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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 5
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At the park...
Laksh saw kt just sitting there with tears in her eyes.
Laksh goes and sits beside her on the bench.
L: Kt
Kt just ignored him.
L: kt look
K: mijhe tums koi baat nahi karni laksh. Plz chale jaao yahan se.
L: Dekho kt agar yeh sab meri vajeh seh hua hai to I am really sorry
K: isme tumhari koi galati nahi hai [still crying]
L: to mere samne dekho
K: nahi
L: plz kt
Kt looks in laksh's eyes. He wanted forgiveness from her, and how can she say no?
K: laksh mai
L: kt chalo cummon ab yeh aansoon pochho aur chalo lets do something fun.
K: like?
L: like umm.. kahin ghoom ne chale
K: nahin laksh mera mood nahi hai
L: arre aise kyun mood nahi hoga?
K: plz laksh
L: to aaj shyaam hum dinner pe chale?
Kt didn't reply for 2 seconds.
L: ab yeh mat kehna keh dinner pe jaane ke liye mood nahi hai
K: okay laksh
So these to friends planned to go on a beautiful dinner night. Well actually "BEST FRIENDS" planned to go on a beautiful ddinner night.
L: I will pick you up at 8:00
K: I don't ave a problem with that.

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At kt's house
Laksh came right on time, and picked up kt from her house. So what do you guys think is going to happen in their beautiful dinner night? Any guesses?
There is a big twist coming up.
PS:- I will update one more part tomorrow, and zinu di is going to update till friday/saturday
And the last thing is I hope zinu di is going to have a good day. Sometimes we have no control on the time. It just flies away leaving sorrows ehind for a period of time. But it also fills our lives with happiness in a short period of time. 😊
Love,



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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
awe uru urs o sweet. and so is ur fanfic..its AWESOME!! 😆 please continue 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi guys..Uru was unable to edit the twist part..i have no clue what twist she was gonna come up with..but im writing the next part..right as Uru promised you guys..there is going to be a twist, and romantic scenes in the next part.. 😆 😉
It will come by tomorrow..Thanks. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok zinu29!!!
keep up da gud work guys!
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PART 6

Laksh takes kt to an expensive resturant..
The manager of the resturant guides them to their seat..he takes them to a room..with candles lit all over..and its just them alone..The waiter gives them the menu..and says he'll be back..right when you ring this bell..They both look at the bell..The waiter leaves..

