIBLE DARE!!

NAINA DOESN'T STEP OUT….SHE GOES DEEPER ND DEEPER INTO THE WATER……EACH STEP NEARLY FREEZING HER 2 DEATH……BT SHE CONTINUES…..GAINING STRENGTH BY THE FACT THAT SHE MUST SURVIVE…..TO PROVE HER BROTHER INNOCENT…


JUST THEN SHE HEARS A FAMILIAR VOICE……ND SLOWLY TURNS BACK…..

"Cadet naina….."

"Aap…"

"Mujhe nahi pata tha ki aap itni bahadur hain..…chalo accha hi hain……..good luck cadet"


JUST AS NANDINI TURNS 2 LEAVE NAINA SPEAKS UP…….HER BODY IS SHIVERING…BT SHE DOESN'T LET HER LIPS QUIVER…

"Good nite ma'am….."

NANDINI TURNS, SMILES..

"Certainly cadet……a very "GOOD" nite…."

"Waise cadet…mein to sone ja rahi hoon…tum paani se to nahi niklongi na??....i hope tum hamme dhoka nahi dongi….navin ke jaise…


SAYING THIS SHE LEAVES….LEAVING NAINA STUNNED BY HER LAST STATEMENT……..HOW COULD NANDINI HAVE SAID THAT??
WARM TEARS TRICKLE DOWN HER CHEEKS…..WTEVER LITTLE FAITH SHE HAD IN HERSELF….JUZ VANISHES LIKE THIN AIR…..


NOW THE WATER SEEMS COLDER….THE NIGHT SEEMS DARKER…THE WORLD SEEMS MEANER….ND SHE SEEMS SMALLER….

SHE LETS GO OF HER "NEVER-LET-GO" ATTITUDE….ND LONGS FOR SM1 TO HELP HER…….SLOWLY SHE BREAKS DOWN…..

SHE SLUMPS DOWN INTO THE SHALLOW PART OF THE LAKE ND STARTS WEEPING….TERS LEVE HER LIKE NEVER BEFORE…ALL THE PAIN ND SUFFERING BOTTLED UP INSIDE HER COMES OUT….

U MIGHT SAY THAT'S GOOD, BT NOT FOR NAINA……AFTER ALL THE CRYING SHE'LL DEFINITELY FEEL BETTER…..BUT THE PROCESS IN ITSELF IS 2 PAINFUL 2 WITHSTAND ALONE….SHE NEEDS A SHOULDER 2 CRY ON……




RAJ MEANWHILE HAS SEEN ALL THIS…..

THOUGH HE HASN'T SEEN HER VERY CLEARLY, RAJ KNOWS THAT THE DARKLADY-LIKE FIGURE MEETING NAINA WAS NANDINI………

ALL ALONG HE SAW NANDINI….ND KEPT WONDERING….

"Now why has she gone 2 meet naina??......how much more pain can she give??"

THEN AFTER A WHILE, SHE LEFT ND HE FELT RELIEVED…….BT WHAT WAS THIS??

SOMETHING WAS WRONG WITH NAINA!!!!

A FEW SECONDS AFTER NANDINI HAD LEFT, NAINA SUDDENLY WENT ON HER KNEES……..WHAT WAS HAPPENING????
SOMETHING WAS WRONG WITH NAINA!!!!

A FEW SECONDS AFTER NANDINI HAD LEFT, NAINA SUDDENLY WENT ON HER KNEES……..WHAT WAS HAPPENING????



OH FORGET THE DARE….NAINA HAD BEEN ON HER KNEES FOR THE PAST FEW MINUTES ND DHE WAS ALSO SHAKING BADLY….SMTHING WAS WRONG!!!!

RAJ RUSHED 2 THE LAKE…..

THERE HE SAW NAINA IN THE WATER….SHAKING UNCONTROLABLY ND CRYING BADLY….

WITHOUT THINKING TWICE….HE RUSHED INTO THE COLD WATERS…..NEVER MIND THE CHILL…

HE MADE NAINA STAND UP…..

"Sir….Ssir…..sssir.."

THAT WAS ALL SHE COULD MANAGE……..BEFORE COMING OUT OF THE WATER , NAINA LOST CONSCIOUSNESS…..LUCKILY FOR HER, RAJ WAS THERE ND HE CAUGHT HER IN HIS ARMS…

"Naina…nainaaa…..aakhe kholo…naina…"

NO RESPONSE…..

