*~*~Dil Ka Rishta*~*~(LK) [Part34-Page36] - Page 21

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Zinu29

ur so fast uru. faster than i am. sad, im left behind now. will catch up, atleast try to 😃
continue soon hun. cant wait now. 😛 😉

Well you know what?!?! YOU ARE WRONG! You ae better than me zinu di. You are 3 times faster than me and it's just that I was bored. Can't wait to read your next part.😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

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PART 30
Hope you don't mind, if i continued Uru. I was bored again😆..

Celebrating RakshaBandhan :)
It was finally Laksh's turn, in the end, after every Brother of the family had done the rituals..
[Lakshu is in last😆😆]..
Laksh was sitting on the couch, with Archita, Pari, and Bhoomi Surrounding him...
They all were doing the rituals at the same time..
Archita applied the 'Tika' on Laksh's forehead..
followed by, Bhoomi, and Pari..
They then tied a 'Rakhi' on his wrist..
Archita had a little Monkey on her Rakhi..😆..
Bhoomi had wording saying "Bhaiyaa" on it..😊..
Pari had a 'Present' Symbol on it..😆..
They then did a quick aarti of him..
Now, the last Ritual..GIFT TIME😆😆😆..
A: okay bhaiyaa...mera gift kaha hai...laiye...
P: mera bhi...
B: ...
L: Gift, toh....abhi nahi hai...heheheh...
A: kya?? BHAIYAA....
L: okay okay..mazaak tha..yelo...(he hand her a gift)
L: Pari..yeh tumhara..(he hands another gift to her)..
L: Bhoomi yeh tumhara..(he hands another present to her)..
B: Thank-You...(smiles)...(walks away)...
A: Ooh...Woweee...Thank u bhaiyaa....
P: Ooh..this is niiccceeee..Thank u 2 bhaiyaa....
They both hug him...
L: Ohh god...you're choking me...aak!!..(sarcastically)...
A+P: Ohh, sorry..
L: mazaak tha...heheheheh...
A+P: BHAIYAA......
Everyone laughs...
Kt admires him, teasing his sisters...and they getting teased, and getting angry, easily..but still having fun...
Now, Finally, the ceremony is over..😊..
Everyone gets back into their house work, and only KT and LAKSH are left alone now...[:0]😆😆...
Laksh gets up, and walks to Kt, he holds her hand, just when she is about to leave..
K: Laksh..chodo..please...bahut kaam hai ghar mein...
L: tumhe kaise kaam..dulhan ghar mein aane se pehle, kaam nahi karti...
Kt blushes...
Laksh pulls her closer...
K: Laksh..
L: kya hai....??
K: koi dekh lega...chodo please....
L: toh dekhne do..unhe bhi pata chale, ki hum, tum se kitna pyaar karte hai...
She blushes even more...
K: Laksh..please..chod do...
L: oh god!! phir se yehi dialogue!! tum ladkiyaan itni sharmili kyun hoti ho??
K: kya?? mai sharmili?? laksh..tum..tum...CHILGOSE kahin ke...hmph....
L: acha...ab kya hua..ms.sharmili..ab tum ms.garmili ban gayi ho??
K: garmili?? kya keh rahe ho tum...
L: of-course..yeh to mr.Laksh Virani, ki latest invention hai "ms.garmili"..toh tumhe kaise pata hoga, ki iska kya matlab hai..mai samjhata hoon, ms.garmili..iska matlab hai, jisse bahut saara GUSSA aaye...hahahahahahahahah....
Kt punches him..
K: acha??
L: haan...
K: theek hai..toh jao..mai bhi tumse baat nahi karti..hmph...
L: woh toh tum karogii...
K: nahi karoongi...
L: karogii...
K: kaise??
L: kal toh shaadi hai..toh ab kya, shaadi bhi nahi karogiii....
K: NAHI KAROONGIIIIII......
L: dekhte hain...ki hum tum se shaadi karte hai ki nahi...
Kt smiles..and walks away...but feels her duppatta stuck in something..
K: laksh..dupataa chodo...
L: nahi...pehle tum shaadi ke liye haan karo...
K: laksh please...koi aa jayega..
L: toh aane do..waise bhi sab dekh rahe hai...
K: kya??
L: haan..oopar dekho...
She looks up, and notices eveyone smiling, and laughing at them..
She looks down in embarace...turns to laksh...
K: (whispers) tumne bataya kyun nahi..
L: nahi batata, to tum aise paas mein nahi aati phir se...
K: ab to chod do..jab sab dekh hi rahe hai toh..chodo naa...(whispers)..
L: kyun?? pehle tum bolo, jo maine kaha tumhe bolne ke liye...nahi tohh..........................................😆😆....
K: ok baba...mai tumse shaadi karoongi....ab khush....
L: nahi.....aur ab bolo "I Love You" 😳
K: laksh...😆... 😳
L: theek hai...toh mai bhi nahi chodta....
K: ok baba..."I Love You"...😳 😳 😳
Laksh now lets go of her dupatta...
She shyly runs away...
Laksh smiles, and then suddenly looks up, with a serious face...
L: ab khatam ho gaya naa...ab aap kya dekh rahe hai....
He shyly walks to his room...
Everyone looks at him, and starts laughing...........
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IN LAKSH'S ROOM........
He enters sighing, and coming in happily with a sweet smile on his face...
He is walking to wards his closet, when someone hits him....
He turns around, and finds kt with a pillow in her hand, and hitting him...
L: kt!! kya kar rahi ho...kyun dho[wash] rahi ho mujhe..maine kya kiya....stop naa..........
K: acha..ab kya ho gaya..bahar to bada romantic ho rahe the..ab ky hua...ab bhugto...
L: ek minute..ek minute..ek minute!! (he gets a hold of her)...waise tum mujhe dho KYUN rahi ho??
K: kyunki bahar mai nahi kar sakti thi..to andar kar rahi hoon....
L: shaadi ke baad bhi mujhe dho gi??😔..
K: agar tum parshaan karoge...
L: acha..to mai abhi tumhe parshaan karta hoon..since, tum mujhe pareshaan kar rahi ho...
He grabs another pillow..and they share a sweet and cute pillow fight together...
UNTIL....................................................... ............................................................ .......................................

