JEEVANSH part-7 (SK,KN) Pg26 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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very sweet vandu loved it.............do post the next part soon.............& yes I loved Ranvir's character. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanx a ton mehrun,khyatu,aki n jyoti for reading my story n commenting on it..........luv u guys for it............hope u like my upcoming parts too!!!!!!! 😉 enjoy!!!!!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its awesome but i have one complaint and one suggestion.. sugestion is please if u can write in english.. its easier to read.. if u cant its alrite ill still read it..

my complaint is that i saw prem but i didnt see mukti.. 😭 😆 😆

if there is no mukti just do me a favor and dont pair him up iwth anyone else.. i would TOTALLY hate that..

wel, good luck handleing such a BIG family 😆

continue sooooonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: brainychild92

its awesome but i have one complaint and one suggestion.. sugestion is please if u can write in english.. its easier to read.. if u cant its alrite ill still read it..

my complaint is that i saw prem but i didnt see mukti.. 😭 😆 😆

if there is no mukti just do me a favor and dont pair him up iwth anyone else.. i would TOTALLY hate that..

wel, good luck handleing such a BIG family 😆

continue sooooonn

hi ....thanx 4 commenting on my story......will try to write more in english ...........dont worry mukti will make an entry soon.......even i like their pair..............but u know wat,im already going mad handling these 2 huge families........if i had made mukti one of the sisters too then it would have been a serious threat to family planning strategies😆 😆...............lolzzzzzzzz.........hehe......till the wait n watch...hehe

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow vandu jeee kya part likha tooo gooooooooood ... 👏 lolz ranveer itna baadmash hai kaise kaise chakar chaalata hai ..ranveer ka character dekh kar mujeh kum kum mein ..(kumkum's 2nd son) yaaad agaya awesome part vandu continue sooooon can't wait more 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
hi diiiiiiiiii great part,,,too guuuuuuuuuuudddddd...great starting 👏app apni story continue karte raho apne app family planning ki strategy change ho jayegi.....app bina dare or characters introduce karo ... 😆 waise di really great job...lage raho n don't forget to add shareef khoonis..n yeh kya mumma's boy toh sujal hai apne anurag ko bna diya.... 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanx for commenting honi n nehu .............luv u guys.......thanx 4 ur cute comments..............honi u have awesome observation skills 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yar vandu mast part tha too interesting luvd reading it do cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: varallika

yar vandu mast part tha too interesting luvd reading it do cont soon

thanx varu sweety................love u .....thanx 4 reading the part n commenting

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: hacker7

2222 good plz cont soon

thanx so much 4 commenting...will try to continue soon😊

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