*~*~Dil Ka Rishta*~*~(LK) [Part34-Page36] - Page 22

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Posted: 18 years ago
im bored again. may i continue 😉
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wOw!!ur sToRy is going gr8 uru!! 😛 👏 👏 continue SOON! pls!! 😳 👏 👏

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hey u guys cont. soon.... 👏 it's going gr8 😳
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OKAY..IM BORED AGAIN..😆😆😆..

PART 32

He was about to kiss kt, just when the lights came on, and everyone were staring at them, and laughing..
They shockingly looked up at everyone..and were thrilled to see everyone..
Suddenly the lights went off again..
Everyone started to scramble..running here and there..
Kt was screaming for Laksh...as she was very scared..
She finally bumps into someone, and Laksh also bumps into someone..
K: Laksh..
L: Kt...
Kt holds him tight..and Laksh holds her tight..
They all are paired up with someone..
Laksh decides to go and light up a candle..
He goes with the person he's hugging..
IN THE KITCHEN...
L: kt tum ruko..mai dhoondta hoon...
Laksh was searching for the candle, and after he found it..he lit it...
He lit it up, and saw Tulsi standing in front of him, smiling...
L: daadi..aap??
T: haan..mai...kyun..krishna ko dhoond raha tha...
L: daadi mai..woh...
T: haan haan..jaanti hoon..ab chal..jaane teri krishna..kiske haathon mein hogi...hhahahahahaa...
Laksh makes a sad face..but walks back to the room...
As soon as they both enter the room..the light comes back on..
Kt finds herself hugging Eklavya, and Eklavya hugging her back...
Laksh saw that..and was sad..
Kt was shocked..and Eku had a smile on his face...
Laksh blew out the candle..
Everyone went out the room...and left them alone....laughing and giggling...
Laksh and kt were highly embarassed...
K: Laksh..tum kiske saath the?? mujhe laga..ki tum mere saath the...
L: mujhe bhi laga ki mai tumhare saath tha..par tum to bhaiyaa k saath thi..aur mai..
K: kiske saath the?? batao naa...
L: ...(now turning red)...
K: Laksh..batao..nahi toh, mai tumse baat nahi karoongi...
L: ..nahi..tum hasogi...mai nahi batata...
K: Laksh..mai nahi hassongi..batao naa please...
L: pakka nahi hasogi....
K: pakka baba....ab batao naa........
L: (looks down in embarace, now deep red)...tulsi daadi ke saath..... 🥱 😵 🤔
Kt bursts out laughing.... 🤣 🤣 🤣
L: Dekha..maine kaha tha naa, ki tum hasogi..hmph..(turns and faces the other way).. 😡
K: naaraz ho...
L: tumhe kya lagta hai..
K: im sorry...par..woh funny toh..nahi..nahi tha...im sorry laksh... 🤔
Laksh turns around and looks at her.. 😳
L: its okay...par aage se aisa nahi chalega..
K: theek hai baba..jo tum kaho... 😆
They both sweetly hug.. 😳
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Okaieeeee...here's the next part 🤗
Enjoy!! Please Reply..Hey that Rhymes 😆 😆
Love,
Zinu

Edited by Zinu29 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part ZINU!! 😆 really funny 😆 ....plsss continue soon! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
That was so hilaantastic part.
Okay now I am copying your style of making words. You are going crazy with making and linking words together so i thought to use one of your invention. Hope you dont mind. 😆 SO funny!

So let me describe how laksh, kt, tulsi, eku, and the audience[virani members] were feeling...
Laksh: 😲 when he saw dadi instead of kt

Kt: when she figured out that she was with eku, not laksh

Tulsi: 😊 😃 just standing there looking at laksh's silliness🤪

Eku: 😃 smiling just smiling when kt hugged him. So stupid!

Audience: 😆 🤣 Everyone smiling and laughhing.

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Hope you dont mind my emoticons for everyone for part 31. 😆 they are fun.
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Zinu29

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OKAY..IM BORED AGAIN..😆😆😆..

PART 32

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Okaieeeee...here's the next part 🤗
Enjoy!! Please Reply..Hey that Rhymes 😆 😆
Love,
Zinu

Originally posted by: uru_hershey

That was so hilaantastic part.
Okay now I am copying your style of making words. You are going crazy with making and linking words together so i thought to use one of your invention. Hope you dont mind. 😆 SO funny!

So let me describe how laksh, kt, tulsi, eku, and the audience[virani members] were feeling...
Laksh: 😲 when he saw dadi instead of kt

Kt: when she figured out that she was with eku, not laksh

Tulsi: 😊 😃 just standing there looking at laksh's silliness🤪

Eku: 😃 smiling just smiling when kt hugged him. So stupid!

Audience: 😆 🤣 Everyone smiling and laughhing.

