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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
WHILE NAINA IS THINKING 'BOUT HOW MUCH RAJ'S HAND MIGHT BE HURTING……RAJ'S HEART JUST WANTS 1 THING….FOR NAINA 2 NEVER LEAVE HIS HAND……………..HEY WAIT A MINUTE, I THINK NAINA'S HEART WANTS THAT 2…..NO????
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62
ON NAINA HITTING RAJ- i know its kinda absurd bt i just wanted 2 show that they have nw become closer nd mean more 2 each other than just their relationship.....i hope it doesnt look 2 stupid
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
awsome too good. 👏 👏
Edited by sanabmw - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
please continue.do u always stop like this ?please please pleaseeeeee update.I m dieing to read more.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
BOTH OF THEM ENTER THE COTTAGE………….

NAINA- Aap yaha rukhiye……main first-aid box le ati hoon….

RAJ FINDS SM DRIED GRASS, PUTS IT DOWN ON THE GROUND, ND SITS ON IT, WHILE WAITING FOR NAINA 2 CM…….

NAINA SOON FINDS THE BOX IN HER BACKPACK ND CMES ND SITS DOWN NEXT 2 HIM…..

NAINA- Oh no!! Ghao to bahut gehra hain….aapne pehle yaad kyo nahi dilaya…

RAJ- Wo main……

NAINA- Aap sab ladke, eik hi jaise hote hain……dard hota to hain, par mane ko tayar hi nahi ho….

RAJ- Par…

NAINA- Par…par kya??...........ab ap kahenge ki mujhe dard nahi ho raha…

RAJ- Par naina….

NAINA- "Par naina, main to capt. Rajveer singh shekhawat hoon, mujhe dard kaise ho sakta hain"…yahi kehna chahte ho na aap…..
Aap aur bhaiya, dono eik jaise…..uff!!............dono maIre hi gale pade hain…..

RAJ GIVES UP EVEN TRYING 2 EXPLAIN NETHING 2 HER, COS SHE SEEMS 2 BE IN NO MOOD TO LISTEN 2 NETHNG…………….SO HE JST SMILES 2 HIMSELF ND LETS HER BLABBER…..

EVEN THOUGH HE HAD ALREADY STOPPED LISTENING 2 WATEVER NAINA WAS SAYING (he was jusssssssssssst staring at her), HE REALIZED THAT SHE HAD SUDDENLY BECOME QUIET….

RAJ- Kya hua naina, acchanak chup kyo ho gayi…..

NAINA GIVES HIM A FAINT SMILE…

NAINA- Wo……bhaiya ke janne ke bad, pehle bar iss tarah khulkar kissi se bathh kar payi hoon……..(her eyes become all hazy)
RAJ WANTS 2 LIGHTEN UP THE STRAINED ATMOSPHERE ……

RAJ- Oh!! To navin ko bhi issi tarah dath padti thi?? Bechara…

NAINA ND RAJ BOTH SMILE AT EACH OTHER…………
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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
SUDDENLY THEY HEAR A ROAR OF THUNDER ND LOOK OUT 2 REALIZE THAT ITS RAINING HEAVILY….

NAINA- Wow!! Barish ……mujhe….

RAJ- Barish me bheegna bahut pasand hain………..(raj cmpletes her sentence)

NAINA LOOKS AT HIM, SURPRISED…..

NAINA- Haan, par apko kaise pata??

RAJ- Navin ne bataya tha…..

NAINA- Lagta hain bhaiya ne aapko mere bare mein sab kuch bata diya hain…..

SAYING THIS SHE RUSHES 2 THE DOOR ND OPENS IT…………A COOL BREEZE WELCOMES HER ND BLOWS ACROSS HER FACE………SHE TAKES A DEEP BREATH ND SMILES AS THOUGH ALL THE HAPPINESS OF THE WORLD IS BESTOWED UPON HER…..

RAJ- Haan sab bataya…..sirf ye nahi bataya ki tum duniya ki sabse sundar ladki ho………………….

NAINA SUDDENLY TURNS WITH A SURPRISED EXPRESSION ON HER FACE……..

NAINA- Aapne kkuch kaha…??

RAJ IS TAKEN ABACK…

RAJ- Nahi to, apne kuch suna…..??

NAINA SMILES 2 HERSELF WONDERING IF WAT SHE HAD HEARD WAS JUST HER IMAGINATION OR WAS IT FOR REAL….DID RAJ FIND HER PRETTY??

SHE HAS A BEMUSED EXPRESSION ON HER FACE, SHE TUCKS A STRAND OF HAIR THAT HAD COME OUT, BESIDE HER EAR ND TURNS AWAY 2 FACE THE DOOR AGAIN

RAJ HEAVES AN INAUDIBLE SIGH OF RELIEF ND SMILES 2 HIMSELF…..WHILE RUNNING HIS HANDS THROUGH HIS HAIR……….
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
SUDDENLY OUT OF THE BLUE, NAINA JUST RUSHES OUT OF THE DOORS………….