Kt: wow! i never expected so much..(she looks at the menu)..Omg..this is all so expensive..lets go somewhere else..(she gets up)..
Laksh: kt please..sit down..i didn't get you here so we can leave..now just pick anything..and i'll pay..ok..
Kt: but laksh its too much expensive..
Laksh: kt..we--
Before he could finish the phone rings..
Laksh: (on phone) hello??
It's his work..(International Desigener's Company)..
Owner of the company[OC]: hello laksh??
Laksh: yes sir??..any problem..
OC: yes..i need you and kt to come right down..right now..not anything that urgent..but we need you..
Laksh: ok sir..right away!!
Laksh hangs up..
Laksh: sorry kt..our day is ruined..we have to go to work..right away..its urgent..
Kt: ok..no problem..lets go..
Laksh went to the door..and tried to open it..but it was locked..
They both got confuzed..Laksh started banging and yelling at the door..Kt went and rang the bell but no one owuld come..
A not slipped in the door..
Laksh picked it up and read it..
"You have no chance of survival..
You are going to rott and die here..
This is not a resturant..
This is your time to suffer..
You will get no food or water..
You will die here..
If you want to survive..
You have to work with us..
What kind of work you say??..
Well..you have to work with us in kidnapping eveyone in your family..
The boy's family..since the girl dosen't even have a family..
You have a choice..
Either agree..or Die!!
You make the choice..
I'm sure you'll agree..
- Anonymous"
Kt: great!! now what??..(she gets scared)..
Laksh points at the window..takes out a pen and writes not to say anything..and shows it to kt..kt nods..
Laksh quietly goes to the window..and kt follows..
Laksh looks down the window..and see's security..Kt grabs laksh's cellphone..
Kt sends a message to the company..
"Hello..please come here..(at this address)..
We are in deep trouble..this was supposed to be a resrturant..
But it's not..Please help us..We are locked in a room..
- Kt and Laksh"
She sends the message..It was sent..
Meanwhile laksh see's kt's duppata getting on fire..
Laksh: (yells) Kt!!!!..(runs towards her)..
He takes off her duppata and puts off the fire..
Kt: omg..thanks laksh..
Laksh: no problem..(whispers)..there's is no way we can get out of here..what will we do??
Kt: (whispers) don't worry..she shows him the message..
Laksh smiles and mouths "Thank-You"..
Meanwhile they hear Police Sirens..they both look out the window..Laksh hides his cellphone in his pocket..
The goons come in and get a hold of laksh..
Kt: (screams) Laksh!!
Laksh: kt tum bhaago yaha se..main sab sambhal loonga..tum jao..
Kt: nahi laksh..main tumhe chodke nahi jaoongi..
Laksh: tumhe meri kasam kt..kt jao please..
Meanwhile the goons start hitting laksh..and kt is still standing there..
Laksh: (in a painful voice) (screams) joa kt..please..kt bhaago..
She runs down to the police and inform them..
They come running up..along with kt..and the work people she messaged..
Laksh is being choked..still..The police take their guns out..and point at the goons..
The goons take their knives out and point it close to Laksh's throat..
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Goons[G]: drop your guns..right now..or you'll find him dead..
Laksh: NO!! i dont care about my life..SHOOT!! SHOOT!! SHOOT!!
Everyone is shocked!!
One goon stabs Laksh with a knife..and runs..other's follow..
Laksh falls down on his knees..
Laksh: (yells) CATCH THEM..RIGHT NOW..THEY WILL KILL MY FAMILY MEMBERS..PLEASE..CATCH THEM..(he puts his hand on his stomach..where he got stabbed)..
Kt runs to him crying..
Kt: (crying) why did you do this laksh?? why did u--
Laksh: kt..its no big deal..nothing will happen..i just want my family to be saved..
2 police person stay behind, while the rest are gone to catch the goons..
The people from the company run to laksh..
Owner of the Company[OC]: kt..lets take him to the hospital right away..
Kt nods..but laksh has already fainted..
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The goons reach SN..and everyone is shocked to see them..and get scared..(they are all sitting ing the living room)..
The police reach there too..