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Hope you dont mind my emoticons for everyone for part 31. 😆 they are fun.

verry funny guys!😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 31 was so good and really short Uru lol L/Kt scene was so wiked
Part 32 i could not stop bursting out laughing 😆 it was so funny anyways great part 👏

xxAnuxx
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Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome parts👏
Plzzzzzzzz continue soon!!😳
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Part 33
Next day...
Everyone was thinking about sending the two love birds to go shopping together. specially archita and pari. Meanwhile kt comes downstairs.
K: aap sab mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe hai?
A: arre kt, hum sab soch rahe hai ki..
Pari interrupts..
P: hum sab soch rahe the ki...
Archita interrupts..
A: par main bataa rahi hoon na.
P: lekin mujhe bataana hai
A: mai bataaungi
P: mein
A: mein
P: mein
K: PLZ YAHAN PE MUJHE KOI BATAAEGA KI YEH KYA HO RAHA HAI!!!
A: thoda dheere se boliye, hum behre[deaf] ho jayenge. 😆
Tulsi comes..
T: krishna hum soch rahe hai ki tu aur laksh aaj saath me shopping ke liye jaaye. tum dono ki shaadi ke liye
K: daadi yeh aap kya keh rahi hai?
T: kyun maine kuch galat kaha?
K: nahi mere kehne ka matlab yeh hai ke laksh ko aaj office jaana hai aur woh keh raha tha ke usse kuch important project pura karna tha
T: tu chinta mat kar, tu bas jaake usse utha de[wake him up]
K: okay baa
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On her way upstairs..
K: (thinks) why is everybody sending me upstairs to wake up laksh everyday? Cant they do it themselves? In the mornings he is so annoying. But he is still so cute. Lekin woh mujhe bohot sataata hai. Chalo aaj dekhte hai kya hota hai.
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In laksh's room...
He was sleeping so peacefully. But still messy boy type. 😆

K: laksh utho
L: ....
K: laksh jaldi utho naa...
L: plz thodi derr sone do kt aur vaise bhi mujhe aaj kaam hi kya hai?


K: mazaak mat karo tumhe aaj office nahi jaana hai
L: jaana hai lekin baad mai jaunga, iss waqt to mai tumse kuch pyaar karna chahta hoon. Saying that he leans forward to kt.

He was about to kiss her when...
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When Archita and Pari comes in the room... 😆
L: tum log?
K: yahan kya kar rah ho?
They had a video cam in their hands. Archita and Pari recorded everything taht was going on between them. 😆

A: we were getting bored so we decided to do this.
L: kuch achcha karne ko nahi mila kya?
P: kya bhaiyaa! take a chill pill!
L: shut up both of you and GET OUT OF MY ROOM!
P: it's okay bhaiyaaa, pehli baar pyaar mein insaan..
Laksh interrupts..
L: OUT! [ 😆 ]
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They still didnt go shopping together since of WoRk! So they just bought their own wedding clothes on their own time. [so sad]
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In the evening..
It was sangeet ceremony...
They both were looking great.

Most of the time Laksh just flirted with kt since they were getting bored, but after that everyone wanted to play antakshri since it was "archita and Pari's idea!"

Team 1---- Girls

Team 2 ---- Boys
It was the girls turn to sing a song from "K"
Kt started singing:
Kuch Khushbuyen
Yaadon Ke Jungal Se Beh Chali
Kuch Khidkiyan
Lamhon Ke Dastak Pe Khul Gayi
Kuch Geeth Purane Rakhe The Sirhaane
Kuch Sur Kahin Khoye The Bandish Mil Gaye

Jeene Ke Ishare Mil Gaye
Bichde The Kinare Mil Gaye

Meri Zindagi Main Teri Baarish Kya Hui
Mere Raste Darya Bane Behne Lage
Meri Karvaton Ko Tune Aake Kya Chhua
Kahin Khwab Neendon Ki Gali Rehne Lage

Jeene Ke...Kinare Mil Gaye

Meri Loh Havaaon Se Jhagadkar Lee Uthi
Mere Har Andhere Ko Ujale Pee Gaye
Tune Hasken Mujhse Muskurane Ko Kaha
Mere Man Ke Mausam Gulmohar Se Ho Gaye

Jeene Ke...Kinare Mil Gaye

Kuch Khushbuyen, Saanso Se Saanso Me Ghul Gayi
Kuch Khidikyan, Aankhon Hi Aankhon Me Khul Gayi
Kuch Pyaas Adhuri
Kuch Shyam Sindhoori
Kuch Reshmi Gunahon
Main Rate Dhal Gaye
Jeene Ke Ishare Mil Gaye
Bichde The Kinare Mil Gaye


It was the boys turn to start singing from "ye"
Laksh started singing:
yeh ladki loot ke man mera le gayi - 2
pehli nazar main hi mujhe pyar ka nasha de gayi
want to spent the rest of my life with you - 3
o sanam

yeh ladki loot ke man mera le gayi - 2
pehli nazar main hi mujhe pyar ka nasha de gayi
want to spent the rest of my life with you - 3
o sanam
want to spent the rest of my life with you - 3
o sanam

aashiq tera yeh dil mera - 2
main hu tujhpe fida
jaane jaana jaan leva yeh teri adaa
bin bole jaane man tu sab kutch keh gayi - 2
pehli nazar main hi mujhe pyar ka nasha de gayi


want to spent the rest of my life with you - 3
o sanam

o jaaneman teri dhadkan
teri dhadkan meri dhadkan jabse takra gayi
aaisa laga jaise jindagi main bahar aa gayi
bin bole jaane man tu sab kutch keh gayi - 2
pehli nazar main hi mujhe pyar ka nasha de gayi

want to spent the rest of my life with you - 3
o sanam
want to spent the rest of my life with you - 3
o sanam

Well other people joined in as well. And that's how they ended their day.
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Hope you guys liked it. And do tell me where I am suppose to improve in this part. I dont know who is going to update he next part. Either me or zinu di. Anyone. 😃
Love,
Uru

Edited by uru_hershey - 18 years ago

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