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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

👏 aww................such a cute part..........yah we really need to thank god for all he has given us...........and veena said the right thing.........sameer should thank god for making him such a handsome guy 😆

thanks a lot...u liked this part.....vaise really he shud thank god...for making him sooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeeee😆

Luv,

Akanksha😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
great part !!!!!!!!!........very emotional........great scene between sujal and veena......hope he get's the happiness he deserve 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
very emotional part yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u r such a gr88888888888888888 writer 👏 !!!!!!!!!!!!!! that scene where sujal starts crying in veena's lap... damn i started crying tooo 👏 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hats offfff to u!!!!!!!!!!

btw, wat should i call u??? 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
i started reading ur ff ...its great yaarrr
keep up the good work! ! 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
emotional and great part
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: le_me_star

great part !!!!!!!!!........very emotional........great scene between sujal and veena......hope he get's the happiness he deserve 👏 👏 👏

arre wat is this yaar?????? sujal?????? wat is happening with us????😆😆😆

even i wrote sujal!!!!!!!!!!! 😆

thanx akanksha for correcting me!!!😆

Edited by payal9 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago


"yes beta……ur Maa…..u can call me Maa"….said Veena

Sameer was overjoyed…..out of that joy…he wasn't able to utter a single word…..finally he rested in her lap….& took her hands…in his hands….& kissed them……

"Thanks maa…..thanks for coming into my life…& (he raised his eyes to look up)…..THANK U GOD….for giving me the biggest pleasure of my life"…..He finally seemed contented …..relaxed….he got his Maa….

These three were listening to what exactly was happening inside….they were happy too….Deewaron ke kaan hote hain ye to suna hai….but today I saw…..Ki…Darwaajon ke bhi kaan hote hain…..They entered into his room……

Ve: dekho….aa gayi tumhaari gang….

An: Auntie….wo kya hai naa…ki…ki mujhe bohot bhookh lagi hai……

Avi & Bhoomi together: hume bhi….

Ve: achha tumlog baitho….mai khaanaa leke aati hun….yahin khaa lenaa sab….

Veena left…..Sameer's eyes glowed to see them all….He rised to go to them…..But he was a bit hesitating….u know why…..arre bhool gaye….bechaaron ke saath kitni battameezi ki thi usne ….Avi understood this….

Avi: Ladki hai kya…..itnaa sharmaa rahaa hai….we didn't mind….don't worry…..tujhe pakad ke peetne waale nahi hain hum…..

S: (smiling)….. saalaa….

He came to Avi …& hugged him tightly….

Avi: oye samhal ke….Don't u see I am on crutch….gir jaaungaa….

S: oh ho….I didn't notice the change….ye tere haath ka plaster…..

An: maine kaat diyaa….

B: kya….R U MAD…..dimaag kharaab ho gayaa hai kya…..

Avi: hey listen…..kuchh nahi hoga….we hav consulted the doc….(ise kehte hain SAFED JHOOTH)….hai naa Angad…

An: haan!! Haan!!…..oh tum sab bhi naa …mera to man kar rahaa hai..ki..ki…main guitar bajaaun…..(he reached to the desk where the guitar was placed) …

S: don't u dare touch that…..saale tere bauji ne kabhi musical instrument ki shakal bhi dekhi thi…jo tu ise bajaane ki soch rahaa hai……

All of them laughed….

An: main khud ki nahi teri baat kar rahaa tha…the situation turned out so senti….to maine sochaa kyun naa kuchh gaanaa bajaanaa ho jaaye………oye u remember….our favorite song….we usually sang together..

He handed the guitar to Sameer……..

S: How cud I ever forget it yarr…….

Sameer & Angad started singing…with Sameer playing the Guitar….& later were accompanied by Bhoomi & Avi…..Its my FAVORITE SONG too……

"Yaaron dosti badi hi haseen hai…
Ye naa ho toh kya fir bolo Zindagi hai
Koi toh Dilbar ho yarr…(Avi winked & put his hands on Bhoomi's shoulders)
Jisko tumse ho pyaarr….
Yaaron Mohobbat hi toh Bandagi hai
Ye naa ho to kya fir bolo zindagi hai…
Yaaron Dosti……"

All of them ate together….now It was 2:30 am…..Veena asked them to sleep…..everyone left the room…..Veena was about to leave ki tabhi……

S: Maa……

V: (smiled)….yes Beta…

S: cud I sleep in ur lap…..

V: why not Beta…..

This was the most peaceful sleep Sameer ever had….He slept in her lap like a kid…..veena leaned on the wall for support …& slept…..

