Laksh and Kt FanFic..LAST PART (PART 44) - Page 11

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Posted: 18 years ago
that was such a cute part i luved it. great job zinu. can't wait till the next part.
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Posted: 18 years ago
guys..not really a twist right in the next aprt..but a really cute scene in it..it'll be up soon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 26
TWO MONTHS LATER..
Laksh is as better as can be..
Pulkit is loving his dad..
kt is..loving the whole family..
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THAT MORNING...
kt is still asleep..it's 10:00 a.m.
pulkit is with laksh..downstairs..
K: (wakes up..) *yawns* (looks at the clock) 11 BAJ GAYE?? OMG!! ITNI DERI KAISE HO GAYI..
She notice's that laksh and pulkit are not in the room..she goes downstairs..and no one's home..
she is walking to wards the kitchen..
Laksh pops up behind her..and closes her eyes..and smiles..
K: (puts her hands on laksh's hands[on her eyes]) laksh...
she turns around..and see's laksh smiling..
K: mujhe maaf kardo laksh..deri ho gayi..main tumhare liye abhi kahana banati hoon..
L: (hugs her) itni jaldi nahi..tumne mujhe 2 ghante se bhooka rakha..aur pulkit ko bhi..koi to saza milni chahiye naa tumhe..
K: ok..jo tum kaho..
He closes her eyes..and takes her to the hall room..
He opens her eyes..
Kt is shocked seeing the hall all decorated with balloon's, etc..
K: laksh tumne yeh sab..
L: (softly, whispers in her ear)..happy anniversary kt!!..yeh hi tumhari saza hai..(smiles, and kisses her on her cheek)
K: (with tears in her eyes) thank u laksh..happy anniversary..
L: arre?? ro kyun rahi ho?? kt..(wipes off her tears) dekho kt..agar tum har choti cheez pe roti rahi gi..to main kaam kaise karoonga?? chodo..kaam karne do..(smiles)
Kt sweetly hugs him..
They keep hugging for a long period of time..until..
Everybody starts clappin and yells "HAPPY ANNIVERSARY"
They both get shocked..and laugh..
L: now kt..ready for your punishment..
Kt just laughs and nods..
Laksh drags her to a chair in the hall..and tells her to sit there with pulkit until he is done finishing..
L: yeh to ho gaya..par tum yeh mat samajhna ki iske baad tumhari punishment khatam..aur bhi punishments hai..
Kt just smiles, and looks at him..
IT HAS BEEN 2 HOURS TILL LAKSH WAS WORKING..KT WASN'T BORED..SINCE SHE WAS ADMIRING HER HUSBAND WORK..
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IT WAS GETTING NEAR 2:00..and kt got hungry..she got up to get sumthing..and laksh said..wait..
he came back with Rajma Chawal..he cooked himself..and served it to kt..and got back to work..
K: OMG!! laksh..yeh tumne banaya??
L: (his face frowns) kyun?? swaad nahi hai?? mujhe pata tha..(makes a sad face)
K: (smiles) maine kab kaha..yeh bahut swaad hai laksh..
L: (makes a happy face) acha..main try karoo..
K: mujhse kyun pooch rahe ho?? tumne banaye hai..tum khao =)
Laksh tries some..and winks at kt..
L: mujhe pata tha..
K: kya pata tha..
L: yehi..ki main..ek ache pati ke saath saath..ek acha chef bhi hoon..😆..
Kt smiles..
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IN THE EVENING...
Kt is getting ready for the party..she comes down..and laksh leads her to the party hall..
they enter..and everyone yells "HAPPY ANNIVERSARY" and start to clap...
Kt gets shy.. and laksh is just smiling..
Archita: C'mon..laksh..kt..cut the cake..
Laksh and kt both cut the cake..and first feed it to pulkit..and then each other..and then every1 else..
L: (looks in her eyes) cake kaisa laga..
K: (smiles) kyun?? ab yeh bhi tumne banaya hai kya??
L: (smiles, and nods) haan..
K: (shocked) kya..?? mujhe to pata hi nahi tha..ke tum..cake bhi banate ho..
They both laugh..
Mihir: (yells) C'mon..lets dance...😆...
Laksh asks kt..
L: (bends down on his knees) kya aap, iss handsom ladke ke saath dance karengi..
kt just agrees..and smiles..
L: dance se pehle..mere saath chalo..
He takes her to the baby room..where pulkit is guna stay..
L: yeh yaha pehle nahi tha..maine decorate kiya hai..(smiles)
Kt just smiles looking at him..
Laksh takes her to a corner of a room..where there are two presents kept..
L: (points at the presents) un me se..ek..tumhare liye..meri taraf se..(smiles, and kissed her forehead..)
Kt opens one of them..and see's a beautiful necklace made with real diamonds..and starts to cry..
L: kaisa hai..
K: laksh..tumne mere liye itna kia..(bends her head down) aur tumhari yeh patni tumhare liye ek present bhi naa laa saki..
Laksh kisses of her tears..
L: dekho kt..maine yeh sirf kia kyunki main tumse bahut pyar karta hoon..aur trust me..mujhe tumse..tumhare siva..aur kuch nahi chahiye..
Laksh puts on the necklace on Kt..
They both hug..and get back to the party hall..
They both share a cute dance together..
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SO GUYS PLEASE REPLY..AND TELL ME HOW IT WAS..
THANKS!!
😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
cool i luved really really nice part. keep up the good work Zinu.
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 Woops! Fast girl. Was all that presents for kt because laksh was not with her for 2 years, or was it for something else. Or randomly it was just that he loves her a lot? 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
😉

