kahiin to hoga - love story of sk-part-18

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kashish

@saranya

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Posted: 18 years ago

#81

thank u for those who liked my update

lets see wt happens😊

Edited by saranya - 18 years ago

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kashish

@saranya

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Posted: 18 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: le_me_star
awesome update !!!!!!!!!!! 👏 .......it's great 👏 👏 👏 ...... kashish and sujal were almost going to confess their love to eachother, when sudenly all the things went upside down 😡 ........ why sujal doesn't want to marry a rich girl?.....i think he should tell kashish abt his feeling toward her 😳 😳 😳 ....... i think the person is piyuish, what do you think??????..........continue soon plzzzzzzz

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kashish

@saranya

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Posted: 18 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: **-**Guriya**-*
awesome part.. 👏 ..don separate them yaar....cont soon.. 😊

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kashish

@saranya

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Posted: 18 years ago

#84

thanks honii , captian , sultana tooo

Edited by saranya - 18 years ago

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kashish

@saranya

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Posted: 18 years ago

#85

Myspace Glitter Graphics, MySpace Graphics, Glitter Graphics -18

here is the next part

read and enjoy😊

plz tell me the way i wrote this fan fic plz

Recap:Sujal and kashish r abt to get into another heated argument and they get suprised to see this person standing at the entrance....