The police and goons have a fight..while everyone is scared..and runs up to laksh's room..
In there they see laksh's photo on the fall is fallen down..and broken into peices..Everyone is shocked..
DOWNSTAIRS..
The police shoot the goons, as there is no other option left..the goons fall on the floor..the police take them, and throw them in the van(or watever its called lol😆)..
Tulsi went and picked up the photo..glass was chattered everywhere..
Tulsi: Mihir..
Mihir: hmm??
Tulsi: Laksh ko phone lagao..
Mihir: ok..
Mihir calls laksh..
Mihir: phone nahi utha raha hai..
Mhir: (on phone) (relieved) hello?? hello laksh??
Its kt on the phone..
Kt: Ji..um..main kt hoon..
Mihir: Kt?? (he dosent know her, so he gets confused)
Tulsi takes the phone from mihir..
Tulsi: hello?? kt beta?? laksh kaha hai??
Kt: (crying) woh..woh..hospital mein hai..aap jaldi se yaha aa jaieye please..(she tells the address)..
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IN THE HOSPITAL..
Tulsi and everyone else reaches the hospital..and are worried..
Tulsi: (goes to kt) kt..laksh kaha hai?? kya hua??
Kt just points to the window of the ICU..and cries..
Everyone takes a sneak in the window, and see's laksh badly hurt..and stabbed..Everyone is horrified..
Tulsi: yeh sab kaise hua kt?? (she shakes her a lilttle) kaise hua yeh?? (she's not yelling)..
OC: dekhiye..yeh sab kuch gundo(goons) ne kiya hai..
He explains everything that happened..that he know, like how..he got the message from Laksh's cell..but kt messaged it..and how he got stabbed, etc..
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The doctor comes out of Laksh's room..
Mihir: doctor..how is laksh??
Doctor: he has been beaten up badly..he needs to rest for a couple of weeks..he's fine though..
Sahil: can we meet him?? is he consious??
Doctor: yes..he is consious..you can go meet him..but dont touch hima anywhere near his stomach, or head..mostly stomach because we just did the stiches, and its not fully proper yet so yah..
Everyone agrees and goes in..
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IN LAKSH'S ROOM..
Laksh is just laying on the bed..moaning in pain..
Tulsi: Laksh..
Laksh turns his face, and see's everyone..
Laksh: daadi..I..
Tulsi: i know laksh..why didnt you call and inform us?? now look what happened to you..see...
Everyone is crying and worried..
Laksh: don't worry about me daadi..are you guys alright?? the goons didnt hurt you did they..(he tries to get up but is unable so he says "ow" in pain)..
Tulsi: you lay down..don't even get up..
Laksh lays back down..
Tulsi: the goons didnt even touch us laksh..the police came and took them--
Laksh: (in relief) oh thats good..you didnt get hurt..but..(to OC)..um..sir..why did u call me and say it was urgent?? any problem..
OC: ah..the surprize is ruined so ill tell you..we called you guys..because we had a little party..since u got promoted as the manager..so we wanted to surprize you..but you..you scared us all to death..everyone is worried for you right now..
Laksh: oh..sir..you didnt need to do that..
OC: good thing i did..or else u would have been trapped in there..and none of us would have known..now you take care ok..and you dont need to come to work for--
Laksh: (sad) what?! im fired..oh no..
OC: no no no laksh..you're not fired..u need to rest..so ur taking days off..until you fully get better..
Laksh: but the work..
Tulsi: No...
Laksh: but the exams..
Tulsi: No...i'm gonna talk to your college..they're going to give you the exams later on..ok..
Laksh: But..
Ganga: (comes in the door) no buts laksh..
Laksh is happy to see ganga there..
Ganga goes near laksh, and sweetly kisses him on his forehead..
Ganga: you're not going anywhere until you get better ok..(smiles)..
Laksh: (gives a sweet smile) ok mom..as you say..
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HEY GUYS..SORRY FOR THE DELAY..I WAS KIND OF BUSY..ANYWAYS..HERE IT IS..PLEASE REPLY.. 😆
THANKS!! 😉
NEXT PART WILL BE UP BY TODAY OR TOMORROW.. 😳
LOVE,
ZINU
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Edited by Zinu29 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow zinu such a long part
keep up the good work 👏
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PART 7