HE THEN PICKED NAINA UP ND TOOK HER 2 THE TENT (they were in same tent….'cos they were a team..)

HR JOINED TOGETHER BOTH THEIR SLEEPINGBAGS…..PUT A BLANKET OVER IT….ND LAID HER DOWN ON IT…

HE TRIED 2 WAKE HER UP AGAIN…BUT IN VAIN…

FINNALY HE BENT DOWN AT HER FEET (n shoes….she was in water re!!!!)…AND RUBBED HIS PALMS AGAINST HERFEET SO THAT SHE COULD GET A LITTLE BIT WARMER….HE REPEATED THE SAME PROCEDURE WITH HIS HANDS…


LUCKILY FOR HIM, DR.SHALINI WAS IN THE NEXT TENT….HE WENT 2 HER TENT…ND CALLED FRM OUTSIDE..

"Shalini…..shalini….shalini utho…its an emergency.."

FINALLY SHALINI CAME OUT….

"Kya hua raj…tum itne pareshan kyo ho….aur aadi raat ko yaha??"

"Shalini wo naina…."

"Naina??...oh no!!...wo to paani me thi na??....kya hua usse??"

"Haan…wo…behosh hain…jaldi chalo…"


YUDI COMES ND STANDS BEHIND DR.SHALINI….HE HAD HEARD THE WHOLE CONVERSATION..

"Main bhi aata hoon…"

"Cadet Yudi…aap jakar campfireko wapas light kijiye and make some hot coffee or tea….raj tum naina ke paas jao…mein medicines lekar aati hoon"

"Ok"

"Ok"


YUDI GOES TOWARDS THECAMPFIRE ND RAJ, TOWARDS HIS TENT….

NAINA HAS JUST STARTED STIRRING……
NAINA HAS JUST STARTED STIRRING……


"Hmm….raj…ra…j.."

"Naina don't worry, main yahi hoon…"

"Raj,,,,raj….kyo raj??...."

"Naina…kya hua??"

"Nandini……."

"Kya naina??...bolo….."

"Ussne bhaiya ko dhokebas kaha…..kyo raj…tum to jante ho na…bhaiya gadar nahi the…haina raj….bolo raj…..bhaiya gadar nahi the na….??"

BY NOW HER VOICE HAD RAISED ND SHE WAS SEATED ON HER BED….

RAJ IS TRYING HIS BEST 2 CONTROL HIS ANGER THOUGH EVERY PART OF HIS MIND WANTS 2 GO 2 NANDINI ND SLAP HER HARD!!! HOW COULD SHE HAVE SAID THAT??

"Raj….raaj….raaaaaaaaaaj………bolo na raj…please kuch bolo…"

NAINA MOVES A BIT ND GOES ND HUGS RAJ TIGHT….SHE IS NOW WEEPING VERY BADLY……


RAJ KNEW THAT NANDINI HAD HURT NAINA A LOT…..ND THERE R NO WORDS WHICH WILL FULLY CONSOLE NAINA…..SO HE JUST HOLDS ON TO HER TIGHTLY…..LIKE ONE WOULD HOLD ON TO THEIR LIFE…..

HE COULD HAVE PATTED HER SHOULDERS OR ON HER HEAD….BT THAT WOULD MAKE HIM SO TEACHER-LIKE….HE UNDERSTOOD WHAT SHE WAS GOING THROUGH ND SO COMPLETELY CHANGED ROLES ND BECAME HER FRND….ND SIMPLY HUGGED HER TIGHTLY….


SLOWLY NAINA'S SOBS BECAME LESS PRONOUNCED….

FINNALYALL SHE MUMBLED WAS…..

"Kyo raj…..kyo…"

RAJ WAS EXPEXTING HER 2 SAY SMTHING MORE BT AFTER A WHILE HE REALISED THAT SHE WAS QUIET SUDDENLY…….HE BROKE FREE FROM HER EMBRACE ND REALISED THAT SHE WAS FAST ASLEEP…..SLEEPING LIKE A INNOCENT BT HURT SMILE…EYES SWOLLEN ND DAMP…..


YET SO PRETTY………


SHALINI CAME INTO THE TENT JUST THEN (wah! Kya dost hain…atleast thodi privacy to di!!)……

"Sssry raj…main yudi ki madat kar rahi thi….mujhe laga tumhe aur naina ko kuch der akele rehna chahiye……naina is a stong girl…usski ye halat sirf paani ke wajah se nahi hui hain….mujhe lagta hain ki koi aur baat usse pareshan kar rahi hain…..kya ussne tummhe kuch bataya??"

