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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
hey read all d parts jus nw..pl continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
THEY SEE THAT THE (UN)FRIENDLY DOG THEY HAD INJURED HAD CM BACK TO TAKE REVENGE......ND THAT 2 WITH SM MORE FRNDS.............EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!


HOW WILL THE 2 ESCAPE NOW.......FIGHTING SEEMS NO OPTION.......'COS THAT'LL PRONOUNCE DEATH FOR SURE!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
RAJ ND NAINA BOTH STARE AT THE DOGS WITH EYES FULL OF HORROR …..

RAJ- Naina bhago……..jaldi!!

Naina nd raj both run a fas as their legs can carry them….with the heavy backpacks on their back……they run nd run nd the dogs keep chasing them…

Finally naina gets tired of running nd stops for a second….she's panting nd raj sees ths…he reaises that naina is relly tired….bt he also hears the sound of the dog barking cm nearer nd nearer……..

He suddenly spots a tree, nd asks naina 2 climb up….which she does….he then follows her up…….so there they r……both of them, on the tree…..

The dogs cm near the tree, nd catching their scent, they look up nd see the 2 of them….
He poor dogs cannot climb up so they stay down and keep barking at raj nd naina ……..naina is still shocked nd scared nd gets shivers everytime the dog barks….

Raj tries 2 console her……

RAJ- Naina, calm down……don't worry wo chale jayenge……wo aap tak nahi paunch sakte hain….don't worry naina main hun na tumhare saath…….tumhe mujpar bharoso rakhna honga…..thik hain??

NAINA NODS HER HEAD IN UNDERSANDING ND RAJ GIVES HER A FAINT SMILE…..NAINA LOOKS AT RAJ ND IS ABSOLUTELY IN AWE OF HIM…..I MEAN THIS MAN WAS SOOOOOO BADLY HURT ND IN TERRIBLE PAIN BT THEIR HE WAS….TRYING 2 CONSOLE HER INSTEAD OF WORRYING ABOUT HIS HAND!!!

BT THEN THAT IS SO TOTALLY WAT RAJ IS LIKE…..ISN'T IT??........NAINA IS ALWAYS HIS PRIORITY…………….NO??

AFTER BARKING LIKE CRAZY FOR A WHILE, THE DOGS GET TRIED ND LEAVE THEM ALONE…….ND GO IN SEARCH OF FOOD…..
RAJ ND NAINA SEE THEM GO ND HEAVE A SIGH OF RELIEF….THEY WAIT FOR SM MORE TIME 2 BE SURE THAT THE DOGS WON'T COME BACK…..ND THEN RAJ GETS DOWN………

HE THEN OFFERS NAINA HIS HAND 2 CM DOWN…..BT HE REMEMBERS SMTHING……
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
NAVIN- Naina, wo bahut aajib hain….wo kissi ka haath kabhi nahi thambti unless wo uss insaan par apne aap se bhi jyada trust karti ho………….aaj ak usne sirf mara haath thamba hain…..ma-baaba ka bhi nahi
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
REMEMBERING THIS ND ALSO THE EARLIER INCIDENT WHEN NAINA HAD REFUSED HIS HAND, RAJ IS JUST ABOUT 2 WITHDRAW HIS HAND….WHEN SUDDENLY…………NAINA TAKES IT ND CMES DOWN…….
A SHOCKED RAJ IS STILL STANDING THEIR WITH HIS HAND OUTSRETCHED…..ND NAINA'S HAND IN HIS HAND…..HE IS LOST FOR WANT OF WORDS……….NAINA TRUSTS HIM…………AS MUCH AS SHE TRUSTED NAVIN………..MYBE MORE……BT 1 THING'S FOR SURE, HE'S NO MORE A NOBODY IN NAINA'S LIFE……HE IS SMBDY SHE TRUSTS…………ND BELIEVES IN…..

RAJ ND NAINA THEN WITHDRAW THEIR HANDS ND BOTHOF THEM SMILE …..MORE SO TO THEMSELVES

NAINA- Thnks raj…..

RAJ- Its ok!...........chale…

RAJ- Naina humme itni raat ko jungle mein nahin chalna chahiye……un junglee kuto se bhi bhayanak janwar hain yaaha…………waha samne dekh rahi hoon……(naina looks 2 where he is pointing. It's a small cottage…actually smaller than that……must have been a place of shelter for cows or smthing once..) hum raat waharuk sakte hain….phir subha-subha nikal jayenge……..(he looks at naina for approval)

NAINA- Um…….thikhe………….haan………humme yahi karna chahiye

BOTH OF THEM WALK TOWARD THE COTTAGE………………
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
THE COTTAGE IS A TOTAL MESS………BUT NEVER MIND…….NICE COMPANY COVERS FOR ALL THIS ……….
NAINA ND RAJ WALK IN, INTO THE FILTH ND DUST …….COUGHING WITH EVERY STEP THEY TAKE………
ALSO, THE COTTAGE IS VERY COLD ND BOTH OF THEM R SHIVERING……….THEY SPOT A BONFIRE BT AS NO ONE HAS BEEN LIVING IN THE COTTAGE FOR AGES PERHAPS…THERE IS NO WOOD TO BE SEEN NEWHERE…….

RAJ- Naina tum yahi rukho, mein bahar se kuch lakdiya le aata hoon….

NAINA NODS HER HEAD IN APPROVAL ND RAJ GOES OUT……

OUTSIDE…….