RAJ- Naina……….

HE TOO RUSHES OUTSIDE, ONLY 2 FIND NAINA STANDING THERE IN THE RAIN, WITH ARMS OUTSTRETCHED ON HER SIDES, EYES CLOSED, FACE UPWARDS…..TAKING IN ALL THE PLEASURES OF THE RAIN

NAINA-Wow!! Baarish mein bhegne mein kitna mazaa ata hain………….haina??

NAINA- Are raj, waha kyo khade hoon??..........tumhe baarish nahi pasand??

RAJ IS SUDDENLY GOT BACK 2 REALITY……………….

RAJ-Nahi wo……

NAINA- Oh!! Ho!! Baarish mein bhegke to dekho….............its soooooooooo beautiful…

RAJ-Um….lekin…..

NAINA-Raj tum football to khel sakte ho na baarish mein….to baas yu hi bheeg kyo nahi sakte?? Chalo na….

SHE GOES UP 2 RAJ ND BRINGS HIM OUT IN THE RAIN……..

RAJ- Naina, football tak to thik hain………par baarish mein yu hi bhegna??

NAINA- Oh cm on raj, issi mein to baarish ka mazza hain…

NAINA- Baarish hi to tumhare sare dukho ko dur le jati hai………….aur sirf khushiyo ko paas aane deti hain….

RAJ FINNALY LISTENS 2 HER, ND LETS HIMSELF ENJOY THE RAINS…….LETS THE RAINS WASH AWAY ALL HIS SORROWS……ND NOW WHAT REMAINS IN HIS HEART IS ONLI GUD THOUGHTS ND MEMORIES………..NOW HE IS NJOYING THE RAINS 2 THE HILT…..HE WANTS 2 STAY HERE FOREVER BECAUSE THE RAINS WASH AWAY ALL BAD MEMORIES……..REVOLVING AROUND NAVIN'S DEATH……………………………

SUDDENLY HE REMEMBERS SMTHING ND SPONTANEOUSLY TURNS 2 FACE NAINA

RAJ- Par navin to bata raha tha ki tum….

NAINA- Achoooooooooooo!!

RAJ– tumhe sardi jaldi ho jati hain….

NAINA-Haan wo baarish mein bhegne ke turant bad mujhe zaara si sardi ho jati hain…..ACHOOOOOOOO!!

RAJ- Chalyiye aab……..(he points towards the cottage……naina gives a smile nd moves towards the cottage…raj follows suit….….)

BOTH OF THEM ENTER THE COTTAGE………..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
BOTH OF THEM ENTER THE COTTAGE………..

RAJ-Naina tum yaha baito, main aag jalatahu…..

WITH THE HELP OF THE WOOD HE HAD BROUGHT, RAJ LIGHTS A FIRE ND NAINA SITS NEAR IT…….HER PALMS FACING THE FIRE 2GET SM HEAT……

RAJ GOES ND GETS A TOWEL FRM NAINA'S BAGPACK (they were going for a trek, towel to hoga hi na??)………….NAINA TAKES IT FRM HIM, OPENS HER HAIR, ND STARTS DRYING IT…….

THE WINDOW ON NAINA'S LEFT WAS OPEN ND U COULD C THE MOON…….THE MOONLIGHT STREAMED INTO THE ROOM, MAKING NAINA LOOK EVEN PRETTIER, SMWHAT LIKE A PRINCESS………………


"And there was something in the night
That with its magic wound us;
For we-oh! we not only saw,
But felt the moonlight around us"


RAJ MOVED TOWARDS THE WINDOW ND SOOD THERE, SILENTLY, LOOKING AT THE MOON……

HE THEN TURNED ND LOOKED AT NAINA, SITTING NEAR THE FIREPLACE, DRYING HER HAIR………..

AT THAT VERY MOMENT, NAINA TOO TURNED TO LOOK AT RAJ……..

BOTH THEIR EYES GOT LOCKED ND A STRANGE SENSATION FLOWED THROUGH BOTH THEIR BODIES………

BOTH OF THM HAD SEEN A LOT OF TROUBLE IN LIFE…..BT NOW, IN EACH OTHERS EYES, ALL THE TROUBLES WERE FORGOTTEN………..REPLACED ONLY BY SM DIFFERENT FEELING……

A GREAT FEELING ….GREATER THAN WHAT THEY HAD EVER FELT BEFORE…….



WAS THIS LOVE????????????????????????
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
DEFINITELY MAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AUR KYA HO SAKTA HAIN??????????