THE NEXT MORNING..
Laksh was discharged from the hospital..but still couldn't walk properly..as he felt pain..

IN SN[Shaanti Niketan]

Laksh is told by ganga to rest..he is in his room..its 2:00 p.m. (noon)..
Laksh is reading a magazine, sitting on his bed..While Tripti walks in..

Tripti: Laksh..
Laksh: yeah mom??
Tripti: Come downstairs and eat..
Laksh: Mom..i can't walk properly..it hurt--
Tripti: (yells) Shut-Up Laksh..and come downstairs..I know this is an act of yours to stay away from yuor exams..
Tripti is angry..she pulls laksh out of bed..and drags him outside..
Laksh is screaming and yelling "Mom..Stop..Please" in pain..but she won't care..she took her out his room and threw him to the stairs..
Tripti: (yelling) NOW WALK OR I'LL PUSH YOU DOWN THE STAIRS..😡
Laksh is just saying mom please dont do this..in pain..
Sahil: (from downstairs) (yells) TRIPTI!!!!!!! (he runs up the stairs)..
Everyone comes out of their rooms..and see's laksh sitting on the stairs and crying..
Sahil: HOW DARE YOU TRIPTI..IF YOU DON'T KNOW HOW TO TAKE CARE OF SOMEONE THEN DON'T..LEAVE..(he points in the other direction)
Tripti: But Sahil..I..
Ganga steps in..from the door..
Sahil: (angry) LEAVE!!!! NOW!!!!
Tripti angrily leaves..
Ganga: (worried) (yells) Laksh...(she runs up to him)..Sahil call the ambulance..
Laksh's stiches open, and blood starts coming out og his stomach..
Everyone is shocked..and mad at Tripti..
Ganga: (sits beside laksh) laksh..laksh..look here laksh..
Laksh turns his face around..crying..
Ganga hugs him..
Laksh: (crying in pain) mom..
Ganga: (crying) nothing will happen to you laksh..
Meanwhile Sahil calls the ambulance..and Ganga talks to Laksh..Kt comes in the to meet Laksh..
Kt: (to tulsi) hi..
Tulsi: hi kt..(in a lost voice)..
Kt: what's wrong?? (she look's up at laksh hugging ganga)
Meanwhile the ambulance comes..Sahil talks to the doctor on phone..
Kt gets confuzed
Kt: what happened?? can anyone please tell me??
Laksh: (crying) kt..i..i..i..i fell..that's all..
Kt: (runs up to laksh) laksh..lets see..omg..laksh..why did you get out of bed?? doctor said to rest right..
The ambulance comes..and takes laksh to the hospital..while tripti stays back..since she's angry at sahil for yelling at her..and laksh for not listening to her..
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IN THE HOSPITAL

Doctor comes out of Laksh's room..
Sahil: doctor..how's laksh??
Doctor: look..because of the opening of stiches..he had internal bleeding..if this continues one more time..his condition can go critical..
Sahil: yes..we'll take care..
Doctor: you can go meet him if you want..but don't wake him up..he needs rest..
Sahil, Ganga, Tulsi, Mihir, and Kt go inside his room..
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IN LAKSH'S ROOM

Laksh was unconsious..
Everyone steps in..
Ganga sits beside laksh..and moves hand softly..through his soft hair..
Sahil and everyone else it just standing there..
Sahil: I think we should let him rest..i'll go ask the doctor when we can dischage him..(he leaves)..
Ganga: Jaane Tripti ko Laksh se kya dushmani hai..isne kya kiya hai..
Tulsi: Ganga..main chahti hoon ke..tu Laksh ko thode dino tak apne ghar le ja..tu samajh rahi hai na main kya keh rahi hoon??
Ganga: Ji maa..main le jaongi..par Sahil ko--
Mihir: Usse hum samjha denge..
Meanwhile Sahil comes back and says we can discharge him now..
Mihir: Sahil..beta..thode dino ke liye Laksh..Ganga ke ghar jaa raha hai..theek hai??
Sahil: ok..i have no problem in that..i'll be happy..becouse if he stays with Tripti then..
Ganga: Thank-You Sahil!!
Sahil: no need..i want you to take him home with you..
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Mihir, Sahil, and Tulsi leave for SN..
Ganga asks Kt if she would like to stay over her place..so she can keep Laksh company..Kt agrees..
Ganga, and Kt, take Laksh to Ganga's House..
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IN GANGA'S HOUSE

Ganga guides Laksh to his room..and show's Kt towards her room..
Ganga: thank you for staying here kt..you'll keep laksh some company..(smiles)..
Kt: (smiles)..it's no problem auntie..i'm fine with it..
Ganga: Ok..you can un pack..till then i'll serve dinner..ok..
Kt: wait auntie..i'll help you..
Ganga: On one condition..
Kt: what??
Ganga: From now onwards..you will call me Mom..Okay??..(smiles)..
Kt: ok.....Mom..(smiles)..
Ganga: come lets go..wait kt..could you see if laksh is awake yet??
Kt: sure..
Ganga leaves for the kitchen, and Kt leaves for Laksh's room..
After a while Kt comes to the kitchen..
Ganga: is he up??
Kt: not yet..but he's mummering something..i don't know what..
Ganga: kt..could you see if this is ok or not..i'll go see him..
Kt: ok..sure!!..
Ganga leaves to see Laksh..
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IN LAKSH'S ROOM..