RAJ IS PICKING UP WOOD FOR THE FIRE ND IS ALL THE WHILE THINKING ABOUT NAINA…….SHES UNLIKE NE GIRL HE HAS EVER MET BEFORE…..SHES JUZ SO DIFFERENT…….SO CHARMING….ONE MINUTE SHE IS A TOTAL BRAVE TOMBOY…..ND THE NEXT MINUTE U SEE HER, SHE A LITTLE SCARED KITTEN……….
Edited by shravya16 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
INSIDE

Naina is all muddled up...she's thinking of too many things at once......navin.....kma... RAJ .
Raj.....he was so different frm the others...bt ya just as navin had described him.......
Navin had always said " Raj se to koi bhi dosti kar sakta.....pal me hi wo sabko aapna bana deta hain..."
Tabhi naina had thought that navin was just exaggerating....bt now she had seen it for herself.....i mean for how long had she known raj??....hardly ne time......bt yet she trsted him.....even with her life.......rajveer...meaning victory....such a perfect name, he had absolutely won her over.........
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
NAINA- Raj ab tak nahi aaya.....mujhe jakar dekhna chayiye...

SHE GOES OUT......

ITS RELLY DARK OUTSIDE.....SHE'S CALLING OUT TO RAJ.......

NAINA- Raj.....Raj.......Raj.......kaha ho tum raj.....

suddenly she hears a dog bark nd turns around to see a dog( nt ferocious.....very innocent looking actually).....smiling at her

NAINA( to herself)- Oh god!! ye jungle to kuto se bhara pada he....

NAINA WALKS AWAY FRM THE DOG....BT THE DOG FOLLOWS...SHE STARTS WALKING FASTER....ND THE DOG FOLLOWS FASTER......ND FASTER......NOW NAINA IS RELLY SCARED.....SHE STARTS RUNNING.............

ND THINKING ITS SM KINDA GAME.....THE POOR DOG FOLLOWS.....

NAINA STARTS RUNNING, ALL THE WHILE SCREAMING FOR HELP......"Raj.....help.....raaaaaaaaaaaaj"

naina runs faster nd faster and is now totally scared.......suddenly ......

"naina"....she hears sm1 standing close to her call out.....she turns to her right nd sees raj standing there.....totally shocked.......nainafeels totally relieved 2 see raj nd without thinking, she runs to him nd HUGS him......yes hugs him..........she gives him a big tight hug....[;)}
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
NAINA- Raj…..

RAJ- Naina kya hua, tum itni ghabrahi hui kyo ho??

SHE SUDDENLY BECOMES ALL CONSCIOUS ND LEAVES RAJ…

NAINA- Wo…wo…..(she points 2 the dog)

RAJ LOOKS AT WHERE SHE IS POINTING…

RAJ- Kya ….wo kuta??.....cm on naina, wo to kitna pyara hain, wo kuch nahi karenga……shayad wo tumhare sath khelna chahta ho….

SUDDENLY RAJ BENDS DOWN A BIT ND WISTLES 2 THE DOG 2 CM TO HIM……THE DOG GLADLY OBEYS ND CMES RUNNING 2 RAJ, ALL SMILES….

NAINA GETS TERIFIED ON SEEING THE DOG ND CLUTCHES ON TO RAJ'S HAND……THE SAME HAND WHERE HE HAD GT HURT……HER NAILS DIG INTO HIS FLESH MAKING IT HURT MORE….TILL NOW BOTH OF THEM HAD FORGOTTEN 'BOUT THE WOUND BT NOW BOTH OF THE LOOK AT THE WOUND TOGETHER…..REMEMBERING THE HORRIBLE INCIDENT…

THE OG MEANWHILE IS HAPPILY BARKING AT RAK ND WAGING ITS TAIL 2 SHOW ITS AFFECTION….ND POOR NAINA IS GETTING MORE ND MORE SCARED….
RAJ REALISES THIS ND SHOOS THE DOG AWAY…….ND THE POOR SAD DOG HAS 2 GO AWAY…..

NAINA HEAVES A SIGH OF RELIEF…..

NAINA- Thnks raj…….

RAJ- Its ok naina, par me to humesha sochta tha ki cadet naina singh alluwalia kissi se nahi dati…..phir aaj iss chote kute se….

NAINA GOES DEEP RED WITH EMBARASEMENT……
NAINA- Wo sir….um…raj………mujhe kuto se bohot dar lagta hain….

RAJ- Par navin ne kabhi nahi bataya…

NAINA- Haan wo issiliye kyoki bhaiya khud nahi jante the….unhe lagta tha ki mujhe kute pasand nahi…..unhe ye nahi pata tha ki mein unse darti hoon…..

HEARING NAINA SAY ALL THIS WITH AN INNOCENT HOW-DO-I-HELP-IT EXPRESSION ON HER FACE, RAJ COULDN'T CONTROL HIMSELF ND BURSTS OUT LAUGHING….

RAJ- Oh god naina, tum kuto se darti ho??....wo to kitne pyare hote hain….

NAINA- Arre issme hasne wali kya bath hain……raj…(she starts hitting her fists on his chest knowing very well that its nt hurting him 1 bit)……raj stop it………jao mein tumse bath nahi karti…
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
SHE WALKS AWAY FRM HIM….THEY HAVE NOW NEARED THE COTTAGE…….

RAJ- Ok baba…..im srry…naina….

RAJ CATCHES HOLD OF HER SHOULDER FRM BEHIND BT IN HER ANGER, NAINA SHOVES IT OFF……….ND SINCE THIS IS THE HAND RAJ GT HURT IN, IT HURTS HIM EVEN MORE(oh god why is naina behind the poor chaps hand)

RAJ- Ouch….

NAINA TUNS ND REALISES WHAT SHE HAS DONE…

NAINA- Oh my god!! Raj…tumhara haath…I'm so ssry….aao kuch lagate hain..

SHE CATCHES HIS HAND ND BRINGS HIM INTO THE COTTAGE …..

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