RAJ COULDN'T TELL SHALINI ABOUT WHAT NANDINI HAD SAID….HE WAS SURENAINA DIDN'T WANT THAT….

"Um….nahi kuch nahi…aate waqt wo bheeg gayi thi…shayad ye thande paani ne ussi sardi ko aur bada diya ho??"

"Hmmm…."
SHE DOESN'T SEEM 2 BUY THE STORY….BT TRUSTS RAJ FOR HAVING HIS REASONS FOR NOT TELLING HER…

"Um….thikhe….usse bahar…campfire ke pass le aao…main ye blankets bahr le jati hoon"
RAJ PICKS NAINA UP ND TAKES HER OUT….WHILE SHALINI PICKS UP THE BLANKET ND SLEEPNG BAGS ND FOLLOWS THEM OUT……

OUTSIDE…YUDI HAS STARTED THE CAMPFIRE ROARING…….HE IS ALSO MAKING SM HOT CHOCOLATE ON IT……..


HE NODS IN ACKNOLEDGEMENT AS THEY CM ND CNTINUES WID HIS WRK….

SHALINI LAYS DOWNTHE SLEEPING BAG….ND RAJ PUTS NAINA ON IT…

SHALINI ASKS HIM 2 WAKE NAINA UP…LET HER HAVE THE HOT CHOCOLATE D GO BACK 2 SLEEP…

RAJ SLOWLY WAKES NAINA UP….HER EYES R STILL SWOLLEN…BT SEEING SHALINI ND YUDI AROUND…SHE REGAINS HER COPOSURE….

"Hello ma'am….yudi"

YUDI GIVES HER A BIG FRIENDLY SMILE…

"Hello cadet…aab apki tabyat kaisi hain…"

"I'm feeling much better…thank u ma'am"

"Good…chalo now jaldi se ye hot chocolate pi lo….nd warm ur clothes near the fire…"

"Yes ma'am…."

NAINA MOVES CLOSER 2 THE FIRE ND TAKES THEHOT CHOCOLATE…..

EVERY1 IS SITTING IN SILENCE…AFTER NAINA FINISHES HER HOT CHOCOLATE….SHE FEELS MUCH MUCH BETTER…

"Ab cadet…mein tumhe ye neend ki goli dungi…tum isse le lo…aur aaram se so jayo……"

"Yes ma'am…"

"Raj tum chaho ho mere tent me so sakte hoon…mein naina ke saath rahungi.."

"Huh…nahi…mein naina ke saath rehta hoon..tum thag gayi hongi…tumso jayo..zaroorat hongi to tumhe mein khud bula loonga…"

"Nahi raj..tum so jao..mein naina ke paas rehti hoon.."

"Shalini don't wrry…tum so jao…mein naina ke paas rehta hoon…zaroorat padengi to tumhe bulalunga…"

"Are u sure??"

"Yes…im very sure……tum jao.."

"Um….ok…cadet yudi..aag bhuja do.."

"Yes ma'am…"

"Aao cadet davai de du…"

NAINA, RAJ ND SHALINI WALK BACK 2 THE TENT…….

AGAIN RAJ LAYS DOWN THE SLEEPING BAGS….NAINA HAS THE MEDICINE ND GOES OFF TO SLEEP…"

"Ok raj…mein ja rahi hoon…koi problem to nahi honi chahiye…par ho…to mujhe immediately bula lena…ok??"

"Hmm….goodnite.."

"Goodnite…"
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh thank god raj got there in time. HOW COULD SHE?!!! I mean she acts all superior to shalini for falling for yudi cause he's younger and here she does this?!!!! Naina and Yudi may be juniors but true maturity comes from more than just age and both of them have it in spades. It was Nandini who was behaving like an immature b****!!!
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Originally posted by: sea_nyx

oh thank god raj got there in time. HOW COULD SHE?!!! I mean she acts all superior to shalini for falling for yudi cause he's younger and here she does this?!!!! Naina and Yudi may be juniors but true maturity comes from more than just age and both of them have it in spades. It was Nandini who was behaving like an immature b****!!!

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i also think so
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SHALINI LEAVES…LEAVING RAJ ALONE WITH A SLEEPING NAINA…HE WONDERS TO HIMSELF…….

