JEEVANSH part-7 (SK,KN) Pg26

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi guys 😛,

This is my first attempt in writing a fan fiction but as they say – there's alwayz a first time …….i will try to write the story to the best of my capability and it is upto u…whether u like it or not😳…..but please do send in your reviews on how to improve the story and if u liked it or not.😉

SO LET ME INTRODUCE THE CHARACTERS OF MY STORY TO YOU ALL:

THE MALHOTRA FAMILY:

LALIT MALHOTRA 😊– Played by lalit of kth

VASU MALHOTRA😊 – Played by vasu of kth(well I think we have had enough of vasu – the vamp,high time she was given a good image)

ANURAG😛: Played by CEZANNE

SUJAL😳 😳 😳: Obviously played by RAJEEV

KARAN😛: Played by HITEN

AKSHAT😃 – Played by CHAITANYA (akshat of kth)

PREM 😉– Played by MANOJ BOHRA

(prem of kasauti)

RANVEER😳 – Played by KARAN WAHI

Ok now let me tell you that while sujal,karan,prem and ranveer are vasu and lalit's children. But akshat and anurag are the sons of lalit's elder brother …CG

CG and VEENA used to live in mumbai and had come to london for CG's business meeting but on their return trip, their plane crashed and both of them were killed…..

So,vasu brought veena's sons to her own house and has brought them up like her own children and never differentiated between veena's and her own kids…

And anurag and akshat also see vasu and lalit as their own parents bcoz they were very small to understand anything when their real parents died..

The Malhotra family lives in LONDON.

And among the sons anurag is the mumma's boy..he alwayz listens to vasu and so he is vasu's favorite son.

MEHRA PARIVAR

……they also live in london.

NISHIKANT MEHRA😛 – Played by om of kahaani..

PARVATI MEHRA 😊– Played by parvati of kahaani..

KASHISH MEHRA😉 – Played by aamna.

TIA MEHRA😆 – Played by tia of remix.

NANDINI KAPOOR 😳– Played by nandini of kyunki.

ANVESHA KAPOOR😆– Played by ashi of remix.

Lolzz i know kuch zyada hi characters ho gaye story me.............hehe😆 i dunno how i'll handle all of them😆…....will try my best................so till then wait for the next part when the story of the MALHOTRA AND MEHRA FAMILY WILL UNFOLD………Ye mehra family me anvesha and nandini kapoor????? Kya kar rahe hain , who r they??well the answer of all your queries is the next part of my story…..

Love,

Vandana😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey vandana...
inro to mast hai....ab jaldi se part bhi post kar..... wish u all d best 4 ur ff
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow vandu yaaar awesome introduction 👏 toooooooooooooooo goooooooooooooooood contiue soooooooon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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good vandu..................intro padhkar to mazaa aa gayaa 😆

jaldi se 1st part post karo
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey vandu yaar the intro was zabardast.... too good yaar.. i liked it very much.... 👏
👏 ab please vandu yaar jaldi se continue karna..... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanx varu,aki,suri,and honi............will post the first part soon sweetz.........

luv,
vandu 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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JEEVANSH – ITS ALL A PART OF LIFE



Part- 1

Scene in malhotra household :


Vasu is standing alone on the terrace:
(Vasu is a successful and reputed business woman…..shayad issi liye inhe buri hone ka time nahi mila meri story me…..kyunki main ise ghar pe kam,office me zyada rakhti hoon……so sari saazishen apne business rivals pe karti hai,family members pe nahi…lolzzz😆)

Lalit (joining her on the terrace):Arre vasu tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho…..office nahi chalna kya .

Vasu: itni jaldi office kyun jaana hain,apne kya ceo ki job chod kar peon ki job le li hai……itne jaldi office jake office ki puri safai karni hai kya tumhe😉????
Lalit: vasu,tum bhi naa,hamesha mazaak karti rehti ho…..lekin aj kal bhulakkad hoti ja rahi ho…haan shayad umrr ka taqaza hai….log jaise jaise boodhe hote hain unki yaadash kamzoor hoti jaati hai…tum pehli insaan nahi ho jiske saath aisa ho raha hai….. 😛
Vasu:boodhe hoge tum,abhi to main jawaan hoon…aj bhi ekdum fit hoon,aur roz subah yoga karti hoon,tumhari tarah din bar din moti to nahi ho rahi… 😆
Lalit:oh please…. 😳

