Laksh and Kt FanFic..LAST PART (PART 44) - Page 8

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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 19
L: (hold's kt's hand) Kt?? kya hua?? tum..
A tear drops down kt's cheek...and falls on laksh...
Laksh reaches to take pulkit in his hands, but he touches his head in massive pain..
Pulkit is trying to reach for laksh saying papa..papa..but is unsuccsessful..and starts crying..
Laksh goes into Flashbacks..
Flashback (In laksh's head)
The phone rings, and laksh puts it on speaker..
L: hello?? (he hear's pulkit crying, and gets tears in his own eyes, and whispers "pulkit"..everyone is shocked)
Phone Guy: heraan ho?? mat ho..kyunki agar tumne mujhe meri woh cheez nahi di..to yeh aakhri baar hogi ke tum ya koi bhi, is bache ki aawaaz sun rahe ho samjhe...
L: (tensed) nahi..tumhe jo chahiye main dene ko tayiaar hoon..
Phone Guy: (cackles) apni jaan de sakte ho.. dekho mujhe pata hai ki tumhara javab kya hai..par mujhe aur kushi hogi agar tum apne khudke muu se bolo..
-Everybody is nodding "no"..and so is kt-
L: (in confidence) HAAN...
Phone Guy: (cackles) very good.. ab kisi ko bahar ke darwaaze par bhejo..
Laksh turns..and starts to leave..
Phone guy: ruko laksh.. maine kaha kisi ghar wale ko..tumko nahi..samjhe..
-Laksh stops, and archita goes-
Archita opens the door and see's pulkit on the doorstep's, she bends down to pick him up, and right at the moment..laksh is shot through the window..
Laksh is out of his Flashback...
Laksh tries to remember the stuff that happened that day..in the hospital, when the exygen mask was off his mouth..he tries to remember whose face he had seen..but since he was putting too much burden on his head..he ended up fainting, and having blood drip down from his eyes...
Kt goes into a deeper shock..
Everyone gasps, and puts their hands on their mouths..
The doctor walks in with the reports..and is shocked to see blood coming out of his eyes..
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TO BE CONTINUED GUYS..PLEASE REPLY..AND TELL ME HOW IT WAS...
THANKS!!
😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#72
OMG DONT LET HIM GET BLIND OR DIE.... PLZ LET HIM LIVE.AND MAKE HIM ALL BETER SO HE CAN LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER... BUT DONT END IT EITHER I LOVE IT.. JUS CONTINUE IT WID HAPPY LIVING
zinny.xo thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#73
no worries guys..im not guna make him blind or die 😉
but..there are lots more twists to come.. please tell me if you're bored of my fanfic..and ill end it sooner..
thanks!! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#74
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PART 20
The doctor walks in with the reports..and is shocked to see blood coming out of his eyes..
D: OMG!! yeh kaise??
D: aap sab please bahar jaayie..hume inka operation karna hoga..jaldi..
Pulkit starts crying and wants to get out of kt's grip, and go to his dad, since he misses him so much..
Kt finally..after 2 years..
K: (starts crying) laksh... (she sit-falls on the floor and lets go of pulkit)
everyone is trying to tell her..nothing will happen..and meanwhile..
pulkit runs out of the room following his father....and.... crashes into a tall person..dressed all black who is walking towards laksh..
He turns back and see's pulkit crying..since he fell on the floor..
Meanwhile..Kt gets scared..and realizes that pulkit is no where near her..she runs out the door..and see's a tall guy wearing all black..and holding pulkit with a tight grip..about to hit him..
pulkit is very scared, and crying..
K: (yells from afar) RUKO!!!! (she runs and picks up pulkit) (she points at the guy) TUMHARI HIMMAT KAISE HUI..MERE BACHE KO HAATH LAGA NE KI...
Everyone reaches there, and see's kt fighting for her child..
On the other hand...
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IN THE OPERATION ROOM
Laksh is seen in extreme pain.. and is yelling out kt, and pulkit's name..
The doctor's are trying to calm laksh down..
The doctor's finally reach his eye's, and opens them..
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On the other hand..
The guy dressed all black.. gets a hold on kt..and slaps her..
kt falls on the floor bleedin near her lips..but still holding pulkit..in protection..
the guy dressed all black was wearing a mask..so no one could tell who that is..he runs scared, seeing tulsi run up to kt.. and vanishes in the hospital..
T: (picks kt up, and is shocked) he bhagwaan..chal abhi doctor ke paas le kar chaltiee hoon..itna khoon beh raha hai..
K: (stops tulsi) (crying) nahi baa..mera ye zakhm..laksh ke zakhm ke saamne kuch nahi hai..yeh to theek ho jayega..par laksh..uske zakhm ko to koi baar baar khurech ta jayegaa..
Kt just gets her blood cleaned off her mouth..
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IN LAKSH'S ROOM...
The doctor's finally reach his eyes's, and opens them..
they are all shocked..as they see his eyes covered in it..and as soon as his eyes were opened..he started screaming more and more, and blood dripped out of his eye's..
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PLEASE REPLY GUYZ...SHOULD I CONTINUE??...IT WILL ALL DEPEND ON YOUR REPLY'S..
THANKS!!
😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#75
OMG!!! What is happening to laksh? Is he okay? Can't wait till the next part. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#76
omg this an awesome fanfic i luv it. i wonder what is going to happen.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77
Awesome 👏
Your fanfic is so captivating. Plz continue soon.
I'm waiting impatiently
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Posted: 18 years ago
#78
this is amazing 👏 👏
plz dnt kill lakshya n cud u make the parts a little longer!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ohh!! itz AMAZING!! 👏 but LAKSHYA 😭 uss ko kia hua?? 😭
zinny.xo thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#80
hi guys..im really srry..there might be a lil elay in da next part..as im really tired..and hardly got any sleep..but it will be up soon 😉
oh, and thanx for all the replies.. 😉

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