*~*~Dil Ka Rishta*~*~(LK) [Part34-Page36] - Page 20

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Posted: 18 years ago
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You will have to deal with these at the moment, as im really busy, no time to talk right now. I'll comment later, maybe tomorrow. 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice part uru 👏
cnt w8 2 kno wat happens nxt!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: uru_hershey

😆Apki soch toh aapke paas hi hai di.

Bas apko intazaar karna hoga agle part ka.

Aur agar aapki soch mere paas hai to mujhse khush koi nahi hoga, kyunki aap joh kuch bhi karti hai, soch ti hai, sab "mujhe pataa chal jaayega!"

Be careful not to loose you "soch"😆

🤣 🤣 gosh uru you are so funny lol i just ended up cracking

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Posted: 18 years ago
Great Part Uru awww poor L/Kt what Neha is doing i so bad i feel so sorry for the couple and this part was rather short please make next one longer and pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee cont soon dont make us wait years for the part 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

I wanted to update from so long, but it was the ned of the school year for me and teacher's were getting out of their minds and they were all gone crazy with work. Like wackos. But from now on, no school for me and Zinu di. We will try to update as soon as we can from now on.

PART 28
L: commom kt, now smile please..nahi toh, ill never talk to you..
She cries more and more..
L: kt..i was joking..please common now..mere liye has do..please..
Kt shows him a little smiles..
L: ab theek hai..chalo, hum ghar chalte hai..
K; nahi laksh..mai yahi theek hoon..mujhe apne haal pe chod do..
L: kt..aisa kabhi mat kehna..you know mai tumhara sahara banke rehta hoon..hamesha..aur yeh waada tha mera..isse mai toh kya..koi bhi nahi tod sakta..chalo..
They both walk out of her appartment..
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AFTER SOME TIME..


They both reach SN..
Everyone inside, was worried for laksh, as Neha told them, hes missing, and is not in the office, etc, etc..
Laksh knocks on the door..
Tulsi runs and opens it..
T: Laksh!! aa gaya tu..(shocked) KRISHNA!!!!!...tu wapas aa gayi...andar aao, tum dono...
They both stepped in, but there was no light..it was pitch dark..
L: daadi..light...
T: haan..woh...humari electricity kaat di gayi hai..kisi ne katwayi hai..yeh keh kar, ki humari aadhi property kiski aur ke paas hai..ussi ne katqwayiee hai..par yeh kaun hai..kisi ko nahi pata..
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Laksh takes kt to his room for sometime.
When kt enters laksh's room, it was the same as it was 4 years ago. Nothing was changed, nothing. Not even laksh's love for her.
Meanwhile kt was daydreaming about laksh and night, laksh came into the room.
L: kt
K:...
L:kt
K:...
Laksh noticed kt to daydream at night. He snapped in front of her face.
L:KT!
K: huh??!! kya?!
L: kiske baare mai soch rahi thi?
K: mai kissi ke baare mai nahi. kyun?
L: mere baare mai soch rahi thi naa?
K: haan.. actually nahi I mean..
L: kt tumse kabhi jooth nahi bola jaata.
K: laksh aisi koi baat nahi hai.
L: okay fine. Mujhe tumhe kuch dena hai
K: kya?
L: apni aakhe bandh karo
K: okay
Kt closes her eyes and when se opens it, she sees a beautiful locket in her neck.
She was really shocked.
K: laksh yeh kya?
L: jab humari shaadi hone wali thi naa tab maine yeh banvaaya tha, lekin phir mujhe kabhi tumhe dene ke liye moka hi nahi mila.
K: laksh thank you so much. I love you.
L: I love you too.
They both hug and the music "kabhi naa sukoon aaya" plays in the background. It's from the moie called Koi aap sa.

