*~*~Dil Ka Rishta*~*~(LK) [Part34-Page36] - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
#41
i thought it was supposed to be romantic 😭 😭 😭 anywayz it was a sad and nice part
sad bcoz can't see laksh in pain 😭 😭
nice bcoz every1 caring for lakshya 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: *nIha*

i thought it was supposed to be romantic 😭 😭 😭 anywayz it was a sad and nice part
sad bcoz can't see laksh in pain 😭 😭
nice bcoz every1 caring for lakshya 😳 😳

awe niha im so sorry..ill make one more part..romantic one..😆😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
zinu lovely parts n ya r u a wind such long parts!!! 😆 omg!! ur gr8 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ADDITIONAL PART TO PART 8..

Laksh and Kt are at a romantic resturant..fully reserved for SN members..
Laksh holds kt's hand and puts a ring on it..
Everyone claps..
They are officially engaged..
Everyone is happy..
They have a small party..
Laksh asks for a dance..Kt agrees..
Laksh puts his arms on kt's waist..and kt puts a hand on Laksh's neck..
They both stare in eachother's eyes..
Laksh goes close to kt's lips, and tries to kiss her..but kt turns her face in embarrace..
Laksh: hey..what happened?? you're my fiance..come on..no need to be shy now..its too late for that..(smiles)..
Kt: (softly) there are so many people around..no way!!..
Laksh: (in head) if this is the condition before marrige..imagine what will happen after marrige laksh..this is going to be harsh..but i still love her..(smiles)..
Kt: (snaps if front of his face) what happened?? where are you lost??
Laksh: hmm...in my girl friends thoughts..(smiles)..
Kt: what?! who is she?? oh..who am i kidding..Me..(smiles)..
Laksh: No..its priya..
Kt: what?! (she hits him softly)..another affair..grr..
Laksh: kt kt kt..im just joking..i would never love anyone besides you..
Kt smiles, and hugs him..Laksh hugs her back..
Laksh and kt start dancing again..After a little while..
Laksh bends his face close to kt's and is about to kiss her..but..
A Voice in background: Laksh..Laksh..Laksh..
Laksh opens his eyes..and wakes up from his dream..He realizes it was all a dream..
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WELL GUYS..SO HOW WAS IT?? URU WILL UPDATE THE NEXT PART..PLEASE REPLY.. 😆
THANKS!!
😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
wow AMAZING!!! pls continue soOn!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
😆 😆 😆 nice additional part 😃
continue soon i guess uru is gonna update next
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
YAAAYYY!!!! I am back from my long tour to ottawa. I am soo happy to be back. Only, if I had internet connection, I would write a part or so.
Anyways, how's everybody? Doing fine???
Leaving I-F for 3 days is a long time.
And another thing is thank you zinu di for the fantastic and fabulous parts. They were awesomw. I will write somw this weekend too. 😊
Edited by uru_hershey - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 9
Laksh was pretty disappointed after that dream. But he knew what he wanted from his future. So laksh got better day after day, because of Ganga and Kt's help.
On that day Laksh got up on his legs and started walking to show them that he has improved his health.
Laksh was on his way to the kitchen when ganga noticed him. Ganga ran up to him and helped him walk.
G: arre didn't I tell you to stay in your bed??? why did you get up laksh? chalo mai tumhe tumhare room tak..
L: it's ok mom, I am fine now
K: laksh you are not fine. I think you should listen to your mom
L: tum bhi? maine socha tha ki tum meri dost ho leking tum bhi mere peeche mere mom ke saath ho. haina?
K: Laksh
L: kya laksh?
G: tum dono bhi naa. Laksh tum apne kamre mai jaa ke aaram karo
L: no mom. I am perfectly fine and now I can walk and talk and work and...
G: bas bas bohot kuch kar sakte ho tum. abb apni room mai jaao
L: mom I want to tell you that thank you for everything that you did for me. I mean without you I would never be feeling good right now.
He hugged his mom for everything she did for him.
On the other side, kt was really feeling bad. No because laksh didn't thank her, but because she dosen't hav anyone to hug her, or to cure her when she is sick.
Atleast laksh has a family. More like she was jealous of laksh. And before the tear comes out of kt's eye, she just leaves from there, and goes to her room in ganga's house. Laksh and ganga noticed that.
L: arre isse kya hua?
G: tumne mujhe thanks kahaa par usne tumhe bohot hep ki hai. Mujhe lagta hai ki tumhe usse bhi thanks keh naa chahiye
L: woh sab aap mujh pe chod di jiye mom. She will be fine

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In kt's room
Kt was sitting on her bed, crying with tears in her eyes. She thought why is god not fair with everyone's life?? If I am not mad with laksh but I just wish I had parents too. Just like laksh
At the same time Laksh enters the room.
L: kt tum yahan bethi ho, aur mai tumhe pure ghar mai dhoond raha hoon
K: mujhe dhoond ne ki kya zaroorat hai?
L: Are you mad because I didnt..
K: no laksh it's nothing like that.
L: then what is it? tell me
K: It's nothing
L: oh really? tunhare chehre sai to nahi lagta ki
K: kuch nahi hua hai mujhe
L: plz kt bataao naa kya baat hai
K: agar tum mujhe apnaa dost maante ho to mujhe akela chod do plz.
L: lekin
K: sirf thodi der ke liye
L: okay, lekin agar tumhe meri kabhi bhi zaroorat pade to mujhe yaad ker le naa
Kt smiles a bit with lot's of sadness in her heart.
Kt always learned that crying out in tears will help you take off burden from your heart and that's what she did. She took a paper and pen and wrote down all her sadness. And just went to sleep, because it was late at night.

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In laksh's room
L: mujhe jaana hi hoga ki kt ko kya hua hai, lekin woh mujhe bataane se darti hai. Kuch bhi ho, bhale hi mujhe kuch bhi karnaa pade, mai kt ke mann ki baat jaan kar hi rahoonga.
I promise myself that!!!
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End of part 9
PS:- I will write the next part before i go to sleep because I am in a hurry right now.
Love,
Uru
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
thast awesum 😆
continue soon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
that was awesome plz continue....soon 👏 👏

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