Anurag: dad – mom ap doono phir shuru ho gaye…ap dono ko bhi subah subah ladne ka bahaana mil hi jaata hai…… 😕
Ab chaliye bhi ,yaad hai na ,aj office jaldi jaana hai,foreign delegates ke saath meeting hai..aur wo angrez time ke bohot pakke hain.
Lalit (happily):dekha!!! Beta mein bhi tumhari maa ko yehi batane aaya tha par isne to mujhe apne hi office ka peon banaa daala aur jhagda karne lagi.sab inhi ki galti hai... 😃
Vasu: oh really….haan haan tum to hamesha hi mujhe galat kehte hoo….
Anurag (shaking his head): ap dono bhi na..kabhi nahi sudhroge,phir ladne lage..ap log ready ho jaiye mein apse breakfast table par milta hoon 30 minutes mein..late mat hona aur please phir jhagadna shuru mat kar dena….mein dada -dadi se milkar aata hoon.. 😛

Ab dekhte hain ki DADA – DADI ke room me kya chal raha hai……..aur ye ranveer yaha kyun aaya hai?????so come follow me…

Ranveer– The youngest in the house,the baccha of the family……aur sabse shararati bhi…..inka favorite time pass hai dada-dadi ke beech jhagda karvana…… inki ek aur khasiyat hai….ye hamesha setting karte rehte hai…..ghar pe sab logon se bet lagate hai….. kabhi sabko harate hain aur unse paise le lete par kabhi kabhi bet haar kar gaayab ho jate hai taaki inhe bet harne ki sazaa na bhugatni pade…..lekin jab bet jeet jata hai to apni shart manvane ke liye kuch bhi karta hai …….lolzzzz 😆
(actually janab ki pocket money khatam ho gayi hai nd he dare not ask vasu 4 any more…..hehe…..so ye apni setting karne aye hain…….pichli baar jabh isse paison ki jaroorat hui thi,ranveer ne apni daadi ko apni frnd se milwakar kaha ki wo unki hone wali bahu hai nd poor dadi ne khushi khushi usse apni bahu samajhkar usko pehli baar ghar me aane ka shagun diya tha……lolzzzz poor bholi si dadi,ye janab wahi idea phir se try karne aye hain……ab dekhte hain…..if it works or not???)


Harshavardhan Malhotra (dadaji of kyunki..)😊:
Arre Ranveer beta, ander aaja….aur tera college kaisa chal raha hai…
Lakshmi Malhotra (ba of kyunki..)😛:arre baahar kyun khade ho ranveer….aur tumhare saath ye ladki kaun hai???

Ranveer😉 : Arre deeda(ranveer apne dadi ko pyaar se deeda kehta hai)ye maya hai…..

Dadi: Kya?????? lekin pichle bar jo maya aayi thi wo to koi aur thi…🤢

Ranveer(making a sad face) :Haan deeda,wo ladki to thokebaaz nikli….wo mujhe ,the gr8 ranveer ko chod kar kisi aur ke saath chali gayi. 😆

Dadi : Paagal ladki hogi…usse mera pote jaisa handsome aur kahaan milega….tu chinta mat kar beta….lekin ek baat bata,ye teri saari girlfriends ka naam maya kyun hota hai.. 😉

Ranveer (to himself):Arre itni saari girlfriends hain ki sabka naam yaad rakhne me problem ho jaati hain,aur agar ek ladki ko dusri ke naam se bula liya to wo sab milke mujhe maar hi daalengi.. 😆😆
To sabko pyaar se maya kehta hoon, taki koi confusion hi na ho..cool idea na.. 😉

Ranveer (to dadi) :Arre deeda, lagta hai maya naam se mera koi pichle janum ka rishta hai,mujhe jiss bhi ladki se pyaar hota hai,uska naam maya hi hota hai….ab ap hi batao isme ,mein kya karoon… 😊

Arre in sab baaton mein maya ko to bhool hi gaye,(making introductions)ye hai maya aur maya ye hain meri deeda(dadi) aur ye hain mere pyaare daadu(dada ji)..

