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Posted: 18 years ago
A video is jus goin to be posted by a very dear friend of mine....jus awesome....It represents the LOVE STORY of my fanfic....I am sure ....after this video u'll get hooked to my story....Luv u jaan....anu I hav shortage of words for what u r doing for my story......Our pair will make this story a hit.....U'll always be there for me ....I hope....for videos....U r just awesome...

& yes do post the video...in kth forum....its jus awesome.....fablous work by u darling.. ...This video deserves a bigger appalause...& pls pls pls....friends...all who read my ff....please compliment her for such a wonderful work....if nothing at least PM anupriya (lovely babe).....THANK U...I'll be grateful to u guys for this

Luv,

Akanksha 😉

Edited by aaakkii - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
yar the video is g8 👏 👏 👏 u did a g8 job waiting 4 the nxt prt jaldi post kr nahi to vasu se meri bt ho gai hai n she is ready to haunt u 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey awesome video yaar.............good job anupriya..............anf akki jaldi post kar yaar next part..........kitna intezaar karwaegi 😉 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 video anu and waiting for the next partplz post it soon acnt wait any longer bcoz the story is really good and interesting sameer is too good and angad is to funny anvesha is also good but waiting for sameer and anvesha to come together and bcome friends 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
mottu tu kaha hai ?? pm kar na plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 18 years ago

S: Don't u….dare touch…mera koi apnaa nahi ho saktaa….I am a very selfish person…& u know my eyes….(he banged his fist on the boundary wall)….MY DAMN UNGRATEFUL EYES…..they r feelingless….absolutely no feelings for u….why u guys care for me so much……why…….ki I cant even think of my life without u….why…(& tears rolled down through his eyes)

Sameer turned towards the boundary wall….his back facing these three….He continued without facing them….

S: It cud be better if we part ways….none of ur parents want me to be a part of ur company….I am happy….very very happy to be alone….I am a loner….got it…..please for God's sake LEAVE ME ALONE…..I can lead a life without u…..one shud learn to survive in any condition….After all this is life..

"Sameer"…..

He turned to look back…..Veena auntie was standing there….

S: (sarcastically)….Oh welcome auntie…u r most welcome….kyun aayi hain aap yahaan….oh….ye bhi koi poochhne ki baat hai…..Yahi kehne aayi hain naa….ki…ki mai aapke bete se dur rahun….mera khoon ganda hai……mere sanskaar kharaab hain….yahi naa…main aapke bete ka faayedaa uttha rahaa hun…sunaayiye ….aap bhi kuchh suna dijiye….

Avi was about to say something but Veena stopped

him….She was really angry with Sameer…She went ahead …&

slapped Sameer really hard on his cheek…..

Ve: main ye sab to nahi kahungi…jo tumne abhi abhi apne

bare mein kahaa….per ina zarur kahungi…..ki tum…BOHOT

BATTAMEEZ ho …..tumhe sharam nahi aati….apne doston se

aise baat karte vakt…jo har situation mein tumhaaraa

saath dete hain….neways….main yahaan koi scene create

nahi karnaa chaahati…..chalo sabhi ….Khaanaa lag gayaa……

Sameer was standing still….as if he heard nothing…the

three went downstairs….Veena was seeing this…

V: sabhi se mera matlab…tumse bhi hai….tum bhi chalo…..

He ignored what she said…..She went ahead…& ..no ..no..Don't worry…not another slap…she held his hand…....& dragged him downstairs…..

On the dining table…..all four were sitting….with

absolute silence…& no one eating except Sameer….Sameer

was looking only in his plate & not anywhere

else…..quietly eating….but all his eyelets wet…If u guys

remember…his eyes were tearful in the morning too…..&

see now…how different the situation was ….food wasn't

spicy…but tears were flowing non-stop….He finished his

meal…& ran in his room….Bhoomi, Avi & Angad left the

dining table without eating anything they were pained to

see Sameer like that….but no one dared to say a single

word to Veena….she was a really strict lady…..& perhaps

Sameer was the one & only…who talked to her like

that…..But somehow…in just a day…grew a motherly feeling

in her towards Sameer…& perhaps the mother in her…..went

ahead to slap a son on his mistake….on his bad behave

towards a very elderly person……At last she asked Avi

bout what happened…..Avi was speechless….but Bhoomi

cudnt control herself…..She told Veena …about everything

that happened in the evening……in the end….Veena was very

remorseful……She went in Sameer's room…..He was trying

hard to sleep….but was unsuccessful….feeling somebody in

the room….he tightly closed his eyes….It was 1'o clock

by then….Veena came & sat on his bed….& kept his head

in her lap….& kept her hand on his head……..Sameer now

was unable to control his feeling…He hid his face in her

lap…held her tightly …& started weeping

bitterly…….Veena too began to weep……

S: God has played a very bad game with my life…..I hate Him…..no one cud have dared to say anything like that to me….If my Parents were there…

Ve: Have u ever thanked God for what he has given to u….

Sameer looked at her….with his deep, red eyes…..Veena continued…..

"Beta….god ko dosh denaa bohot aasaan hotaa hai….aisaa

tumne nahi bohot baar maine bhi kiya hai….But we really

forget to be grateful to Him for what he has given to

us….U know there r many in this world…who r as

intelligent as u r…..but not all of them r

successful….many who have parents…but not all the

body parts….Don't u think God has given u such a nice

friend circle…He has made u such a Handsome young Man.......but not only u….many of us…..always

start God's name….by badmouthing him….cursing him ….for

what he hasn't given to us…& ignoring the small

pleasures that he always gives to us…..Beta….life is

short & unpredictable….so instead of cursing him….be

grateful to him….that he has given u alife…..look at

those who r under privileged…God has created u to look

at them …& help them…..& who says he hasn't given u

parents….look at me beta……God has sent me to u…as ur

MAA… "

"MAA"….Sameer looked deeply into her…

So here goes the next part...sorry it was small....next part will be posted soon...& I'll focus now on Sameer & anvesha....Waiting eagerly for ur comments...

Luv,

Akanksha😛





Edited by aaakkii - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwwwwww so swet part atlast sammer ka dimag thikane par laga diya veena aunty ne
she is very well true ki hum log god ko dosh to dete hai par onhne hume jo diya oska thx nahi kehte

akki so touching part
thank u god for every thing especially giving such sweet friend like u aki i m proud to be ur friend 😛
love u
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely babe

awwwwwwwwww so swet part atlast sammer ka dimag thikane par laga diya veena aunty ne
she is very well true ki hum log god ko dosh to dete hai par onhne hume jo diya oska thx nahi kehte

akki so touching part
thank u god for every thing especially giving such sweet friend like u aki i m proud to be ur friend 😛
love u

This proud is mutual....I luv to be ur friend....may our friendship exists forever

Luv,

Akanksha😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 aww................such a cute part..........yah we really need to thank god for all he has given us...........and veena said the right thing.........sameer should thank god for making him such a handsome guy 😆

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