Ganga see's Laksh mummering about Tripti pushing him..Ganga is shocked!!
Ganga goes and sits next to him..
She sweetly picks his head up..and puts it on his lap..
She sweetly moves his hand through his hair..continuesly..
Ganga: Laksh..
Laksh wakes up..and opens his eyes..
Laksh: mom??
Ganga: yes me..(smiles)..you're staying at my place until you get better..
Laksh: But dad--
Ganga: He agreed himself..(smiles)..
Laksh: (smiles) really??
Ganga: yes..now are you hungry..??
Laksh: Very..
Ganga: you stay here..don't move..i'll get you some move..(she goes to the door)..don't move laksh..(smiles, and leaves)..
She comes back with kt..and food😆..
Laksh is just laying ong the bed..relaxing..
Kt and Ganga keep the food on the dressing table..
Ganga picks up laksh's head, while kt picks up the pillow, and keeps it against the wall..
Ganga helps Laksh sit up..he yells "ow" sevral times..but he finally sits up..
Laksh: (looks at kt)...Kt??!! (he gets confuzed)..
Ganga: yea..she's staying here to keep you company..(smiles)..
Laksh: (in his head) how sweet!!..(smiles)..
Kt and Laksh look at each other and smile..
Ganga walks to laksh with the tray of food..
Ganga: Ok laksh..here..your food..
Laksh: aren't you both going to eat??
Kt comes and stands beside Ganga..
Ganga: kt..you can go eat if you want..i won't eat until he dosen't..
Kt: no its ok..i can wait..
Laksh: (looks at both of them) VERY WRONG!!!!!! this has got to stop..
Ganga and kt look at each other..confuzed..
Laksh: Mom, Kt, first you guys eat..then i will..
Ganga: no laksh..you eat--
Laksh: you want me to get up..
Ganga: NO no no no no no..ok ok..i'll eat..you don't even dare get up..
Laksh laughs..
Laksh: kt you also....(he begins to get up)..Ow!!!
Kt: (sits on the bed) ok ok ok..i'm eating..i'm eating..
Ganga and Kt stuff some food in their mouth..Laksh is laughing..
Ganga: (holds out a peice of food, close to his mouth) here..we had some..now you have it!!
Laksh sweetly opens his mouth, and eats the food..
Like that Laksh threatens Ganga and Kt..that he will get up, and yell..if they don't eat..They both don't want him to get hurt..so they quietly eat..and so does Laksh..
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AFTER DINNER..
Laksh slips back into his bed..and sleeps flat since he can't turn or anything..because it would hurt him..
Laksh was bored of sleeping on one side..so he tried to turn a little..
Laksh: Ow!!!!! god!! this stupid stiches!! hmph..OW!!!!!!!!
Kt comes running in..
Kt: (worried) are you okay laksh?? you need anything??
Laksh: no kt..its fine..im just trying to turn..ow!!!..grr...
Ganga comes running..
Ganga: (worried) laksh..what happened?? you okay??
Ganga see's laksh struggling to turn..
Ganga: Laksh..stop..you'll open your stiches again..and then your condition will be worse..
Ganga see's tears coming out of Laksh's eyes..
Ganga: what happened laksh..why are you crying..
Laksh: this hurts..i can't do anything..i can't walk..i can't get up..i can't sleep..mom..this is bad..its like im paralized or something..
Ganga sweetly hugs laksh..
Ganga: its ok laksh..i know it feels horrible..calm down laksh..
Laksh just cries..but is happy to have ganga with him..instead of tripti..remebering what happened this morning..with him..
Ganga: Laksh just try to go to sleep ok..ill stay here with you until you do..
Laksh stops crying..
Ganga patted his head sevral of times, trying to make him go asleep..
Laksh: mom..this is horrible!!
Ganga: i wish there was a way laksh..i don't know how to cure this..
Laksh: oh god!! i can't tolerate this pain anymore..help me god...
After half an hour of the pain he went through yelling, and screaming..he finally fell asleep..Ganga sweetly kissed him on his forehead..(she was crying)..asn quietly went to sleep on the sofa beside his bed..incase he wakes up, or is in pain, etc..
Kt comes in..
Kt: (whispers) is he sleeping..
Ganga nods..
Kt: wow! i heard all the screaming and yelling..i can't believe how much it hurts..
Ganga: (crying) yeah..i hope he gets well soon..i can't tolerate seeing him like this..ok well kt..you must be tired..go to sleep..
Kt: i am but i feel kind of uncomfortable seeing laksh in pain, and me not helping him in any way..when im with him..why don't you do one thing..i'll stay here..and you can go sleep..
Ganga: are you fure you can handle that?? he went to sleep after a lot of trouble..
Kt: don't worry..i'll handle it..
Ganga: Are you sure??(kt nods)..well if you need anything in right beside this room..okay?? just call me..(she smiles)
Ganga: (walks to wards kt) (kisses her forehead, smiles) thank you..(leaves)..(kt just smiles, and nods)..good night..
Kt: good night..
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OK GUYS..SO HOW WAS IT?? ROMANTIC SCENE COMING UP IN NEXT PART..PLEASE REPLY.. 😆 👏 😳
THANKS!! 😉
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wot are you zinu???? u write such huge parts and they are too good 👏
romantic part yaayyy can't wait 😳
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gr8 update as usuual... keep up the gud wrk!!!
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PART 8