Originally posted by: uru_hershey

👏 Woops! Fast girl. Was all that presents for kt because laksh was not with her for 2 years, or was it for something else. Or randomly it was just that he loves her a lot? 👏

All 3..u'll find out later😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 27
Laksh and kt are sharing a cute dance..while kt feels weird..
K: laksh..main abhi aayiee..
L: ok..jaldi aana..
Kt after a little while comes..
L: kt kya hua?? itni derr laga di..tum theek to ho??
K: pata nahi laksh..mujhe kuch ho raha hai..
L: kya?? tum chalo mere saath..
Laksh informs everyone he it taking kt..and tells that they will be back soon..
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AFTER AN HOUR OR SO...
Laksh and Kt happily return home..
the party is over..
L: (happily) tum kush ho naa..
K: main kaise kush nahi hoongi..
Laksh smiles and hugs her..while walking..
T: itni derr laga di..sab theek to hai naa??
L: ji daadi..aap bas yaha baith ke naam sochiye..(smiles)
They both leave for their room...
T: (confuzed) naam sochu..par kiska..(shocked) acha..to yeh baat hai..
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IN THERE ROOM...
K: ek baat batao laksh..woh doosra present kisliye tha..??
L: waise..woh tha to pulkit ke liye..par ab..(touches her stomach) ab..humaare hone waale bache ke liye hai..main kal jaakar pulkit ke liye ek aur le aaounga..
Kt smiles, and thinks how much he cares for all of us..(her, pulkit, and the un-born child, etc)...
L: aise kya dekh rahi ho?? chalo..ab tum aaraam karo..main yeh dawaiyeaa le kar aata hoon..
Laksh leaves her to the bed..and leaves..
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Laksh comes back after a lil while, with medicines..he see's that kt is asleep..he keeps the medicines, on her bedside table..and kisses her on the forehead..and goes to sleep..
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NEXT MORNING..
Kt wakes up late again..laksh is seen preparing breakfast for kt in the kitchen..
Kt..after waking up..comes downstairs..in the kitchen..
L: (searching) namak kaha hai..? Oof..pata nahi kt kaha rakh deti hai..
He searches a lil more..
L: (happy) ahh..mil gaya..
L: (humming) hm...hm...hmm.....
kt clears her throat to get his attention..
L: (looks up) (happy) arre kt?? tum kab ayiee?? aao betho..breakfast abhi teyaar ho jayega..bas 2 minute..
Kt sits on the didning table, and admires him..
after 2 minutes..laksh comes up with some..prantha's..especially made for kt..
L: kt tum khao..main fresh ho kar office ke liye nikal ta hoon..
K: aaj mere saath brekfast nahi karoge??
L: sorry kt..woh darasal..aaj company ki koi bahut badi deal hone jaa rahi hai..im sorry..=)
K: its ok laksh..good luck! =)
L: (smiles) kisses kt on the cheek, and leaves to get freshen up..
AFTER 20 MINUTES..
L: (runs downstairs) Kt..main jaa raha hoon...(he walks up to her, and kisses her bye)..apna dyaan rakhna kt..aur uska bhi..(smiles)
Laksh leaves for office..
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IN THE EVENING..
Laksh enter's his room..with his briefcase..and losens his tie..
L: kt..im home..
K: lao bag do..
L: nahi kt its ok..tum aaraam karo..main rakh doonga..
K: main boodhi nahi hui hoon laksh..sirf maa banne wali hoon..
L: main jaanta hoon kt..par phir bhi..
Kt forcefully takes his bag, and keeps it in the closet..
L: tumne khaana khaya??
K: haan..aur tumne..
L: of-course..
Laksh goes to the baby room..and keeps another present there..for his other child =)
Kt comes there..
K: to tum yeh laana nahi bhoole..
L: kaise bhool sakta hoon kt..=)
K: oh haan..tumhari deal kaise rahi??
L: bahut achi kt..hume woh deal mil gayi hai..(happy)
L: acha waise..sb kaha hai??
K: woh kahi gaye hai..9:00 baje tak wapas aa jayenge..
L: (happy) ok..toh..pulkit kaha hai??
K: (laughs) tumhare saamne..
L: (confuzed) kaha..(looks around)
K: (turns his face. and points towards the bed) waha...
L: (smiles) acha..to usko apna naya kamra pasand hai huh..
K: bahut pasand hai..
They both smile..
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SO GUYS..TELL ME HOW IT WAS..PLEASE REPLY..
