*~*~Dil Ka Rishta*~*~(LK) [Part34-Page36]

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Hira

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Posted: 18 years ago

#51

awesome part and a bit sad as well 😭
continue soon 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

#52

Before I post it, I wanna tell you guys that this part was written by Zinu di[Zinu29] and I am just going to add a bit in the ending. So all the credit goes to her and I am just posting it. 😊
PART 10

NEXT MORNING..

Laksh woke up early..since he couldn't sleep all night..he was thinking of kt all the time..

Kt and Ganga were already up at the time Laksh woke up..

Kt and Ganga got ready and went at sat in the living room..

After some time Laksh came and sat with them..

Laksh: mom..aap please thodi derr ke liye..hume..

Ganga: sure..i have to go to work anyways..you guys take care..okay..Bye..(she leaves)..

Laksh: kt..ab batao..

Kt: kya??

Laksh: kal jo baat tumne mujhe nahi batai..mujhe batao please..

Kt: kaunsi baat??

Laksh: kt..don't act like you don't know..i know that you know very well..what i'm talking about..please tell me..

Laksh: were you mad at me..because i didn't say thanks to you..and didn't hug you?? is it because of that??

Kt: no laksh..its nothing like that..please just leave me alone for now..(she goes to her room)..(laksh follows)..

Laksh goes in her room..

Kt: Laksh..please..i want to be alone..please..

Laksh: i won't leave until you tell me..what's bothering you..i want an answer..

Kt: (shouts) laksh please..leave me alone..i don't want to talk to you..or anyone..please go from here..please..laksh..

Laksh: kt stop shouting..please..i just want a reply from you..that's all..

Kt: (shouts) but i don't want to give you a reply..please leave laksh..go..please..!!..(she puses him out the door..and closes it)..

Laksh just walks away..kind of angry..but mostly concerned..

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After a couple of hours..Tripti, and Sahil come to see Laksh..

The dorbell rings..

Laksh goes and opens the door..

Laksh: Mom..Dad..come in..

All three of them go to the living room..

Sahil: How are you laksh??

Laksh: fine..you??

Sahil: fine..

Tripti: fine..

They spend about 15 minutes talking..

Sahil: ok laksh..i think we should leave now..i'm getting late..

Laksh: okay..

Tripti: Laksh come in the kitchen i want to talk to you..Sahil you carry on..i'll be in the car in 2 minutes..

Sahil: no ill wait here..

Tripti and Laksh go to the kitchen..

IN THE KITCHEN..

Tripti: sorry for pushing you laksh..

Laksh: its ok mom..it dosen't matter now..

Tripti: so i guess ganga took good care of you..and also that kt..

Laksh: yeah..any objections??

Tripti: no..well i just wanted to have some water..

Laksh: I'll get it..

He goes and pours some water for tripti..and hands it to her..

Sahil: (yells) tripti..are you done yet??

Tripti: Yeah..im coming..

Tripti: okay laksh..i'll leave now..bye..

While leaving Tripti put something in the glass of water..which dissolved..and you couldn't notice it..

Tripti and Sahil left..

Laksh drinks the water unknowing tripti mized something in it..

Laksh walks to his room..and closes his door..

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Kt comes out of her room..feeling bad she yeed at Laksh..over nothing..

Kt goes to his room..and knocks on the door..

Kt: (knocking in door) Laksh..laksh..please open the door..i'm sorry laksh..i didn't mean to hurt you, or your feeling..please open the door Laksh..i'm sorry..

Kt was knocking on the door..when she realizes its not locked..she opens the door, and finds laksh on the floor..his face red..and something foamy coming out of his mouth..

Kt's eyes widen..and she runs towards him..

Kt: Laksh..Laksh..open your eyes laksh..im sorry..laksh..don't punish me like this..im sorry..

She runs out the door to get some water..when she see's a glass on the shelf with water in it..and see's something foamy in it..

Kt: omg..i think laksh drank this..i'll have to call ganga auntie..

She goes back to his room..picks up the phone, but realizes that she dosen't know anyone's phone number..

