Laksh and Kt FanFic..LAST PART (PART 44) - Page 9

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PART 21
Laksh was in massive pain, and was screaming very loud, that everyone outside started hearing his scream..
Kt..Tulsi..Nakul..Ganga..Mihir..Sahil..and everyone else got worried..
Pulkit still won't stop crying..since that guy was holding him with a very tight grip..
kt noticed that because of that guy's tight grip, pulkit started getting a huge bruise on his arm..and told bhoomi to take him for a check up with her(kt)..
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While bhoomi and kt are gone to get pulkit's check up done..the doctor comes out of laksh's room, and looks horrified..some of his spots on his outfit, are covered with laksh's blood..
G: doctor..ab kaisa hai laksh??
D: dekhiye jo medicines humne assign ki gayi thi.. woh medicines unko bilkul bhi nahi mil rahi hai.. unko ek dheema zeher diya jaa raha hai.. aur isko rokne ka koi upaaye nahi hai.. dheere dheere karke, unke muu se, unke kaano se, khoon nikalna shuroo ho ga..jaise ke abhi unki aankho se.. yeh unke sar par padne wale dabaav se nahi hua hai.. balki koi inko dheema zeher de raha hai.. hume maaf kijiye par hum nahi jaante kaun..
Ganga is shovked to deacth..and so is everyone else..Meanwhile Bhoomi comes and tells everyone to come and see Pulkit..
D: (in his head) mujhe maaf kardiguye aap sab..mujhe aapke bete ko yeh dheema zeher dena pad raha hai..(pulls out the poison bottle) nahi to meri jaan khatre mein hai..
[shocking music please: DUN..DUN..DUN..]
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IN PULKIT'S ROOM
Pulkit won't stop crying, and everyone is shocked to see his arm swell up..
T: he bhagwaan..yaha par pulkit ki baaju..aur waha par laksh..yeh kya ho raha hai iss parivaar ke saath..
Tulsi walks out of the room..while everyone stays..
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Tulsi see's laksh's doctor holding the poison bottle, and talking to the same black dressed guy.., she sneaks and hear's their talks..
black dressed guy [BDG]: agar tumne yeh zeher usko nahi diya to main tujhe khatam kar doonga samjhe..
D: (scared) ji..ji..main doonga,,pichle do saal se deta hi to aa raha hoon..
BDG: iska koi ilaaj hai??
D: hai to..(scared) par..par..main uska ilaaj nahi karoonga..main to wahi karoonga jo aap chahte hain..(gives a scared smile)
BDG: (cackles) good..very good..ab jao yaha se..
The Black Dressed Guy turns, and tulsi see's his face..and get's a big shock..she runs to ganga and sahil, and tell them to come outside in private..
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SO GUYS..HOW WAS IT!!!! PLEASE REPLY..REMEMBER MY CONTINUATION ALL DEPENDS ON YOUR REPLIES..
THANKS!! 😉

that waz cool but plz make lakshya fine again. i can't wait to read who was behind all this. great ff i luv it. ur suspense is awesome. luv ur ff.

GREAT JOB~!!!:P continue soon!! 😛 😛 but please dunt hv my lakshya in sooo much pain!!!! 😕 😕

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PART 22

G & S: kya baat hai maa?? aap itni ghabraii hui kyun ho??

T: maine..woh..abhi..

G: (worried) kya baat hai maa?? aap theek to hain??

T: Ganga maine..usi doctor ko uss BDG se baate karte dekha tha..yeh sab unka plan hai..laksh ko maarne ka..

G & S: Kya?? kaun tha woh??

T: tum yakeen nahi maano ge..

G: maa..aap please bataiye to sahi..

T: woh..nakul hai ganga..

(echo in their heads: "woh..nakul hai ganga.."..."woh..nakul hai ganga..")

G: (sit falls on the floor) kya..???? nakul aise kyun karega??

Ooo..big shock there..nakul trying to kill lakshu -.-

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Sahil walks to nakul..who was walking towards laksh's room..seen with the same bottle tulsi saw..

Ganga, and everyone else..are behing Sahil..with kt and pulkit, etc..

S: (yells) NAKUL!!!!

Nakul turns shocked and hids the bottle behind his back..

S: (slaps nakul) KYUN KIA TUNE AISA?? APNE HE BHAI KI JAAN LENE KI KOSHISH KI TUNE?? JO TERI ITNI IZZAT KARTA HAI?? THERE ITNA KHYAAL RAKHTA HAI?? KYUN KIA TUNE AISA NAKUL?? KYUN??

N: AAP SAMAJH NAHI RAHE HAI PAPA..MAINE YEH KIYA PAR SIRF..

