Laksh and Kt FanFic..LAST PART (PART 44) - Page 7

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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 15
Archita opens the door and see's pulkit on the doorstep's, she bend's down to pick him up, and right at that moment..laksh is shot through the window..
-The speakers are still on the phone-
Phone guy: (cackles) mujhe jo chahiye that..mil gaya.. apne bache ko ek aakhri baar dekne ke tumhe..let's see..hmm... paanch minute..sirf..paanch minute milte hain..apni aakhree saanse apne parivaar ke saath khushi khushi le lo..(cackles)
-Phone is ingaze-
-Laksh is shown hit near his heart area, and is bleeding a lot-
-Laksh sit-falls on the couch (sit-falls means that he falls but is sitting on the couch lol 😆)-
-He touches his chest in pain..and see's blood all over his hands-
Archita comes with pulkit, and is shocked to see laksh in this condition..
K: (screams) LAKSH!!!!!!
(she takes pulkit from archita, and puts it in laksh's lap)
Laksh picks up pulkit in his hands..
L: (smiles) main to chala jaoonga..par..tu apni maa ko chod kar kabhi mat jaana beta.. is parivaar ko chod kar kabhi mat jaana..aur hamesha yaad rakhna ke tera papa..tujhse bahut pyar parta tha.. (the baby sweetly cuddles in laksh's arms, and smiles)
-Everyone is crying and horrified-
K: (crying) nahi laksh..tum hume chod kar nahi jaa sakte laksh..apne bache ko chod kar nahi jaa sakte..
L: (smiles) (he puts his hand on kt's face) (softly) kt..mere jaane ke baad tum sabka khayaal rakho gi naa..??
K: (crying) nahi..laksh..tumhare bina mai adhoori hoon..
L: (softly) tum mere bina adhoori nahi ho kt.. meri parchaiie hamesha tumhare paas hai.. woh parchaiie jo abhi meri goud mein khel raha hai..
Ganga: Laksh..tumhe kuch nahi ho ga laksh..dekho hum tumhe hospital le jayenge laksh.. dekho tum..
L: (softly) maa.. main aapse bahut pyar karta hoon..meri kt ka kyaal aap..
-he is starting to turn unconsious-
L: (in his head remember's) paanch minute..sirf..paanch minute milte hain..apni aakhree saanse apne parivaar ke saath khushi khushi le lo..(cackles)
Laksh gives his finger to his baby boy..his little fingers hold on to it..laksh smiles, and kisses pulkit..and turns unconsious..
G & K: Laksh!!!!!
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HEY GUYS!!! IF YOU'RE WONDERING HE'S NOT GONA DIE, BUT THERE IS ANOTHER TWIST COMING UP!!
THANKS!!
😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#62
okay my eyes just got watery 😭 😭 😭
nice part continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG LAKSH BETTER NOT DIE OR IT WILL SUCK!!!!! PLZ!! MAKE SURE LAKSH DOESN'T DIE!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
don't worry guyz..he won't die.. 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
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PART 16
Everyone escorts Laksh to the hospital..
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The doctor comes out of the ICU room..
G: doctor? laksh ki ab kya halat hai..
D: dekhiye..unhe heartattack aaya hai..unke sharir me se humne goli to nikaal di hai..par unke sharir mein zeher fael raha hai..hume pata nahi ki hum usko poori tara se bacha payenge ya nahi..
G: (tensed and crying) kya hum usse mil sakte hain?
D: dekhiye mil to nahi sakte..par dur se dekh sakte hain..
G: Ji..
Everyone stands infront of laksh's room window.. and see's his condition..
Pulkit: (cuddling) (smiling sweetly) papa..... =]
Everyone is shocked to see pulkit say his first words.. but can't decide either to be happy or sad..
K: (crying) kaash..pulkit..kaash there pappa ne yeh sunaa hota..(she glares inside, and looks at laksh)
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Everyone is gathered around the bench outside laksh's room..
Meanwhile.. Nakul notices a male nurse go in laksh's room.. but nakul dosen't say anything..
-After a couples of minutes-
A nurse goes in laksh's room, and comes out panicking..
Nurse: Doctor?! Doctor?!
Doctor comes racing down the hallway..
D: what's wrong nurse??
Nurse: Doctor!! patient ko kuch ho raha hai.. aur unka oxygen mask bhi on nahi hai..
D: KYA?!?!?!?! OMG!!! (he runs in his room)
Everyone is shocked to death..
N: Ek minute.. (thinks for a moment)...haan..yaad aaya.. jab hum sab yaha bench ke paas the..to maine ek male nurse ko laksh ke kamre ke andar jaate dekha tha..