Ganga leaves for her room..Kt lies down on the sofa, beside Laksh's bed..and just stares at him..
Kt: (in her head) wow! i can't believe he's going through so much pain..must be harsh!!..
She closes her eyes..but dosen't sleep..
After about 2 hours..(1:00 a.m.)
Laksh: (tries to get up) urgh!!..god!! (he gets tears in his eyes)..(he softly says) mom..OW!!!
Kt wakes up..and see's him struggling..
Kt: (gets up and walks towards him) Laksh..what happened?? you okay??
Laksh: yeah..where's mom??
Kt: she's sleeping..do you need any help?? i'm here to help you..
Laksh: (emabressed) i..i..i..i have to sort of..go..to..the..washroom...
Kt: ok..i'll help you get up..
She sweetly puts her hand behind Laksh's Head..and the other around his waist..so he can get up..
Laksh smiles, but says "OW!!" sevral times..
Laksh: thanks kt..if you wouldn't have been here then..
Kt: ok..come ill guide you to the door of the washroom..
Kt keeps her hand behind laksh's back holding his waist..and holding his hand with her other hand..
Laksh: ok..finally..thanks kt..(smiles, and kisses her on her cheek)..
After about 5 minutes he comes out..Kt is sitting on the bed waiting for him..
Laksh opens the door..
Laksh: Oh god!!
Kt walks towards him, and does the same thing..Laksh sits on the bed with a "ow"..
Laksh: kt..how come you aren't sleeping??
Kt: well..well..i..just..wanted to help you..
Laksh: (smiles) really??
Kt: yeah..i guess so..
Laksh: (smiles) thank you!!..well you can go sleep now..i'll manage on my own..
Kt: no laksh..im staying here..
Laksh: well..why don't you call my mom instead??
Kt: uh..um..well..no..i'll stay here..ok..you go to sleep..
Laksh: are you sure??
Kt: yeah..(she helps him lay on the bed)..
Laksh just closes his eyes..but can't sleep..Kt does the same thing..(on the sofa)..
Meanwhile Ganga comes in to see how laksh and kt are doing..because she's couldn't sleep either..
Ganga goes adn sits near Laksh..and touches his forehead..and Laksh opens his eyes..
Laksh: (softly) mom..(smiles)..
Ganga: didn't sleep yet??
Laksh: neither did you..
They both smile..Ganga kisses Laksh on his forehead..Meanwhile kt opens her eyes..
Kt: oh..is he up?? laksh you need anything..
Laksh and Ganga looks at kt, and are smiling..
Laksh: no..its ok kt..you can sleep..
Ganga: kt..why don't you go to your room now?? you must be tired..i'll take care of him..since i can't sleep..
Kt: neither can i..
Laksh: omg..we all can't sleep..how rood..😆..
Ganga and Kt laugh..
Laksh: hey not funny..i can't sleep because of this..(looks at his stomach)..but you guys can sleep..what happened to you..
Laksh: hey i have an idea..MOM..give me an injection, so i can sleep..
Ganga and Kt laugh..
Laksh: what?? i wanna sleep..or atleast give me a pain killer..so that this can go away..i can't tolerate it anymore..
Ganga and Kt stop laughing..
Ganga: laksh..i'll have to ask the doctor before doing that..
Laksh: grr..
Meanwhile the phone rings..in laksh's room..
Ganga picks it up..
Ganag: (on phone) hello??
It's Sahil..
Sahil: hello? Ganga?? hows laksh?? we can't sleep here..
Ganga: yeah..none of us overe here can sleep either..
Sahil: is laksh fine??
Ganga: here talk to him..
She hand the phone to laksh..
Laksh: hello??
Sahil: hi laksh..how are you..
Laksh: uh..fine..(he didnt wanna say he felt pain)..
Sahil: tell me the truth laksh..i know you're lying..
Laksh: (confuzed) how did you know??
Sahil: i just know..now tell me whats wrong??
Laksh: talk to mom..
He hands the phone to Ganga..
Ganga: hello..
Sahil: ganga..whats wrong with laksh..is he alright??
Ganga: he feels a lot of pain, he can't sleep..he said me to give him an injection, or a pain killer..but i have to ask the doctor for that..
Sahil: omg..thats harsh..i'll call the doctor, and ask..and call you back okay??
Ganga: ok..thanks Sahil..
Sahil: no problem..after all..i care for him too..(smiles)..
They both hang up smiling..
Laksh: mom..can u help me get up please..
Laksh: (mummers to himself) this is bad..i have to get help to get up..grr..
Ganga: you need anything..
Laksh: water..
Ganga: i'll go get some..
Kt: wait..i'll get it..(she leaves)..
She comes back..and the phone rings..
Sahil: hello ganga??
Ganga: yeah, what did the doctor say??
Sahil: she said she's coming there..
Ganga: ok..thanks sahil..
Sahil: he do you mind, if i come there also??
Ganga: no, not at all..
Sahil: ok..i'm coming..
They both say bye, and hang up..
Ganga: ok..laksh..the doctor..and sahil are coming here..
Laksh: why the doctor?? noooo....mom...
Ganga and Kt laugh..
After about 10 minutes the Doctor and Sahil arrive..
Kt guides them to laksh's room..
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IN LAKSH'S ROOM..