"What had happened to nandini? Wo pehle to aisi nahi thi….phir achanak….kyo??"

SUDDENLY RAJ STARTS FEELING COLD ND REALISES THAT HE 2 IS WET (obviously!!!!).......ALL ALONG HE WAS BOTHERED ONLI FOR NAINA ND DID NT NOTICE HIS OWN SHIVERING!!!


NOW THAT HE DID…..HE COULDN'T EVEN GO OUT ND LIGHT THE CAMPFIRE..LEAVING NAINA ALONE………


SO POOR CHAP…JUST WORE A JACKET ND SAT DOWN….

ALL NIGHT HE KEPT AN EYE ON NAINA….WHO LIKE SHALINI HAD SAID…SLEPT PEACEFULLY….ALL NIGHT HE STAYED AWAKE…..GIFTING HIMSELF NOT EVEN FEW MINUTES OF REST……

MORNING



"Sunno naina…tumhe navin be bharosa hain na??"

A NOD OF THE HEAD…

"To bas..nandini ke kuch bhi kehne se tummhe fark nahi panda chahiye…."

"Hmmm….pata nahi…kal mein acchanak hi tooth gayi…"

"Don't worry….par agli bar kabhi bhi himmat maat harna…aur aab jaldi chalo…eik aur trek par jana hain na aag…so cm on hurry up"

"Itni jaldi nahi captain…"

DR.SHALINI ENTERS…

"Shalini…"

"Good morning ma'am…."

"Good morning cadet…nd how r u feeling now.."

"Aaa….im much better now…bas thodi si weakness hain…par im sure ki trek par jane ke bad wo bhi chala jayenga…"

"Of course not cadet..aap trek par nahi ja sakti…"

"What??...par ma'am mein to bilkul thik hoon.."

"Aisa aap ko lagta hain cadet…par doctor main hoon…aap nahi….right??"

"Par ma'am…"

"No arguments cadet…aap nahi ja rahi hain..nd that's final.."

"Ok..captain…raat bhar koi problem nahi thi.."

"Nahi…."

"Good…..aur apne inhe kitne bajhe tak observe kiya…….."

SHALINI ASKS THIS WHILE TAKING NAINA'S TEMPERATURE…..

"Uff…cadet naina aapko to bukhar hain…aur atrek par janeki baat kar rahi hoon.."

SHE THEN TURNS 2 RAJ FOR HER ANSWER BT GETS IT EVEN WITHOT HIM TELLING HER…HIS WORN OUT CONDITION TELLS HER EVERYTHING…

"Captain…aap raat bhar to nahi baithe the na??"

RAJ SIMPLY SHRUGS HIS SHOULDER…

BOTH NAINA ND SHALINI R JUST STARING AT HIM……

"Haan…wo main…acc-hh-ooo"

NAINA'S QUICK EYE INSTANTLY FINDS OUT WATS AMISS…

"Oh god!...apne kal raat ke kaapde badle hi nahi…"

NOW SHALINI TOO SEES IT…

"Captain…ab to apka bhi temperature bhi lena padenga…."

SHE TAKES HIS TEMPERATURE…ND AS EXPEXTED HE TOO HAS A SLIGHT FEVER…

"Oh! Ab mere do patients ho gaye…."

RAJ GIVES A FAINT SMILE…
"Aap dono to trek par ja nahi sakte…..par….oh god!!...par mein bhi nahi rukh paungi (YIPEEEEEEEEEE!!)…I'll be needed during the trek…aur koi aur nahi rukh sakta...kyonki isskeliye to unhe points diye jayenge…to koi bhi teacher rukha to cadets ke points katenge…so that's out of question…..ab…ab kya karenge.."

"Shalini…sirf hum dono hi rukh jate hain…muje to jyada teez bukhar nahi hain….aur koi problem hogi to aap sabke pas walkie-talkies to hain hi…"

"Nahi captain…I can't do that.."

"You have to shalini….do u have an option.."

SHALINI THINKS ABOUT IT FOR A WHILE…

"Ok…mein brigaidier chandok se bat karke aati hoon…"


SHE COMES BACK AFTER A FEW MINUTES…

"All right captain…u both have the camp to urselves now….enjoy youselves….goodbye.."

"Bye…"

OUTSIDE……A FEW MINUTES LATER…..