G: PAR SIRF KYA?? KOI EXCUSE NAHI HAI?? KI BATANA HI NAHI CHAHTE HO?? TUMHE AAJ BATANA HI HOGA NAKUL..TUMNE KYUN ISS BHAI KA VISHWAAS TODA?? AGAR USKO YEH PATA CHAL GAYA KI TUMNE..!! BARDAASH NAHI KAR PAYEGA WOH..!! TUMNE USE AADHA TO MAAR DIYA HAI..KYA VASUUL KARNA CHAHTE THE TUM..BATA..JAWAB DE..ABHI!!!!!!!

N: HAAN MAINE AISA KIYA..KIYA MAINE AISA..AUR MAINE YEH ISLIYE KIYA KYUNKI..LAKSH..USKA BUSINESS MERE BUSINESS SE KAHI ZYAADA ACHA THA..MAIN USKO MAAR KAR..APNA BUSINESS..

G: (SLAPS HIM A COUPLE OF TIMES) BUSINESS KE LIYE?? TUNE APNE BHAI KO APNE..BUSINESS KE LIYE MAAR DALA?? TU ITNA GIR SAKTA HAI..MAINE AAJ TAK NAHI SOCHA THA NAKUL..!!! ARRE MAIN KAHOON BHI TO KYA KAHOON?? TU PAAPI HAI NAKUL..PAAPI..!! AAJ SE TERA AUR MERA KOI RISHTA NAHI RAHA HAI..MAIN TERI MAA NAHI..AUR NAHI TU MERA BETA..MAIN NAHI JAANTI TUJHE..TU SIRF EK PAAPI HAI MERE LIYE..PAAPI!!!!

S: (SLAPS HIM EVEN HARDER) TU MERA BHI BETA NAHI..MAIN GANGA KI HAAN MEIN HAAN MILATA HOON..ARRE..TUNE..LAKSH KO KYA..USKE 2 SAAL KE BACHE PAR BHI TARAS NAHI AAYA..USKO ITNI ZOR SE PAKAD KAR..USKI KYA HALAT BANA DI HAI..ABHI TAK RO RAHA HAI WOH..

K: MAIN AAP PAR HAATH NAHI UTHA SAKTI..PAR AAPNE MERA AUR IS PARIVAAR MEIN SABKA VISHWAAS TODA HAI..AAPKO AGAR PAISA CHAHIYE THA..TO AAPNE MAANGA KYUN NAHI?? LAKSH SE KEH KAR DEKHA HOTA..WOH HASI HASI DE DETA.. (SHE SLAPS HIM A COUPLE OF TIMES)..MAINE AAPKO ISLIYE NAHI MAARA HAI KI AAP MERE BADE HAI..BALKI ISILIYE MAARA HAI KI AAP PAAPI HAI..ARRE IS DUNIYAA MEIN MEINE PAISE PE LIYE APNE BHAI KO EK BHAI KE KHILAAF JAATE NAHI DEKHA.. ITNA PYAAR THA PAISE SE TOH MAANGA KYUN NAHI..MERE PATI KO KYUN MAARA..AUR USKE OOPAR SE MERE BACHE KO BHI..PAISA CHAHIYE NAA?? MAIN HAZAAR BLANK CHECK DENE KO TAYIEAAR HOON..!! HUM SAB SAMAJH TE THHE KI AAP KABHI KISI KAA BURA NAHI SOCH SAKTE..PAR AAP..AAP TO APNE BHAI KE KHILAAF..!! AAPKA KOI DIL NAHI HAI..!! AAPKA DIL..DIL SE PATHAR BAN CHUKA HAI..KI KOI BHI KYA KAHE..AAPKE IS PATHAR DIL PAR KOI ASAR NAHI HOGA..!!

TULSI SLAPS HIM, AND GIVES AN EVEN BIG LECTURE..AND TAKES AWAY THE POISON BOTTLE FROM HIM..

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hey guys..tell me how it was..my continuation depends on ur replies..

thanks!!😉

way to go Zinu29
that's one of the best fanfics i've read so far. some parts even made me cry a bit. you should seriously think of writing stories instead of ekta. 😊 well done and good luck for the rest of the fanfic 😊 😊 😊

Originally posted by: laksh_ktfan

way to go Zinu29
that's one of the best fanfics i've read so far. some parts even made me cry a bit. you should seriously think of writing stories instead of ekta. 😊 well done and good luck for the rest of the fanfic 😊 😊 😊

awe..omg thanks so much..

my eyes just got watery😭

i will continue soon..

thanks aa loaaaad...😉👏😆

nice but it was kndof grosse when u wrotethat blodd was in his eyes it makesme anna through up 🤢

Do contine soon. Wow!! I never guessed Nakul to be the villian. What will happen to laksh now?

omg that waz just amazing. i would of neva guessed.

