Laksh and Kt FanFic..LAST PART (PART 44) - Page 10

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww... I feel sorry for theat little kid. Hope he gets well soon. Didn't you mention that he is going to be abnormal? 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
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************************************************************ ************************************************************ ********************************************
PART 24
THE NEXT DAY..
Laksh is discharged from the hospital..and is welcomed home..
Mihir and Tulsi told laksh to go upstairs and rest..
Kt and pulkit are also with him..
Laksh is playing with the baby..when he accidently presses his bruise..
Pulkit starts crying..
Laksh sweetly puts him against his chest..
L: (softly) shh....mera bacha..chup ho jaa..sorryy..jaan booj ke tere papa ne aisa nahi kiya..sorry..
the baby stops crying, and laksh walks around the room, so pulkit can fall asleep..
K: arre?? laksh..aaraam karne ko bola hai naa doctor ne?? jao abhi jaa kar leyt jaao..main pulkit ko sumbhaal loongi..
L: par kt..main theek hoon..tum..
K: kuch nahi sunna hai mujhe..tum bas jao aur leyt jao..(she takes the baby from laksh..who has already fallen asleep)
L: dekha..khamakha mujhe disturb kiya..yeh to so bhi gaya..hmph..
kt smiles, and keeps pulkit on the bed..
laksh goes and lays down beside pulkit, and pats him..while kt is organizing the closet..
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After a couple of hours
Laksh is up..Kt is just sitting on the bed..and..Tulsi walks in..
T: krishna!! laksh ke liye khaana le aa neeche se..aur apne liye bhi..
K: ji baa..
L: par daadi..khaana yaha par laane ki hya zaroorat hai?? main khud neeche aa kar..
T: nahi laksh..tu aaraam kar..
Meanwhile when kt is gone..pulkit wakes up, and starts crying..
L: (gets up, and holds pulkit).. (smiling sweetly).. Arererererere..kya hua?? mama chahiye?? koi baat nahi..papa aapke saath kelenge..theek hai..
Laksh sweetly plays with pulkit, throwing him up in the air, and catching him..and pulkit is having a lot of fun..playing with his dad..and he is laughing..
Kt walks in with a tray of food..and smiles seeing laksh playing with the baby..
K: Laksh aao aakar khaana
Laksh sits on the bed, and keeps pulkit on the bed..
kt keeps the tray near him..and tells hin to eat..
L: (sarcastically) you know..mai khaata..par doctor ne bola hai..aaraam karne ko..
K: accha..jab apne bete ke saath kelte ho to yeh doctor kaha challa jaata hai??
L: woh to alag hai..
K: acha ab khao to sahi..
L: (looks into her eyes) bhai..ab to main tumhare haath se hi khaoonga..
K: (shyly smiles) Ok..
They both feed eachother with their hands..
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TELL ME HOW IT WAS GUYS!! SHOULD I CONTINUE..?? PLEASE REPLY..
THANKS!!
😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: uru_hershey

awww... I feel sorry for theat little kid. Hope he gets well soon. Didn't you mention that he is going to be abnormal? 😕

yeah im getting back to that soon!!😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
#94
oh god dont do that!! 😭 make the kid normal if u have to make something bad happen u can get kt kidnnapped or something but leave the poor kidi alone: 😆 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: halimah

oh god dont do that!! 😭 make the kid normal if u have to make something bad happen u can get kt kidnnapped or something but leave the poor kidi alone: 😆 😭

😆😆Yah I agree with her. But that twist would be really nice to read. Can't wait till the next part.👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
#96
i luved the part it was really nice.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guys sorry i cudn't post my next part earlier..i waz in skool so..yah!! but it is coming up soon!! 😉
Thank U for a the replies.. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I want to ask you something. How can you write so much in one day. Are you a robot or something? No I am just joking. 😆 You write like crazy. I just love this FF a lot, but i just keep on wondering that hoe can you write so much in a day? 😕 Anyways, this is a little present from me for your accomplishment. 👏 👏 👏 [scroll down and you will see.] ............................................................ ............................................................ ............................................................ .......................................

1 part- april 30

2 part- may 1
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15 part- may 4
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21 part- may 5
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23 part- may 5
24 part- may 5
25 part- I am still waiting for that part zinu!
You write like the wind!!! 👏 👏 👏
I wish I had that skill. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#99

😆

Originally posted by: uru_hershey

I want to ask you something. How can you write so much in one day. Are you a robot or something? No I am just joking. 😆 You write like crazy. I just love this FF a lot, but i just keep on wondering that hoe can you write so much in a day? 😕 Anyways, this is a little present from me for your accomplishment. 👏 👏 👏 [scroll down and you will see.] ............................................................ ............................................................ ............................................................ .......................................