THANKS!!
😉
Edited by Zinu29 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
awww it was such a cute part well the last 3 parts were cute 😳 😳 😳
you update so fast that i get to read 3 updates in one time 😛
anywayz continue soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 28
After a lil while they both were seen near pulkit's new bed 😆..and dicussing the names about their un-born child..
L: dekho main ladki ke liye naam sochta hoon..aur tum ladki ke liye..
They both start thinking..
L: Kt..Priti kaisa rahe ga..
K: Priti kyun??
L: Priti is liye, kyunki uske matlab "pyar" hota hai =)
K: aur ladke ke liye kartik kaisa rahe ga??
L: chalo..naam to ho gaye.. par ab daadi, baa, aur sab ghar ke sadasyon se pooch lete hai..unki rai par..
L: vaise..9:00 to bajne wale hai..abhi tak aaye kyun nahi??
T: (yells) Krishna...Laksh..............
L: (smlies) lo aa gaye..
Laksh picks up pulkit, and follows kt..
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IN THE LIVING ROOM..
T: arre krishna..laksh kaha hai..??
L: yaha hoon daadi..(comes from the background)
T: (smiles) acha..laksh..yeh kuch saamaan hai..pulkit aur aane wale bache ke liye..isse zara sambhaal lena haa..
L: par daadi..iski kya zaroorat thi..
T: kuch nahi laksh..main kuch nahi sunnoongi..arre..main iski baa hoon..main kya iskeliye kuch laa nahi sakti..(smiles)
L: haan daadi par..
Mihir: Tulsi theek keh rahi hai laksh..le lo..
Laksh and kt had nothing more to say but to agree..
K: aap sab fresh hoke beitheye..main khaana lagati hoon..
L: kt..tum aaraam karo..main khaana lagat hoon..
K: nahi laksh..2 din se tum aisa kar rahe ho..main abhi kar deti hoon..
L: daadi..isse boliye aap..
Everyone laughs..
T: (sarcastically) krishna..tera pati itni sewa karta hai teri..uska kuch to maan rakh..(laughs)..
Karan: Laksh..?
L: ji chaachu??
Karan: (laughs) hum thodi derr pulkit ke saath khel lein?? 😆
L: of course chaachu..yeh li jiye..(hands pulkit to them)..
L: Kt..tum yaha par aaraam karo..
Laksh leaves to prepare meal..again😆..
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AT THE DINNER TABLE
Laksh served the food..
Damini, Ganga, ad Tanya..are asking people if they want more, etc..
Laksh is holding pulkit in his lap..and feeding him with his milk bottle, before he started eating..
Kt is just sitting there..looking at laksh..
T: Mmmm...bhai, khaana to bahut swadist banaa hai..yeh laksh ne to nahi banaya hai naa..(laughs)..
Everyone starts laughing..
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AFTER DINNER
IN LAKSH AND KT'S ROOM..
L: kt..kal maine office se chutti li hai..
K: kyun..
L: (sarcastically) kyun..ab kya hum yeh bhi nahi kar sakte..(starts to laugh)..
K: laksh main mazzaak kar rahi thi..
L: i know..mein bhi mazaak kar raha tha..
L: *yawns* omg....im soooo tired....*yawn*
K: woh isliye..kyunki tumne aaj bahut kaam kiya hai..aur maine kuch bhi nahi..
L: aur tumhe karna bhi nahi chahiye..(smiles)
Kt smiles, and they both go to sleep in each other's arms..
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Kt gets kidnapped by nakul..
laksh follows them..
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In nakul's kidnapping place..
K: (scared) tum..mujhe..yaha kyun laye ho..mujhe please chod do nakul..(cries)
L: (screams) nakul..kt ko chod do..
N: (cackles) hahahaha..to laksh..tum aa hi gaye..main jaanta tha..tum zaroor aaoge..
Laksh and Nakul get into a hige fight..
Laksh is getting hit by nakuls "chain" he brought with him..and is injured badly..
Laksh manages to untie kt, and get her outside the hut..
nakul follows..
N: tumhe aaj koi nahi bacha payega laksh..(he points a gun at them)..
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SO GUYS TELL ME HOW IT WAS..PLEASE REPLY..HOPE YOU LIKED IT..
THANKS!! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
Plz don't let this stupid nakul point the gun at laksh. It will be really sad. 👏 👏 👏 I think you should focus a bit on pulkit and the un born child, unless it's a teist in your story. Because poor pulkit is left out from laksh and kt

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