She goes to laksh, picks his head up..and keeps it on her lap..

Kt: (crying) Laksh..aanken kholo laksh..please..main tumhe bataongi jo tum jaanna chahte the..please laksh aankhen kholo..

She wipes off the foaming thing in his mouth from her dupatta..

Meanwhile Ganga comes with the doctor..so the doctor can tell if he is really fine or not..they enter the room..and are shocked..

Ganga: (yells) kt..kya hua laksh ko..(she runs to laksh..the doctor follows)..

Kt explains everything that happened that she knew..

The doctor does a quick chek-up..

Doctor: (shocked) Oh! My God!..somebody has given him poison..

Ganga: What?!

Kt: Wait!! while i was in my room..i heard a doorbell..i could be someone--

Ganga: I'll cann Sahil and ask if anyone from there was here..

Ganga calls sahil..

Ganga: (on phone) Sahil!! did anyone from you house come to see laksh today??

Sahil: Yeah..why?? Me and Tripti came..why is everything alright..

Ganga explains everything..and asks him to come here..

Sahil: WHAT?! IM COMING THERE RIGHT NOW..

Sahil reaches ganga's home..and rushes in laksh's room..

Sahil: (panicked) Laksh?!

Ganga: (crying) look what has happened sahil..the doctor said someone gave him poison..

Sahil: (mummers) TRIPTI!!!!

Ganga: tripti??

Sahil: tripti also came..she took laksh into the kitchen..omg..she might have..

Sahil takes out his phone..dials tripti's number and puts it on speaker..

Sahil: TRIPTI??

Tripti: why are you yelling?? whats the problem??

Sahil: DID YOU GIVE ANYTHING TO LAKSH..WHILE YOU WERE IN THE KITCHEN?? TELL ME THE TRUTH..

Tripti: No..all i did was ask for a glass of water..and then you called me..so i didnt even drink it..i just left..i don't know whats wrong with you sahil..(she hangs up)..

Kt runs into the kitchen and gets the glass of water..which was foaming..she runs back into the room..

Kt: This..This glass..the same foam was coming out of laksh's mouth..and looks now too..

Sahil: (takes the glass) i can't believe tripti tried to kill Laksh..how low can she go..

Ganga: we should have guess earlier..that no one but tripti can do this..

Doctor: these are some medicines..he needs to be taken care of day and night..very well..you shouldn't leave him alone for once..i better leave..

Ganga and Sahil: Thanks doctor..

The doctor leaves..

Sahil: here..give me the list..i'll get the medicines..and i'll take care of tripti..i can't believe her..she disgust's me..(he leaves)..

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AT NIGHT..

Sahil had dropped off the medicines..long time ago..

Laksh was still unconsious..

Ganga decided to stay with him all night..

Kt said No..its her fault and she will cure him..

Ganga agreed..since she trusted her..

IN LAKSH'S ROOM..AT NIGHT..

Laksh was on his bed unconsious..

Kt was sitting on the sofa crying..and blaming herself for this..thinking she should have never shouted at him, etc..

Meanwhile Laksh started to come in senses..

Laksh: (eyes closed) (mummers) kt...

Kt: Laksh..Laksh..(she goes to him, and touches his face)..Laksh..

Laksh opens his eyes in a gasp..

Laksh starts coughing very hard..he starts turning red..

Kt runs and gets some Juice..

Laksh has some juice..he stops coughing..

He looks at kt..

Laksh: (in a low voice) now tell me..what was bothering you..

Kt: laksh look at your condition..i promise to tell you..first you get better..

Laksh: promise..(he puts his hand forward)..

Kt: i promise..(she gives her hand into laksh's)..

Laksh smiles but starts coughing again..

Laksh: (while coughing) omg..what is happening to me..it feels like i had poison or something..

Meanwhile Ganga enters the room..

Ganga: (walks to laksh) oh thank god..you're concious..i was scared to death..(she hugs him)..

Laksh: why mom?? what happened to me??

Ganga explains everything to Laksh..he was horrified..

Laksh: what?! i can't believe this..

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On the other side..in SN..

