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Posted: 18 years ago
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great update!!!!!!!!!!!!!................i like ranveer character, he's so funny 😆 ..........i can't wait for sujal and kashish entry 😊 😊 😊 ..........update soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnn plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome stry 👏 first part was really good and funny 😆 loved the ranveer scene 😆 😆 😆 can't wait 4 sujal 😉 cont soon. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: le_me_star

great update!!!!!!!!!!!!!................i like ranveer character, he's so funny 😆 ..........i can't wait for sujal and kashish entry 😊 😊 😊 ..........update soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnn plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

hey thnx 4 commenting yaar.......will continue as soon as possible...........glad u liked my story😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Paru_M

awesome stry 👏 first part was really good and funny 😆 loved the ranveer scene 😆 😆 😆 can't wait 4 sujal 😉 cont soon. 😃

thanx 4 commenting on my story dear.........im very glad u liked it.........will continue as soon as possible😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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v nice stry vandana... 👏 ..da characters intro and da frst part was really good.. 👏 ..will be lookng foward 2 da nxt part... 😃 😃 .do cont soon.. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: **-**Guriya**-*

v nice stry vandana... 👏 ..da characters intro and da frst part was really good.. 👏 ..will be lookng foward 2 da nxt part... 😃 😃 .do cont soon.. 😊

hey thanx 4 commenting on my story dear.............im happy u liked it..........will try and post the next prt soon😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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vandu yaar me just read the part u posted.. it was damn coolll....sujal ke family ka intro tho bada hii mast tha... unke family ke beech kii bonding it just very nice... indeed very well presented yaar... you keep up the good work going.. me liking your story very much... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 please do continue soon..me waiting for sujal , kashish kii intro very eagerly.... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sun_423

vandu yaar me just read the part u posted.. it was damn coolll....sujal ke family ka intro tho bada hii mast tha... unke family ke beech kii bonding it just very nice... indeed very well presented yaar... you keep up the good work going.. me liking your story very much... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 please do continue soon..me waiting for sujal , kashish kii intro very eagerly.... 😃

thanx 4 commenting sweety......im glad u liked the part

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Posted: 18 years ago
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JEEVANSH – PART 2


Ok,so im back with the next part of my story………hope you all like it……..
Last part mein maine sujal ki family se milaya tha aap sabko and ab kashish ki family ki baari hai……..

MEHRA FAMILY

Parvati is in the kitchen,telling the cooks what to make for the breakfast…….and tabhi kissi ki jhagadne ki aawaz aati hai……

1st girl😆- U punk,u dumbo tumne meri puri dress kharab kar dii, saara ink gira diya ispar……
2nd girl😊- Duh –huh…..timbo…tumhe dress ki padi hai ,ye mera favorite pen tha….
1st girl- Oh please to hell wid ur pen
2nd girl- To hell wid ur dress

Yeh sab halla sunkar ek ladki apne room ka door kolti hai……she's wearing a chic designer suit…..
Her hair is left open and she's wearing light makeup……and only jewellery she's wearing is a chain with a tiny diamond pendent…..

And simultaneously another bedroom door in front of the first one opens and a girl in a black short skirt with a slit (this is also a corporate-office going look) and a tight fitting top comes out……..both the girls look at each other then turn to our two wwf champions and shout - "Shut up both of U"…

I think aap log samaj hi gaye honge ki ye 4 girls kaun hai………
Jo do ladkiyan jhagda kar rahi thi,they are Tia Mehra😆 AND Anvesha Kapoor😛………And hamari jin heroines ne special entries maari hai they are Kashish Mehra😊(in business suit) AND Nandini Kapoor😉(in skirt)

Tia: dekhiye na nandini dii,is anvesha ne phir meri dress kharab kar di and kashish dii se to kuch bolne ka faida hi nahi……kyunki wo to humesha hi ashi ki side leti hai..

Nandini: kya hua agar kashish ashi ke saath hai, par im alwayz with u……

Kashish: nandu…wat iz this yaar,tu jhagda rokne ke jagah iska saath de rahi hai…….ye roz kissi na kissi bat par jhagadte rehte hain…kab sudhroge tum log……tiya tumhare paas kitni saari dresses hai,har waqt to kapde khareedti rehti ho…..to ek dress kharab hone par itna kyun ro rahi hoo

Nandini: acha to phir ashi ek pen ke liye itna jhagda kyun kar ri hai……ek pen hi to tha

Anvesha: hey bhaggu😆, please haan ab ap is bird brain timbo ki side mat lo.....😆.
Parvati: lo,mein soch hi rahi thi ki ab tak is ghar mein itni shanti kyun hai……..tum dono (holding tia and ashi's ears)khud to ladte rehte ho aur apni badi behno ko bhi ladwa dete ho……kash-nandu beta…tum dono office ke liye taiyyar ho gaye to nashte par aajao….

Kashish: ji mom

Nandini:ji bua

Oho Bua, That means ki……..nandini n ashi kapoor are sonia kapoor's i.e. kashish's only bua's daughters

Actually Sonia ek bahut badi actress hai,usne love marriage ki thi at a very young age ,apne family ke against jaa kar but in filmi rumours ki wajah se , which are a part of an actresses life,uske husband aur usme roz ke jhagde hone lage n finally uska husband usse chod ke chala gaya …………so nishikant decide ki sonia n uske bacche unke saath hi rahenge ab se,so he brought them to his house…….


Now,scene cut to Malhotra house

It's a big mansion and there is a very big are around it(its like amitabh's house in k3g) Dikhate hain ki ek helicopter land hota hai

And phir black suit pehne hue ek ladka utarta hai and uske saath uske do bhai bhi hain……

Yeh hai humare smart n dashing……cool dudes -------

Sujal Malhotra 😳– Ab inke baare me kyaa kahein……..cool ……sauva…..intelligent…..smart handsome…….ladkiyan inpe jaan chidakti hain…….par inhe kaam se fursat mile tab na…..

Aur inke saath hai the cool dude - – Prem Malhotra and the naughty-naughty - Akshat Malhotra😉…..

They all get off the helicopter and walk towards the house…………….

Prem😛 : Arre yaar itni door chalna padega……abhi abhi to australia se aye hain……..ye daddy cool ko itne door ghar banane ki kya zarrorat thi……..(lolz..)😆

Akki: Haan to hum plane me aye hain na…….and airport se helicopter me………tu to aise bol raha hai jaise hum australia se paidal chalkar aaye hoon…..

Sujal : Tum dono bhi na,kuch bhi bolte rehte hoo……ab chup chaap chalo……..…

They enter the house and wahan unhe vasu milti hai jo ki besabri se unka wait kar rahi hooti hai darwaze pe khade hoke…….……

Vasu: Welcome home beta

All three touch her feet and give her a hug…….…….

And phir hall ki saari lights on hoti hain and they see the whole family,friendz,relatives,business colleagues……..everyone had come for their welcome party …….

Vasu: Tum teeno ke rooms ready hain……..tumlog jaakar fresh ho jao and come down for the party……….yahaan sab log tumse milne chahte hain……..

Baapre in dono families ke bacche kitne ladaku hain😆😆…….agar ye apno ke saath hi itna ladte hain,to jab aamne samne ayege to na jaane kya hoga🤢…………and if u wanna know ki kya hoga😉…………then, wait for the next part…….



luv,
vandu 😉
Edited by togepe30 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey me 1st one to compliment 😛
awesome update..........waise sujal is very rich.............enjoyed it 😃

luv,

akanksha 😊 😃

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