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UNTIL...what happenes?? tell me naa...😔....😆😆....well, you gotta wait till uru's update, and she'll tell you what happenes...😆😆..
Hope you enjoyed this part, i was so bored..so i updated..hope any of you dont mind me..😔..
Love,
Zinu 😳

Edited by Zinu29 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
i was glad u were bored again zinu. such a cute part. aww... 😳 ...until what, until what?? 😆 😆
continue soon uru..cant wait.. 😛 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was a sweet part zinu 😳 im glad u got bored again-u shud get bored more often 😆
update soon uru!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Naa Zinu we don't mind and by the way great part 👏 it was so funny 😆 and i cannot wait till Uru updates again cont soon Uru 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
I am glad that you were bored!!😆😆Sweet part!!👏👏

Plzzzzzzzz continue soon!!😉😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
URU..empty ur PM box right now....bugging me here... 😆 just joking... 😉 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
lol, zinu, u get bored so much, but its good, so, in that way, we get to read ur great updates hunny. please continue soon guys. cant wait, you 2 sweeties.. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part. so sweet. continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Recap:---L: shaadi ke baad bhi mujhe dho gi??..
K: agar tum parshaan karoge...
L: acha..to mai abhi tumhe parshaan karta hoon..since, tum mujhe pareshaan kar rahi ho...
He grabs another pillow..and they share a sweet and cute pillow fight together...
UNTIL....................................................... ......................
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Part 31
All the lights went out! It was really dark.
K: laksh? tum kaha ho?
L: mai yahan hoon, mai yahan hoom, mai yahan hoon, yahan!
K: stop singing that song.
[that song is from veer-zaara: Mai yahan hoon]
L: okay okay, I am sorry.
Laksh comes and stands really close to kt. At that time, kt was really freake out because of then lights.
K: laksh laksh mujhe bohot darr lag raha hai[scared voice]
L: it's okay kt. Look I am right here naa?
He goes more closer to her and hugs her. Kt hugs her even more tighter.
L: kt are u okay?
K: uhmm..I guess.. Maybe.. I..
Laksh thought that it was the great oppurtunity to kiss kt on her lips.
He moved more closer to kt face and was almost about to kiss her when!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
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And everyone was staring at them...
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What will happen next?
Stay tuned for the next part.
Sorr, but this art was small, but I updated my other FF called "Pyaar Ka Anjaam"
Here is the link:

Pyaar Ka Anjaam
Love,
Uru
Edited by uru_hershey - 18 years ago

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