Everyone was in the living room

Sahil told everyone what happened with laksh..everyone was horrified..

Sahil: aur aap jaanna chahenge ki yeh kisne kiya hai?!

Everyone is speechless..but wants to know who did this..

Sahil: yeh sab tripti ka kara hua hai..
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In laksh's room
K: laksh tum let jaao
L: kt mai bore ho raha hoon
K: to mai kya karoon?
L: mai kya karoon ka kya matlab hai? Mere saath beth ke baate karo
K: kis cheez pe?
L: tumhe jo bhi pasand ho
K: iss waqt mujhe tum aaram karo, wohi subject pasand hai
L: KT..[he whines]
K: chalo ab soo jaao
L: lekin
K: lekin wekin kuch nahi, bas soo jaao
L: okay
So he just goes to sleep and after 2 hours....
I willl continue that later 😊

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saira

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Posted: 18 years ago

#53

gr8 part guys 😃 !
plz continue soon!

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-mango-

@-mango-

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#54

Recap:-L: KT..[he whines]
K: chalo ab soo jaao
L: lekin
K: lekin wekin kuch nahi, bas soo jaao
L: okay
So he just goes to sleep and after 2 hours....
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After 2 hours, kt goes in laksh's room puts her hand on his forehead.
K:[thinks] isse to taez bukhaar[fever] hai
Laksh feels that kt was beside him so he just opens his eyes.
K: laksh tuh to bohot bukhaar hai, mai tumhare liye davaai laati hoon
L: nahi kt iski koi zaroorat nahi hai
K: plz laksh, tum dekho to sahi ke tum apnaa bilkul bhi dhyaan nahi rakhte ho
L: tum jo ho
K: kya?
L: bas kuch nahi
K: mai abhi aati hoon.
Kt goes in the kitchen and gets some medicines or laksh. And she thought that maybe she could make some soup for him too.
She made it in 5 minutes! [don't think it was ready-made] Kt made it. 😆
She just goes to his room, and offers him the soup.
L: mahi kt, mujhe bas yeh medicines chale gi. mera soup pine ka mood nahi hai.
Kt did put a lot of effort in it. She didn't like that.
K: laksh plz pee lo
L: maine kaha naa mujhe nahi peena
K: PLEASE!!!
L: tuhe meri kasam kt, mujhe sach me nahi peena
K: TOH KARLO APNI MANMAANI!!!
She just leaves from there. Laksh was just joking. But maybe he thought that she felt bad about it, so he just drank it and had his medicines.
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In kt's room
K:[thinks] woh hamesha aisa hi karta hai, meri baat kabhi nahi sunta. Koi baat nahi mujhe lagtaa hai ki woh soo gaya hai[he's asleep]. mujhe kuch karna chahiye.
So she just goes to the kitchen, and takes out some clothes. Then she got some cold water in a bowl, and proceeded to laksh's room. When she got there she was in a shock, because laksh took his soup and his medicines. Wow! she was amazed by that. She wanted to say "get well soon" to laksh, but guess what, that wierdo was asleep.
Anyways, She just went up to him and did the thing that your mom's do, when you have a high fever. You know the clothes on your head and you feel the coldness, and moisture from it. 😆
Laksh never noticed that he was getting better because of kt's cure.
In the evening, when laksh got up, he felt that he was absolutely fine.
L:[thought] how can he get well so fasst? it has to be kt's magic. She is an angel for me. Well, more like a good luck charm for me.
Laksh goes up to kt, who s in the kitchen making dinner.
K: arre laksh, tum kab aaye?
L: bas abhi, woh mai
K: haan woh actually, maine dinner banaa liya hai, bas serve karna baki hai, tum bas waha beth jaao
L: tumne khaa liya?
K: mujhe iss waqt bhookh nahi hai.
L: matlab tumne puraa din khaana nahi khaya?
K: nahi aisi baat nahi hai.
L: tumhare chehre sai saaf pataa chalta hai. tumhe jhoot bolne ke lessons le nee padenge. chalo ab tum mere saath beth ke khaana khaao gi.
K: lekin laksh mujhe
L: lekin wekin kuch nahi
Laksh pulls kt to the table and forcefully makes her sit down.
L: chalo abb muh kholo
K: laksh tum aisa kyun kar rahe ho? [she was still remembering the moment between laksh and ganga's hug and stuff]
L: kt plz mere liye
Kt opens her mouth lightly, and laksh stuffs it. She chews it like, she didn't even like the food she made.
L: kya hua? tumhe pasand nahi hai?
K: nahi. aise baat nahi hai
L: to?
K: ba kuch nahi
She just kept on hiding it. After a moment laksh remembered that, kt still owes him a promise.
L: umm... kt woh tum muhe kuch bataane wali thi naa
K: kya bataane wali thi?
L: wohi baat joh mai 2 dino se jaan ne ki koshish karta hoon.
K: kaunsi baat? [she didn't wanna tell him]
L: tum achchi tarah se jaanti ho ke mai kiss cheez pe baat kar raha hoon, aur phir tumne mujhe waada bhi kiya tha. Yaad hai?
K: oh woh baat. Woh to bas aise hi
L: kt....
K: [she forced herself to say it out loud] jab maine tumhe tumhari mom ke saath dekha to mujhe bohot jalan hui thi. kyunki I miss my mom. I hardly saw her,and I just wished i saw her. Maybe i colud even get her. I thought that it's not fair that you get a mothers love, and I just stay here, wihthout a mothers realtionship.
I was really jealous of you and your mom, at that time. Whenever I used to get sick, I always had to cure myslef. And whenever my friends' used to get sick, she got a mom to cure her "ALWAYS". No one likes me.
L: so this was the thing you didn;t want to tell me
Kt got into tears.
L: look at me. I never had my mother's love, except when i was born and right now. And kt you should be happy that you got great friends, and a great life to live with. And whenever you feel that you are lonely always remember this friend. Laksh pointed at himself.
L: and who told you that no one likes you? I Love You.
Kt looked at him.
K: yeh tum kya keh rahe ho laksh?
L: I mean I like you, as a friend, ganga mom likes you, and there are lots of other people that like you.
Kt hugs his best friend really tight.
K: thank you laksh
Laksh rubbs away tears from her cheeks.
L: aur ek baat bataana to bhul hi gaya
K: kya?
L: woh kal umm.. hamare college mai exams start hi rahi hai.
K: what?!?! Now you are telling me?
L: I just ckecked my agenda
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So guys that was it.What will laksh and kt do about ther exams? Will they pass or fail? Wanna know?
Stay tuned for the next part.
Love,
Uru