(dadi ke kaan mein kehta hai):Deeda ye apki hone wali bahu hai,isse shagun nahi dooge…
Dadi: aree maya beta yahan aao(gives maya ashirvad and Rs.1000 as shagun)

Ranveer : BYE deeda…ur the best😆.
(room se baahar nikalte hi)thank u naina,maya banne ka nataq karne ke liye… I really needed this money…coz meri pocket money khatam ho gayi thi aur agar mom se paise mangta to mom puri khabar le leti ki pocket money kahaan kharch ki and I don't like giving explanations u know (naina actually ranveer ki friend hoti hai , jisse usne jabardasti apni help ke liye laya hota hai)

Ranveer ke bahar jate hi:

Dadaji(starts laughing loudly 😆 🤣 😆): He he he…lakshmi tumhara pota tumhe phir bevakuf banaa gaya…..wo maya nahi naina thi ranveer ki dost ..

Dadi:Kya?????😲 apne mujhe bataaya kyun nahi

Dadaji:Arre main kyun bataaon ,app to hamesha hi mujhse ladti rehti hain…main to mazee se apko ullu bante hue dekh raha tha..wo kya kehte hain,haaan – that waz cool !!!

Naina ko waha se bhej kar jab ranveer ne peeche mudkar dekta to usse apne bade bhai Karan ke darshan hue…….hehe

Ranveer(surprised n scared 🤔to see karan standing there…..pol khul gayi na…..hehe): Arre bhaiyya aap …..????

Karan: Ji , guruji(lolzz......ranveer to sach me guru hi hai....sabko bevakuf banane me.)…..main…...kyun mujhe dekh kar itne hairaan kyun ho rahe ho……main bhi isse ghar me rehta hoon ,kisse aur planet se nahi aaya , jo mujhe dekhkar itne surprise ho rahe ho tum..

Ranveer: O… o… of course not….main kyun hairaan hunga aapko dekh kar…..apko dekh kar to mein bahut khush hoon …ya trust me..

Karan: Beta zyada chalaki mat kar dikha,ye saare kaam maine aur sujal ne bhi kiye hain jab hum college mein the…..to ye hoshiyari mujhe mat dikha….waise kitne paise liye is baar…..so called bahu ki muhdikhaii par…😆

Ranveer:A a apko kaise pataa…..matlab itni der se aap meri baatein sun rahe the……thatz not fair…

Anurag:Arre bhai abhi abhi toh mom-dad ka jhagda rok kar aa raha hoon,ab tum bhi shuru ho gaye…..(lolzzzz…..bechara anurag, official jhagda roko incharge hai ghar ka….hehe😆)

Karan: Haan aur hum hi nahi….is nalaayak ranveer ke wajah se ab dada-dadi bhi lad rahe hain.

Anurag:Arre baap re 🤪….kitni ladaako family hain….anywayz mein dadi se milkar aata hoon..

And arre haan karan , in sab ke beech mein tumhe ek gud news dena bhool hi gaya……australia se SUJAL⭐️ aa raha hai wapas , humne australia wala business wrap up kar liya hai…….

Karan: Haan bhaiyya I know…..usko phone kiya tha maine…..tab pata chala…..(to ranveer)Isn't this gr8 news…sujal is coming back…..

Ranveer: Yaa……aur ab to apki masti hai…u two are inseparable…..bilkul saimese twins ki tarah…hum logon ko sujal bhaiyya ki aane ki khushi me party rakhni chahiye….wat say??????


Well,wat say? Sujal wapis aa raha hai…..celebrations to honi hi chahiye na…….well,I know ki iss part me sirf sujal ki hi family ka introduction hua…..kya karoon itniii badi family hai….hehe….but the next episode will mark the entry of sujal and also kashish's family will be introduced…….till then intezaar kijiye……… ur comments are valuable…….plzz 2 second ka kaam hai……..zaroor comment karna……..so I that I can know ki koi meri story padhta bhi hai ya main yun hi forum ki space waste kar rahi hoon apni story post karke……hope u ppl liked the part...........plz commentofy……. 😆

luv,

vandu😉

Edited by togepe30 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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HI VANDU
WOWW GR888 I M SOO HAPPY U HAVE POSTED THE 1ST PART GR88
ITS AWESUM DEAR , I LOVED IT 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great part vandana di!!!!!!! Loved it 👏 Continue soon plz 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice part all the characters are very sweetly introduce 👏

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