NAINA HAD FELT THAT NAVIN'S DEATH WOULD TRAUMATISE HER SO MUCH, KI BADLA LENE TAK, NO OTHER FEELING WOULD MAKE HOME, HER HEART…………

SHE HAD ALWAYS FELT LONELY, SEPERATED FRM THE WORLD..............BUT AFTER COMING TO KMA, SHE FELT DIFFERENT, AS IF SHE BELONGED ……………….AS IF SHE MATTERED………….


"My heart is bettered when I feel
That even this human heart
To all around is gently bound,
And forms of all a part……………."


SUDDENLY RAJ NOTICES THAT NAINA'S LIPS R QUIVERING……………HE THEN REALISES THAT SHE IS ABSOLUTELY COLD, ND IS SHIVERING BADLY………..

HE IMMEDIATELY RUNS ND GETS THE BLANKET OUT OF HIS BAGPACK ND HANDS IT OVER 2 HER……………

NAINA TAKES IT ND THANKS HIM……..

SHE WRAPS THE SHAWL AROUND HER ND SIMULTANEOUSLY, SHE IS ALSO TRYING 2 WIPE HER HAIR…………..

RAJ NOTICES THAT EVERY TIME SHE GETS HER HAND OUT OF THE BLANKET TO WIPE HER HAIR, IT'S A STRUGGLE SINCE SHE IS FEELING SO COLD……….

HE GOES OVER TO HER ……………….

RAJ- Naina, tum apne haath blanket ke andar rakho……………….um….towel yaha de do………

HE IS FUMBLING WITH HIS WORDS BT AFTER A MINUTE'S HESITATION, NAINA GIVES HIM THE TOWEL………

RAJ SITS DOWN IN FRONT OF NAINA ND AFTER SLIGHT HESITATION, HE GETS THE TOWEL TO HER HEAD ND STARTS DRYING IT, ALL THE WHILE KEEPING HIS EYES NEWHERE, BUT OFF NAINA………………

HE KNOWS VERY WELL THAT IF HE LOOKS AT NAINA, HE WILL BE TOO CAPTIVATED BY HER 2 LOOK AWAY………………………………………………………………………..

BUT AH!! FATE HAS SOME OTHER PLANS FOR THEM…………………FOR NO REAL REASON WHATSOEVER, RAJ LOOKS AT NAINA…………………….

AND THAT'S IT, HE'S TRAPPED………HE CAN'T TURN BACK NOW!!!!!!!!!!

HIS HAND STOPS MOVING ND HE IS SITTING THERE QUITELY LIKE SM THREE-YEAR OLD CHILD IN AWE OF SOMETHING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#70
HIS HANDS STOPPED, ND CAME DOWN……RESTING NOW IN NAINA'S ELEGANT HANDS BUT HIS EYES………THEY WERE STILL FINDING THEIR WAY OUT OF HER BEAUTIFUL EYES WERE JUST RECENTLY THEY HAD BEEN LOST……………..

THEY WERE SO CLOSE THAT THEY COULD EVEN FEEL EACH OTHERS BREATH…….

RAJ COULD DISTINCTLY HEAR NAINA'S HEART; BEATING FASTER ND FASTER WITH EACH PASSING SECOND……..

BUT HE KNEW WELL ENOUGH THAT HIS HEART WAS NO QUIETER ND THAT NAINA COULD HEAR HIS HEARBEAT TOO…….WHICH EVERY ONCE IN A WHILE SKIPPED A BEAT……..

NO GIRL HAD EVER DONE 2 HIM WHAT NAINA ALWAYS MANAGED TO DO WITH SUCH EASE…….JUST ONE GLIMPSE OF HER MADE HIS HEART FLUTTER…….SPEAKING TO HER; HE WAS ALWAYS TOUNGE-TIED……HER ONE SMILE MADE HIS DAY………SEEING HER CRY……..HE FELT HIS WORLD SHATTER……..WHY??.....HE WASN'T A KID NEMORE; HE UNDERSTOOD WELL ENOUGH THAT SHE MEANT A LOT TO HIM…….MUCH MORE THAN LIFE ITSELF…..IF ONLI SHE WOULD KNOW……ND UNDERSTAND…


SUDDENLY THEY HEARD A LOUD "THUD" ………..

NAINA GRIPPED RAJ'S HANDS(which were still resting on her hands) TIGHTLY ND TURNED AROUND TO SEE WHERE THE SOUND WAS COMING FROM……..

AS SHE TURNED, HER HAIR BRUSHED ACROSS RAJ'S CHEEKS………THAT'S WHEN HE REALISED HOW CLOSE HE WAS TO HER; HE INSTINCTLY TUMBLED BACK…..AWAY FROM HER…….BUT HIS HANDS……THEY REFUSED TO BULGE ND STAYED FIXED RIGHT WERE THEY HAD BEEN………IN NAINA'S HANDS

THE "THUD" SOUND HAD BEEN MADE BY THE WINDOW WHICH HAD BEEN BROKEN DUE TO THE STRONG WINDS………….

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