Edited by uru_hershey - 18 years ago

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Hira

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Posted: 18 years ago

#55

awww it was such a sweet part 👏
continue soon 😊

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zinny.xo

@zinny.xo

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Posted: 18 years ago

#56

omg Uru..that's awesome..you're doing better than me..
Oh one more thing..im busy for some days..so if i don't continue U HAVE TO 😆
Lov,
Zinu 👏
P.S.: hehe..im not busy..but i might be..anyways..i want you to continue..im on a lil break..if you don't mind..ill get off my break if you want me to 😉

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-mango-

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Posted: 18 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Zinu29
omg Uru..that's awesome..you're doing better than me..
Thank you soo much. But you are better than ne and that's a FACT! No one can change it.
Oh one more thing..im busy for some days..so if i don't continue U HAVE TO 😆

Okie Dokie. Me have no problem with that.
Lov,
Zinu 👏
P.S.: hehe..im not busy..but i might be..anyways..i want you to continue..im on a lil break..if you don't mind..ill get off my break if you want me to 😉

It's okay. But I really want you back after your break. And enjoy your break.😊 So when your break is over. Just let me know.😉

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zinny.xo

@zinny.xo

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Posted: 18 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: uru_hershey

Love,

Zinu👏

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-mango-

@-mango-

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#59

What was that for???
No I am just joking! 😆 😆
But what was the point posting that message?
Was it just that you wanna increase your no. of posts???
Not a good habit di!🤪
😆 😆
I will write the next part. Okay.