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PART 23
TULSI SLAPS HIM, AND GIVES AN EVEN BIG LECTURE..AND TAKES AWAY THE POISON BOTTLE FROM HIM..
N: daadi mujhe maaf kardo please..
T: maf kardoo?? are apne bhai ko itni mushkil me daal kar, maaf kardoo?? tune laksh ka khyal nahi rakha..uski patni ka khyaal nahi rakha..hum sab ka khyaal nahi rakha..aur yaha tak ki..uske bache kaa bhi khayaal nahi rakha..main kya karoo tere saath..agar paise ki itni laalach thi to bola kyun nahi?? hum dete, agar laksh se poochta woh deta..par uski jaan lekar bhi tujhe kuch nahi milna tha nakul..
M: tulsi..kyun apna waqt barbaad kar rahi ho..isse bat karke..ispar koi asar nahi hoga..
T: agar tughme thodi si bhi sharam reh gayi hai naa..to abhi chal aur laksh se maafi maang, aur apne doctor ko bol, uska ilaaj karde..nahi to tu usse nahi..main tujhe maar doongi..samjha?? chal..
Meanwhile laksh come's in his senses..
L: (whispers) kt..
the doctor gets scared and see's that he came back in his senses..and is about to give laksh the poison..again..
but..nakul and everyone else steps in and..
N: (yells) ruk jao doctor..aur nahi..main tumhe nahi maaroonga..aur tum isse nahi maaroge..
Nakul walks towards laksh..
L: (scared) nahi..aap wahi khade rahiye..mere kareeb bhi mat ayiegaa..aapne meri jaan lene ki koshish ki..
Nakul starts crying..
Kt runs towards laksh with pulkit..
L: kt..(gets shocked) kt..pulkit ko kiya hua kt?? uski baaju itni..
K: yeh tum usko (points at nakul) poocho.. ushi ne..(starts crying)
Laksh tries to get up in pain..and mihir and sahil come and help him..
L: wah bhaiyaa..aapne mujhe to choda nahi..ab mere bache ko bhi..kya dushmani hai aapki mere saath..maine kya bigaada hai aapka..jo aap mere saath..
T: yeh teri jaan isliye lena chahta tha laksh, kyunki tu business mein isse zyaada kama raha tha..aur yeh nahi..
L: KYA??!! bhaiyaa agar aapko paisa hi chahiye thaa to aapne maanga kyun nahii...
K: maine kaha tha naa..agar maanga hota to laksh paisa de deta..
Nakul is just standing there ashamed..
Laksh gets out of bed..
L: (in pain) chalo kt..hum ab iss hospital mein nahi rahenge..
K: par laksh tum to theek se chal bhi nahi paa rahe ho..
L: usko chodo kt..tum chalo..
it is hard for laksh to walk..since he was in the hospital for so long..
mihir and sahil support laksh..
they go to a diffrent hospital..and the doctor gives laksh a check up..
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OUTSIDE THE DOCTOR'S OFFICE
Doctor come's out of her office, after giving laksh a check-up..
K: doctor?? laksh kaisa hai..
D: dekhiye ghabraane ki koi baat nahi hai.. woh bilkul theek hai..par..
K: par??....
D: par..unka jaldi se operation karna hoga..unki body mein zeher agar poora phail gaya to patient ki haalat critical ho sakti hai..jab aap kahe hum operation shuroo karte hain..
M: dekhiye aap derr mat kejiye..app abhi operation shuroo kar di jiye..
D: ji..okay..
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LAKSH HAS BEEN TAKEN FOR HIS OPERATION..
AFTER THE OPERATION..
The doctor comes out of the operation room..
G: doctor..ab kaisa hai laksh..
D: dekhiye ghabraane ki koi baat nahi hai..woh bilkul theek hai..humne saara zeher nikaal diya hai....ab uhe bas aaraam ki zaroorat hai..
G: ji doctor..
The doctor notices the baby swollen up by the arm..
D: OMG!! yeh bahce ko kiya hua hai??
K: woh..kisi ne..
D: aap woh chodiye, aap mere saath aaiye..
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IN THE DOCTOR'S OFFICE..
After the check-up..
K: kya hua doctor?? koi ghabraane ki baat to nahi hai??
D: nahi..aisa to kuch nahi hai..par is bache ko yaha par..regular chek-up ke liye laana hoga..dekhiye maine sujan to kam kardi hai..par isko abhi dard hoga..iske saath hamesha koi hona chahiye..
K: Ji..
The doctor writes down a list of baby medicines and hands it to Kt..and says to give it to him..regularly..kt agrees, thanks the doctor, and leaves..
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GUYS PLEASE REPLY..AND I'LL CONTINUE..HOPE YOU LIKED IT..
THANKS!!
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