*~*~Dil Ka Rishta*~*~(LK) [Part34-Page36]

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Dil Ka Rishta

 

We are starting a new FanFiction. The updaters are going to be Uru_hershey, and Zinu29.

Yeh world mai to bohot saari love stories hoti hai, par yeh love story mai ek ladka aur ladki hote hai. Waise to har love story mai problems to hoti hai, par yeh love story mai problems unki shaadi ke baad hoti hai. Hum jaante hai ke aap sab beechen ho rahe hai jaan n eke liye. Haina? To chaliye mai aapko mere characters se introduce karaati hoon.

      

Characters: Laksh Virani

A handsome guy, who is a rich man; He is a cute college student, and he knows his limits very well. Not like other people in his college.

       Krishna Tulsi [Kt]

She is really nice girl. She goes to the same college as laksh, and she has no parents. She often is mistreated by other people of the fact that she is an orphan.

      

Sahil Virani

       A successful business man. He completed all his responsibilities for being a good father. He is Laksh's real father.

Tripti Virani

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She hates Sahil even though she is his wife. She married sahil only for money and property. She is the 2 nd wife of sahil. Tripti is Laksh's step mom.

Ganga Virani

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She is a really good businesswoman. Sahil was really attracted to Tripti, that he divorced ganga. Gnaga is still suffering. After that, Sahil kept his Laksh and kicked Ganga out of his house. Ganga is laksh's real mom that gave him birth.

There are going to be more characters added to this FF, but for right now, these are my characters.

Yeh love story mai kabhi Khushiyaan, yaah to kabhi gham honge. Lekin jo bhi ho, Laksh aur kt ka saath kabhi nahi chootega.

We thought that it was a really good idea to team up and write a FF together on laksh and kt. It was Zinu29's idea. Credit goes to Zinu.

 

 
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awe thanks..oops i messed up on sahil pic..silly me πŸ˜› lol..write the next part uru..tomorrow..or whenever..u start it πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰
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kool sounds good.plz start the fiction πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Part 1
Laksh and kt are siting in a room. Together in each other's arms. Thinking about thier past.
L:kt humaara kal bhi kitnaa ajeeb tha, haina?
K: haa laksh
[Flashback]
In laksh's room..
Laskh was reading some random magazine. At the same time, he got a phone call from his close friend aryan.
A:Hi laksh
L: Hi
A:what r u doing?
L: well nothing much. Did you have anything to tell me?
A:oh ya! Tomorrow is the sale of the winterball party, that is goign to be held in 20 days.
L: so?
A: what do you mean by so?? Aren't you coming?
L: I think I won't be..
A:[interrupts] Laksh plz don't say that you can attend. We all want you to attend
L: Its not that. I mean I don't have a date.
A: OMG! Look who is talkin. College's most coolest and popular guy is talkin about having no date. Laksh there is no excuses. You are coming and that's final.
L: okay buddy, I will buy my tickets tomorrow.
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After a while, Tripti enters the room.
T: beta tumhare liye ek achcha rishta aaya hai
L: mom plz aapko pataa hai na ki mijhe is topic par baat nahi karni. Mai agar shaadi karunga to sirf agar mijhe pyaar hoga tabhi.
T: mai jaanti hoon lekin ladki dekne mai kya buraai hai?
L: Maine ek baar keh diya so keh diya.
Laksh walks away in a rude manner. Since he hated to talk about it and tripti always forced him to do it.
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At the college, Laksh did as usual. Went to his class. Where he used to sit alone. But he noticed something unusual in his class.
He saw that there was a new girl in his class.
After a moment the teacher came in the class.
T: So class, This is Kt aka krishna tulsi And kt you can sit beside laksh for now.
Laksh stared at her for a minute which made kt go feel uncomfortable.
L: hi i am laksh, laksh virani
K: Oh hi, I am kt
L: kt??... your last name?
K: I don't want to talk about it.
Since kt never knew her last name. She grew up in a hostel. She sometimes was treated differently because she was an orphan.
L: I am sorry if you don't want to talk about it.
The teacher annouced their next project which neede partners to start.
L: Would you likr to be my partner?
K: Uhnn sure I don't have a problem with that.
L: So what time do you want to meet me at my house?
K: after college? Because laster I have to start my job hours. 😊
L: that's fien with me.
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So this is how they started their love story. You want to know more. Wait till tomorrow.

PS: the next part is goignt o be updated by zinu di. πŸ˜ƒ
Love,
uru
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hey uru..awesome part..continue sooooooooon..oops..im next i forgot lol πŸ˜› well after i update..u continue soooooooon πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 17 years ago
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seems intresting......plz continue....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi wow really nice part..please continue soon 😊
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PART 2

Kt arrives after college to Laksh's house..