1 part- april 30

2 part- may 1
3 part- may 1
4 part- may 1
5 part- may 1
6 part- may 1

7 part- may 2
8 part- may 2
9 part- may 2
10 part- may 2

11 part- may 3
12 part- may 3
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14 part- may 3

15 part- may 4
16 part- may 4
17 part- may 4
18 part- may 4
19 part- may 4
20 part- may 4

21 part- may 5
22 part- may 5
23 part- may 5
24 part- may 5
25 part- I am still waiting for that part zinu!
You write like the wind!!! 👏 👏 👏
I wish I had that skill. 😊

awe..omg..thank u so much😳

that really made me very happy😃

next part is up😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 25
After their meal is done..kt comes back in the room..after keeping the dishes..
Kt starts to clean up..and Laksh is pretending to sleep..with the baby..(the baby is really sleeping)..
Kt is cleaning the closet..and Laksh comes behind her (sneaking)..
He hugs her by the waste..and keeps his head on her shoulder..
K: (shyly) yeh kya kar rahe ho laksh..
L: (sarcastically) arre..ab kya ek pati apni patni ko hug bhi nahi kar sakta kya??
K: (laughs) aisi baat nahi hai laksh.. (turns around and faces him)..main bas..
L: (covers her lips with his hands) Shh.....
He moves forward to her..while she is moving backwards..
She bumps her back into a (kind of) sharp corner..
K: Ouch....
L: OMG!! kya hua?? chot lagi?? (laughs)
Kt gives him a lil push and walks away..and he comes and hugs her again..
L: kya hua??
K: (sarcastically) jo bhi hua tumhari wajay se hua..hmph..
L: (sarcastically) meri wajay se??
K: haan tumhaari wajay se..
L: dekho miss kt..jab tum takre khati ho na?? to yeh meri wajay se nahi hoti hai..tum hi to dekh kar nahi chalti..
K: whatever..
Laksh just stands there laughing..
After a little while..
K: (takes pulkit) chalo laksh..main chalti hoon..thosi derr mein wapas aa jaoungi..
L: hello?? tum kaha jaa rahi ho??
K: woh main pulkit ko doctor ke paas..
L: acha..to mujhe kyun nahi bola?? main bhi chalta hoon..
K: nahi laksh..tum aaraam karo..main jaldi wapas aajaongi..
L: no way!! mein bhi aa raha hoon..
K: nahi laksh..tum..
L: dekho kt dimaak mat khao..(sarcastically)..(he takes pulkit from kt..and leaves for the door)...
K: (smiles..and kind on pissed off) paagal..
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IN THE DOCTOR'S OFFICE..
D: check up ho gaya hai..ab inka nishaan aur dard kal tak chala jayegaa..par phir bhi aap..isko kal yaha le aana..
L & K: Ji..
D: (to laksh) ab aapki tabiyat kaisi hai?? aap aaraam to karte hai naa??
L: Ji..
-He was about to say something else but kt interrupts-
K: nahi..bilkul aaraam nahi karta hai..hamesha idhar udhar ghoomta rehta hai..itne samjhaane ke bawajhood bhi..
L: kt..kt..please stop..meri bhi ek reputation hai naa..c'mon..don't be so cruel..(laughs)
D: (laughs) well..woh toh theek hai..par aap dawaiyaa time pe khate rehna..
L: (laughs) haa..woh to main zabardasti karta hoon..(points a kt..and laughs)
K: Laksh!!
L: (gets up) ok so..hum abhi chalte hai..thank u doctor..
Kt and the doctor get up..
D: no prblem..
Laksh and the doctor shake hands and kt and laksh leave..
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THAT NIGHT...
IN LAKSH AND KT'S BEDROOM...
Laksh puts pulkit..(who is sleeping)..in his cradle..
Kt is getting the bed ready..
Laksh comes behind her..and picks her up in his arms..
K: laksh..chodo mujhe..
L: no way!! aaj subhe to tum nikal gayi..bhai..ab to hum nahi chodenge tumhe..(smiles)
K: (shyly smiles) laksh tum bhi naa..
Laksh and kt have a cute romantic moment together..
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SO GUYS..TELL ME HOW IT WAS...SORRY FOR THE DELAY...PLEASE REPLY..
THANKS!!
😉

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