EVER1 HAD ASSEMBLED WITH THEIR RESPECTIVE PARTNERS IN TOW…..READY FOR AN EXCITING TREK…BT NANDINI ND HUDA SEEMED DISTRACTED…..ND Y NOT??....THE TWO PPL THEIR EYES WERE LOOKING FOR WERE MISSING AFTERALL………

THEIR SEARCH SOON ENDS….BUT OH!! WITH SUCH A RUDE SHOCK……IN A FEW MINUTES, RAJ ND NAINA CM OUT….LOOKING WORN OUT…BT NOT UNHAPPY….

JUST THEN BC COMES…ND THEY ALL STAND IN ATTENTION….

BC- Cadets and faculty members, kuch hi der mein ap sab trek ke liye niklenge. Routes aap ko bataye jaenge aur…….CADET HUDA!!......

[HUDA WHO HAD BEEN TRYING 2 LIP-TALK WITH NAINA WAS CAUGHT OFF-GUARD…….TURNING HIS EYES AWAY FROM NAINA …..]

HUDA- Ah….ji sir??

[ BC ADDRESSES THEGROUP AT LARGE, LOOKING AT AND SPEAKING 2 HUDA IN PARTICULAR….]

BC- Capt. Rajveer aur Cadet Singh hamare saath trek par nahi ja payenge. Unki tabyat ke wajah se, unhe yaha par rehna padenga….Tha's all…get ready 2 leave….

[Shuffling of shoes….as every1 prepares 2 leave….]

Every1 except huda nd nandini of course…..

But soon huda is whisked off by his friends….but nandini….chance ko janne thodi na dengi!!!???

Nandini walks up 2 BC

Nandni- Sir mein soch rahi thi ki agar Capt. Rajveer (PAUSE) aur…aur Cadet naina ki dekhbal karne ke liye mein yaha rukh jayu, to shayad ether honga…

BC is about 2 reply….bt Shalini cuts him in between…

Shalini- Arre nahi, nandini tumhe pareshan hone ki koi zaoorat nahi hain….wo dono itne bimar bhi nahi hain….bas kamzoor hain….thoda sa aaram, aur wo thik ho jaenge…(turning towards BC)…Aur waise bhi sir, zyada logo ke hone se unhe taklif ho sakti hain…sir I suggest unhe akela chod diya jaye…..kuch der aaram karenge to apne aap hi thik ho jayenge….

Nandini(in utter panic)- Par sir…

Bc- Mujhe lagta hain Dr. Shalini ki bath thik he….jitne zyada log utha zyada shor….dono ko rest ki zaroorat hain….aap key aha rukne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai…

SAYING THIS HE WALKS OFF….
Shalini- Chale nandini…..(sly smile..)


Sulking but all the while thinking of a way by which 2 stay back….nandini walks away with shalini…

Not 2 be easily defeated…..Nandini thinks of a plan…..wiating for the rite moment 2 play it out….
Both of them reach the group of trekkers….they r still not ready, moving around….forgetting this and remembering that and so on…

Nandini- Come on Cadets hurry up….let's leave fast….

She uses up all her energy getting the cadets together…as though all she wanted at the moment was 2 leave the camp….This made shalini wonder….

Shalini(2 herself)- ye nandini ko kya ho gaya….abhi to ke rahi thi…wo yaha rukh jayengi…ab janne ki itni jaldi kar rahi hain….jaise ki uski jaan isspar dependent hain….kuch 2 gadbad hain….

Smelling smthing fishy…..shalini goes back 2 her room for smthing nd comes back…..smiling like a little,pleased child….

That's the human mind….u never know wat's going on there…..od u know wat's going on in nandini or shalini's mind??....or huda's??.....or naina's??....or raj's???
Wat r their plans??
Soon the whole grp splits…to their respective pairs…each with a diff. route…..



Campsite


"plunk….plunk…plunk…."

The flat pebbles skipped on the water surface before finally going out of site…

Sitting by the lake….throwing pebbles on the water surface…..seeing their movement in silence…they truly seemed like a picture perfect couple….

Their was silence…..yes….but it wasn't eerie…..it didn't make him feel lonely….it wasn't painful….

'cos silence with naina around….was the most beautiful think ever…..the most soulful music……
not wanting 2 break away frm this magic of her silence….raj dares not speak….lest he breaks the silence….
"Raj….."

"Hmmm…."
Naina initiated a conversation!!!......Raj looks up at her….