She knocks on the door..

Tulsi opens it..

K: ji..namaste..main laksh se..
T: haan..bataya usne mujhe..aa andar aa..
K: thank you..(she steps in)..
Tulsi guides her to the living room..where everyone is sitting..
She meets everyone..and is happy..
K: um..laksh kaha hai..
T: haan woh abhi apni job se wapas aata hi hoga..
K: ji...
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After a couple of minutes..

Laksh: (enters the door) daadi..im home..
Tulsi: (to kt) look..he has come
Laksh: (to himself) oof..i'm very tired now..
Tulsi: tired? of what?
Laksh: oh my sweet daadi..why won't i be tired today..first of all i had work..second of all i escorted someone to the hospital..thats why i took long..sorry..
TulsI: omg..is the person alright??
Laksh: yep..he's lucky he reached the hospital on time..well thats what the doctor said to me..i'll go freshen up..ill feel a little un-tired..(laughs)
He reaches the living room..and notices kt..
Laksh: kt?? oh shoot..im sorry did i keep you waiting..im really sorry..ill be back in 5 minutes..sorry..
Kt: its ok laksh..and plus you saved a persons life..you're not late..(smiles)..
Sahil: Laksh..
Laksh: yah dad?
Sahil: after you're done..can you work on a project..the one i assigned you for office..
Laksh: oh yeah..dad..im done the report..if you have another one, ill complete it maybe till today night..ill go freshen up first though..
Sahil: ok..
Kt: (in her head) he already has a job..and he also works in an office..wow..impressive..
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After a couple of minutes he came down and asked kt to come up to his room...

IN HIS ROOM..

K: nice room laksh..
L: thanks..it seems to look ordinary to me..(smiles)
They both laugh..
L: okay..lets get started on the project..
K: yeah..but laksh..its 5:00 right now..i have to leave at 7:30 okay?
L: yeah..that should work out..besides this project isn't that long..
K: ok so lets start...
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It's been 2 hours for them working..

Laksh: oh finally.we're done..(looks at his clock)..we still have 30 minutes left till 7:30..
Laksh: you want something to eat? i never offerd you anything sorry..
Kt: sure..i'd like that..
Laksh: okay..lets go down..
Kt: okay..

They both go down..

In the kitchen..

Laksh is trying to find something in the fridge..for kt to have..kt is sitting on the kitchen table..tripti walks in the kitchen..

Tripti: laksh..who's that girl?
Laksh: oh..she's my project partner
Tripti: when is she leaving?
Laksh: mom why are you being so harsh..she's a guest..you can't kick her out of here anywayz..
Tripti: (slaps laksh) don't back talk with me okay..tell her to leave right now..go..
Laksh: No!! mom you can hit me if you want..but she won't leave until..
Tripti: (slaps him again) who's your mother? i am..who's she? a nobody..go and tell her to leave right away..
Laksh gets mad, and walks out..angrily..
Laksh: kt..lets go..ill buy you something on the way..
Kt: okay..as you wish..
Tripti: Laksh wait..laksh..laksh..(he won't listen, and walks out the door)..
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Laksh and Kt stop on the way to Clay Oven..

Laksh: kt you eat..i'll be back one moment..
Kt nods..
Laksh sat on the bench and lets out a tear..he thinks on all the moments tripti has been mean to him, and all the nice moments when ganga supported him..
He goes back, and joind kt after sevral minutes..
Kt: what happened laksh?? is everything ok??
Laksh: yah..nothing to worry about..
Kt: then why are you crying..
Laksh notices tears in his eyes..
Laksh: oh..these aren't tears..this is just water..in the washroom..something went into my eye..it'll go away..its ok..
Kt: im sorry laksh..becoz of me you got so many slaps..i feel terrible..
Laksh: slaps? what are you talking about?
Kt: please stop laksh..i know everything..and i also know its becoz of me..
Laksh: don't mind that kt..my mom.......step-mom is like that..
Laksh: well you're getting late..ill drop you off at your work..come on..
Kt: ok..i work at international designers company..
Laksh: no way..that's where i work..
Kt: what?! i never saw you there..
Laksh: me either..well im the manager..i got promoted yesterday..(smiles)..
Kt: oh..congractulations..i didn't know becoz i wasnt there yesterday.........so i guess you're my boss now huh..
They both laugh..and sweetly leave..
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Ok Guys..That's All For Me..Tell Me IF You Liked It Or No..Uru Will Update Next..And I Bet Her's Is Better Than Mine..Please Reply..
Thanks!! πŸ˜‰
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gr8 ff πŸ‘

keep up the gud work!