Next morning…..oh morning ko maaro goli….wahi hogaa jo generally sabke ghar

subah mein hota hai….nothing to descibe…..Bhoomi went to office & didn't went to

her home..She didn't even want to talk to her mother…or look at her…so she directly

went to office & not to her home…& Veena went out to meet some neighbour….who

remained at home…..these three……Sameer was sleeping in his room…& Avi &

Angad were in the DRAWING ROOM watching some ADULT MOVIE….he..he…

he…& yes our SS was teaching something to Avi…..dekhte hain….I mean sunte hain

kya……

An: Yaar….dekh ab who night dur nahi hai…to mere bhai mujhse ideas lete rahiyo….as u know I am so experienced bout all this…..lekin yaar sahi baat kahun….to tujhe to in sabki ABCD bhi nahi pataa hai…..

Avi: (horrified)…..to mai kya karun….

An: meri baat maan…to ye movies waigairah dekh ke kuchh nahi hone waalaa…..EXPERIENCE ki sakht zarurat hai….& u know experience aise nahi aataa…..u need to do PRACTICAL….(guys ye to SS se SG ban gayaa….bole toh SEX GURU)

Avi: Kya…..(this time his expression was very much like YUDI's in lrl now a days)…..

An: don't be scared….we will talk to some call girls…they'll help u out…..

Avi: What……per ye sab kaise….teri to yahaan koi jaan pehchaan bhi nahi hai…

An: don't worry….IMPORT karaa lenge ...But one thing must be clear...USE CONDOM ALWAYS....😆😆😆

Suddenly Sameer turned up…He was wearing a sky blue short pant….& a baggy white T-shirt…hair not properly done…..He was half sleepy…looking very cute…..but as soon as he entered the drawing room…AANKHON ke saath-saath muh bhi khul gayaa……

S: KAMEENON……sharam nahi aati……blue film dekhte ho….

He ran & took out the CD frm the cd –player…..

S: hato hato….aaj Australia v/s South Africa hai…..me gonna watch that….

An: CD jahaan thi wahaan daal…koi match vatch nahi dekhegaa….cricket is so damn boring….

S: nahi daalungaa….nahi dekhnaa hai cricket to get out…

An: ye koi baat nahi hui…hum pehle se dekh rahe the….

S: to dekh lia naa….ab main dekhungaa….

Angad now understood ki…jhagde se kaam nahi chalne waalaa….to thoda pyaar aajmaayaa jae…..

An: (pleaded)….yaar dekh…..is bechaare ki shaadi hone waali hai….mere lie nahi to please iske lie…u know sex education is so important…

S: shut up…..to tu isliye ise BLUE FILM dikhaa rahaa tha…..khud to bhrast hai hi…..& Avi tu….tujhse mujhe ye ummeed nahi thi…..

An: oye jyaadaa dialogue maaregaa tu….saale tu aur ummeed….jaise Zindagi mein aajtak Adult material nahi dekha……

Avi: Chhod naa yaar…tu ne hi to kahaa hai…ki experience ke lie experiment karnaa padtaa hai….

S: kaisa EXPERIMENT….kya bataayaa isne tujhe….

Avi: wo call girl…

S: what….call girl…kahaan…isne yahaan bulaayaa hai kisi ho…shit!!….Angad hav u completely lost it….ye karne aayaa hai tu India…

An: tu pehle chup chaap CD waapis lagaa de….waise bhi WORLD CUP mein dekhne ko kuchh nahi rahaa…..INDIA to out ho chuki hai….

S: India gayi bhaand mein….pehle bataa yahaan kya chal rahaa hai……

Avi: relax yaar…aisaa kuchh nahi hai….ye to bas mujhe PRACTICAL karne ki salaah de rahaa tha .

Suddenly bell rung....I mean Doorbell rung........Thinking that it cud be Veena auntie...Angad ran to hide the CD....& Sameer ran in the bathroom.....But it was courier waalaa.....

Avi: kya hai....

C : courier.....

Avi: are ye to joining letter hai....dekhun....

Avi: (screams).....wow....SAMEER GOT THE JOB....hurray...baahar aa we r going to celeberate....ye ye....

khushi ke maare...he started jumping.....as if he forgot that he is on crutch....RESULT.......he fell down😆😆



Edited by aaakkii - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 angad is too much...............good lord call girl?????? 😕 🤢

nice part
continue soon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆
im soooooooooooooooooooooo happy that they r all back together!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was so painful to watch sameer and the gang apart and so sad!!!!! 😕 😕

but now everything is fine!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yay!!!!!!

very nice part yaar!!! its too funny, blue film SG practical and when sameer says KAMEENON lol 😆 😆 😆

PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ cont. soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
lollllll
hah haa haa
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