Everyone is shocked, and the doctor overhears everything..
D: kya?! par maine to yaha kisi ko bhi nahi bheja tha.. jab main yahan nahi tha..tab mujhe is patient ki reports mili, aur woh positive aa rahi thi.. par ab..shayad negative aaye..
T: (shocked, whispers) jaane yeh kaun hai jo, haath dho kar laksh ke peeche pada hai.. itna kyun sata raha hai usko..
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GUYS..I HOPE YOU LIKE THIS..NEXT PART WILL BE UP SOON..
PLEASE REPLY..
THANKS!!
😉
Edited by Zinu29 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#66
I didn't follow some of the last parts. But I was almost about to cry in the last 2 parts. Can't wait till the next part. I just finished reading some parts last night and you are really fast girl. You wrote a lot of parts in 12 hours. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#67
thanks. 😉
NEXT PART WILL BE UP SOON!! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68
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PART 17
The doctor is seen walking down the hallway towards laksh's room..he is about to reach it but..suddenly someone appears, and drags him to his office..
IN THE DOCTOR'S OFFICE
D: (his mouth is covered) (mumbles) kaun ho tum..
Misterious Guy: Shh.........(he explains him everything that how he had gotten into laksh's room, and had taken his oxygen mask off, etc) and also threatens him, not to utter a word to his family, and takes the reports from his hands, and is happy to see it. (cackles) mera kaam ho gaya.. (cackles once again..and leaves)..
D: (shocked) (he wonders in his head) OMG!! yeh baat main kaise chuppa sakta hoon?? par bata bhi nahi sakta..yeh kaisi ulghan hai??
Pulkit is seen playing with kt's mangalsutra..saying "papa", and cuddling, but it suddenly breaks, and all the little pearls fall out and scatter all around the floor...
Pulkit gets sad, and starts crying..
Everyone looks at kt, thinking "abshagun..abshagun"
The doctor is once again seen walking towards laksh's room, but sahil stops him..
S: doctor..reports mein kya likha hai?
D: (scared im..sorrt..reports negative hain..he's in coma..(he says and leaves)
-Echo in everyone's heads: "He is in Coma"-
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PLEASE REPLY IF I SHOULD CONTIUE GUYZ..
THANKS!! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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no comments...

is this a sign of stopping.. 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 18
IT'S BEEN 2 YEAR'S SINCE LAKSH WAS IN COMA...
PULKIT IS NOW TURNING 2 TOMORROW..
KT SEEMS MISERABLE SINCE SHE HEARD THE NEWS OF LASKH GOING IN COMA..
SHE NEVER TALKED TO ANYONE.. BUT TO PULKIT, AND LAKSH'S PHOTO'S..
EVERYONE IS CONCERNED FOR KT..BUT ALSO LAKSH, EVERYONE SINCE 2 YEAR'S GOES AND VISITS LAKSH EVERYDAY...
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THE NEXT MORNING
K: (crying) (looking at Laksh's Photo) laskh...
P: (starts crying) papa...
Kt picks him up, and realizes how much he has missed his papa in 2 years..(she hugs him crying, with laksh's photo in her hands)
K: (crying) mujhe maaf karde mere bache.. main tere papa ko yaha nahi laa sakti.. kaash ki tere papa aaj tere saath kel rahe hote..
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T: (screams from downstairs) KRISHNA!!!!!!!!!! JALDI NEECHE AA!!!!!! ABHI!!!!!!!!
Kt just walks downstairs to tulsi, like she has no life, but still is living..
T: krishna.. hospital se phone aaya tha..laksh thoda thoda coma se bahar aane laga hai.. haan..
Everyone gather's around and decide's to ge and meet laksh..
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IN LAKSH'S ROOM..IN THE HOSPITAL..
L: (unconsious) (whispers) kt........pulkit.......nahi...........
T: (wonders) nahi??
L: (unconsious) nahi...........mujhe.........maarne.......koshish........... kt.........pulkit.............
Laksh comes out of coma, with a huge gasp...
L: (screams) NAHI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (breathes hard)....
P: (sweetly) Papa....(smiles)
L: Pulkit?? (he gets happy seeing his child)
L: (turns around) Kt...daadi...baa...mihir daadu...papa...maa...nakul bhaiyaa...(he is very happy to see them..)
Kt is just standing there saying nothing..
L: (hold's kt's hand) Kt?? kya hua?? tum...
A tear drops down kt's cheek...and falls on laskh...
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TO BE CONTINUED.......HOPE YOU LIKE IT.....PLEASE REPLY.......
THANKS!!
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