Laksh pretends to sleep..while Ganga welcomes them both in..
The doctor does a quick check-up..
Doctor: ok..i think i should give him an injection..
Laksh: (in head) OH NO..OH NO..OH NO.......................................................... ............
The doctor gave him the injection..
Laksh: (in head) OW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that hurt.........
After like 2 seconds, he fell a sleep..
Doctor: i'll come tomorrow to check again..(she said and left, after everyone thanked her)..
Ganga went to laksh, and kissed him on his forehead..
Ganga: get well soon..laksh..(smiles)..
Sahil did the same thing..
Sahil: ok ganga, thanks for letting me over..i'll probably come tomorrow too..
Ganga: Ok..
Sahil left..and Ganga and Kt, went to sleep in their rooms..
************************************************************ ************************************************************ *********************
SO GUYS..AFTER A VERY LONG TIME..I FINALLY UPDATED AGAIN LOL..PLEASE REPLY!! 😆
THANKS!! 😉
LOVE,
ZINU 👏

NOTE: THIS IS MY LAST UPDATE FOR TODAY..AND I MIGHT NOT BE ABLE TO UPDATE FOR A LITTLE WHILE..I'LL LET YOU GUYS KNOW WHEN I'M FREE..BECAUSE IM SORT OF BUSY THIS WEEKEND..BUT YOU WILL GET UPDATES BY URU..AS SHE IS COMING BACK TODAY😆

YAY!!😆

THANKS!! 👏

Edited by Zinu29 - 18 years ago

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