http://profile.imeem.com/XRKOop/music/5zYjnwqb/kabhi_na_sako on_aaya/
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Next morning..in SN
Kt wakes up and decides to go downstairs and help tulsi dadi.
Tulsi dadi was just preparing breakfast for everyone. Mostly it was Ganga, Nandini, and Damini, but tulsi was just their directing them.
K: laao chachi mai aapki kuh madad kar du?
G: arre nahi nahi kt. Pataa hai, ghar mai jab nahi bahu aane wali hoti hai to usko uske sasural kaam nahi karna hota. bas uski shaadi hoti hai uske baad hi woh kitchen khaana bana sakti hai.
[guys I am really sorry, but I don't know the indian tradition. So I just made up some wierd dialogue for ganga. 😃 ]
K: okay.
G: tab tak ek kaam kyun nahi karti? tum jaake laksh ko uthaao aur usko naashta karne ke liye neeche bulaao.
K: ahem
She goes upstairs really nervous and she didnt know laksh's reacton to it. What if he gets angry? but she will just do it.
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In laksh's room...
Laksh was sleeping peacefully in his blue and white t-shirt and boxers.
K: Laksh..
L: hmm??
K: laksh utho..
L: mom please thodi derr sone do na. mujhe bohot neene aa rahi hai.
Laksh gets up with his eyes closed. and lays his head in kt' lap. He thought he was in his mamma's lap.
L: mom bas kuch derr aur..
K: laksh mai tumhari moom nahi hoon.
L: mom mazak mat karo plz.
K: laksh wake up or else I will.. I will..
L: kt?!?!
K: haan
L: mom aisa mazaak kabhi nahi karti. he opens his eyes and figures it was kt.
L: oh I am sorry ktt.
K: it's umm.. okay.
L: by the way, what were you saying? what will you do if I don't wake up? huh?
K: umm.. nothing. I didn't say that. It was just a ..I don't know.
Laksh starts to laugh.
L: tumse kuch bhi nahi ho sakta. kuch nahi kar sakti tum.
Kt gets angry because he insulted her.
K: achcha toh jaan na chahte ho mai kya kar sakti hoon?
L: kya miss.kt?
She starts to ticke laksh.
L: he he he !!! kt stop.!! I was just joking. plz ok. I am really sorry.
K: okay laksh tumhe tumhari mom neeche bulaa rahi hai
L: roz to mujhe mom uthaati hai to aaj..
K: aunty ne mujhe upar bheja tha.
L: kyun practice ke liye?
K: laksh! I hate you. and stop joking. just come downstairs.
Saying that she left.
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I didn't want to add neha thing in thiis part, but in the next part she will be in it.
The first half part was written by Zinu di and 2nd half was by me.
Hope you guys liked it.
Love,
Uru and Zinu 😳



Edited by uru_hershey - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great job as usual 👏 👏 👏 .....so glad to hear that updates will be soon... 😊

Marcy.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great Part Uru and Zinu i really liked the song you chosed for the locket bit and the start was funny 😆 Kt could just not stop laughing 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
👏That was chooo chweeett😳Please continue soon Uru. I can't wait.😛😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Recap:- K: okay laksh tumhe tumhari mom neeche bulaa rahi hai
L: roz to mujhe mom uthaati hai to aaj..
K: aunty ne mujhe upar bheja tha.
L: kyun practice ke liye?
K: laksh! I hate you. and stop joking. just come downstairs.
Saying that she left.
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Part 29
L:[thinks] oh god! She is too good for me. She is just like my perfect angel for me. I just love her. I just can't help to stop thinking about her.
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Downstairs..
Everyone was sitting on the table having their breakfast.
Laksh comes downstairs in his suit/tuxedo.
L: good morning everyone
And he goes and sits beside kt.
L:[whispers] good morning kt
Kt just gives him a sweet smile.
L: toh dadi aapne humari shaadi ka kuch socha hai?
Kt got really embarrased.
Tulsi got the idea that laksh was really loving kt and can't have anymore patience.
T: theek hai laksh, aaj hi hum panditji ko bulaa ke tum dono ke shaadi ki taarik[date] fix karte hai
Laksh and kt looks at each other having a smile of happiness.
Ganga gets an idea for their marraige date.
G: umm.. laksh mai soch rahi thi ke kal raksha bandhan hai aur uske baad diwali. To kyun naa tum dono ki shaadi diwali par hi karde?
T: idea bura nahi hai.
L: theek hai dadi. mujhe koi aitraaz nahi hai. and umm.. I am getting late for office. I will see you guys later in the evening. bye. 😃
Laksh leaves and kt signs. As she wanted to spend some more time with him.
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Next day..
It was Raksha Bandhan.
It's a festival of brothers and sisters. When a sister ties a rakhi on her brothers wrist the brother gives his sister a small and beautiful present. And sister even prays for her brother's long life on that day and brother appretiates her prayer and that's why he gives her a present in return.
the rakhi looks like this for the adults.
Rakhi for adults
and for kids it looked like:
Rakhi for kids
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Next part: The festial celebration update will be up tomorrow.[maybe] and everyone [virani members] will get to know neha's intentions.😲 Hope you liked it.
Love,
Uru 😃

Edited by uru_hershey - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
ur so fast uru. faster than i am. sad, im left behind now. will catch up, atleast try to 😃
continue soon hun. cant wait now. 😛 😉

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