She smiles….a smile that makes his heart skip….that makes him forget everything…that is more precious to him than nething else….that means more than the world.
"Thanks……mere liye yaha rukhne ke liye…"

"That's ok cadet…waise bhi iss halat main 'dr.' mujhe trek par jane ki 'permission' nahi deti!!!"

Raj places emphasis on the wrds "dr." & "permission"………hearing which naina bursts out laughing……raj too joins her……

"Dr. Shalini bahut hi aachi hain…na??"

"Haan…wo bahut hi aachi dost hain…"

"Wo aap hi ke batch mein thi na…"

:Hmm…humare hi batch aur humare hi grp main….nandini, shalini, navin, abhimanyu aur main bahut acche dost the….hum hamesha saath rehte the……(pauses)…..aaj bhi….."

Understanding raj's inner meaning of navin being with him…them…in their heart's forever….naina gives him a faint smile….

"Tum aapne bare mein kuch batao…apne college ke barre mein…."

"College…."

The wrd college brings a huge smile on naina's face nd her tone becomes nostalgic….
"Main college ki sabse popular ladki thi……(starts laughing lightly)….patahe kyon??....kyonki mein eik army jawan ki behen thi…..

Hamare college mein se kissi aur ka bhai army mein nahi tha….sirf navin bhaiya…..
Har ladki unpe marti thi…aur issiliye meri dost ban jati thi…
Jaise hi unhe pata chalta ki bhaiya gar aaye hain….(laughs again)…bas…sab ghar aa jate the….mujhe milne ke naam se….ma-baba to ekdum pareshan ho jate the….

Aur aap to bhaiyaa ko jante ho…ladki mili nahi….ki bas dosti ho gayi…..bhaiya ate to sirf eik-do din ke liye the…par aisa lagta tha…ki humse nahi….ladki pasand karne aaye hain…"

"Aur issiliye tum dono main jhagde hote the??"

"Haan…wo actually bhaiya bhi na…eik ladki ke saath kabhi nahi reh sakte….ladkiya to aise badalte hain…jaise kapde….aur unki yahi baat mujhe bahut ghussa dilate thi…(she suddenly turns 2 look at him)………..waise eik baat bataiye….academy mein eik dance ball hua tha na?? Bhaiya ne us ball ke barre me mere samne sirf teen bar zikr kiya tha…par teeno bar alag-alag ladkiyo ke naam liye the……..main jab bhi unse iss bare mein baat karti…wo topic change kar dete the….kya bhaiya ne eik hi ball ke liye teen ladkiyo ko puchha??"

Seeing naina's horrified expression nd also remembering the incident….which was sure to be written as a first and perhaps onli such incident in the history of kma…..raj stars laughing…

"Teen nahi….char"

"Kya!!!???!!!!"
Naina is 2222 horrified nd surprised 2 think nemore 'bout what could possibly have happened….nd raj continues….

"Navin ne teen ladkiyo ko ball ke liye puccha tha….teeno best friends thi….aur college ki drama queens….unki duniya unhi se shuru aur unhi se khatam hoti thi….unki duniya mein wo aur kissi ko nahin aane dete thi…navin ko chodkar….wo teeno dil hi dil mein navin se pyar karti thi…par unhone ye bath eik dusre ko kabhi nahi batayi…wo eik dusre ki best friends to thi…par kabhi eik dusre par bharosa nahi karti thi….navin ye sab janta tha….

Un teeno ne college mein bahut logo ko sataya tha…..navin bas ussi ka badla le raha tha….

"Bhaiyaa ne akhir kiya kya??"

"Usne teeno ko uske saath chalne kahan….teeno ne haan kar di…aur eik dusre ko iske bare mein bataya ta nahi…

Bahana banaka…navin ne teeno ko directly hall mein anne ko kaha…wo janta tha….hamesha ki tarah, teeno late ayengi…takhi sab unhe notice kare…aapne dashing date ke saath…"

Teeno jab ayi….pure adhe ghante late…to dekha ki navin to pehle se hi waha tha….kissi aur ke saath….navin aur priya…hall ke center mein dance kar rahe the….saare cadets navin ka plan jante the….aur uss din sabne milkar un teeno ki ragging ki….."


Recollecting the incident…raj is in splits now…
Them he says, in a more sober mood….

"Pata hain naina, navin ladkiyo ke saath itna bhi bura nahi tha….jaia tum samajti hoon….patahe priya academy ki sabse darpok ladki thi…sab usse rag karte the….specially wo teeno….usse kisi ne dance par nahi puccha na….navin ye janta tha…issilye usne usse dance par puccha….aur pure samay usne aisa nahi jataya ki usne koi ehsaan kiya ho…tumhara bha….sach mein special tha…….hain….."