....................................................... sujal and kashish both get surprised to see Piyush standing there.... Both of them together exasperate ...."Piyyyyyyyyyuuush" piyush:hey sujal how r u? and kashish..its so nice to see u after a long time...why did u not write to me anything since the last month? kashish:i'm sorry piyush, i cld not get myself to do anything... sujal is actually feeling a little awkward....he spoke to him just a couple of days before and then also he did not tell him anything abt kashish...so now he is scared that piyush will qstn him abt that... "hey piyush...its great to see u my dear...but how come u r here so suddenly...ek phone to kiya hota na" piyush:kyo...achanak aane se chori pakdi gayi kya?... both sujal and piyuhs get stunned... piyush:hey guys relax....i know everything...thanks to shruti she only called me and told me everything...thanks to u also sujal for taking care of kashish for me.... kashish looks at sujal... sujal just gives a small smile to piyush... piyush:arre bhai...tumhe samajhne ke liye tho mujhe ek aur janam lena padegaa....main hamesha ye opinion me that ki thumhe kashish's se sak nafrat thi...lekin ye to kammal ho gaya....tum done achanak dost kaise ban gaye... again both of them r quite... piyush:arre..kya baat hai..dono itna khamosh kyo hai...khair jaane do...suddenly he becomes really sad... he goes near to kashish and holds her and pays condolences for her mom's death.... piyush:mujhe apne aap par bohot gussa aa raha hai kashish....zindagi me jab tumhe sab se jyaada zaroorat thi, tab mein thumhe apna saat nahi de paaya...lekin ab mein tumhe promise kartha hu ki aage mein tumhare sukh dukh sab me shaamil rahoonga...in fact i will make sure that henceforth there is only happiness and no sorrows in ur life kashish... kashish again gets reminded of her mamma and holds piyush and cries.... sujal is not able to see this...he is feeling really terrible inside and the worst thing is he cant do anything abt it... Here for kashish, piyush is her best friend and she is really happy to have him with her now...her days of stored unhappiness and sorrow comes out...all these days she doesnt have anybody to share all that....(with sujal she is not able to sit and see eye to eye and talk a couple of sentences...forget abt sharing the feelings....but the best thing with sujal is he understood her even before she told him anything and kashish knows that, but they both haver this eternal problem of bringing their egos in between)... piyush:arre nahi kashish...please mein tumhe aise nahi dekh sakta...please ksahish...ab sab theek ho jaayegaa mein aagaya hu na... kashish:thank God piyush...u've come...i'm so relieved now... with each word kashish is saying, sujal is feeling more and more painful... sujal is right there and both of them just forgot abt him and lost in their own world.... Sujal wants to run away from there...he putting up an act of being normal but he only knows how much he is burning from inside... Piyush:kashish...do u have to tell me anything else? kashish looks at him surprised...for a sec she gets scared and looks at sujal, thinking what is it that piyush wants to know... sujal is also equally surprised.... piyush:kashish tum kya sujal ki taraf dekh rahi ho...itni khush kabri aur tumne mujhe bataana jaroori nahi samjha... kashish:kis baare me baat kar rahe ho piyuhs... piyush:arre dear...umesh uncle ke baare me... kashish:hm...leking mein soch rahi to shruto ne thumhe bataa hee diya hoga... piyush:ha usne mujhe bola tha, lekin mein ye khush khabri tumhare muh se sunna chaahta tha... kashihs:that;s right piyush bhagwaan agar ek haat se leta hai to shaayad doosre haat se aur khushiya deta bhi hai...papa hume mil gaye hai aur isse jyaada kya khushi ho sakti hai meri zindagi me....agar aaj mamma bhi hoti to.....(again breaks into one more round of crying) piyush:please kashish...(trying to divert her mood)...ha its ok kashish i know how kanjoos u r...just to avoid givng me a treat u dont have to cry so much... kashihs:piyuuuuuuuush...acha theek hai...hum log aaj shaam ko hi jaayenge... Actually she meant all three of them...cos she thot if piyush is coming then sujal will also come.... Fo sujal this is it...he is not able to take it anymore...so he gets up and excuses himself saying there is some urgent meeting to be attended...."alright piyush...i will see u later mere bhai" piyush:arre sujal tumhe to har waqt kaam ke seva kuch aur bhi soojhta hai ke nahi?abhi abhi to aaya hu mein...chen se do baate bhi nahi ho paayi aur phir tumhara ye meetings...ufff...agar mera ye haal hai to, socho jab teri shaadi hogi, biwi teri kitna tadpegi... sujal just smirks and looks at kashish for a second... kashish looks away trying to avoid sujal... piyush:waise sujal, what abt ur marriage yaar...tumhe to ek ajeeb kisam ki ladki chaahiye jo is duniya me to kya shaayad theeno lok mein nahi milegi...isiliye tumne mummy ke laayi hui har rishta ko namanjoor kar diya na...to kab milne waali hai aapke ye mallika-ye-alam?sujal blushes a little bit and says in a very low voice...shaayad ab kabhi nahi milegi... sujal:piyush tu bolta bohot hai yaar...lekin mujhe ab tera bak bak sunne ki bilkul time nahi hai...shaam ko aake aaram se sununga...ab mujhe chod do yaar..please... piyush just goes and hugs sujal and says..."oh sujal, how much i missed u..." sujal pats on his back, smiles at him very lovingly and leaves...before he left, he did not forget to give a very quick serious look to kashish...kashish also looks at him like as if she doesnt care what he wld want to do.... ............................................................ .. Piyush is in his and sujal's room(remember they share one bedroom).. He is thinking abt something.... He actually noticed that there is something going on between sujal and kashish when he entered...and also for him its not a small thing that sujal helped kashish so much... He also noticed those in between exchange of looks between them...he just did not want to look like he noticed those things...if there is anything that he needs to know, he thot, they will be atleast sensible enough to tell him...so for now he decides to clear his mind on this issue... He decides to talk to kashish today in the restaurant and propose to her............................................... Umesh is trying to explain it to shruti from that time...eversince she came to know that umesh has two other children...shruti is not able to take it...umesh tries to make her see some sense... But pinky is very happy that kashish is her didi....and not only that, she also has a brother....she always wanted a broter and that;s why she loves sujal so much... shruti locks herself in the room....she is thinking, how come piyush still did not come...he is the only one i have now...i will tell him everything...he will take care of this problem... ............................................................ ..... piyush and kashish are sitting in a restaurant...piyush is very happy and very nervous too.... piyush:kashish if i did not tell u this today, i will never be able to talk abt this...kashish will u marry me.... kashish is shocked to say the least...she just keeps staring him without replying... piyush:i need ur answer kashish... first time kashish is seeing him like that...kashish feels helpless for piyush...cos no matter what, and no matter what kind of a person sujal is and no matter what he did to her...she is never going to be able to forget him...she will never be able to love anybody else...she doesnt know if what she feels for sujal is love....and also she knows that she may not get sujal in this life...but even then her mind and heart are occupied with sujal and only sujal...be it hatred or love , its just for sujal...it is for sujal only her heart gives that importance or whatever it is called....anybody else is a stranger to her heart... piyush:kashish...where r u lost? kashish clears her throat..."piyush....i'm really glad that u brot up this topic...dont get me wrong please...the girl who is going to marry u, is the most luckiest girl...no qstns abt it...but i know that i'm not the one....we can only make good friends piyush...but we can never become good wife and husband...our mentalities are such....tomorw after we marry and after that initial love fades, that's when the problems are going to crop up...i dont want to lose my best friend in the name of marriage...and is that the only relation thru which 2 people can stay close to eachothers heart?please piyush...i hope u r understanding what i'm trying to say....and one more thing piyush...i've decided not to marry in my life...cos i've lost faith in this marriage thing only, after seeing my mamma" piyush is shattered...he is completely dumbfounded...he never cld imagine that kashish wld respond in negative...but he controls himself very quickly..."kashish u dont know how much my respect for u has increased...u r the most incredible girl that i'e ever known...and i respect ur feelings also dear...i know its not going to be easy to forget u...its not going to be easy to be just a friend and nothing else...but i shall try...i think i'm very lucky to have ur friendship..." kashish :i'm sorry piyush... piyush:he pagli...sorry kyo...tune kya kiya sorry bolne ke liye?please yaar please make ur face normal..otherwise the way u r right now, people will think i'm blackmailing u for something...(though he is breaking inside, he tries to lighten up the moment) kashish cld not control her laughter and piyush too laughs looking at her laugh so heartily...its a very emotional moment between those two friends...both of them hold their hands over the table and look at each other for a second... sujal is actually with a client two tables away from this their table...he is observing the whole thing.... sujal is in his car driving to even he doesnt know where... images of piyush consoling kashish and kashish telling him that now she feels much better after piyush's arrival, and then their holding hands in the restaurant just now....keep on flashing in front of him again and again... He says to himself"i confessed to kashish what i feel abt her, but she doesnt seem to have any value for it..." "wait....why am i thinking in such a narrow minded way...kashish and piyush know eachother much before i know kashish...and also they r good friends..." "but piyush told me more than once that kashish is his love" "oh God...help...i think i'm going mad here...i'm not able to understand what to do...i dont know what is there in kashish's mind...what am i supposed to do now?be happy seeing kashish and piyuhs together?i know that seems the right thing to do....but why am i not able to justify myself doing that?am i stuck to the thing that, kashish is my wife?hm.wife...no...i shld not hold back kashish taking that meaningless relation's name....i shld let go of kashish...anyways the reason i married her doesnt exist anymore...cos i 've known now that she is a very good girl...her mentality and piyush's may not be compatible to start with, but they will get along very well eventually...cos they have that basic love in between them...and she is piyush's love..and i cannot take away his love from him...even if that means hell to me...i better make myself strong to implement all these things..." sujal returns home after mid night..a little drunk...(first time he drank that much...he is very much against to drinking...he only drinks once in a blue moon that too a small peg in thoe hi-fi parties that's all....)...evrybody is sleeping and all the lights are off except for the zero candle bulbs... he is not able to walk properly and fell down almost twice... he goes into the kitchen to get some water.... again loses the balance and abt to falll...that's when a tender hand holds him and saves him from falling....he also holds that person by her waist tightly in a reflex action...and then looks at her...kashish is looking at sujal very worried...sujal tightens his hold and pulls her closer...she also gets lost in his eyes and doesnt really fight it...both of them again get lost looking into eachothers eyes....sujal brings kashish into the backyard...kashish follows him like in a dream..actually its not clear who is walking behind whom,cos sujal is not really in a balanced state now... Both of them go and sit on a swing chair there...kashish is getting really emotional looking at sujal...she has always seen him as a very arrogant, aggressive, take charge kind of a person...but now she is seeing a very vulnerable sujal...she doesnt understand what's bothering him so much...(the dumb headed that she is)...whatever it is, she just wants to be there for him...she forgot all that, that she is going thru since morning.... sujal is a bit surpirsed to see kashish behave with him so close...even in that state he is able to notice the concern in her eyes for him...he is not able to think any further though... he rests his head on her lap and stays at that position quietly...kashish for a sec hesitates, but she also starts enjoying this...very lovingly runs her fingures into his hair...both of them r there quite,not saying a single word, but yet it speaks volumes abt the feelings they have for eachother....if only they can interpret it themselves... sujal suddenly wakes up...he finds himself sleeping on kashish's lap and kashish is also sleeping resting her head on the head rest of that swing thing...(i dont know what we calll that...u know that swing thing on which chimpy bhoot and kashish bimby do that devil dance after his death in that red and white costumes...i know i'm spoiling the mood by reminding that stupid scene here...sorry for that) At first he is shocked to see her, but slowly he remembers the whole incident...he gets up slowly without disturbing her....its almost 4 am in the morning...he makes her sleep properly on that and covers her with a blanket and goes from there into his room...(its a closed place and very safe...) ............................................................ . So here it is guys...the part-18....

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plz comment this part plz

with love,

saranya

Edited by saranya - 18 years ago

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sultana_sange

@sultana_sange

Beginner

Posted: 18 years ago

#86

gr8 part,wow saranya very nice.i loved the last part of sujal and kashish.hope they come very very close and admit the love for each other that they cant live without eachother.its really touching.

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rajee garewal

@rajee garewal

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#87

very very nice part..
keep it up....

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sheela

@Aamnakideewani

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 18 years ago

#88

wow its a really nice story per mujhay samjh nahi ata k her kahani mein judai ka hona zarori q hai?can't we have only happiness? 😕 i want to see them 2gether not piyush or some 1 else 😡