NAINA NEVER THOGHT THAT THERE COULD BE NE1 WHO LIKED NAVIN MORE THAN HER….BUT AT EVERY STAGE RAJ PROVED HER WRONG….HE UNDERSTOOD NAVIN MORE THAN NE1 ELSE IN THE WORLD…..THIS DIDN'T BOTHER HER…

AFTERALL WHAT COULD PLAESE A PERSON MORE THAN THE FACT THAT THE TWO PEOPLE SHE FELT ATTACHED TO…..UNDERSTOOD EACH OTHER BETTER THEN SHE COULD….

ATTACHED TO??....SHE CERTAINLY FELT SHE WAS ATTACHED 2 RAJ…..ATTRACTED TOO…..BUT LOVE??....DID SHE LOVE HIM AS YET…………NAINA HAS A LOT OF SOUL-SEARCHING LEFT TO DO…..DID RAJ MEAN MORE 2 HER THAN LET HERSELF BELIEVE??
"To aap ne dance ke liye kisse punccha tha??"

"Huh??!!??"

The question takes Raj by surprise……his mind is already ready with the answer….

"Sabse sundar ladki ko punccha to tha….par ussne sunna hi nahi…."

Instead , juz to gauge her reaction, he says……"Eik ladki ko punccha to th….par ussne saf mana kar diya…"

Without thinking a surprised naina reacts, rather over-reacts….."Aap ko kyo koi mana karenga"

She soon realizes her slip….nd corrects herself, but not before raj smiles at her folly….(so she does think he isn't that bad…hmmm)

"Mera matlab aapki to itne sari girl friends thi…aap kissi ko bhi punch sakte the"

Naina gives a purposeful pause between the words "girl" nd "friend"…..to clearly indicate that what she means is not the boyfriend-girlfriend thing….bt raj's gal pals…like shalini, nandini nd the likes….

"Haan par meri sari girl friends kissi aur ke saath ja rahi thi……."

Raj perfectly imitates naina's pause between the wrds "girl" nd "friends"….making her turn slightly red around the ears……

"Aur tumhare nahi the??"

"Mere????....."

"Haan….boyfriends ….."



NO PAUSE BETWEEN THE WRDS.

THE CONVERSATION HAD DEFINITELY TAKEN A DIFFERENT, UNEXPECTED ROUTE……
"Um…..haan…uska naam rahul hain….."

Raj(to himself)-"tha nahi….hain…..hmmm"

There is an akward silence between them…..

Raj(aloud)- Par navin to bata raha tha ki……"

He meant 2 say that navin had told him about naina only believing in long lasting relationships…..bt before he could complete, Naina realized what he was gonna say…..nd 2 avoid having 2 answer any more questions 'bout her "relationships"…..she cut him in mid-sentence…..

"Aap to bhaiyaa ko jante hi hain na…..hamesha ulti-seedhi baath karte rehte hain….."

"Hmmmm….haan"

Raj is nt yet totally convinced nd is still deep in his own thoughts when naina's voice awakens him….

"Waise……bhaiyaa se mujhe yaad aya……bhaiyya bata rahe the ki academy me aapki koi bhi girlfriend nahi thi….kyo??....academy mein aapko koi nahi pasand tha??"

Raj smiles nd looks at her…..its time for naina 2 taste her own medicine now….nd realize how bitter it is too

"Oh….tum to apne bhaiya ko janti hi hoon na….hamesh ulti-seedhi baath karte rehta hain….."

All this while an innocent smile is playing across raj's face…..

Naina does not realize that raj has used the exact same sentence as she had 2 speak about navin….nor does she see the smile across his face…….she is too bothered……………..by something else.

"To aapko academy mein koi pasand tha??"

Seeing Naina's shocked nd hurt expression, Raj is amused……..nd happy too.

"Haan…

Before naina could probe forther nd get the girl's name…..raj continues…..

"…par wo sab ab chodo…..its not that important…."

Naina was half-tempted 2 scream out….."IT IS DAMMIT!!"……nd she has no idea how badly raj wanted her 2 scream that out too……
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i hope u enjoyed it
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Posted: 16 years ago

aww, how sweet....loved the convo b/w the two. Thanx so much for the pm gazal

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